Originally posted by: sweetshine
WOW dats a gr8 start...loved it totally, seems to have a strong concept π ...well keep up d gr8 work nd continue soon plz really waiting to read on....nd if u dont mind cud u specify which dialogues r said by who dat wud make it more clear...thanx π π π
wil try to b more specific.thanx soo muchπ
hey awesum start!!! first was kinda surprised to see ridz n rahul jodi but dis thing turnni out to be good!!! plz cont soon .. n btw u have ne oder ff?? pm me later .. π
hey thanx alot πππ π³π³
no my first ff..glad u liked it will definitely pmπ
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