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(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 (Page 83)

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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 12:48am | IP Logged

Originally posted by mahi4u

hey

grt prt yaar

cho cho sweeeeeeeeetttttttt n cuteeeeeeeeeeee Embarrassed

cont super soooooooooooonnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

hy mahru...

Tahnx a toonn sweets...

I have updated my next part..hope u liek it as well....Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 12:51am | IP Logged

Originally posted by chaitra86

I loveeeeed itttt....Clap
karan aur shilpa ki shaadi kara di LOL ...

Tahnx chaitra...

LOLLOL...ab apne thoughts FF's ke through hi to bahar laa saktein hain..LOLLOL

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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 12:53am | IP Logged

Originally posted by pooja_j

hey really nice part Clap Clap ...love it...njoy!! ur trip n do pm for d next part

Tahnx sweets...gald u liekd it..!!!..

will defi. do njoy..Big smileBig smile...

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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 8:09am | IP Logged
hey

awwwwww................

dat was SUPERB............. BEAUTIFULL.................... AMAZING.............got no wrds yaar Embarrassed

cho cho ADOREABLE Tongue

n njoy ur trip

cont super sooooonnnnnnnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
marhu Wink Wink
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Posted: 19 June 2008 at 9:49am | IP Logged
hey ridz yaar srrrry fr gvng u late reply as u know my exms r goi on nd didn't gt tme .........srrry...............
wow yaar vry vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy superb yaar fabulous update shashank nd paddy marriage wow nd in ths ridz nd ar still lv ech othr omg it ws dammmmmmmmmmmmmmm goooooooooooodTonguejst lvd it so romantic fr all couples nd specially ar hayeeeeeeeeeee all r in pairs nd in sme room keerti itni achi wowwwwwwwwww ........all wre happppppppppy...............chooooooooooooooo romantic ar lckd d door nd thy wre abt 2 kiss sm 1 knockd it nd who it wll be cnt wait fr d nxt prt ur goi ohhhhhhhh no probz we wll wait enjoy yaar..................u know tdy ws my exm nd it ws dammmmmmmmmm goooooooood yaar................jst 2 exms r remaining................
cont soooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachuTongue
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 12:24pm | IP Logged

hiiiiii ridzSmile

how r u?????

so u r going out of stationCool

enjoy dereBig smileHug

vaise where r u going???????

u will not b able 2 pm for sum days

is ok dearSmile

no probsBig smile

wow yaar

superb partClap

it was vry cute & romanticBlushing

kaash ye DMG mein ho jaye

AR were about to kiss but sum1 knocked d doorBroken Heart

but who's he/sheShocked ??????

can't wait

plz jaldi continue karnaEmbarrassed

amazing precap

i hope is baar kiss ho jayeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

thanx 4 d pmTongue

 

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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 8:13am | IP Logged

Hy freindz...

well I am going to upate the next part of my FF today....hope u like it..

It is a small part but I have tried to put in some suspence n humor...so hope u like it..!!

N ya really sorry for the delay...!!!!...

Thanx...

loads n loads of love - Riddhima....

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Posted: 22 June 2008 at 8:14am | IP Logged

Hey friends ...!!

UPDATE TIME....!!

What will happen in shashank n padi's marriage…

Here I go..[part B.]

 

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RECAP : All of the interns are allotted the rooms….Atul with Anjali , Rahul with Muskaan & Armaan with Riddhima…..

AR are sharing some close moments when suddenly some one knocks the door….

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R [slowly to armaan] : OMG armaan…ye to di hain.. please mujhe choro…..

A : nahi….

R : please armaan…

An : riddhima….. you there??

R : ha.. haan di….aa rahi hun..!!!..[then slowly to armaan]….plz armaan jane do…

A : ek shart pe….pehele mujhe ek kiss do…

R : kya???...

A : accha thik hian..to aaise hi raho…

Riddhima was left with no choice….she kissed armaan very gently and got rid of armaan's hold….then she ran towards the door & opened it…

An : itni der kyun kar di ridzi…mujhe to tension ho gaye thi ki kahin tum aur armaan phir se ladne to nahi lag gaye…

R : wo..wo…wo di…

An : accha choro ye san ab fatafat tayyar ho jao aaj engagement party chalu hone wali hain….

R : ok di…

And then anjali goes…

Armaan again closes the door…

R : ye kya kar rahe ho???

A : gate band kar raha hun..tumhe tayaar nahi hona kya???

R : haan..tabhi to puch tahi hun ki kya kar rahe ho….tum bahar nahi jaoge to maine tayyar kaise hongi???..

A : kyun mere samane tayyar hone mein sharam aati hain???

R : arrrmaaann……

She opens the door & pushes armaan outside the room and slams the door….armaan hits atul & rahul who were standing there as there lady loves also sent them out of the room..!!!..

At : arre yaar sambhal ke….

A [feeling really embarrassed] : so..sorry…

Ra : to tukhe bhi hamari tarah room se nikal diya???

A : mu…mujhe…aur wo bhi nikal diya….plagal hian kya??...mein to khud aaya hun…

At : haan haan pata hian…..!!!

A [trying to change the topic] : whatever…ab hum yaha kya karenge chalo neeche unka wait karte hina…

Atul n rahul nodded & they went downstairs…

>>AFTER one HOUR

At : aare yaar ek ghanta nikal gaya hain..aur ye ladkiyan abhi tak nahi aai hain….

Armaan was about to say sumthing when rahul pointed towards the door actually the girls who were coming from there …..all of there's mouth fell open….there lady loves were looking exceptionally stunning…..

All of them stood up to admire there lady loves…..muskaan came & stood next to rahul….anjali next to atul & riddhima next to armaan….all of the boys lost in there own wrlds

Just then Dr.keerti n Dr.shahank came …

K : armaan , rahul & atul..aap abhi tak taiyaar nahi hue??...aap jante hian na mehemaan aana shuru ho gaye hian..!!!..please jalsi jaiye aur tayyar hoke aaiye…

At , Ra , A : ji mam

And the ran as fast as they could….when they were changing then also they were lost in the beauty of there lady loves….

They changed & come back within 10 minutes…

[All of them wore the dresses the wore in  17th June's episode]

The engagement ceremony started & shshank n padma exchanged there rings…

While they were exchanging there rings A & R were whispering…

A : aaj tum bahut khobsoorat lag rahi hon….

Riddhima blushed…

A : kuch dino baad hum bhi ek doosre ko aise hi ring pehenayenge…..

Riddhima blushed but pretended to be angry : armaan shhhh….!!!

A : tum mere saath room mein chlogi please…

R : armaan…yaha party chal rahi hain aur tumhe room mein jane ki lagi hian…..

A : accha thik hain…mein jaa raha hun..aur agar tum 5 mins ke andar nahi aai to mujhe lagega kit um mujhse pyar nahi karti…!!!

& he went in great anger…..these lines struk riddhima's ears & she thought : OMG…. Ab to jana hi parega….she then got an idea…she went to anjali

R : di , meri saaree khul rahi hain…mein room mein jalkar thik karke aati hun…

An : think hian..meri koi help chahiye??

R : nahi di…

An : okkk…jaldi aana….

R : ok di… & she goes…

She reaches outside there room but culdnt find armaan anywhere…

R : ye armaan bhi na..mujhe bula ke pata nahi khud kaha chala gaya??..

Suddenly the door opened and some grabbed riddhima's hand..

R : aaaaaa….

Then the person pushed her inside the room…it was armaaan…

A : chup raho riddhima…ye mien hun..armaaan..!!!

R : arrrrmmmmaaaannn….tumne to mujhe dara hi diya tha..!!!

A : oye hoye..!!!..mujhe to lagta tha kit um mujhse sirf pyar hi karti ho…lekin ab pata chala kit um mujhse darti bhi ho ….[he was talking nonsense talk not knowing what was he saying because he was overexcited to c riddhima who was looking really beautiful…]

R [confued and not able to understand what he was saying] : huh??

A : ku..ku…kuch nahi….aaj tum bahut acchi lag rahi ho…

R : tum ye baat pehele bhi kehe chuke ho armaan…!!!

Aramaan pushed riddhima gently towards the wall…he was going closer & closer to her….

A [still moving closer, in a very romantic tone] : kya basket ..!!!..tum to bilkul romantic nahi ho…and he started playing with her hairs…..

R : accha…mein bilkul romantic nahi hun..[showing fake anger]

A [coming more closer, there faces were inches away] : nahi…!!!

Riddhima was enjoying this moment a lot yet she controlled herself & still pretended to be angry…

R : accha aise baat ahin..to jao mein tumse baat nahi karti…

And she moved away..she was going towards the door when armaan got hold of her wrist…

A : kya riddhima tum to mazak bhi nahi samajhti…

Riddhima did not answer….so armaan again pulled her towards him [in the same position as befor]….

A : accha sorry nahi…mujhe maaf kardo….[he holded his ears & made a puppy face]

Riddhima on seeing him like this couldn't control her laughter…

A [in a very naughty tone] : accha to tum mazak kar rahi thi??...ruko abhi bata hun…

& he started running behind her in the room…he tried to catch her but failed every time….then he thought of an idea….he took out a gift from his bag…

A : hey riddhima , mein to tumhe ye dena hil bhul gaya tha….this is a gift to you from me…

Riddhima became really exited and came running & snatched the gift from armaan & started opening it….she looked just like a baby who's very happy to a gift….she was smiling really innocently…armaan looking at her just forgot about everything and was lost in his own world…

Riddhima then waved her hand in front of armaan's eyes…

A [came out of her dream world] : huh..???

R : kya hua armaan kaha kho gaye???

A : ka..kahi nahi…accha tum mujhe batao tumhe ye gift kaisi lagi….[the gift had a pink coloured sarree…the 1 that armaan gave riddhima in the serial as the" shagun ka tauffa"]

R [really exitedly]: bahut acchi….and she kissed armaan on his cheeks without knowing what she was doing….

After a second she realized what she did and blushed…

A [totally confused on what had just happened, he put his hand on his cheeks] : oye hoye..!!!!

Riddhima could no longer bear the embarrassment so she ran away from there…armaan ran behind her…Both of them ran all the way till the hall where the party was held…& finally armaan was able to catch riddhima's pallu….then he dragged him behind the pillar….They both were rally close…both of them could hear each others heart beats…..

A : mujhse bachke kaha tak jaogi basket…..

He was about to kiss him when some called armaan…

A [really irritated yet in the same position] : ye kaun hain yaar jo hamesha pareshaan karne ke liye aa jata hian….

Voice : Dr.armaan…kaha hain aap…

Suddenly that person showed up…both armaan riddhima sudeenly broke off & stood in shock….

OMG….who was that person ..???..did he see armaan riddhima like this ??..now will every1 get to know about them…we will see all this in the next part..!!..

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PRECAP : AR sharing some close moments – Riddhima's back is touching armaan's chest ….& armaan is kissing riddhima's neck…..

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Ok friednz…that's all for this part..!!!...I will b updating the next part soon…hope u enjoyed it a lott..!!!...

Please do comment/criticize…..

Really sorry for the spelling mistakes…n the grammatical mistakes as well…

 

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