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(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 (Page 71)

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Posted: 12 June 2008 at 3:13am | IP Logged

Hy freindz...!!

UPDATE TIME....!!

before i start I would like to thank all of you for supporting me so much…I am really ahppy to recive ur comments…Thanx guys…

WHAT IF ALL THE INTERNS GO FOR A DINNER..??

 

INTRODUCTION :

Hey friends…as u all might be knowing that in my last part it was only AR went on a dinner…so this time I decided y not all of them go….In this part someone really special invites them to have dinner for a really special reason ..you will get to know about it when u read this part….

HERE I GO...!!

>>In the locker room…

All the interns were having a discussion there except riddhima who was waiting for armaan as he was late that day which made her quite tensed because this was not the scene with him everyday , Infact he was the first one to reach hospital everyday…..

R [to herself] : ye armaan kaha rehe gaya….???.....abhi tak aaya kyun nahi…kahin use kuch ho to nahi gaya….[she had ters in her eyes]…nahi nahi….use kya ho sakta hain…??

Then suddenly she saw a shadow on the floor…it was Armaan….she just ran towards him and was about to hug him when she realized that all of there other friends were also there….

R [quite slowly] : aaj tumne itni late kyun kar di??...u no I was so tensed..

A : sorry jaan…actually aaj tum sabke liye ek surprise hain….

R : surprise…kaisa surprise??...

A : batata hun…wait….

Then armaan goes to meet all his other friends who were busy discussing something else and didn't notice that he had come…

A : hi champ…kaisa hain??

At : arre armaan….tu kab aaya??...mein to thik hun….

A : kya baatein chal rahi hain??...

At : kuch nahi yaar….mein aur anjali bas rahul aur muskaan ko samjhane ki kshish kar rahe hain ki un dono ko kabhi na kabhi ek doosre se pyar ho gayega….lekin ye hain ki mante hi nahi…!!!

A [trying 2 tease rahul as he alredy knows that he loves Muskaan] : arre champ ye sahi to kehe rahe hian….in dono mein kabhi pyar ho hi nahi sakta..tu jaanta hian na ki kitna ladte hain ye dono…!!!

Listening to this rahul became really angry…

Ra [to himself] : apna pyar pyar , aur dosre ka pyar bina pahiye ki car…!!!

Atul listened to this and said : kya???

A : arre kuch..ye to kuch bhi keheta reheat hian…tum choro na in baaton ko..I have a surprise for all of u….

All : surprise….kasia surprise..

M [really exited] : kaunsa surprise…ab bata bhi de…!!!...

Ra : agar tu use bolne nahi degi to wo kaise bolega kaunsa surprise…

M : dekh tu chup ho ja..subha subha mere muh mat lag..varna…

Ra : varna kya kar legi..??

They both stand opposite to each other when armaan comes in between….

A : guys…tum logo ko ladne ke alawa kuch aata bhi hain ki nahi??...Now listen to me…aaj mujhe ek bhaut bada surprise mila….

M : agar tujhe surprise mila to wo hamare liye surprise kyun hain???...

An : muskaan plz…use bolne to do…

A : thanx anji…and he continued…actually kal mere dad ka call aaya tha n I thold them that I was missing all of them a lot…to aaj jab mein subha utha wo log mere samne the….they said that you were missing us so much so we came to surprise you..and guess what unhone aaj tum sabko ghar pe dinner ke liye bulaya hain….isnt'd great..!!!..

An : wow armaan….

M : kaash mere parents bhi meri haar baat mante..to mujhe is khajoor ke saath nahi rehena pdta aur nahi yaha kaam karma padta [pointing towards Rahul…]

A : so guys…u coming na??

All : yes..!!...obviously.!!..

All of the interns seemed to be happy except riddhima…Armaanbecame tensed as to why wasn't she haapy…just when he was about to ask riddhima…

ANNOUNCEMENT : SAARE INTERNS NURSE STATION PE DR.KEERTI KO REPORT KARE…

All of them leave except AR…when riddhima was leaving armaan holded her hand & pulled her towards him…

R : armaan…mujhe jaane do varna duites ke liye late ho jayenge..

A : pehele tum mujhe batao kit um itni pareshaan kyun ho??

R : me..mei…mein aur pareshaan??...ku..ku…kuch nahi….

A : dekho riddhima mujhse jhoot bolne ka koi faayada nahi hain….saaf saaf batao baat kya hian??

R : armaan mujhe bahut dar lag raha hian??..

A [confused]  : daar…kyun???...

R : aaj mein tumhari family se peheli baar milne wali hun…I am really nervous…!!!..

A : accha to ye baat hian…don't worry jaan…mien hoon na..!!!...and he pushed her towards the wall…

R : achha armaan ab to jane do mujhe….

Armaan shook his head : no way..tumhe subha se acche se dekha tak nahi hian…!!!...abhi ruk jao…

R : tum to aaise bol tahe ho jaise 3-4 hours se hospital mein aaye hue ho….

A : leking subha hue to 9 hrs. ho gaye hain na…!!..aur ye 9 hrs. mere liye to 9 janmo ke barabar hian…!!!..

And he moved closer to kiss her…but riddhima got rid of his hold and ran away…

>>At the nurse station…

Dr. K : interns aap apni kal ki duties continue karenge… I.e. Dr armaan & ar. Riddhima in general ward..

Dr. rahul & dr. muskaan in children ward…

Dr.atul & ar.anjali in OPD…I hope there is no problem…

All : no Dr. keerti….

& they all proceed for there duties

>>In general ward…

Armaan enters….

Nana : OYE APPLE KYA BAAT HIAN…AAJ BADA KUSH LAG RAHA HIAN…KAHIN BULBUL KE SAATH…

Aarmaan interrupts

A : arre kuch nahi nana aise koi baat nahi hian….

Nana pulls armaan towards him and speaks loudly in his years…

N : PAITESE [35] FILMEIN CHUATISE [34] NATAK KA EXPERIENCE HAIN MUJHE….SACH SACH BATA…AAJ BULBUL KE SAATH ISHQ LADANE KA KOI PLAN HAIN KYA??

Riddhima was just entering the ward and heard nana…she blushed…

A [embarrassed n rubbing his ears] : Nana aap baith jaiye…aapke liye itna bolna thik nahi hian….

N : thik hian…..ARRE MEIN KYUN BAITHU…TU BAITH JA….AUR MEIN TERI BAAT KYUN MANU??...

Then riddhima comes and handles the situation..

R : nana aap please baith jaeye….warna dr.keerti aa gaye to bahut problem ho jayegi…

N : kuch sikh aaple….kuch sikh apni bulbul se….and he sits on the bed…

A : tahnx..

>>In the locker room after there duties…

A : ok guys ….so are u ready???

All : haan…

A : to chalo….& all of them leave the locker room…

>>At armaan's residence…

All of them get down from the car and notice a really big house…

M : wow armaan…kya ghar hain…bilkul palace jaisa..[& she laughs…]

A : tahnx….ab chale….

All : ok….

Then armaan notices that riddhima is very tensed…so he holds her hand and takes her in….

Rahul & muskaan leading….then Atul & anjali….& lastly was armaan & riddhima….they walked through the main door….when they enterd the house they saw a big drawing room….

A : guys now let me introduce u to my family….

This is my dad Mr. Abhishek Mallik [Ab]….the famous business tycoon of the country….

This is my mom Mrs. Preity mallik

….the famous socialist of Mumbai…

This is my Big Brother Mr. Karan mallik [K]…..another business tycoon of the country…

This is my really sweet bhabhi Mrs. Shilpa mallik [S]….the famous model who left modeling because of her family responsibilities….

And finally this is my swthrt….aaditya [Adi]….

All of them were shocked to see so many celebrities at one place….

Everyone of them was so friendly….they couldn't believe there eyes…

Armaan introduced all his friendz to his family…

A : papa this is Atul aka champ…. This is anji….this is rahul…u no him..dont u???....this is muskaan….& this is riddhima…[both of tehm were still holding hands…but when armaan introduced her he realized it & left his hand…but it was too late…her bhabhi & adi had alredy noticed it….]

P : armaan inko ghar dikha do…

A : thik hian mom….

Then he went & showed the house….all of them were busy exploring the paintings hung in the hallway when armaan took riddhima to "their room"…

R : wow armaan..tumhaar room to bahut accha hian….

A : tumhara nahi hamar room….

R blushed…then they all went downstairs…

P : chalo.. lets have dinner…you all might be really hungry…

A : haan maa…abhut bhuk lagi hian….[he said it patting his stomach]…

All of them proceeded towards the dining table…

They all sat in this order : Atul>>Anjali>>Rahul>>Muskaan>>Armaan >>Riddhima…

They were about to eat when… armaan holded riddhima's hand…it was her right hand…

R [really slowly] : armaan leave….ye mera right hand hain….

A : so…

R : what so??...ab mein khana kaise khaungi..??

A : left hand se.. and he started eating his food…

Riddhima felt really uncomfortable eating her food like this….

P : kya baat hian riddhima beta…tum right hand se khana kyun nahi kha rahi ho??..

R : jo wo..hi wo miin..mere right hand mein chot lagi huo hian….

Just then adi's spoon fell down & he bent down to pick it up…he saw armaan holding riddhima's hand….

Adi : di aapko zayada zo se to nahi lagi na….& he winked towards armaan…armaan understood & left riddhima's hand feeling really embarrased….

After having there dinner all of them were talking to armaan's family & riddhima was playing with adi….armaan felt really happy on seeing adi so comfortable with riddhima…..then they all went back home…

>>after some time….In armaan's room

A [to himself] : I hope aaj raat sabko bahut maza aya hoga….ye subha kab hogi…I really wanna meet u basket…

Just then armaan's bhabhi ,shilpa [s ] entered..

S : kyun armaan…kiske baarein mein soch rahe ho???

A : ki..kis….kisi ke bare mein nahi bhabhi….

S : accha to ye basket kaun hain??..

A : basket…kaun basket….arre basket ball wali basket…

S : accha….and he holded armaan's ears…mujhe adi ne sab bata diya hian ki usne kya dekha??...tum usese pyar karte ho??..

A : haan bhabhi…bahut zayada…she's the one for me…

S : I am so proud on your choice armaan…..mujhe lagta tha kit um koi HI-FI si biwi laoge…but I am really really proud…!!!!

A : tahnx bahbhi and he hugged him….

Just then armaan's mom also entered….

P : arre armaan….meine tumhare liye ek ladki pasan ki hain…aaj tumhe subha batana hi bhul gaye….ye dekho….

Armaan was really tensed…but when he saw the picture he was really happy + embarrassed…..

P : aaj tumhare room saaf karte karte tumhari ek file me se gir gaye thi….ye riddhima hian na…

A : haan….ye hain riddhima….

P : beta I am really happy for u…chalo ab mein halti hun….

S : ab mei nbhi chalti hun… ab so jao…kal uthke hospital bhi to jana hain…aur agar late ho gaye to basket se kaise miloge….[and she winked]

 

A : arre haan…chalo bhaibhi ab aap bahar jao I have to sleep…..

S : thik hian…good night…

A : same to u….

>>next morning, in the locker room…

Riddhima was present when armaan came…

A : hi basket….

R : Hi armaan…aaj mein bahut khush hun…

A : kyun..??

R : kyunki I am so glad that u didn't join your dad's business but decided to make your own reputation…..

A : tahnx….accha mein to tumhe bata hi bhul gaya…

R : kya…??

A : yahi ki meri family ko apni naye bahu bahut pasand aaye…

Riddhima blushed….

I hope u enjoy reading this part….I have a very important note for all of you…I will be going out of station after sometime so this mite be my last update for the month…I am not so sure…..but lets hope for the best..!!!

Please do comment/criticize…

NOTE : really sorry for grammatical mistakes & spelling errors…

 

 

 



Edited by ksdbstjodi - 12 June 2008 at 12:54pm

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Posted: 12 June 2008 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
really a nice update please continue it soon or send me pm


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Edited by kvn1983 - 12 June 2008 at 11:37pm
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amznggggggggggggggggg................... mindblowingggggggggggg
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Posted: 13 June 2008 at 1:17am | IP Logged
hey wow yaar mindblowng nd hatke update seriously lvd it............superb wow thy all wnt 2 dinnr in ar home wow thts grt yaar......all wre so happpppy 2 saw ar house wow nd ridz bcm nervouse fst tme she goi 2 meet his parnts wow yaar wch ar truly lvd it tht how she fully .......attachd wth thm awwwwwwwwwwwww choooo chweeeeeeeeeet yaar...........wow nd ar bhabhi sab pata hota hai nd adi wow he is toooooooo gooooooooood..............wow armaan ws holdng her hnd nd adi saw tht gud...............wow ar mum nd bhabz ready realy lke her wow it ws wonderful yaar..................lvd it.............
cont sooooooooon
no probz we wll wait........
enjoy.
luv yachuSmile
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Posted: 13 June 2008 at 2:13am | IP Logged
hey riddhima Smile
thanks for the pm sweety Wink
loved this part
it was very cute n chweet Smile
liked the idea of all going to armi's house for dinner n also the adi n shilpa's teasing LOL
overall very cute
update soon
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Posted: 13 June 2008 at 2:26am | IP Logged
wow yaar mindblowing part Clap Clap Clap ,maza aa gaya Wink Wink ,u r too good ,i am also going hill station or mai bhi after 25 he aa paungi and waiting for ur update ,bye,happy journey and do lots of fun Tongue Tongue bye ,,,take care ,,, love Embarrassed you ...@yesha...**** Smile
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Posted: 13 June 2008 at 4:53am | IP Logged

OMG...Very well written!

Da concept was very cute....n da dialogues were very realistic n adorable!

Do write anoder scene soon n do PM me 2!

Luv u!

*~*Marisha*~* Embarrassed
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Posted: 13 June 2008 at 4:59am | IP Logged
OYE HOYE !!!!!!!
wow !!!!!!!!
awesum part !!!
too good !!!
i have a suggestion if u dont mind....
y dont u start a FF??? i mean another one... not this one... yeh to continue karna hi... lekin aur bhi ek FF ho jaye?????
the thing is, i lovvvveeee ur writing.. its awesumly awesum... to wat say????? dont mind haan???? main to bas yuhi keh rahi thi...
please reply..tc
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