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(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 (Page 90)

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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 11:49pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by pwincess kanzi

amzin prt! thx 4 d pm! cntd sn!

Tahnx dear...glad u liekd it...Big smileEmbarrassed

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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by *[email protected]@*

Hey Ridz!>..Big smile..Hy kanu...supp???
So ur going out of station!..Enjoy there!Big smileTahnx sweets...
Will be eagerly waiting for ur updateWinkEmbarrassedaww....

So Now This part was extremely Cute!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedLuved the dialogues!.. Tahnx..!!!!
Karan-ShilpaLOLLOLLOL..Great choice of namesLOL...I no...wanted to add itt sumwhere...!!!!WinkLOLLOL
Adi!!..Hmmm..This is the name of Armaan's nephew in my FF too!Wink..gr8...I just luv dis name...TongueWink
In my FF also the same way Armaan held Ridz hand under the tableWink..aww...well that's quite common I suppose...

Never mind that!..It was really Awesome!Embarrassed...Tahnx hun...
Great Job!ClapClapClapaww...!!!

Continue soon!..& thanks for the PM!>>Embarrassed...will conti. it asap..!!!!...n welzz..LOLLOLWink
May ur FF complete 100 pages very very soon!LOLThanx..!!!!..Wink

-KanuHeartRiddhima..Big smile

Tahnx alott for ur lovely comment kanu..hope u enjoyed my other updats also...Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 11:54pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by AngelicSoniya

wowwwwwwwww...tat was very very nice
luvd it.. Clap
& thxx 4 da pm

Thanx sonia...

gald u liekd it and commented..!!!!

Will defi. update it asap...Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 29 June 2008 at 11:56pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by teenb12

Hey Riddhima Big smile Hy tanya...
I luved this part! Thanx sweety
I must say..this part was my fav! Clap aww.....
LOLI luved the babhi-Shilpa and bro-Karan Embarrassed aww...Thanx....
This part rocked..keep rocking like this! WinkThankuuuuuuu.....will defi. try to do so..!!!! 

Thanx a lott tanya for ur lovely comment..!!!...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 30 June 2008 at 12:00am | IP Logged

Originally posted by armaanaddict

such an adorable part!!! loved it!! all your dialouges were very good!! and take ur time with the next update! we understand!

aww Thanx a lott dear...!!!!...

Glad u liked my work and made it worth commenitng...WinkBig smile

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Posted: 30 June 2008 at 12:20am | IP Logged

Originally posted by pal_279

wowww...amazing....armi's family toh celebrities se bhari padhi thi LOL ....luvd d update Thanx sweets...well...armi's so special so his family aslo has to be special...LOL
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thnx for d pm...waiting for d next 1... Big smileaww....Tahnx..!!!!!...gald u liekd my work...!!!! 

Tahnx a lott pal for ur lovely comment...Big smile

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Posted: 30 June 2008 at 12:24am | IP Logged

Hy freindz...!!!!

I am ready for my next update but before that I want to apologise for not sending the PMs and updating the part so late...Confused

Actually I wasnt well and plus the place I had gone , the net wasnt working....CryCry....

Plz forgive me friendz...hope I will b able 2 make up with u all with this update...EmbarrassedWink

Thanx...Loads of love...Riddhima...Big smile

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Posted: 30 June 2008 at 12:26am | IP Logged

Hey friends ...!!

UPDATE TIME....!!

What will happen in shashank n padi's marriage…

Here I go..[part C.]

 

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RECAP :A [really irritated yet in the same position] : ye kaun hain yaar jo hamesha pareshaan karne ke liye aa jata hian….

Voice : Dr.armaan…kaha hain aap…

Suddenly that person showed up…both armaan riddhima sudeenly broke off & stood in shock….

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It was rahul….both AR sighed with relive…

A [really irritated] : kya hain…??...kyun aaya hian yaha tu???

Ra : arre armaan mujhe teri kuch help chahiye…

A [still irritated] : jaa nahi karta mein teri help…

Ra : please yaar…atleast ek baar sun to le….

& he dragged armaan to another pillar…

A : kya yaar…pehele to galat time pe aata hain aur phit hukum chalata hian..!!!

Ra : arre tu sun to yaar…

A : accha thik hian bol..kya problem hian..??

Ra : muskaan??

A : kya ??...don't tell me ki tune usese phirse jhagada kar liya….

Ra : nahi yaar…abhi tak kiya to nahi hain lekin mujhe lagata hain hone wala hain…

Armaan was confused : huh ??..kya matlab..

Ra : matlab ye ki mein uske jitna paas jane ki koshish karta hun wo mujhse utni dur chali jati hain…

A : ooo…to ye problem hian ..abey pagal …tu ladkiyon ke mamle mein kabhi nahi sudhar sakta..collage mein bhi aaisa hi tha..aur abhi bhi aaisa hi hain…

Ra : oye…dekh tujhe help nahi karni hain to to sidhi tarah se bol na …faltu purani yaadein tazza karke mujhe pareshan kyun kar raha hian..

A : arre nahi nahi yaar..emin to mazak kar raha tha… "Armaan ki patshala" ke specialist "love guru – armaan" apne doston ki help karne se kabhi peeche nahi hathte….

Ra : ok love guru-armaan…ab please mujhe help kijiye..

A : dekh …bahut hi simple si baat hian …tu ladkiyon ke jitna peeche jayega na …wo tujhse utni hi door jaengi …aur tu unko jitna ignore karega na …wo utna hi tere peeche aayegi….samjha??

Ra : ji love guru …smajh gaya..!!!

A : hmm…that's like my good student …ab ja aur apni guru ka naam raushan karke aa…[in a very dramatic way]…

Ra : ji guruji & goes away..!!!...

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All of them go to have there dinner….

They were sitting on a circular table in this manner :

Muski>>Rahul>>Atul>>Anji>>Riddima> ; ;>Armaan…

M : arre rahul zara wo sabji [vegetable] to pass karma..

Ra : ha…[then he remembered what armaan said]…arre tu khud nahi le sakti kya???

An , At , R [confused] : isse kya ho gaya??

M : oye kaankhajoore …tujhko ek kaam kya bol diya tu to faltu hi itna bahv kha raha hian…

She pretended to be angry but even she was confused with rahul's behavior…

All the girls were feeling really tired so they went to there rooms while all the boys were still downstairs taking tips from armaan as to how should they win over there lady loves….

After some time even they went in there rooms…

In RM's room– muskaan was still awake…she was really confused because of what had happened on the dinning table…

Rahul entered & saw muskaan is still awake….he was about to ask her y was she not sleeping till yet but didn't as armaan had forbidden him to do so….he just entered…switched  the lights off and went to sleep without uttering a single word….

Muskaan became more confused....then she thought : mujhse iski itni paravah kyun ho rahi hain???...mujhe kya ye mujhse baat kara ya naa kare…mein isse baat karne ke liye itni bekarar kyun hun??..ye mujhse kya ho raha hian…

Now lets c what's happening in AA's room…

It was a totally different scene there….anjali had slept without caring about atul…but she did not put the lights off as she was scared of dark….Atul was aware of that so even he didn't put the lights off & unlikely Rahul slept on the sofa as he though anji wouldn't had approved of it…

In AR's room…

When armaan entered the room riddhima had already slept ..she was really tired so even armaan didn't felt abd or something…..but he was continuously starting at her…

A [to himself] : sote hue bhi kitni khobsoorat [beautiful] lagti hain…

Then he went near her…she had some flicks on her face which were irritating her..armaan put those flicks behind her ears…then sat next to her & kept his hand on her forehead & hold her hand…

Then he sat on the floor & kept his head on the bed [near riddhima's waist] & slept peacefully…

***

It was morning now…lets see what happened when Anji got to know that Atul slept on the sofa & didn't turn the lights off even though he cant sleep at night if the lights are on…

When anji woke up the 1 st thing she noticed was that no one was there on the bed except her...then she looked around to find where had atul gone….then she saw him sleeping on the sofa like a baby...she was impressed…then she noticed that the lights were still on…so she thought to herself : Atul mere kitna khayal rakhta hian…aue mein use hamesha ignore karti hun….usse to light mein neend [sleep] bhi nahi aati to bhi light chalu karke soya…so sweet of him…

In AR's room…

When riddhima woke up the 1st thing she did was to check the time…it was 8:00 am….riddhima was really late….she hurried to get up without noticing armaan…when she was about to get up, she felt that someone is holding her hands…then she noticed armaan sleeping right besides her…he looked really cute while sleeping…he had a really sweet and innocent smile on his face…ridhima didn't want to wake him up so she tried to get rid of his hold by herself…but he holded her as if he would never let her go away from him…then she had no option left except waking him up…she gently put her hand on his forehead & spoke really softly in his ears : armaan…utho…its morning…

A [in a very lazy tone] : please riddhima sone do na…

R : accha armaan so jao lekin mere haath to chor do..

A [in a very kiddish tone] : nahi..please tum mere paas hi raho na..

R : armaan please…samjha karo na…

A : accha thik hain to mein bhi uth jata hun…

R : thik hian…

A : please mere help to karo…and he rises his hand for help…riddhima holds his hand & tries to pull him but fails…she again tries…this time armaan pulled riddhima towards her and she fell on armaan…

Armaan was laughing at his naughtiness while riddhima was blushing…

R : arrmaaannnnn…!!...please mujhe jaane do…waise bhi bahut late ho gaye hun…

A : nahi…

R : haan..

A : nahi…

R : pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee….

Armaan could not refuse as she was pleading like a baby and made her stand…

In RM's room there was nothing special…rahul woke up earlier & went to take bath…when he came back muskaan had also woke up but he didn't talk to her..when he was going out muskaan asked him : kaha jaa rahe ho…he did not reply and slammed the door close…

Muskaan sat there still confused and feeling really sad about how rahul was treating her…

***

After an hour or so all of them gathered in the hall for the preparations of marriage…

All of them worked till evening…

Nani : arre baccho tumne bahut kaam kar liya …aab jake tayaar ho jao saare meheman ane wale honge…

All : ji nani & all of them go n get ready…

After another hour they all gather in the hall except riddhima…

A [to himself] : sab log aa gaye to ye riddhima kaha rehe gaye…use to tayyar hone mein itna time nah lagta…he was really tensed…

10 minutes later armaan became really impatient

A : arre anji..ye riddhima kaha hain???

An : pata nahi…use to tayyar hone ke liye itna time nahi lagta…

Armaan became more tensed…he went to find her…he searched the whole farmhouse yet wasn't able to find her…then he thought of going & checking in the room…when he reached his room he found the door open…he entered very silently…

He saw riddhima wearing the sarree that armaan gifted her…he was really happy…but then he saw her struggling with her loops…[actually that blouse was kind of back less….it just had a strip of cloth decorated really nicely with a barouche in middle….it had the loops in the middle….]…

He went in slowly without making any noise so that he could surprise him…as soon as he went close to her…he caught hold of her waist….she was shocked and frightened  yet didn't shout because she found that touch really familiar..Then he pushed her towars him such that riddhima's back was touching armaan's chest…Then armaan tied her loops and started to play with her hairs…And than started touching her back with his fingers…Now riddhima understood that it was armaan….she didn't want to ruin the moment because even she enjoyed it….there were Goosebumps in her stomach…yet she didn't say anything…Then armaan kissed her neck…and then he made her turn 180 degree such that both of them were facing each other and there faces were just inches away…both of them could feel each others breath…both of them were holding hands…Armaan had a big urge to kiss her but he stoped himself…he thought of riddhima…he was really uncomfortable as to what will riddhima think of him if he does so…so he broke off…Riddhima was confused..

R : kya hua??

A : ku…kuch nahi…I am sorry…

R : sorry…lekin kyun??

A : mein jaanta hun kit um kitni uncomfortable ho gaye ho…please mujhe maaf kar do..

R : lekin armaan…mein thik hoon…mujhe kya hoga??

A [confued on what she said..he couldn't belive his ears] : kya…tumhe koi problem nahi..

R : nahi armaan…hum ek doosre se pyar kartein hein…aur mein jant hum kit um hamare relation ki kitni ijjat [respect]  karte ho…

A : aw…thanks a lot riddhima…accha chalo..sab hamara wait kar rahe hein…

R : chalo... and they proceed towards the hall…

In the hall everybody present there and are sitting on the couch..

Now lets c who all are wearing what???

Dr.shashank : a black sherwani with lots of work on it…

Sis. Padma : a red saree…

Dr. shubhankar : a simple suit with a tie..

Dr, keerti : a yellw saree… [dr.shubh gifted her]

All of the other interns wore the dresses they wore in Thursday's episode except riddhima who wore the saree armaan gifted her…

Now it was time for all the rituals…while sash n padi were busy with the ceremonies , the boys were busy watching there lady loves who were already blushing on this action of boys…!!!!

After the ceremonies , there was yet another surprise for sash and padi… the interns had organized a dance party for them…

All of them were dancing happily when there was a power cut…all the girls became frightened & the boys were aware of the fact that there lady loves hate the darkness…so they ran to find there lady loves…

After a while all the three boys found them...and without thinking of anything or anyone just hugged them tightly as if they wanted to say that "they will never let go them from there life's" ….

A : don't worry riddhima…mein aa gaya hun…ab tumhe darne ki zaroorat nahi…

Girl [thinking] : riddhima??...ye atul mujhe riddhima kyun samajh raha hain…lagata hain phirse pareshaan kar raha hain…koi baat nahi…ab to uska pareshaan karma bhi mujhe bahut pasand aa raha hain and she smiled…

Ra : tu chinta mat kar muskaan…mein aa gaya hun…

Girl [thinking] : muskaan..ye armaan ko ho kya gaya hian…lagata hain phir se pareshaan kar raha hain & thinking this she naughtly punched on rahul's chest…

Ra [slowly] : oouucchh..!!!!

At : mein janta hun anjali…tumhe andhere [darkness] se bahut darr lagata hian…idliye to dekho mein aa gaya hun…ab tumhe kuch nahi hoga…

Girl [thinking] : ye kaankhajoora mujhe anjali kyun samajh raha hain…???

When all of the girls were about to clear the doubts lights came and the boys were shocked…They were holding someone else thinking that they were there lady loves…

Armaan holed anjali...when he saw her he just broke off with great shock…

A : tu…tum…!!!!!!

Same was with rahul and atul…rahul holded riddhima thinking she was muskaan and atul holded muskaan thinking she was riddhima…all the 6 stood in great shock and embarrassment…

No one even utter a single word and just went in the common room…no one spoke anything…looking at this situation armaan got frustrated and finally broke the silence…

A : ok guys…enough…ab to hadd to gaye…hum sab ko ek doosre ke baarein mein kabhi na abhi to pata chalna hi than na…aur mein to atul aur rahul ke baarein mein pehele se hi janta tha...!!!...hum sabko bahut embarrassment feel ho rahi hian but what can we do…

At : haan yaar…lekin armaan tu to bara chuap rustam nikala…hame to lagata tha ki tu aur riddhima kabhi lade bina rehe hi nahi sakte lekin tu to bada chupa rustam nikala..!!!

An also joined in : aur ridz tum bhi…tumhe atleast mujhe to bata chahiye tha..!!!!...

R : wo…wo di…

A : le..lekin anji tumne bhi to hame nahi bataya…!!!!!...

An : kya???

A : yahi ki u also love atul..!!!!..

An : lekin meine aaisa kab kaha…

A : so this means u don't love him..

An : arre lekin mein aisa kab kaha…

M : arre anji , ek baat bol…haan ya naa…

R : muskaan tu to rehene de…tumne bhi to nahi bataya..!!!!

This nok-jhok turned into a fight…armaan tried to calm everyone down but no1 was listening to him…so he shouted : bas karo yaar...!!!!...ye bhi koi ladne ki baat hian...!!!...hum sabko ek doosre ke baarein mein pata chal chukka hien na...!!!...bas to keep shut…

All of them looked in great shock at armaan…because it was he 1st time he looked so serious…armaan was confused on that reaction from his friends….

A : kya hua??

At , An , R & m : oh..!!!.. Possessive…

A & r : blushed...!!!...

Now everybody went back to there rooms after there stories of how did they fall in love and Atul, Anjali, Rahul, Muskaan were really shocked to hear that AR love story was going on from so many months & they didn't even know about it...!!!...

Next morning it was time to say goodbye to all…

All of the boys said bye to there lady loves because they all had to go in different cars…that is all the girls with sash n padi in one car and all the boys in another because they had to wind up everything for the marriage…!!!!...

Next morning in sanjeevni…everything was changed…There was love all of the hospital…everyone enjoyed working there and unlike the previus days they wanted that there duty hours never ended..!!!...

 

Hope u enjoyed this part....Really sorry for the spelling mistakes…n the grammatical mistakes as well…

EDIT : well freindz I think I have PMed everyone this time...I am really sorry if some1ns left...hope u enjoy this part...Wink



Edited by ksdbstjodi - 30 June 2008 at 1:57am

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