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FF: Hamesha Saat Saat -[Update Pg.128]Last Part (Page 16)

Rayanaa Goldie
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anki4life

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Originally posted by anki4life

Originally posted by LoveBMTD

Originally posted by anki4life

that was awsome omg! Big smile Clap
lol sagar is sooo romantic man Wink Embarrassed lol
anyways update soon plez Big smile Big smile
and keep writing Smile

Thank you so much Ankita..I will keep writing..I love to write on the computer it's like a habit for me and chit chat with everyone...I'm going to continue soon..!!!Keep smiling and enjoy!!!

Love Rina



Np....i love talking to ppl on the computer lol
buh reading all these ffs is sooo much fun LOL
smtimes i wish i wrote one buh i unno wha to rite about lol Tongue ofcourse its gonna be about my fav SV or AD Heart and omg plez update soon...Tongue

Ankita we are like same to same I love to talk with people on the computer, yeh everyones ff is brilliant!!! Don't ever think that you can't, everything is possible nothing is impossible. Just try then you come to your point!!I always tell that to myself see I like to write my ff and cheer you guys up it's so good and cool:)Smile

Love you

Rina



lol ya Rina...i will start a ff soon as soon as i think of a story lol buh everyones ffs are inspiring me ryte now...so i think ill write one soon...and it awesome how u ryte an ff....i love this ff Heart
and talking to ppl is always fun lol
and me and my friend are such big fans of BMTD so we over talk about it smtimes and our other friends are like okkk freaks...lol buh they just jokeLOLLOL
anyways keep writing more and more cuz its awsomeBig smileSmileClap

Ankita you're such a good darling..Big smileYou love my ff..I'm a big fan of BMTD and Sharad mmTongueI walways talk with my cousin about BMTD she is like Rina stop!!!because everytime when I talk about BMTD I talk about sexy Sharad too LOLBut enjoy and have a great time and write your ff. I will be waiting for your ff..

Love Rina

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nelly34

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WOWWWW...that was sooo ROMANTICC and Amazzing..i just love it... Smile Did u know u are relly sweet for updating fast for us.. and now waiting for another update..Winkif u have some time.. --Nelly

Nelly aww you're such a good darling tooBig smile Thank you for your comment..I will update very soon oki doki!! But enjoy and thank you for such a good comment..You all are such a good persons yaaa!!! Have a great time KEEP SMILINGBig smileBig smile

Love Rina

 


Nelly I'm speechless..I'm out of my controlTongue Thank you to say to me that I'm sweet you're sweet too...Nelly I will continue soon as possible for your sake and for everbodys sake...Hope you enjoy!!!


Love Rina


i loved it sooo much that i cant wait for the next part..and could u plsss cont soon for my sake and others who are waiting very impatiently.. Wink
--Nelly
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 2:13am | IP Logged
That was really good... Clap Clap
It was fantastic...
I really love it...Please continue soon
Can't wait for the next part

You are doing a wonderful job.. Smile
Great story.. Smile
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 2:15am | IP Logged

Originally posted by jaanlover

That was really good... Clap Clap
It was fantastic...
I really love it...Please continue soon
Can't wait for the next part

You are doing a wonderful job.. Smile
Great story.. Smile

Thanks for such a good comment..Thank you I'm glad that you love my story <3

Love you and keep smiling!!Big smile

Love Rina

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LoveBMTD

Originally posted by jaanlover

That was really good... Clap Clap
It was fantastic...
I really love it...Please continue soon
Can't wait for the next part

You are doing a wonderful job.. Smile
Great story.. Smile

Thanks for such a good comment..Thank you I'm glad that you love my story <3

Love you and keep smiling!!Big smile

Love Rina

I really mean it..It was really good..Great work..Clap Clap Super..!!!Continue soon because I really can't wait...it so romantic and the story is just really good....

I wish you all the best and keep it up

Rayanaa Goldie
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jaanlover

Originally posted by LoveBMTD

Originally posted by jaanlover

That was really good... Clap Clap
It was fantastic...
I really love it...Please continue soon
Can't wait for the next part

You are doing a wonderful job.. Smile
Great story.. Smile

Thanks for such a good comment..Thank you I'm glad that you love my story <3

Love you and keep smiling!!Big smile

Love Rina

I really mean it..It was really good..Great work..Clap Clap Super..!!!Continue soon because I really can't wait...it so romantic and the story is just really good....

I wish you all the best and keep it up

Aww thank again again and again..Thank you because you like my ff and the story of my ff. I will continue very soon so just wait a little. Love you

Love Rina

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Here is the next part!!!Enjoy
Recap: Vidya is pregnant. Sagar and Vidya had a romantic night!
Chapter 16

It was Chinu.
Sagar – Chinu kya hua tum subha meri kamre mein?
Chinu – Sagar hum aapne biwio ke kuch gift de saktehe. Like woh hume bohut bara gift diya hain aur humne kuch nahi diya..
Sagar – Vidya ko ek gift dongi main aaj par main nahi janti tum kya dena chatiho tumhari biwi ko?
Chinu – I don't know please give an idea.
Sagar – Kyun tum Shalu ko kuch din bahar lekar jao?
Chinu – That's a brilliant idea. I'm going to talk with dad.
Sagar – Aab yaha khari raongi ya aapne kamre mein jaonge? Laughing...
Chinu – Sorry bye and thanks for such a brillant idea.
Sagar – You're most welcome…
Vidya comes out.
Vidya – Kisse baat karahi te aap?
Sagar – Chinu se baat karahi te...
Sagar goes to Vidya. Vidya was about to wear her mangalsutra but Sagar took the mangalsutra.
Sagar – Aaj main penao.
Vidya just nods and agrees.
When he was done he just kissed hers neck.
Sagar and Vidya goes downstairs with hand in hand and looking each other too.
Sagar's mum and dad were waiting for Sagar and Vidya.
Sagar's mum – Vidya Sagar ao. Both goes and takes blessing.
Sagar – Dad aaj diwali hai na. Everyone forget about the diwali (fesitival)
Sagar – Bharat aaj main kuch dongi diwali par.
Bharat – Ok I will be waiting for my gift. Both laughed.
Every diwali Singh parivaar have a pooja. Sindoora does the pooja.
Sagar – Vidya jao waha par betho. Sagar saw that and stopped Sindoora.
Sagar – Sindoora didi Vidya yeh pooja karenge. Punditji ne kaha is ghar ki laxmi matlab iss ghar ki dulhan. Iss ghar main Vidya dulhan hai. Aap ek behen nahi hai aap ek bhai bhi hai..smiled.
Vidya goes and sits. She is doing the pooja. Sindoora on other hand is burning so much that she must have a glass of water.
Vidya is done with the pooja. Now everyone is celebrating the diwali (festival)
Sagar – Vidya yaha aajao. Vidya goes to him.
Vidya – Kya hai? Apne hume kyun bolaya?
Sagar and Vidya is playing with the fireworks and looking at each other. Bharat saw that and comes.
Bharat – Mami chalo hum dono yeh kareh and give a nasty look at Bharat because Vidya was playing first with him and then he took Vidya.
Vidya goes to Bharat and play with him with the fireworks.
Sagar just stares at Vidya. She is looking so beautiful today. Chinu comes.
Chinu – Sagar tum kyun Vidya ko haar waqt dektiho. Hum hain na. Both laughed.
Chinu and Sagar goes to theirs wife and take them inside because of the noises the baby can be scared.
Bharat – Mamu aapne kaha ke aapne hume koi gift denge. Kaha hai woh gift?
Sagar – Oh shit main lati hoon.
Sagar brings the gifts.
Sagar – Yeh lo Bharat tumhari gift...and gave presents to everyone.
Bharat – Mamu aapne Vidya mami ko kuch nahi diya…How bad!
Sagar – Nahi Bharat main kesi bholti Vidya ko. Yeh hai Vidya aur junior ke gift.
(Guess what?)
It was the property. Every property junior ki naam!
Sagar – Main yeh sab property junior ki naam kardiya.
Sindoora get the biggest shock ever in her life. Sindoora is now feeling dizzy and goes and takes a glass of water.
Sindoora – How could it be so? I thought that Sagar will forget about the property. Nobody has said anything about the property.
Everyone is so happy. Vidya on other hand has teary eyes.
Sagar – Vidya aab tumhe maloom para ke main kitna pyaar kartiho junior se.
Vidya hugs him.
Vidya – Ha!
Sagar's dad – Sindoora tum waha kyun ho yaha aajao.
Sindoora – Hum aate hai papa.
Then Aniket comes in to theirs conversation.
Aniket – Wow Sagar you have done a brilliant job. Keep it up and take special care of your wife and your little baby. They are more important.
Sagar – Thank you jiju. I will take good care of Vidya…with a naught smile.
Vidya is little confused. She knows that Sagar is going to do something. He is up to do something but what?
Sagar is thinking - Vidya and I are going to have the best night today and Aniket jiju had said that I must take good care of Vidya. So watch out Vidya. I'm going to do something. Someone knocked on the door. (Guess who?)
It was …Tushar and Sangeeta.
Chinu – Tushar Sangeeta tum dono yaha.
Tushar & Sangeeta – Happy diwali.
Chinu – Happy diwali too and hugs Tushar.
Sangeeta and Tushar goes in and takes blessing.
Tushar goes to his pyarisi bhabiya and hugs.
Sagar – Tushar Sangeeta I and Chinu have surprise to you both. Tushar and Sangeeta are confused…
Sangeeta – Kaisi surprise?
Both Chinu and Sagar goes to theirs wife's stomach and knock.
Sagar – Junior dekho kaun aya hai.
Tushar and Sangeeta had an open mouth.
Tushar – Congratulation bhabhiya and you both.
Sangeeta hugs Vidya and Shalu.
Sangeeta – Congrats…
Shalu & Vidya – Thanks.
Sangeeta – How many mounth.
Vidya – One day.
Shalu – Two days.
Sangeeta – Wow…
Sangeeta goes to Sagar and Chinu and takes theirs ear…
Sangeeta – Aab tum dono kuch nahi karongi just take care if you do something yeh Sangeeta hai. Tum donoko chorongi nahi.
Tushar – Me too.
Sagar and Chinu make a sad puppy face. Shalu and Vidya are laughing like crazy.
Everyone was laughing and had fun with Sagar, Vidya, Chinu, Shlau, Sangeeta and Tushar.
Tushar – Aab meri pyarisi bhabhiya yeh lo tumhari diwali ki gifts. Aur Mr Sagar and Mr Chinu ke liye to maine kuch nahi leya kyun ki Sangeeta janti thi Sagar aur Chinu ki pasand na pasand aur main jantithi meri pyarisi bhabhiya ki pasand na pasand.

Hope you guys like my part…Hope so.
Keep smiling and have a great time…Love you all

Love Rina

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