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(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 (Page 80)

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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 12:47am | IP Logged

Originally posted by redi50

awesome parrt loved it
plz do continue soon
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aww..Thanx a lott heli...

glad u liked it..!!..WinkWink

will continue it asap..Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:36am | IP Logged

Originally posted by zhasan2

awww its really cute!! Embarrassed Embarrassed plz continue soon!

awww...Tahnx sweetyy..!!!..Big smile

will continue it asap..!!..WinkWink

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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:37am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sweet-niz

awwwwwwwwwwww dat was great sooooooo cute very nce nce way to meet armi family n tlkin bout marriage awww
luvin ur wrk updte sooon Embarrassed

aww...

Tahnx a lott sweety..!!..

will definately update it soon...Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:38am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sweet=me

Hey !!!! I simply loooooved the latest parts!!!! You need a round of applause!!! It was fab. Clap Keep it up n thnx a ton for the pms......
Love,
Ananya

awww....

tahnx a lott ananya..!!..glad u liekd dem..!!!...

will update it asap..!!!..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:39am | IP Logged

Originally posted by deepali.patel

wow yaar i am speechless plz continue soon can't wait to see the marriage happening it was terrific plz continue soon Clap

aww...

Thxna  lott deepali..I am soo gald...!!!

will update it as soon as possible.....

hope u like my new part 2...Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:42am | IP Logged

Hy freindz...!!!...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

1stly I am really erally sorry for the delay.....ConfusedOuch

I am gonno update my new story 2dy....it will b devided in 3 diffrent parts...Smile

In the 1st part I have tried to write about all the jodi's n not only AR...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

so hope u like it..Big smileBig smileBig smile

n ya freindz...there is a really "IMPORTANT NOTE" just after my FF..plz read it....

Tahnx n loads of Love-Riddhima...WinkWink

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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:47am | IP Logged

Hey friends ...!!

UPDATE TIME....!!

before I update my next part I would like to thank all of you for liking my work…I am really happy to receive your comments…Thanks guys…n yafreindz...I am really sorry for writting such a small part..but I promise the rest of m,y parts are going to b really big...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

What will happen in shashank n padi's marriage…

Here I got..[part A.]

 

INTRODUCTION :

Hey friends…I just loved the new promo that was telecasted this Friday [14th may'08] ....so I thought that why not write about the kind of romance that is going to happen in the marriage….there is only once change that in the serial AR are having a fight but in my FF they both are still lovers….this part is not only about AR but also about AA & RM….so hope u all like it…

HERE I GO...!!

>>one day before the marriage

Shashank n padi's marriage celebrations are going to take place in a farmhouse [which is actually a kind of hotel ....it has rooms in it…a separate hall kind of room for food etc. facilities provided in a hotel..] so all of the guests are going there….that farmhouse is quite far from Mumbai and is surrounded by jungles…it is a really lovely farmhouse with lots and lots of greenery…..

>>At the farmhouse

At the farmhouse…when all of the interns got down…they were surprised to see the beautiful place at such a  location….

At : wow yaar….this place is so nice….kitni hari bhari jagah hain….

An : I no….dad ki choice itni acchi kab se ho gaye???

A : yaar anji , jab pyar hota hian na wo sab kuch accha achha hi hota hian…

Ra [trying to tease him] : hmm….tumhe to bahut experience hain na is baat ka…

Armaan stares at him…..which makes riddhima laugh quite loudly….

An : kya hua ridzi….ismein hasne wali kaunsi baat hian???...

R : ku…ku…kuch nahi di..wo bas ek joke yaad aa gaya tha…

At : arre guys choro ye sab…ab please meri madat karo na pinky , tina , saniya etc…etc…ko chupane mein….

A : arre ye sab kaun hain???

Anjali understood who all were they : atul..tum apne plants ko yaha le aaye???...

At : haan anjali..actually gaar mein apne plants ko yaha nahi lata to meri landlady unhe bahar nikal deti..aur phir ye lavaris ho jate..isliye mujhe inhe lana pada…

An : atul tum pagal ho gaye ho???

A : arre anji choro na…tum to janti ho atul ko….& atul tum bhi..leave it….[to all]…chalo guys..ab andar bhi to chalna hain….

All : chalo…

When they reached in they saw Dr. shubhankar & Dr. Keerti  distributing the keys to there rooms…

Dr. keerti saw them and signaled them to come and take there room keys….

K : Aap sab bhi apni apni room ki keys le ligiye….har room mien ek boy aur ek gair honge because yah ape aas paas jungle hain…& it is really dangerous for girls because yah ape raat ko light bhi chali jati hain kabhi kabhi…any problem…

All : no mam…

K : thik hian…so dr anjali….emmm…I mean anjali aap atul ke saath room share karengi [atul becomes really happy but anjali is really annoyed]..rahul…

Anjali interrupts : lekin mam….mein atul ke saath…

K [really angry n annoyed] : dr. anjali ….plz ye rooms apke dad ne decide kiye hian…agar aapko koi bhi problem hian then ask him….rahul aap muskaan ke saath room share karenge….[muskaan is also very sad but rahul is very very happy ..yet he pretends to b sad…]..armaan aap riddhima ke saath room share karenge….[both of them are really happy]…

Keerti gives them there room keys and they all proceed….

S : yaar keerti…I really hope ki yaha ke rooms mein koi glass ka item na ho….

K [confused] : why ??

S : kyunki dr.shashank ne job hi room members decide kiye hain woe k doosre se sabse zayada nafrat katein hian….. I hope ki rooms ki condition pehele jaise rahe…waran ye sab to gaye kaam se…!!

Keerti laughs and says : don't worry shubhankr… mana ke ye bacche hian lekin itne bhi chote nahi hian…!!!..

Now lets c what's happening in there rooms…

>>In RM's room.

In rahul-muskaan's room…muskaan is unpacking her luggage when rahul comes from behind to keep his things….

M : dekh mujhe phele hi bahut gussa aa raha hian..aur ab agar tu mere paas aaya na to dekh lena…

Ra : oye..mujhe bhi koi sauk nahi hian tere paas aane ka….mein bas apna sama rakh raha hun…!!!..

M : dekh..tu mujhse ab behes mat kar…..mujhse 10 feet dor rehena aur haan..raat ko bed pe mein souingi [sleep]…..

Ra : kyun tere baap ka bed hian…

M : dekh baap pe may jaa…varna…

Ra : varna kya kar legi…

M : dekh tu ruk ja….and she starts running behind him…but suddenly her leg sliped and she feel in rahul's arm……they both were looking in each others eyes….both of them lost in there own world…

Then rahul started feeling some kind of pain : oooouuuccchhhh..!!!...

Muskaan also came out of her dream world : kya hua..[still in rahul's arms..]

Ra : stand up…to mere pair pe khadi hain…!!..

Muskaan gets up n says : oh ..!!..sorry…

Now lets c wat is happening with atul and anjali…

>>In AA's room

In atul-anjali's room...there was a similar kind of atmosphere….anjali was really irritated with atul as he brought his plants in the farm house…

Anjali was not able to open her suitcase so atul came..

At : anjali mein kuch madat kar do??

An : no atul ..Thanks a lott..!!!

At : meine sorry kaha na anjali….tum janti nahi ho meri landlady mere plants ko bahar nikal deti….

An : whatever atul…

Atul holds his ears and says soory really innocently…anjali could no longer be angry with him because he was looking really cute…

An [in her mind] : ye mujhe kya ho raha hian??...mein atul se naraz kun nahi hun???....

Now lets c what is happening in AR's room….

>>In AR's room

As soon as arman n riddhima entered there room….armaan locked the door from inside and pinched riddhima towards the wall….

R : ye kya kar rahe ho armaan……please mujhe choro…

A : nahi….

R : please armaan…. Warna koi aa jayega…

A : koi nahi aayeja jaan….I have locked the door…

R : aaarrrrmmmmaaaannn…!!!!

A : jaanti ho jab tum mujhe aaise gusse se bulati ho to…

R : to tumhe mujhpe aur bhi pyaar aatna hian….yahi kehena chahte ho na???

A : nahi…mein kehe raha tha ki to mujhe tumpe bahut hasi aati hain….

R : armaaaannn..!!!

Armaan became really romantic….he cupped her face and kissed her on  her forehead then on her eyes then on her cheeks then on her chin…Riddhima blushed like any thing…

A : I love you a lot riddima…mein tumhare bina nahi jii sakta….

R : mein bhi tumehare bina nahi jii sakti armaan…. I love you 2…and they hug passionately …. Armaan was about to kiss riddhima on her lips just when someone knocked the door ....armaan became really angry…

Voice from outside : ridzi.. you there???

 

OMG…!!... did the person standing outside heard AR's talks???....well u will have to wait till the next part..!!!...

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PRECAP : AR sharing some close moments – Armaan pushed riddhima towards the wall...he's going closer n closer...riddhima blushing like anything...Embarrassed

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Ok friednz…that's all for this part..!!!...I will b updating the next part soon…hope u enjoyed it a lott..!!!...WinkWink

Please do comment/criticize…..Big smileBig smile

 

N m sorry for the gramatical n spelling mistakes...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 



Edited by ksdbstjodi - 18 June 2008 at 1:49am
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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 1:48am | IP Logged

IMPORTANT NOTE  :

Hello friends…

As u all know that I will b going out of station for some days…

But I have decided that I will keep updating the parts…..

But I wont PM anyone because I don't think I will have that much time…so I am giving u a pre-schedule of how and when am I going to update my ff…

I have updated the 1st part of this ff 2dy i.e. 18th june'08

Part B. will b updated on 21st june'08

& the Part C. will be updated on 25th june'08..

For the rest of the parts I will PM u as usual…

Thanks a lot ….hope u enjoy this update…

 

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