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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 6:45am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Naina123

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omg nainu...my stomach hurtn...im gonna frame this comment thank u sooooooooooo much..ur too funny

Wah Deepu tune kya kiya kaam....
Wah Deppu tune kya kiya kaam....
Ab main khane jaa rahi hu aadha pista, aadha badaam!

LOL

Nainu cheena tunne mera aaraam

Laa de jaldi paet ka baam

Abto bekaar shayar tera naya naam

Sher-aana parega tujhe subhoo shyam


After reading this shayari..you will have no doubt about my rubbish rhyming skills!! You are my shayari queen... aur main hu aapki bekaar ghulam, ghulaam?? tunne to kar deeya katalle aam
ab aapki ye personal ghulam ek aur shayri aapki khidmat main paish karna chahti hai...sirf exclusively aap ke liye for writing such an amazing part!!....…..gabar bahut bahut khush hua......Tongue

Jab tum laptop main karne beth ti hau kaam...
Jab tum laptop main karne beth ti hau kaam...
Tab tumhare dimaag main ideas aate hai..jaise pedh pe aam..

ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLwaah waah..yeh himesh song tera inaam

(please nasal voice only)
oooo oooooo ooooooo (sing wid me now)

Pagal banaya

pagal banaya

pagal banaya aapne

Tere comment ne humko hai mara

Huste husste dukh gaya paet bechaara

Kya sher mara karara

Ab to tu bhi shayar nakara

ooooo oooooo ooooooo

Armaan and Rahul are soooooooo hilarious...lagta hai tumhari bekaar shayri ka asar kuch jyaada hi chad gaya hai dimaag par jau Rahul kau bhi ek shayar bana diya!!! How do you come up with such funny ideas... you are just awesome!!!

arz keeya hai guar pharmayeay.....

Sheraana ek bimari hai

issleay to rahul ne shayari jharri hai

ab next ridz ki barri hai

Muskaan in a suitcase-how big was the suitcase to be able to fit her in it...man you are tooo much...actually three much!! Rahul is such a cute champu...I love his character... He thinks he is so clever... ye doctor kaise bangaya...lagta hai exam main bhi Armaan ki madad lee hai...LOL

nakal ke leeay bhi akal ki zaroorat hai

rahul to gadhe ki muurat haiLOLLOLLOL

Oh yea Rahul's line "bahut flexible hai bhai" Is it just me, or did it have a double meaning *cough cough*

*looking left….looking rgt* parday mein rehne do..parda na uthaoo parda jo uth gaya to rahul mar jayega…allah meri tooba…allah meri toobaWinkWinkWink

Arrey meri queen ji, apne tau apne FF main Armaan kau bhi iss shayari flu ka shikaar bana diya hai...kisi kau tau baksh dau!!

Kissi ko nahi chorenge

hum roz sher phorengeWinkWink

Muskaan is just damn funny... she was eating bhindi in a suitcase???? Give me some tips on how to do that too??

tujhe bhi suitcase mein bhindi khanni hai?

tu pakka meri behen purrani hai

 yaar main has has ke pagal hau jaoongi... chalo issi baat pe lete hai chota sa shayari ka break... A special shayari for the sweet si muskaan.. Arz kiya hai...

Muskaan ki comic sense hai laajawaab...
Muskaan ki comic sense hai laajawaab...
Aur ye bekaar Rahul zindagi bhar kehta rahega 'Jee memsahab... Jee memsahab'

ROFL

kahan yaar..wo usko suitcase mein lejata hai

phir bhi usse mazza aata hai

yeh kaisa nata hai???


The Armaan-Rahul chaabi scene was just so 'kaanta ben' type...man ye creatives tumhari ideas kyun nahi lete..tau phir DMG banjayega ekdum hit aur fit!! Main tau soch rahi thi... ke 'Kurti sirf sexy sexy hi hoti hai' arrey bhai lekin Muskaan ki tau kurti bhindi bhindi ho gayee...LOLyeh brand new style haiWink

The Dus touch, was just brilliant.. haai Deppu tussi taup hau, nahin actually tussi hum jaise bekaar shayrau ki hope hau!! Rahul using his brains...he has some guts!!

Armaan aur Mr Bomb.. arrey usse tau hona chahiye Atom ya nuclear bomb, ab mera jee kar raha hai ek aur bekaar shayri sunane kau...sirf Armaan ke liye...

Armaan iss duniya ka hai sabse bada flirt...
Armaan iss duniya ka hai sabse bada flirt...
but why haven't I still seen him without his shirt..

ROFLoh my god……dats d most amazn sher...evrROFL

nainu jee tussi te maar suteya

twadde sheraan ne luteya

hun twanu aana parega..to r mehfil

to khaoo dher sarri jutiyaan

Riddhima and Armaan scene was just soooooo adorable and sweet... lagta hai that shayari ke saath saath...you have started giving free english lessons too.. pronouns and verbs... Deepu ki angrezi aur shayari ki paathshaala...Fees kitni hai ma'am...i wana join tooo..

aapto principal ban jayengi

roz hummein hasayengi

Ok coming to some seriousness.. she got him peaches... sho shweet..that scene was just at some other level altogether... just breathtakingly romantic...Armaan sure knows how to make his move...haai...Deepu rani tum hau laajawaab...jaise bina payye ki car kharaab!!Confused (That was just sooo lame!)ROFLi luuuvv dat..omg..ur as insane as me..meri bichadi behen....
Ok got another shayari, for Ridz this time...

Riddhima ka character tau definetly hai hit...
Riddhima ka character tau definetly hai hit...
But tell me one thing...why does Armaan like to smell her armpit...

Armaan ka pyaar hai bemisaal

Chahe jitnay beetay saal

Armpit mein naak wo dega daal

Shukkur kar nahi hai armpit mein baal

..ewww..

Deepu after reading your bekaar sher and this lovely update... mujhe bhi hogayi hai shayari ki bimaari...this one  is specially for the crazy 4, that have had me in splits...

Mujhe pagal kardenge ye krazzy 4..
Mujhe pagal kardenge ye krazzy 4..
but still i keep asking for more and more...

Ok I keep coming up with more and more shayari's yaar ye kaisa shayrai ka flu de diya hai tune.. jau jaane ka naam hi nahin le raha hai...My overview of the characters written in a shayari...

Rahul nikla champu king...
Muskaan's IQ is nothing...
Armaan is the cutest thing...
And Riddhima nikli round like a ring!!

Isko to mene introduction banana hai

Tujh ko to mene sher king mana hai

Ok I think...my comment is just gona go on and on..so i have to stop now...

Yeh shayari na tu rok

Warna duungi tujhko poke

Hass hass ke bangayee mein khud joke

 but have to say you are just amazing, brillaint...loved the update!!! So for my final alvida...akhri shayr aapki ki khidmat mai hazir karti hu...

Ab agaya hai mere comment ka the end...
And thanks for the PM jau tumne kiya send..
Ab jaldi se Riddhima ke dil kau karna mend!!
Aur kabhi mujhe tumhara dimaag mat karna lend...
Sorry for boring you with my long comment...
Bye bye my special friend!!

Have I mentioned I luuuvvv u

god my stomach seriously hurting….ur sher…meri to na rahi kher…

ur toooo gud…

aaj mehfil mein aapka intzaar karenge

aapke sher parr hum huste huste marenge

Hug

lots of lv .....ur fan deepika

Luv u
Nainu
XxX

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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 6:50am | IP Logged

Originally posted by anitamalik

WOW...that last part was so good and entertaining...
keep it up..you write really well...and please continue soon..thanks for the pm..when you update please pm me again!

thanx so muchBig smilewil def pm

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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 7:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by inuyasharocks

soooooooooo srry for this utterly late comment. u really surprise me more every single time u update. nuthing ever repeates. everything is just new-which is an awesome thing for me b/c rite now i am ur number one fan Day Dreaming .

awww thank u soo much...Embarrassed
i really don't have any words to say except all the nice wordz in every single language dedicating to u. u r brillant. let my actions speak for me. Clap rahul and muskaan r hilarious. suitcase thing with holes and bhindi ROFL yaar holes to rakhni hi thi warna bhindi fresh kaise rehtiWinkWinkWink
and then armaan's excuse of how they thought to save sanjeevani they r gonna sacrifice themselves. but most importantly ridhu and armaan's chemistry sooooooo cute. luved it Embarrassed.

m soo gladBig smileBig smileBig smile
 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon and thnx for the pm really appreciate it. Big smile mst welcm hun
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Posted: 07 June 2008 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sournsweet

I serisouly m short of words now....I dunno vat more can I tell u dan I hav already said, only thing I am addicted 2 dis ff...hehe...more dan DMG now...n u kno d reasons, atleast reading dese I feel like I m watching my DMG, wid a diff flavour...but its awesum... thanx soo much lv

p.s. I still havnt caught up wid thurs's epi...haha...u kno y!!!...k...now gonna go watch it...toodles waitn on ur vishesh tipniWinkWinkLOL

luv deepika
ps-goin n lukn for cabbot  rgt nowWink

luv u soooo much
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Posted: 09 June 2008 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Hi deepika, loved your ff, ok, I will be honest, that I didn't see it 1st & then with all the tension on the forum with suku & shilpa topics being closed for no reason, thought I will read some ff, now I did your parts in operation marriage & dmg great writer block, so knew you were an amazing writer...
coming to the story, again honesty, I have only read 4 parts till now, as have to finish loads of work, but am taking a print out of the rest of the parts home to read (no internet at home), will comment on those tomorrow

Now, the parts, they were amazing, loved the darpok rahul, can imagine him being this way, & Ridz OMG she is some sherni I must say, calling Rahul to meet at 3 am, without engagement ring (kya aankeen hai Arman ki) & then caught him red handed too LOL LOL LOL , such a confident girl, losing it all infront of dad, story of most indian girls! the daiglogues between Ridz & Rahul are just hilarious, they way he tells she is like a teacher...
Arman & Ridz, kya kehna, I am speechless, the closeness they shared, I could feel every word you wrote, he is too good....loved the balcony scene & the time when she comes to look for Rahul & he makes her itch his back, they are so adorable, jab fight karte hai, tab bhi
Then the journey to drop ridz home is my favourite, the way she punchs him & then he can smell peaches LOL LOL LOL & then he says her to walk 6 feet away from him, you are too much.....very nice to read....
Loved Muskan's entry, another junglee billi LOL LOL , Arman sab ladkiyon se bach ke rehna...

Ok, I think my response is a bit too long, sorry, but couldnt help writing it all down...
take care
update soon & pls pls pm me, when you update...

Jyoti
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Posted: 09 June 2008 at 7:58am | IP Logged
hey deepika Smile
thanks a lot for ur pms even when i was not replying um sorry for the delay was not at home was at my aunt's place n there was no net at their place so im so sorry Cry
well u know this ff has become one of my fav coiz the way u write all comic stuff evebn in the most diff situations is simply mind blowing hats off to u Clap n this ff has become tooo addictive LOL well update fast

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Posted: 09 June 2008 at 1:25pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Jodubai

Hi deepika, loved your ff, ok, I will be honest, that I didn't see it 1st & then with all the tension on the forum with suku & shilpa topics being closed for no reason, thought I will read some ff, now I did your parts in operation marriage & dmg great writer block, so knew you were an amazing writer...thanx so muchBig smile
coming to the story, again honesty, I have only read 4 parts till now, as have to finish loads of work, but am taking a print out of the rest of the parts home to read (no internet at home), will comment on those tomorrow ...print outs..dedicated eh??LOLLOLhope they dont put u 2 sleep...wil be waitnWink

Now, the parts, they were amazing, loved the darpok rahul, can imagine him being this way, & Ridz OMG she is some sherni I must say, calling Rahul to meet at 3 am, without engagement ring (kya aankeen hai Arman ki) & then caught him red handed too LOL LOL LOL ...both seem to have 20/20 eyesightLOLLOL , such a confident girl, losing it all infront of dad, story of most indian girls! ..tru.. her dad definitly hr weakness..the daiglogues between Ridz & Rahul are just hilarious, they way he tells she is like a teacher... purri principal banni hui hai yaarWink
Arman & Ridz, kya kehna, I am speechless, the closeness they shared, I could feel every word you wrote, he is too good....loved the balcony scene & the time when she comes to look for Rahul & he makes her itch his back, they are so adorable, jab fight karte hai, tab bhi ..im  glad u likd it...since they fight most of da time..Wink
Then the journey to drop ridz home is my favourite, the way she punchs him & then he can smell peaches LOL LOL LOL & then he says her to walk 6 feet away from him, you are too much.....very nice to read......dat part was way too long...bt ma fav too..hell even id punch a guy if he broke my heelLOLLOLLOLlove ma shoes...
Loved Muskan's entry, another junglee billi LOL LOL , Arman sab ladkiyon se bach ke rehna...
tru women rule this ff...women powrWink
Ok, I think my response is a bit too long, sorry, but couldnt help writing it all down... thanx a ton....i'd not seen those parts 4 such a long time...me thinx i'd forgotten a bit..WinkWink
take care
update soon & pls pls pm me, when you update... wil definitely pmBig smile

Jyoti

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Posted: 09 June 2008 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prernawaghray

hey deepika Smile
thanks a lot for ur pms even when i was not replying um sorry for the delay was not at home was at my aunt's place n there was no net at their place so im so sorry Cry no stress hunWink
well u know this ff has become one of my fav coiz the way u write all comic stuff evebn in the most diff situations is simply mind blowing hats off to u Clap n this ff has become tooo addictive LOL well update fast thanx sweetyBig smile..on it..cant seem 2 gt ir riteConfused..will updt soon

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