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FF: Ek Paal...Prt14 pg13 (Page 13)

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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
great update
omg u have to hurry up and continue soon. i cant believe he's there!
plz make ranbir get there asap!

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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 2:37pm | IP Logged

why the hell do u bring that chinmay back!!!!
kill him!!! pleeeezz!!

gr8 update though!!



Edited by tanyadas_leo - 30 May 2008 at 2:37pm
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 10:18am | IP Logged
hey guys...have some bad news and good news Wink

bad news-
finals are this week and i have major psychology and child dev. finals...so i have to dedicate my time to getting ready for them...so that means updates wont be until next week...sorry...

good news-
i have a whole week off so i will be able to do more updates hopefully...and next quarters schedule is less hectic than this was so i should have more time to update in general Big smileBig smile

please bare with me this week...

thanks to all for commenting...and love you all Hug
JAZ
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 11:59am | IP Logged
aww!! thts a piss off, wel best of luck with ur exams!!
hope u get great marks (GPA/ grades!)
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good luck on ur exams!
cant wait for ur next update Smile
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Hi Jazz,

When is the next update going to be. I have been waiting for the update from such a long time. Please update soon and also update the other ff Story after Holi.
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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
hey guys...thanks for being so patient with me...but finals are over so here is the next update...and before you ask...im working on the update for Holi Special Wink

Part 11

Woh Meri Neend

 

Woh meri neend, mera chain

Mujhe lauta doh

Woh mera pyaar, mera daard

Mujhe lauta doh

 

Neend jitni bhi maine khoyi hai

Chain jitna bhi maine khoya hai

 

Woh meri neend, mera chain

Mujhe lauta doh

Woh mera pyaar, mera daard

Mujhe lauta doh

 

Ek masoom dil hai

Aur sitam hai kitne

Iss mohabbat ke siva

Aur bhi gham hai kitne

 

Mere ishq ka imtehaa yun naa lo

Tumhe hai kasam meri jaan yun naa lo

Khawb jitney bhi maine dekhe hai

Yaad jitna kiya hai maine tujhe

 

Woh mere khawb, meri yaad

Mujhe lauta doh

Woh meri neend, mera chain

Mujhe lauta doh

Woh mera pyaar, mera daard

Mujhe lauta doh

 

Yeh meri bhul thi joh maine tujhe pyaar kiya

Naa milne wali mohabaat ka intezaar kiya

Yeh kya rang laayi hai meri bafaa

Mili hai mujhe kis liyeh yeh sazaa

Teri chahaat ki pyaas thi mujh ko

Tujhko paane ke thi umid mujhe

 

Woh meri pyaas, woh umid

Mujhe lauta doh

Woh meri neend, mera chain

Mujhe lauta doh

 

Neend jitni bhi maine khoyi hai

Chain jitna bhi maine khoya hai

 

Woh meri neend, mera chain

Mujhe lauta doh

Woh mera pyaar, mera daard

Mujhe lauta doh

Woh mere khawb, meri yaad

Mujhe lauta doh

Woh meri pyaas, woh umid

Mujhe lauta doh

 

Valley Presbyterian Hospital – 2:15pm

 

The man who had tortured Kanya for these past four years stood before her once again. The man who had violated her, who had abused her, who had given her nothing but pain and sorrow, the man who took her peace and her self-respect, he stood in front of her once again. Kanya stared in shock and disbelief at Chinmay who was taking steps, coming closer and closer to her slowly. He had a look in his eyes that sent an ice cold shiver down Kanya's spine. She was still very weak so it wasn't like she could jump out of bed and run away from him. Kanya franticly looked for the nurses call button but for the life or her she couldn't find it. She began pushing herself back on the bed with her arms.

 

"Who is this 'Ranbir' that has you smiling like an idiot?" Chinmay asked.

 

"You…you shouldn't be here. Shanaya got a restraining order against you," Kanya told him.

 

"You didn't answer my question," Chinmay stated, still coming closer to her inch by inch, "You know how I don't like it when you don't answer my questions. I don't like asking the same thing more than once."

 

"What do you want? Just leave me alone. Go away!" she yelled, or at least she tried; her voice barely came out as a whisper.

 

"Oh come on honey, how can I leave you? You are my wife and you are in the hospital, I can't leave you now," he said with a sarcastic tone, "If I leave you now, what kind of husband will people think I am."

 

"Don't do this…please," Kanya begged, now with her back hard up against the head board of the bed.

 

"Has saying 'please' ever gotten you anywhere with me?"

 

Chinmay was now right at the boot of the bed, his fingers tracing the edge of the foot board.

 

"Go away…just go away. I won't tell anyone that you were here. Please just go," she pleaded with him more.

 

Chinmay completely ignored Kanya's pleas when he said, "Show me where it hurts, I'll kiss it make it better."

 

Chinmay's voice came out almost as a venomous hiss, he was so close to Kanya that she could feel his breath on her face. Kanya was scared stiff, literally, she couldn't move for some reason, no matter how much she wanted to. Her body shuddered when Chinmay took his hand and pushed a strand of unruly hair back behind her ear. He then proceeded to place a kiss on her cheek right where there was a bruise which was still raw, therefore causing Kanya to flinch. Chinmay pulled back just enough so that Kanya could see the evil glint in his eyes. This time when he leaned in he aimed lower than her cheek, he aimed for her lips.

 

Tears welled up in Kanya's eyes again as she recalled the many times that Chinmay had forced himself on her thorough out their marriage. She remembered him hitting her, scratching her, kissing her, and touching her. Her mind was frozen back in time as well as her body. As she tried to brace herself for the kiss she closed her eyes and tried very hard to not actually cry.

 

Kanya was expecting the kiss but the next thing she knew she heard a loud thud across the room. Opening her eyes she saw Chinmay on the floor by the door and an angry looking Ranbir standing next to her. Ranbir glanced over Kanya looking to see if he had actually hurt her.

 

"Are you ok?" he asked.

 

Kanya didn't say anything; all she could manage at this point was to nod her head. Getting the ok from Kanya, Ranbir had crossed the room to where Chinmay was in a few steps. Chinmay was still attempting to get up onto his own two feet, but he didn't have to try for too long because Ranbir bent down, grabbed him by the collar and pulled him up. As Ranbir pulled Chinmay up Kanya saw Shanaya and Nancy enter the room.

 

"Get security now!" Ranbir yelled, apparently he had seen the girls too.

 

Nancy raced out of the room towards the nurse's station while Shanaya came to Kanya's side and hugged her.

 

 Ranbir was seething with anger as he pushed Chinmay up against the wall. He had done it so hard that he decorative fame that hung on the wall shook. Ranbir still said nothing; instead he took a swing at Chinmay and hit his square in the jai. A loud grunt of pain could be heard coming form Chinmay as he crumpled to the floor. That didn't stop Ranbir though; with Chinmay on the floor Ranbir began kicking him, causing Chinmay to curl up into a ball to try and cover himself form the blows, not that it helped.

 

"You filthy, sorry-excuse-of-a-man! How dare you come here! How dare you touch Kanya!" Ranbir roared as he kept beating up Chinmay.

 

Nothing and no one was stopping Ranbir today, he was going to give Chinmay exactly what he had deserved. 

 

"I should have done this as soon as I found out you were an abusive ass hole, but I didn't! If I had, then Kanya wouldn't be in the hospital today. If I had gotten you then, an innocent child wouldn't have lost the chance to live."

 

Ranbir was able to give Chinmay a good round of kicks and punches before three security guards stormed in; two held Ranbir back from killing Chinmay and the other jerked Chinmay up to a standing position. The guards held Ranbir back as he began to calm down just a bit, so that he was no longer on the verge of killing Chinmay. A moment later, the guards eased their grip as Ranbir stepped away from them.

 

Ranbir looked Chinmay up and down inspecting his injuries. Chinmay had a busted lower lip; a laceration right above his left eyebrow, blood was dripping from his mouth, nose and various other places where he was cut. His shirt was stained with blood and even torn in a few places. He looked like he had the beating of a life time; just the results Ranbir wanted.

 

"Call the police, get this man arrested," Ranbir ordered.

 

"You cannot do that Mr. Ranbir," Chinmay said sarcastically, "I am her husband. If anyone is leaving it is you."

 

"Oh think again, we have a restraining order against you; you cannot come with in 500ft of Kanya or else your ass will be in jail."

 

"That restraining order won't stand up in court, it was obtained without the consent of Kanya; Shanaya did it, that won't count."

 

"That one won't since Di is awake now, but the one we got her to sign after she woke up, that one will hold in court," replied Shanaya, causing Chinmay to shut up.

 

Now it was Nancy's turn to give her two cents. "You son-of-a-bitch! Haven't you done enough to Kanya! Why the hell did you come back? You have abused and raped her for years but she didn't say anything, but now, now your game is over. She lost her baby because of you; I hope you rot in hell!"

 

The guards began escorting a very vocal Chinmay who was cursing out Kanya and the whole lot of them.

 

"Wait," Ranbir instructed. The security guards stopped right outside of the room and Ranbir walked up to Chinmay. "If I ever so much as see you in the same building as Kanya, then you better watch out. If you ever scare her, talk to her or touch her again, you won't see what is coming your way. You thought this was bad; do so much as look at Kanya and I will kill you with my bare hands! Now get out of my sight!"

 

Chinmay suddenly began yelling before the guards could escort him out, "He threatened me, did you all hear that, he said he would kill me! I need police protection. You three have to tell the police and corroborate my story!"

 

"Carl, did you hear something?" asked the first guard.

 

"Nope David, not a thing. Jake, what about you?"

 

"No, I tend not to listen to other peoples business," said the last one.

 

"He said he would kill me, you heard Mr. Ranbir say he would kill me with his bare hands," Chinmay protested.

 

"No, I didn't hear that, I head him tell us to arrest you," said the last one again.

 

"I did hear one of the girls mention something about abuse and rape of your wife though, let me tell you, I hate men who disrespect women," said the first one, as they dragged Chinmay into the elevator.

 

"You know the cuts on your face look pretty bad, huh nurse?" asked one of the guards. "Looks like he needs stitches."

 

"It sure does, I'd say about 5 but since he is so special, we will make sure he gets 10," replied one of the nurses behind the desk at the nurse's station."

 

"Hope you've got anesthesia," said another guard.

 

"Oh, sorry…we don't. Just used the last bit we had on a little kid down in ER," she replied.

 

"Aww, now that is just too bad, isn't it mister. Looks like you are having a bad day." That was the last thing one of the guards said as they shoved Chinmay into the elevator at the end of the corridor.

 

Ranbir couldn't help but crack a weak smile at the comments the security guard and the nurses had made. He was about to go inside but then a though occurred to him. Quickly pulling out his phone, Ranbir searched for a second until he found the number that he needed and then pressed 'send'.

 

"Mr. Adler this is Ranbir Nanda. I need you here at Valley Presbyterian Hospital, I need you here now!" Ranbir didn't clarify anything else before he hung up.

 

When Ranbir re-entered Kanya's room he saw Nancy pacing nervously while she talked on the phone with someone in hushed tones and Shanaya still sat next to Kanya rubbing her back trying to get her to calm down. Giving Kanya a  once over Ranbir could see that she was visibly frightened and her entire body was shaking, despite that fact that she had her knees curled up to her chest and held on to them in an attempt to stop shaking.

 

Without saying anything Ranbir walked over to the other side of the bed and sat next to Kanya. Seeing him, Shanaya gently pushed Kanya out of her arms and into Ranbir's waiting arms. Kanya looked at him for a split second before her eyes welled with tears again and she grabbed onto Ranbir as if her life depended on it. Ranbir put both of his arms around her and pulled her in close, leaving no space between their bodies what so ever.

 

"Shh, he will never bother you again Kiya," Ranbir said as he tired to sooth her, "I promise you; you will never have to deal with that man again. I am never going to leave your side…ever."

 

"Sorry to interrupt," Nancy said as everyone looked at her, "I just got off the phone with my brother, he said that because Chinmay violated his restraining order he can only be held in lock up for a day or two, max, but then he is out again."

 

"What if he comes after Di again?" Shanaya asked worried.

 

"Don't worry, he won't but if he does, he will answer to me. Besides, he will no longer be a problem in Kanya's life."

 

When Ranbir said that, the three women looked at him in confusion but also with a twinkle of hope in their eyes.

 

"What do you mean?" Nancy asked.

 

"I called my lawyer; he will be here soon to draw up Kanya and Chinmay's divorce papers."

 

"Oh thank God one of us had the brain power to think of that," Shanaya said as she relaxed a bit and sat down in one on the lounge chairs in the room.

 

Ranbir looked down at Kanya as if looking from some sort of sign that he had done the right thing by calling his lawyer. Kanya too looked up at him and gave in a small, weak smile giving him the sign he needed. Ranbir kissed the top of her head and then took her back into his arms and just held her until her shaking stopped, which wasn't until she had fallen asleep.

 

It was nearly an hour later that Mr. Adler had showed up. He greeted Ranbir in the lobby and asked what was the urgent matter that Ranbir had called him for. Ranbir took about 20 minutes explaining the entire situation to Mr. Adler and told him exactly what had to be done. Ranbir and Mr. Adler went up to the floor where Kanya was and were greeted by Shanaya and Nancy as they entered. Ranbir panicked for a second as he asked where Kanya was, Shanaya informed him that she was just inside the bathroom washing her face.

 

A few minutes a weak and wobbling Kanya stepped out wrapped in a robe. Ranbir was at her side in a second giving her support as she walked back to the bed. Ranbir set her down gently and muttered a curse under his breath as Kanya flinched and groaned as she sat down, obviously her injuries were causing her pain. When Ranbir stepped back he looked at Kanya's face.

 

"Kiya," he whispered as he ran a finger across her cheek where a big bruise rested. Bending over he kissed it with the utmost care and tenderness. All Kanya could do was give him a week smile.

 

"Kanya, this is Mr. Adler my lawyer, he does corporate law but has agreed to help out with your case," Ranbir informed. "Mr. Adler any questions you have are welcome, we want this done and over with as soon as possible."

 

That started off Mr. Adler and his million and one questions. He asked the most non-sense type of questions to the types of questions that caused tears to come into Kanya's eyes. Kanya had to recall events that she had tried for so long to forget. Ranbir stood by with his hands balled into fists and uttering curses every once in a while as Kanya recalled the first time Chinmay had forced himself on her. She then she recounted the times he had physically abused her and other incidences of his marital rape. The session finally ended with Kanya accounting for the last time he had beat her; it happened as she tried to leave him. Chinmay would not have his once subservient wife walk out on him, which raised questions about his manhood, he would not tolerate that.

 

"What do you think Mr. Adler, how long will this divorce process take?" asked Ranbir.

 

"Well, usually these things take about a year if not more," he said.

 

"Damn it! There has to be another way to get this done faster!" Ranbir yelled.

 

"Mr. Nanda, please listen. Normally these things take that long, but this case is anything but normal. With the reports of marital rape and physical abuse which, if verified by medical evidence, will speed up the process. Add to that the fact that Mrs. Shergill lost her baby due to his abuses, her case is strong. With this degree of violence involved, the judges too end up being sympathetic and siding with the victim."

 

"Oh thank God. But how long will it take, time wise?" Shanaya asked.

 

"I cannot guarantee that now, I will consult with a colleague who specializes in these types of cases, but my best educated guess is that this should only take a few months, given that…" he trailed off.

 

"Given what?" Ranbir asked.

 

"Given that Mr. Shergill signs the petition and doesn't plan to fight the divorce in court."

 

"Chinmay will never do that, we will never let go of me," Kanya cried as she sunk back into her bed, feeling dejected.

 

"Don't worry, he will sign the papers and he will let you go…I'll make sure of it," Ranbir replied.

 

"Well then I will draw up the papers as soon as I get back to the office and overnight it to you. Bring them to me once they are signed and we will take it from there," said Mr. Adler as he gathered his things to leave.

 

"Mr. Adler," Kanya called, in a weak voice, "Thank you so much."

 

"Don't mention it dear, I hope that you get out of this marriage soon. You deserve a man who loves you; you didn't have that with Mr. Shergill, but you have that now," he said before he left, but not before giving Ranbir a knowing glance.

 

Hours had passed since the lawyer had left. It was well into the night and Ranbir had stayed with Kanya. He had instructed Nancy to go home with Shanaya and get some rest. The hospital only allowed one person to stay with Kanya and there was no way Ranbir was leaving. The girls only left because the feared that if for some reason Chinmay returned, Ranbir would be the only one able to handle him.

 

Ranbir and Kanya were lying on her bed, it wasn't really big enough for the two of them but they still made it work. Ranbir held her in his arms as she rested and tried to look forward to her future, a future without Chinmay.

 

 

"I love you," Ranbir whispered to Kanya.

 

"I love you too," she replied.

 

"When did you fall in love with me Kiya, because I fell in love the minute you took one step away from me four years ago," he proclaimed.

 

"I fell in love with you when we danced under the stars on the pier for the first time. I had given you my mind, heart, body and soul; I had surrendered my everything to you at that moment."

 

Ranbir looked into his Kiya's eyes and saw the truth and love shining in her eyes. He then gently and passionately took her lips into a kiss; it was a tender kiss that showed how much he really loved her, because he too had given her is mind, heart, body and soul that night, he had given her his everything.

 

Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam

 

Hum dil de chuke sanam

Tere ho gaye hai hum

Teri kasam

 

Yeh duniyah kare sitam

Tujhpe mitenge hum

Teri kasam

 

Hum dil de chuke sanam

Tere ho gaye hai hum

Teri kasam

 

Umidein tum hi se hai mere sanam

Thama hai tumhara hi yeh daman

Bhoolenge khabhi naa aab tumhe hum

 

Hum dil de chuke sanam

Tere ho gaye hai hum

Teri kasam

 

Teri yadoon ke sayeh mein guzre gi yeh zindagi

Us khuda ke baad toh pooja hogi baas teri

Chahe jo mang lo saab tumhara hai

 

Hum dil de chuke sanam,

Tere ho gaye hai hum,

Teri kasam

 

Teri kasam…

JAZ

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Posted: 10 June 2008 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
hey jaz
another awesom update!
hope ur exams went well
plz get rid of this chinmay Angry
continue soon!

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