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(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 (Page 124)

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Posted: 03 August 2008 at 5:22pm | IP Logged
awww ridz! im gonna miss this FF!!! but i love JTYJN so i will read that! Embarrassed

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Posted: 04 August 2008 at 2:56am | IP Logged
hey riddzi,
sorry for late replying
i lost the link 2 ur FF
last partwas superb as usual
and i can understand
studies r vry impand specially 10th
so jst concentrate on ur studies
and yaaa if u get sometimes frm studies and another FF then plz cont it
gonna miss ur FF
 
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Hey guys...well tahnx a lott for understanding my problem..I am glad that u respected my decision...but I realli culdnt brk all of urs heart so I have decided that I am gonno continue with the FF...but a bit small updates...I hope u all wont mind that...anyways here is my new update..Wink


WHAT IF...PADMA n RAHUL SAVES A-R???
 
Introduction :
Well guys u all must hav seen the thrusday episode of DMG..Wink..anji's gonno go behind ridzzy on the day to that hotel..[dont remember d nameConfusedLOL]...
So then we'll c watz gonno happen...Embarrassed
 
Here I go :
 
On that day..in the morning...
R : di utho..hum sanjeevni ke liye late ho gayenge...
An[in sleepy voice] : kya hua riddhima sone do na...
R : Di...hum bahut late ho jayenge...its already 8:00 am...
An : wat??..8 o'clock...oh god agar late ho gaye to gabbar to hame maar hi degi...
She ran as fast as she could and came downstairs in only 10 minutes...
Nani : Kya baat hain anji..aaj to tumne apne saare record tod diye...kaha nahane mein half hour lagati thi...aur ab tayyar hoke bhi aa gaye..aur wo bhi sirf 10mins mein...
Both riddhima and nani giggled..
An : yaya...watever..ab late nahi ho raha hain ridz??
R : Oh! chalo di..bye nani..
Nani : Bye baccho..achhe se jaana...
 
In the Locker Room..in the evening..riddhima was there..
 
R[thinking] : ye din kab khatam hoga..aur mein armaan se kab milungi..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed..I am realli missing him...
Just then muskaan comes in..
M : Hi Ridzzy...[riddhima didnt answer...still in her dreams]..riddzy..kaha kho gaye??
R : huh..??..oh!..h..hi muskaan...
M : kya soch rahi thi...
R : wo..wo mein..mein ar..ar..i meam aram[rest] ke barrein mein soch rah..rahi thi...aaj-kal kitna kaam hota hain..i am soo tired..
M : lekin tu to ekdum fresh lag rahi hain...
R : wo..wo..na..nahi to..
M : to agar chahe to kahin bahar bhi ghumne jaa sakti hain abhi..
R : mein...na..nahi yaar...mein to ghar jake sone wa..wali hun..
M[thinking] : kab tak chupaogi riddhima..agar tum nahi batogi ki wo gifts wala kaun tha to hum hi pata laga lenge..
R : tu..tumne ku..kuch kaha??
M : nahi..na--
An[entering the locker room] : riddhima..chalo..we are getting late...[to muskaan]..bye muskaan..kal miltein hain...
M : byee...
An : riddhima tum chalo mein aai..
R : ohk di..!!!
Riddhima went and rahul, atul also entered the locker room..
An : muskaan...riddhima ne kuch bataya..
M : nahi yaar..pata nahi kya chupa rahi hain..
Ra : arre guys..uski lyf tum kyun itna interfare kar rahe ho???
M : tu chup rehe rahul...wo hamari dost hain..usko hame sab kuch batana zaroori hain..
An : haab rahul..aaj tak usne mujhse kuch nahi chupaya hain..aur aaj..wo mujhse jhoot bol rahi hain..i realli want to find out..who that guy is..okh guys..ab mera plan suno...[and she narrates the whole plan to all of them]
 
At Gupta Reseidence :
 
R[thinking] : OMG...its already 11:30..I will have to rush soon..leking mein jaungi kaise..
She quitely goes inside the room and finds anji sleeping..just then her cell rings...
R : armaan...???
She pick up the phone..
A : hey riddhima..
R : hey armaan..tumne abhi kyun phone kiya hain??
A : tumhe mujhse milna hai ki nahi???
R : yaa..
A : to tum aaogi kaise???
R : mein bhi abhi yahi soch rahi thi armaan..
A : dont worry..mein sab kuch plan kar liya hai...neeche umhare liye meri car wait kar rahi hain..aur usme tumhare liye ek gift bhi hain..just go n recive it..n jaldi tayyar ho..n cum fast..k chalo bye...
R : bye armaan..
Then riddhima rushes to the car..takes the gift and tell the driver to park the car a bit far away from the house...
Then she comes upstairs and sees her gift..it was a really pretty white colour suit..embroydry all over..she wore it as fast as possible and got ready within 15 minutes..
R[thinking] : mein jaa to rahi hun..lekin agar raat ko koi uth gaya to I will be dead..mujhe kisis ko to batke jaana parega..lekin kise..haan..mummy..!!!..lekin bahan kya banugi..dad to hospital mein hi hain..agar hosopital bola to kal dad puchenge..lagta hain ab to sab kuch bata hi parega..!!!
She picks up her phone and calls paddy who's sleeping in her room..
P : riddhima...itni raat ko kyun phone kiya??..kya hua??..sab thik to hain na...???
R : mom...actyually aapse kuch kehena tha..
P : beta..itni raat ko..kal subha baat karnge--
R : mom mujhe urgently kahun jaana hain...plz can I go..
P[looks at the watch] : wat??...raat ke 11:45???..no way..kaha jaana hain??
R : mom..wo mein..mein aapko nai bata sakti..but plz..
P : no riddhima..tum kahin nahi jaa rahi ho..
R : mom plz..aap ko mujh par bharosa hain??
P : haan beta lekin--
R : maa..agar bharosa hain to pllzzz allow me..
P : thik hain..but tum promise karo kal mujhe sab kuch batogi..
R : okh maa...promise..ab can I go..n ya..plz kisi ko bata nahi..
P : ok..
R : ok maa..bye..and she cuts the phone..
 
Till the time..anji also wakes up..she had called up rahul, muskaan, atul to her place so that they all could go behind her...as soon as she left, anji also left wid the gang followed by padma..LOLLOL..actually padma was realli tensed bout riddhima..and did'nt went to keep a eye on her..but to see that she reaches safely..Wink
 
At the Hotel :
 
Riddhima went in to the reception..a lady was sitting dere..
Lady : Miss. Riddhima..
R : yes...
Lady : well u have to go to the that building..
R : okh..thanx..!!!..
And she ran..as soon as possible...she was so exited to meet armaan...
Just then anji also reached the place..
An : excuse me..abhi jo girl aai thi wo kaha gaye??
Lady : there..she said..pointing the building..
An : okh..tahnx..all of them went to that building..
It was seperate building within the hotel campus...it had a hall..
Riddhima went in..followed by anji n gang n padma..
padma was about to go in when she saw anji n all as well..
P[thinking] : anji??..ye yaha kya kar rahi hain..she went near them to listen to there conversation..
An : guys..finally time aa gaya hain...jaanane ka ki riddhima ka only love kaun hain..
At : haan yaar...mein to baut exited hun..!!!..
M : haan yaar..mein bhi..
Ra : guys yaar...meri baat mano..its her lyf..let her do wat shez doing..
M : oye rahul tu to chup rehe..and then all of them went from here..
R : arre yaar..ye log to pagal ho gaye hain..armaan ko pata chala ki ye log uski date kharab karne aa rahe hain to he'll kill me..!!!..I'll have to do sumthing..idea..!!!
He picked up his phone n called armaan..his cell was switched of..then he tried calling riddhima..but her cell was out of range...
Padma on the other hand was shocked to hear wat rahul just said..she couldnt belive her ears..she didnt knew how to react??..she was happy that the guy was armaan as she had thought..but sad that riddhima did'nt tell her..
M : arre rahul..tu chal raha hai ki nahi??..
Ra : arre haan..tu chal mein aa raha hun...
When rahul was about to go..padma called of his name..
Ra[shocked] : pa..padma au..aunty..aa..app yaha??..kaise??
P : rahul..dont worry mein sab janti hun..I have heard everything..
Ra[shocked] : kya??
P : haan..and I know ki riddhima armaan se pyar karti hain..
Ra[all the more shocked] : na..nahi..aai..aaisi..ko..koi..ba..baat..na..nahi hain..
P : rahul don't worry..i am realli happy that its armaan..
Ra[a bit relifed and confused too] : huh??
Then padma told rahul everything wen they did'nt join sanjeevni...wat had happened...n she had a doubt bout there relation n stuff..
Ra : wah aunty..!!!..
P : accha ye to thik hain--
Ra : arre aunty ek bahut badi problem hain...actually as aaj riddhima ka b'day hain...armaan wantz to give her a surprise...so he called her...but ab ye sab bhi aa gaye hain..agar inhe pata chal gaya that its armaan, then pata ye log kya kar denge..we will hav to do sumthing..
P : hmm..okh..i have a plan...
 
Then she narrates the whole plan to rahul..meanwhile muskaan n all come s findng rahul...
M : ye raha kaan khajura...ise to mein abhi batati hun...
An : arre muskaan ruk..[sholding her]..usese baad mein lad lena..pehele we hav to get in..
M : thik hain...RAHUL..she shouts..
Ra : haan haan..aa raha hu..chilla mat...
 
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Precap : AR share sum close moments..will anji n all find out???
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I hope that's a bit long part guys..will update it soon..Wink...n tahnx for ur comments..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 


Edited by ksdbstjodi - 11 October 2008 at 11:45pm
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Posted: 11 October 2008 at 2:41am | IP Logged
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*editted*..
 
See see im here as soon as u Pmed meLOL
im the first yayy!LOL
 
 
cute update ridzyy! small though but u gotta update a long one after 14th..done?Big smileLOL
u know bcoz of u im visting the FF section..otherwise i just come here for my FFs only..
after DMG no FFsOuchEmbarrassed
 
mwahh! try to continue soon..tc..
 
 
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Edited by *K@nik@* - 11 October 2008 at 2:44am
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Posted: 11 October 2008 at 4:14am | IP Logged
hey ridz it was such a short n cute part...gr8 work n do cont...thnx for da pm(to kanika)....
 
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Posted: 11 October 2008 at 5:01am | IP Logged
hi ridhimaTongue its really a cuteSmileTongue and sweetSmileWinkWink part but short oneEmbarrassedLOLLOL plz continue it soonSmile and thanks for the pmWink

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Posted: 11 October 2008 at 5:39am | IP Logged
hey ridz yaar mssd u soooooooo mch yaar wh h u been yaar.....bt nywys yaar nw ur bck wow woh bhi uppdate ke sath nd wo bhi superb yaar thursdy episode wow yaar it ws awesom yaar ridz ws tryng sooooooooo mch nd thy met awwwwwwwwwwwwww chooooooooooooooooo chweeeeeeeet yaar nd rahul hahahaaha poor him kya kya karna padta hai nd nw paddy also known plzzzz sari fauj unke piche wowwwwwwwww cnt wait plzzzzzz cont sooooooooooon yaar..........
tcccc
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luv yachna


Edited by yachna - 22 October 2008 at 4:23am
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it was really nice...awesum update...
cont soon....can't wait for the next part....

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