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(FF-What If) Updt.*part b.*pg.127 (Page 113)

-Niky- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 7:28am | IP Logged

 Ok freidnz....I have 1 good news for u &  1 bad news fr u......!!!

1st the bad news ~ I wont be able to update my FF's much regularly now a days because of my hectic schedule...I come at home at 6:00 pm from my stuts & plz bare with me guys..will try and update my FF's next part today or tomorrow....ConfusedOuch

Now the second & the good news~I & my lovely IF freindz kanika [*k@nik@*] & pragati [ammyfan_pragati] have opened a DMG FF chat we can talk about FF's & also about non-FF things....& there are many more facilities in there as well...!!!!

If u intreasted in is the link : PN=1

Hope u enjoy it...Big smileWink

yachna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 7:43am | IP Logged
its ok riddhima i understnd yaar don't wrry u tke rst u cn update tom ......okkkkkk schedule bcm so hectic na ohhh probz tke ur tme....nd thnks yeah i'll surely join thnks....
luv yachu
-Niky- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 11852

Posted: 08 July 2008 at 8:13am | IP Logged

Update time...!!


HERE I GO..!!..[part b.]

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RECAP : spana is back in sanjeevni...she is totaly changed...

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All of them were really shocked to see sapna...she had changed so much...all of them go running to her & hug her...

M : arre sapna..tum to kitni badal gaye ho..!!!

S : bas yaar...ab dekh le shaadi ke baad kya kya ho jata hian...!!!

R : wow sapna...kitni pretty saaree hain...welcome back..!!!

S : Thanx kaise ho tum sab???

A : hum to thik hain aur tum sab batao amit kaisa hain??

All of tehm started talking & laughting totally neglecting that Dr. Keerti was waiting for them as she had to give them duties...

Dr K [frustrated & really really angry] : interns....[no1 heard her as they all were busy talking and chatting so she shouted even louder] Internsss....[all the people walking in teh corridores staed watching keerti..& wen the interns heard her voice tehy all came running back to there position & thoght that this was there last day at sanjeevi]...

K [really annoyed but lowerd her voice a bit] : aap logo kya lagta hain...yaha aap kisliye hain..kaam karne ke liye ya battein karne ke liye...mein aapka yaha pichle 5 mins se wait kar rahi hun...aap logo kya ye ek mazak lagta hain....agai aisi baat hain to plz sanjeevni chor di jiye aur kisi circus mein jaakar kaam kigiye...!!!!...

All : sorry Dr. keerti...agli baar se aaisa nahi hoga...

K [in a normal tone] : Even I hope so...ok..welcome Dr. sapna...I no ki aapko apne intern freidnz se bahut si baatein karni hongi so I give u all a 15 min break....then come back...[to others except spana]...aaj aap sab sirf dr. sapna ki vajah se bache hain..lekin yaad rakhiyega 15mins means 15mins....

All : ok Dr. Keerti & they leave...

>>In the locker room...

all of them were sitting on the benches & sapna was exploring the locker room..!!!

S : yaha to kuch bhi nahi badla...wahi hitler dr. Keerti...wahi hamara lovely locker room...wahi...

At [inturrepted] : nahi nahi sapna...yaha to bahut kuch badal gaya hain..!!!..

S : accha...kya kya??

At : Dr. shashank aur Dr. padma ki shaadi ho gaye hain...

S [shocked] : what???....kab...kasie...kaha...tumne mujhse bulaya kyun nahi...???

At : arre wo sab chor aur batau kya....Dr. keerti ko pya ho gaya hain...

S [even more socked] : kya???...Dr. Keerti...matlab apni hitler...nahi nahi..tu mazak kar raha hain na...

All of them laughed at sapna's statement....

At : arre anhi yaar...pehele hame bhi yakin nahi hua tha...lekin ye sach hain..!!!!...

S [still could'nt belive her ears] : kya....kisese??

At : Dr.shubhanker se...

S [standing up] : yaar...yaha to sach much bahut kuch badal gaya hain...aur bata kya kya badal gaya hain yaha??

At [standing just behind sapna] : bas sunti ja...!!!...tu jaanti hain armaan aur riddhima...

As soon as atul said armaan aur riddhima , armaan stood up in great shock & put his hand on atul mouth & pulled him back & sighned rahul to back up for him...Riddhima sighted with relief...

Ra : armaan aur riddhima abhi bhi ladte rehete hain..!!!

S : haan haan wo to mujhe pata hain...kuch chize kabhi nahi badal sakti...!!!!...

Then she looked at the watch...there break was about to get over & she didnt want to be scoled again by Dr. keerti...

S : chalo guys..break over hone wala hain..!!..

A : ha...haan sapna..chalo chalo....hum aa rahe hain tumhare peeche peeche..!!!...

S [confused] : Thik hain..!!!...& she leaves...

A : oye rahul..tu sapna ko kya kehene wala tha???

At : yahi ki tu aur riddhima ek doosre se pyar kartein hain...

A : aur wo kyun??

At : kyun tum nahi karte kya???

A : arre...mein karta hun lekin tu use kyun bol raha tha??

At : kyun...kya wo hamari dost nahi hain??

A : mein kab kaha nahi hain??

At : to phir...tu mujhe kyun rok raha tha???...

A : arre kyunki mein nahi chahata ki tu use hamarne baarein mein bataye...??

At : arre lekin kyun...

Armaan coulnt explain WHY...???

A : accha agar itna hi shauk hain to tu apne aur anjlai ke baarein mein kyun nahi batata use..!!!

At [didnt had anything to say] : arre mien kyun batau use???

A : jaise tu use nahi batana chahata waise hi mein bhi use nahi batana chahata...

Ra : lekin guys wo hamari dost hain..use hame kabhi na kabhi to bata ho hoga..!!!

M : haan yaar....rahul think kehe raha hain..!!!

R : hum aaisa kyun nahi karte ki use sahi waqt aane pe bataye...

An : aur ye sahi waqt aayega kab...

All stared thinking...!!!

A : yaar mujhe to nahi lagta ki ye sahi waqt kabhi bhi aayega...!!!...hum aisa kartein jab hame lagega ki sapna ko hamare baarein mein sab kuch pata chal chuka hum use sab kuch bata denge...mein sur riddhima hamarein baarein mein..atul-anji unke baarein mein...aur Rahul-muskaan unke baarein mein..!!!...watz say??

All : okk..!!!...& they see the time...tehre break was tehy ran to the nurse station....

No precap guys..sorry...well keep guessing wat will happen next...WinkWink

I no guys that it is a really short update but I have to go and do my Home work rite wont be ablt to update more...but I promicse that I will update it tomorrow or day after...

Hope u like it...!!..

Plz do comment / Critisise...!!..Embarrassed

Note : really sorry for spelling and gramatical errors..!!

Edited by ksdbstjodi - 08 July 2008 at 8:24am

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Kanika05 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 8:26am | IP Logged

*reserved *


Yayyy!..I am the firstLOLLOLEmbarrassed

Lovely Update!ClapClap..Loved itWinkEmbarrassed

Awesome dialogues hun!

Continue when u have time bcoz r studies r more imp!Big smile..I understand bcoz i am also not able to update my FFsOuchLOL

luv yaEmbarrassed!


Edited by *K@nik@* - 08 July 2008 at 8:38am
yachna IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 8:54am | IP Logged
hey ridz wow yaar how sweet of u yaar u still updated wow yaar its realy ok wth tht yaar atleast u updated its okkkkkkkkkkkk omg yaar sapna ke ate hi baras pade sab ke sab wow all wre soooo happpppy 2 saw her grt yaar nd hitler bcm mre angry she ws waitng fr thm r 5 min ohhh god nd bach gaye sapna ki wajah se nd she gave thm  brk fr 15min cute ha................Big smileBig smileBig smilewow yaar sapna ko shock pe shock diye ja rahe the atul ka mu hai ki kya AR ke bare mein bhi bt ar closd is mouth omg yaar atul bbhi na apne bare mein nahi par ar bare mein bata raha tha poor sapna whn she wl gt 2 know omg sht gonna gt heartaatack all dushmans lvrs wow yaar it ws fantabulous yaar .................lvly yaar.............lvd it..............
cont sooooooon
we wll wait
luv yachu
pickytg Goldie

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 9:00am | IP Logged

sahi waqt kab aayega????nice!!

i was ike 1 after d other...tey r tellin her abt love stories..all formed in d hospital!!
soooo weirdly romantic!!ahahhaha :D

Edited by missypatel - 08 July 2008 at 9:05am
123abc123 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5946

Posted: 08 July 2008 at 9:41am | IP Logged
hey dnt worry bout it
do ur scool wrk mre imprtant

luved ur updte very cute
hw atl was al bugin armi n everything
very cne updte sooon

luv niz x
princess4120 Senior Member

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Posted: 08 July 2008 at 11:10am | IP Logged
awww.. that was soo cute.. to see them all excited to meet their dear friend sapna.. and dr. keerti gave them time to catch up.. so sweet.. why dont they watnt to tell sapna about their love? cant wait to read in the next part.. how they do it.. it would be fun to see her reaction.. hehe.. please please update soon.. take care..

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