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(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 (Page 31)

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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 2:43am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sea_nyx

awww, poor shilpa, now she'll get jealous and confess i guess

hmm....Nice assumption dear..!!

I am impressed..Big smile..well everything will b clear in my next part..!!..dnt worry..!!..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 2:45am | IP Logged

Originally posted by rakshi_sweety

Hey niks.. kool part yaar .. but i think in dis past sum masala was missing in it..
well but gud pat.. plzz do continue soon.. waiting 4 it..
Rakshita

Hy rakshu...!!

Tahnx alott dear....I really apprititate ur critisism...and will definatly try and improve upon that...!!!

Thaxn once again..!!...Wink

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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 2:46am | IP Logged
hey Smile
thanks for the pm dear Wink
loved this part
i liked the jealousy part to bits Wink LOL
both j abt each other being with someone else LOL
its so cute
n now this sunaina willl def. be one way of confession Wink
update part b fast
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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 2:51am | IP Logged

Hy friendz....I am bak

Wid d next part of mt previous story..!!!

I am really glad that u all liked my concept soo much....

I have a requst from sum special ppl....i.e. the silent readers....

Plz apprititale or critisise my work if u think it is capale of it....Plz....Thanx a lot..!!!....

And my next part starts frm the next post..!!!

Loadz of love 2 all,

Riddhima...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 3:34am | IP Logged

Update time...!!

WHAT WILL HAPPEN IF RIDZ TELL EVRY1 ABOUT ARMAAN AND HERSELF 

HERE I GO..!!..[part b.]

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RECAP : Armaan talks on the phone in the locker room wid sum1...and ridz is suspicious......then alll the interns enter and greet each other...

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A:Hi champ...kisa hian tu??

At:Kya baat hia...aaj bada khush-kush hian...koi naye gf mil gaye kya???

As soon as Atul said "koi naye gf mil gaye kya"...ridz satrted feeling really suspicous of armaan...more den suspicious..."jeleous"..!!!!

A:hehhe...arr...arre na...nahi.....wo to bas aise hi...!!

Then Armaan goes 2 his locker...

Rahul & muskaan starts fighting....in their usual manner....& Anjali and Atul are trying 2 solve dere fights...

Riddhima thinks taht its d bst opportunity 2 talk 2 Armaan....she goes near him and says...

R:Armaan...tum phone pe kisse baat kar rahe the??

A:Kisis se nahi....wo to bas sunaina ka phone tha....she told me 2 met her after my duty hours....after all we met after soo long..!!...I will meet her in the mall at around 5:00..den we will do shopping...aur phir ek candel light dinner in the restraunt "the oceans"[trying 2 tell all the details so that she's more jeleous]

R:Lekin humari duty to 8:00 o'clock over hoti hian na....

A:To kya hua...meine pehele se hi saare intezaam kar rakhe hain..I have already taken permision frm Dr.Keerti...

By the time RM's fight is solved....

An:Kya hua riddhima??...Koi probllem hain??

R:Nahi di wo...bas kaam ki baat kar rahi thi...ek case discuss karna tha....

Suddely the operator "SAARE INTERNS NURSE STATION PE REPORT KARE"

All of them go...

>>In the nurse station...

Dr K : Dr.riddhima...armaan....general ward

.....Dr. anjali...atul..OPD...and

Dr.Rahul...muskaan...children ward...

All the interns go 2 there duty...

>>In general ward..

Riddhima goes 2 armaan and says...

R:Armaan tumhe yaad nahi hain ki aaj hame movie jana tha..aur phir candel light dinner....

A:Oh haan..!!...maien to bhul hi gaya tha...I am really sorry ridhdima...lekin meine sunaina ko promise kiya hain...aaj hum movie nahi jaa sakte....

R [really depressed] : Koi baat nahi...

The clock struck 4:45...

A:oh no..!!...I am late...maine jata hun....

R:Byee..

Armaan gave no answer....

R[to herself] : Ise kya ho gaya..subha se mujhe itna ignore kar raha hain...!!!...kuch to gadbad hain....kahin ye abhi bhi Armaan ki GF to nahi..!!..nahi nahi...mera ammy aaisa nahi kar sakta......I will go and chk..!!!

>>In the locker room...

M:Aaj to bahut saara kaam tha..!!!...uff..!!

R:Tune kuch kiya bhi nhai.....saara kaam to maine kar raha tha..tu to bas maharani ki tarah bauithi thi...

M:Oye...jhut mat bol..!!!...nahi to...

R:Nahi to kya kar legi....

M:Nahi to tujge zameen mein gadh dungi.... [will push u inside the floor]

R:Apni aaukaad mein rehe...

M:Oye...and took out her slippers...!!!...as to hit rahul wid it...

R:Oye kya kar rahi han [speaking while running]...ye hospita hian..tera ghar nahi....

RM went fighting wid each other...and every1 else was giggleinmg..

At:bye anji..bye ridhdima....mein bhi chalta hun...

R:Bye Atul...

An:Chalo Ridhdima....Hum bhi chaltein hian...nani wait kar rahi hogi..!!

R:Di...aap jaiyese mujhe kuch kaam hian....

An:Ok..!!..Par jaldi aa jana...bye..!!

>>In hotel Oceans....

Armaan is really bugged off wid sunaina..and thinks about ridhdima....wen wil she cum...he is sitting opposite 2 her....and sunaina is speaking non stop...but armaan is only thinking bout ridz...

Suddenly she cumes.....Armaan is lost in the dream after luking at her...coz he didnt c her for about 4-5 horus...and she was luking really pretty..

suddenly he comes out of the dream wrld....and remembers of h8is plan...riddhima is finding his table...meanwhile, he shifts his chair really close 2 that of sunaina...and holds his hands....

Riddhima den locats armaan and sees Armaan sitting so close 2 her.....she feels erally jeleous...and thinks of going rite away and fightiing wid armaan...but den she thinks that she will talk 2 him the d hospital next day....

>>Next day,in the locker room...

Armaan enetrs...and finds riddhima w8tin dere..

A:arre anji nahi aai tumhar saath..

R:nahi mein di se pehele aa gaye...

A:Kyun??

R:Bas aaise hi...so tumhari kal raat ko candel lite dinner kaisa tha??

A:bahut aacha....We both had loads of fun...we danced a lott...and we even got d award for the bst couple of the evening...!!!

R [feeling as really jeleous..and armaan culd imagin smoke frm her yars coz of jeleousy] : achha...!!..realllty nice..!!...acchi baat hian....mujhe to kabhi leke nahi gaye aaise...

A:Tum aai nahi...!!!...aur aati bhi kaise...koi bahan banana padta...kyunki kisi ko hamarebaarein mein pata to hian hi nahi...!!!

R:Aur agar pata chal gaye to??....

A:Tum...aur wo bhi sabko hamarein baarein mein bataogi...plzzz...

Suddenly anji enters...

An:arre riddhima aaj tum itni jaldi kaise aa gaye...??

R:di mujhko aappse kuch paat karni hian.....

An:haan bolo..

R:vo...vo...vo...di...

An:haan bolo ridz...

R:vo..di..mein ye kehe rahi thi ki....

An:ki....

R:vo di...vo mujhe aapse ek patient ke baarein mein puchna tha....

Armaan listening 2 it starts giggling...not realising how wuld riddz b feeling...

Riddhima runs out of the room coz she's not able 2 face him.....

An:aree ise kya hua....armaan kya tumhara phirse jhagada to nahi hua...!!

Den Armaan realised.....that watever he had dne was rong....

A:Mein dekhta hun...

And he runs outside.....he knew where culd he find ridzz....he went 2 the terrace

>>On the terrace

Ridz was crying there really badly...

A:I am sorry...ye sab meri vagah se hua hian...!!...den he tells riddhima how he was jeleous of rahul hanging out wid him and den he made a plan 2 make her feel jeleous.....& den he said....Mein janta hun tum mujhse bahut naraz ho....but plz forgive me

R:listeining 2 this goes and hugs him tightly...coz she felt that she had actualy lost him after seeing him wid sunaina last nite....

Den dey both cry...n suddenly...ammy notices a showdaow of a person..and then that person show's up....and den ammy says..

A:kya tum chahati ho sabko hamare baarein mein pata chale??

R:NAhi armaan...plz...abhi nahi..!!

A:to phir dur hato coz anji ne sab sunliya hian...aur hamin dekh bhi liya hain...

Ridhz is in shock...and even embarraced 2..!!...she gets rid of armaan's hold ans stands jst like a sweet puppy....

An:Hmmm...to kab se chal raha hain ye sab??

A[Really innocently] : kya sab??

An:dnt try 2 act smart wid me armaan..meine sab sun liya hina....!!

den Armaan tealls anji the whole story how dey came 2gether in lonawala and confession happend...

An:Kyun ridz....bahi chupi rustam nikli tum to...

and den all of them giggled....and AR were feeling really shy and embarrased...

Hope u like it...!!..

Plz do comment / Critisise...!!..Embarrassed

Note : really sorry for spelling and gramatical errors..!!



Edited by ksdbstjodi - 04 June 2008 at 2:20am

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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 3:36am | IP Logged

Originally posted by prernawaghray

hey Smile
thanks for the pm dear Wink
loved this part
i liked the jealousy part to bits Wink LOL
both j abt each other being with someone else LOL
its so cute
n now this sunaina willl def. be one way of confession Wink
update part b fast
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Hy...Thanx a lott dear..!!..well i have updated d part..!!..U may read it soon..!!

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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 3:52am | IP Logged
amazing work
keep it up
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Posted: 26 May 2008 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Hey kool part yaar... Tongue
Rakshita

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