thanx so muchOriginally posted by: nyla_193
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gr8 update
cnt w8 for da nxt one π π π
thanx so muchOriginally posted by: nyla_193
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gr8 update
cnt w8 for da nxt one π π π
thanx soo muchπ³hey deeps(mind if i call u dat π i know u wont dats y im calling u dat π ) πu got dat rgt...π
must say wat a prt kahan say kahan pahunch gaya π³ hospital se akharayππ
grt prt π
cont super sooooooooooonnnnnnn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty
Haha, Deeps... You love armpits don't you? Poor Ridz, everyones either smelling hers or making them smell theirs hahaa... OMG.. that was just hilarious, Armaan riddhima ke upaar haq jaata raha hai.
my secrets out...kitni chupanay ki koshish ki par yeh kambakht armpit fetish bahar aa hi jaati hai π
armaan gave him another solid kick "salle tu na ek baat samajh lay, issay armpit sunghanay ka haq bus mera hai"didn't rahul sense something here? Lol, That was so hilarious... when I started reading... I was like, what the hell is going on, π read that part a million times to realize that Armaan hit Ridz over the head with an oxygen cylinder! Deepu!!! How do THINK of such insaneeeee things?? Lemme guess, you hit someone with an oxygen cylinder before? π€£ Or were you the victim? Love your sense of humor, its the best π³ !! yaar oxygen cylinder..gas cylinder sabh use keeya haiπ
*sighs and stares in space* The bike scene was so cute π³ he tied her wrists... *sigh again* You have a multiple personality like Armi as well π π funny, romantic, caring, sweet... Can you relate to any of your characters? i always believe that a person's personality comes out in their writing... not always π π π but mostly.. the way they write and stuff π³ ...ya totally relate to muskaam..il tell u a secret..im completely insane...d kind dat needs 2 b kept in straight jacketsπ n i lv bhindi...suitcase thing bhi try kara tha...π
And that last scene... I have no words to describe it. Its just written out so WELL! And their dialougs, specally Armaans... wow! Blew me over...aww thanx a ton ππ³
Deepu, you're my absolute fav writer ever! Even better than JK Rowling π π π Planning on writing a book anytime soon π? I'll get the review out even before the book is published π k me seriously π³π³now Your twists and turns aren't less than Kats π π Specially that part where you left us with "I killed my mother!" and when she meets Sumit... BOXING? and red haiir?????? And Riddhima.. . π π i was wondering how those go together.. π Things can't get crazier in you hand π na man kat is da queen of it all..all hail...d part where i lft with i killed my modr..i was sure every1 wud kill me..ππn one of ma frds went n got red hair done so now u know where da came frmππ
Okok... that's enough of my bakwas! Can't wait for moreeee!
~Zuzu
Btw, I heard you wrote stuff of Writers Block? I never read that one... π But i wanna read it now... π Mind sending me the link π³ ?? wrote few parts π here goes...http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=917555&TPN=1 k me scard now,,dont remmbr wat i wroteπ
Originally posted by: armaanaddict
oh my gosh!! that was such a funny part!! lol and the obsession with the armpits comes back..! π π
couldnt resistπππyes yes i hav issues..π
it was hilarious! the whole scene with ridz unconscious was wayyy too funny!!! i loved rahul and muskaan!! it took some time to understand what was going on.. coz i didn't get that armaan hit her at first.. but when i did get it, i cracked up like anything!! that was sooo pure genius right there!
and i loved the bike scene.. sooo cute!!! thanx soo much hunπ..wil make it clearr nct timeπ
and the final scene switched emotions... and u did it so smoothly! it was very well written... the dialogues and everything was just perfect!
and i have to tell u... i absolutely adore the armaan in ur ff!! he's just the best!
great update deepika!! can't wait for the next!..2 b honest evn im in lv wid ammy *sigh sigh*π³π³
thanx a ton...πππOriginally posted by: komalsirwani
ure srlsy srsly srsly tooo good deepika...no words to descroibe hw much i liked this part..esp wen he carried her outsde that house n he screamed...omg i totally loved it....cont sooooooon...n the RM scene...omgh n muskaan's punjabi....n that chakki peesing hehehehe ur craazy dudette n ure dialogues even more crazer π great going π
me just realizd d guys scream n d girls punchππ
thanx aashnaπππOriginally posted by: hyperash
heyyyy!!!
that was FABULOUS!!! π
reeeeliii sweeet....luved it!!!
thnks for the pm...n doo updte soon! π
luvs aashna π
thanx sooo muchOriginally posted by: deepali.patel
totally mind blowing i really love it i died lauhing it was really hilarious the rhyming were best plz contnue soon i am speechless it was again amazing awesome plz continue soon π
Originally posted by: lightening
okay..its final...jaldi se mujhe apne house ka add do..o m cmin to give u the
oscar for being funny....u rock..ur ff tops my list of
favs...seriosly..woaaa.....plzzzzzzzz update soon..cnt wait...n do pm ..thnx 4
pming me this part!!1
sach batta u sendn d oscar or d ppl frm d pagal khanna to take me awayπππthanx soo much hunπ³π³π³
Originally posted by: swetha10
Hey u rock man..itz a lovely part π U definetly deserve the oscar for this.... π Muskaan's punjabi was hilarious.... π Gr8 goin dear....Plzz continue π
thanx swetha...muskaan ma crazy machineπππ
" trust the man who hit you over the head with an oxygen cylinder".... priceless! π€£
me thinx armaan shud try da gas cylinder nxt timeπ
Good transition into the emotional scene! me likes π π π
thanx hunπ
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