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george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 12 December 2008 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

thank you shaina darling
 
Ghazal aayi thi and Rajeev was trying to cover up ke woh log bas baatein kar rahe thhe!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Ghazal is now teasing them about Priyanka ko kaise lal lal daag ho jaate hai neck pe bas baatein karne se!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Bechare Rajeev and Priyanka!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThey both blushed and were so embarrassed!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

The way Ghazal said zara jaldi aana please was too good!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

ghazal bhi na , jana bujhkar dono ko sata rahi haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed aur rajeev is too funny, why does he have to make excuses in the first place???LOLLOL after all he is with his girl friend not with a random girl
 
 
Rajeev kissed Priyanka on the cheek and said kaam adhura reh gaya hai and she said baaki laut kar poora karna!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedWow!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Priyanka agreed to stay in Rajeev's room because uska boyfriend haath se fisal raha hai aur uspe nazar jo rakhni hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

Haan Priyanka uspe poori nazar rakho aur ush Aliya se dur rakho!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile SmileAur waise bhi bahut bigaad gaya hai!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

sahi kahan tune, rajeev bahut bigaad gaya hai, hum bhi nazar rakhte hai uspar rukoLOLLOL
 
Rajeev is too naughty!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkKehta hai agar aise results aaye toh he will kiss new girls every day!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHe is too much!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
 
totallyShockedShockedShocked

Priyanka ne bhi sahi kaha ke next time he kisses someone she will kill him!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveAnd I will help her in that!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

me too hahahahaha
Cadets are sad that their Captain had lost but at least going out for dinner made them happy!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Cadet Huda looked sadder than the rest!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyWell kya kare Huda Nayanika toh Ranveer ki hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

woh toh baad mein hi pata chalega WinkWinkWink 
Priyanka is really looking beauitful in her black saree and Rajeev just could not take his eyes off her!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHaaiiii!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Aliya ne kaha ke isbaar uski saree pe Rajeev nazar naa daale and Priyanka understood everything!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileYes Rajeev really loves her very much!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Ranveer toh unhe ussi restaurant leke gaya!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

The manager was really shocked seeing Rajeev and Priyanka together like that!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedAccha huya Rajeev cleared up everything!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

i knowwwwwwwwwww, us manager ki shakl dekhne layak hui hogiLOLLOL
 
Nayanika is so confused!!!!Confused Confused Confused ConfusedHuda ordered for her and said he know her better she herself does!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Priyanka is feeding Prachi pizza!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueSo cute!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileI loved Rajeev's ab tum maa beti hi jaano!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

woh toh hai Embarrassed waise pri is right, ek bar pizza khilane se kuchh nehi hota
 
Ab Ranveer is appreciating the actors and Rajeev said that they can never serve the country as military men do!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Its great that now reel life and real life Rajveer are appreciating each other!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile SmileRajeev complimented Ranveer on his dancing!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL

Pooja ne kaha Captain Arun Sharma was a great dancer toh Raneevr aur cadets ne aise kyun behave kiya??Confused Confused Confused Confused

Pooja is looking guilty, the cadets are uncomfortable and Ranveer is angry!!!!Confused Confused Confused ConfusedYeh chakkar kya hai??Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

woh abhi pata chal jayega
 
And Ranveer said they should leave now to avoid this topic!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchAnd the whole evening was spoilt!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Aliya looked less surprised!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyIska matlab woh zaroor kuch janti hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

good guess, very intelligent Shaina jiClapClapClap
 
Rajeev ke Arun Sharma ke baare mein jab Ranveer se poocha toh he looked uncomfortable aur kuch nahi bataya!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused

He even said not to mention his name in this academy!!!!Confused Confused Confused ConfusedYeh toh aise behave kar rahe hai jaise serial mein Navin singh Ahluwalia ke naam se log behave karte thhe!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

wow another brilliant guessClapClap
 
Prachi toh sona hi nahi chahti!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueSo cute!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileShe just wants to play with Priyanka!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rajeev is so worried!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyHe is right ke ismein bahut bada raaz chupa hai which is dangerous too!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchYeh kaha phas gaye woh dono??Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Priyanka is trying to comfort him!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileShe said that Prachi unki beti hai and there is no need to know her past!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile SmileWell in a way Priyanka is right!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rajeev has a point that Prachi will never forgive them when she finds out later!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyThey have to do this for her!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

i wish they had never coem for shooting here CryCryCry kahan fash gaye dono, par shooting pe na ate ho pyar kaise hota EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Prachi wants to get in between Rajeev and Priyanka!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueShe is so cute!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Priyanka ne badi muskil se usse sulaya and Rajeev is watching them both with adoration!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Priyanka tells Rajeev that Prachi does not want to share him with her and Rajeev said its vice versa!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedThey are such a cute family!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

i knowwwwwwwwwwwwww, they are a lovely family and prachi is tooo cute EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Rajeev is really getting very naughty and wants to romance Priyanka!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile SmileYeh Rajeev jab dekho Aliya ke paas jaane ki baat karta rehta hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryVery bad!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove
 
arrey nehi, he doesn't mean that really, woh sirf pri ko chidane ke liye keh raha haiLOLEmbarrassed
 
Rajeev is right ke jungle mein Priyanka ne shuru kiya tha!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Rajeev and Priyanka are so romantic and passionate!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing BlushingMagar Prachi bhi kuch kam nahi hai unhe romance karne hi nahi deti!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

that's true, how can they romance with such a devil aroundWinkWink
 
Prachi ne kaha papa godi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueSo cute!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileRajeev is so happy to hear her talk!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

This reminds me of Kavyanjali where Ved had said the same thing to Soham and gestured to be picked up!!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileIt was so cute!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

achha? that's interesting, maine Kavyanjali kabhi dekhi nehi, but if that's the case then i must say i think like Ekta KapoorLOL 
 
Priyanka ne usse sikhaya aur Rajeev ko yehi dikhana chahti thi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThats so sweet!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rajeev aur Priyanka dono Prachi ke saath bacche ban gaye!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileOne sweet happy family!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Priyanka ko ek taraf se Rajeev hug karke soh raha hai aur dusri taraf Prachi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileBoth love her so much and she loves them too!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

i loveeeeeeeeee imagining this scene, tehy are soooo cute together Embarrassed
 
Subah subah woh Malhotra mil gaya!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveThat man is just shameless!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry
 
true, one big irritating idiot he is AngryAngryAngry
 
Aliya toh Rajeev aur Priyanka ke baare mein kisi se baat kar rahi thi!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyMagar yeh hai kaun jiske liye Aliya kaam karti hai??Confused Confused Confused Confused

Woh toh dono ko raaste se hatane ki baat kar rahi thi!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveI always knew there is something about Aliya!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

pata nehi yaar what is she upto ConfusedConfusedConfused i am feeling very scared ConfusedConfusedConfused
 
Priyanka ne uski baatein sun li thi magar Aliya made up an excuse and called her a possessive girlfriend!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Priyanka is right about Aliya!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveAliya is definately hiding something and it concerns her and Rajeev!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Rajeev bhi naa Aliya ko involve karne pe tula huya hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveI wish Priyanka Rajeev pe thoda aur control rakhe!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

yeh baat bilkul sahi kahi tune, rajeev toh haat se nikalta ja raha haiLOL
 
Huda ish baat se gussa hai ke Nayanika Ranveer ko kiss karne ke liye taiyaar ho gayi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile

Pooja aur Nayanika ne accha jawab diya usse!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile SmileHuda toh angry young man banne ki koshish kar raha hai!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Ab toh yeh apne pyaar ka ikraar karta hai aur emotional ho jata hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused ConfusedHuda is really behaving in a silly way!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

but he is very funny too LOL
 
 
Aise roh raha hai!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedNo wonder Nayanika finds it funny even though she is apologising!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Pooja ko ab Ranveer se maafi maangni hai and she drags Nayanika with her!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile

hahahahah kya logic hai yaar LOLLOLLOL
 
 
She thinks that then Ranveer would not say anything!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueKya sahi pakda hai!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Iqbal is right as always ke woh toh gayi!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile

Priyanka Rajeev ke kamre mein aayi toh waha Aliya thi!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveNo wonder she got angry!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Yeh Aliya toh yaha daudkar  aa aagayi aur Rajeev ne usse Captain Arun Sharma ke baare mein sab kuch bata bhi diya!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Yeh Rajeev bhi naa!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryWoh toh Priyanka ki ek baat nahi sun raha hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveUski ankhon pe toh Aliya naam ki patti bandhi huyi hai!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Actually he is behaving like a typical K serial ka hero who always believes in the vamp and never in the heroine!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

u are absolutely right, pata nehi rajeev ko kyon nehi dikhta Aliya ke suspicious activities ConfusedConfusedConfused
 
 
Priyanka needs a solid proof against Aliya!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Yeh Aliya Brigadier Suryakant se milne ka intezam sab kar toh leti hai but she stopped Priyanka from coming!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

I just hate that woman!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryWhatever she was trying indicate Priyanka should have insisted going along!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

i dont know yaar.........any self respectin woman wouldnt have gone ConfusedConfused par tu chinta mat kar, main hoon na EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Priyanka Rajeev aur Prachi ko baccha le warna yeh Lady Dracula ka koi bharosa nahi hai!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

trueeeeeeee, priyanka you dont have to be so nice, just be a possessive girlfriend AngryAngryAngry

 
hope Priyanka solves the mystery before Aliya does!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile
 
 true...i hope so tooooOuch
 
 

george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 12 December 2008 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fruit_n_nut

hi dear
first of all a very big sorry!!!!!
 
I dint comment early
I was very busy.... managing deadlines n all that stuff
 
hello Ika dear, please don't say sorry, i understand, main bhi bahut busy thi yaar TongueTongueTongue
 
 
Now coming to your updates were excellent as usual
Love each bit of it...
 
the more i read... the more exciting it becomes
 
 
thank you sooooooooo much, the more you comment, the more i feel like writing Big smileBig smile
 
Thank you for sendin me a pm everytime...
u really take a lot of trouble
 
i am so touched that you appreciate my effortsTongueTongue well it's not a problem, i am glad to send PMs to my friends, only i become a little sad when i dont  get replies....par thik hai, i understand, everybody is busy TongueTongue
 
Eagarly watin 4 ur update,
Love u always, god bless u
 
thank you sooo much , may god bless you too, updating right now Big smileBig smileBig smile
 
george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 12 December 2008 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
EPISODE 34: MYSTERY REVEALED
 

Priyanka kept silent. There was no way she could convince Rajeev against Aliya, she needed a solid proof. Till then she just needed to be careful.

Tabhi an orderly came and informed Aliya: Brigadier ne aap ko bulaya hai

 

Rajeev and Aliya stood outside Brigadier Suryakant's room with a thumping heart. After a while an orderly let them in.

 

It had started raining outside and outdoor shooting was delayed for some time. A spotboy came and informed pri that they will be shooting just indoor scenes, Misraji was waiting for Rajeev and Aliya to come for the shooting to start.

 

Priyanka felt a strange bitterness sitting in her room. Why doesn't Rajeev believe her? It's true she doesn't have a solid proof against Aliya but the way Rajeev dismissed her suspicion hurt Priyanka. What does Rajeev think? That I am just being jealous? She needed to talk to somebody and she knew the best person was Arjun, but Arjun himself was worried about his personal problems….he had a fight with his girlfriend last night on their way back from the restaurant, Arjun hadn't said anything but she had overheard bits of his conversation over phone….

 

Priyanka felt bad…she had indeed been selfish, thinking about her own problems, while Arjun has always stood by her….she felt strange: it was the same in the serial also! Alekh was always there in Naina's problems but did Naina ever help Alekh in his problems?

"No I should go and meet Arjun, shooting shuru hone mein toh kuchh waqt baki hai" she thought to herself

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Brigadier Suryakant looked extremely glum….Rajeev and Aliya looked at each other, he was definitely upset about something and it was not a good day to talk to him
 

BS: I want to let you know that we had another infiltration in our library yesterday. Somebody tried to break in again and when the security guard ran after him/her, he/she fled quickly

 

Aliya: Sir, we have told you we have nothing to do with your library or your security, hum yahan pe shooting karne aye hai aur khatam hote hi chale jayenge

 

BS looked at both of them and kept quiet: I know I don't have a proof, jis din proof mil jayega you guys will be in trouble

 

Aliya: pehle aap proof toh layiye

BS: by the way, why did you want to meet me?

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Priyanka: kya yaar muh fulakar baitha hua hai, batata kyon nehi kya hua hai tere aur Neha ke beech mein

Arjun: kuchh nehi yaar, usual hungama, woh karti rehti hai, tu chhod

Pri: are you sure, nothing serious na?

Arjun: nehi meri ma….but anyway, thanks for your concern

Pri: please……tu jo hamesha mera saath deta hai, main thanks bolti hoon kya?

Arjun: oh achha…toh yeh return favor hai?!!! By the way tera asiq kahan hai?

Pri: gaye hai kaam se BS se milne, Aliya ke saath

Arjun: yeh third person ka entry kaise ho gaya, Priyanka kahin woh kiss ke baad usse Aliya se toh pyaar nehi ho gaya

 

Pri: tu mar khayega mujhse Arjun! Chal coffee peene chalte hai, aaj shooting der se shuru hoga na

The two go to the cafeteria

 

 

As they sat drinking their coffee, they saw cadet Iqbal waving at them.

Iqbal: hello, kya baat hai, subah subah?

Priyanka: haan bas aaj shooting late se shuru hoga

Iqbal: by the way, tera chikna kahan hai? Usne kahan tha apun ko ek role dega filim mein

Pri: achha? thik hai main usko keh dungi….tumhare baki team kahan hai?

Iqbal: Huda baith ke ro rela hai, aur ladkiyan gayi hai capt sir ke paas, abhi tak nehi loute dono, lagta hai aaj Pooja ki dhulai ho raha hai

Pri/Arjun: kyon?????

Iqbal: kyon kya? Arun Sharma ka naam sab ke samne bolegi toh dhulai nehi hogi? Woh naam yahan banned hai na

Pri looked around. All the other people were busy, nobody was listening to their conversation. She decided to get the information out of Iqbal.

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BS: Who told you about Arun Sharma's name?

Aliya: koi nehi, hum aise hi randomly use kar rahe the as the name of our hero: capt Arun Sharma, toh hume objection mili hai, is it illegal to use an army officer's name?

BS: No it is a problem only in certain cases, but that's none of your concerns, I would also recommend you to not use the name

Rajeev: haan par aisa kya hai is naam mein?

BS: Listen Mr.Khandelwal I cannot tell you anything more, now will you excuse me

Aliya: lekin yeh naam itna problematic kyon hai? Hamare hero ke liye hume yeh naam hi pasand hai

BS: Ms Bose, I told you I don't want to discuss it, now will you please leave.

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Pri: kyon aisa kya hai us naam mein? Naam banned kyon hai?

Iqbal: apun tumko nehi bata sakta, kisiko pata chal gaya toh

Arjun: Iqbal tumhe film mein role chahiye ki nehi? Agar tum hume story sunayoge toh hum bhi tumhara help karenge

Iqbal: tumlogon ko kya padi hai, kyon janna chahte ho

Arjun: bas hum janna chahte hai ki mystery kya hai

Iqbal narrowed his eyes and thought for a moment, then he said: oka toh fir yahan se chalte hai, yahan baat nehi kar sakta, koi shun liya toh hungama ho jayega

 

Aliya and Rajeev came out of BS' room. The morning was wasted, nothing happened.

Aliya: I am sorry Rajeev, maine apni taraf se poori koshish kiya

Rajeev: I know that Aliya, par ab kya kare?

Aliya: pata nehi…..google search kare?

Rajeev: ok chalo try karte hain

He came back to the guest house and searched for pRiyanka but she was not there

Rajeev: yeh Priyanka kahan chali gayi fir se?

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Iqbal took them to a remote corner of the academy.

Pri: yeh kahan pe laye hume?

Iqbal: yahan pe koi nehi ata, achha shuno jo apoon batane ja raha hai who kisiko pata na chale

Pri: nehi baba, bolo toh

Iqbal: Capt Arun Sharma yahan posted the, isi academy mein. Uske biwi aur ek bachhi ke saath. Kuchh special mission par the. Fir kuchh gadbad hua, woh kuchh galat logon ke saath involve ho gaye, aur fir ekdin usse murdered paya gaya jhil ke paas

Both Pri and Arjun gasped hearing this.

Iqbal: log bolte hai usne dushmano ke saath kuchh dealing kiya tha, fir kuchh gadbad ho gaya, unhi logon ne usse mar diya.

Pri: aur unke biwi bachhe?

Iqbal: kuchh pata nehi kya hua.....koi kehta hai unlogo ko bhi mar diya hai....lekin kisi ko kuchh pata nehi exactly

 

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Aliya: yahan pe toh koi special information nehi hai

Rajeev: haan yahan pe toh 1560 Capt Arun Sharmayon ki information hai, un mein se 854 already retired ya shahid ho chuke hai, baki pata nehi kahan kahan posted hai…..aise toh dhoondhna na mumkin hai

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Iqbal: haan par capt Arun Sharma se jure jitne bhi log the unke upar kuchh na kuchh humla hua hai, unka kaamwali bai, unke driver, unhe jo koi bhi janta tha....recently toh ek jwellery shop mein bhi humla hua....woh log shayad abhi bhi kuchh dhoondh rahe hai....

Pri: achha toh ishiliye unka naam academy mein banned hai

Iqbal: haan academy ka manna hai ki wo kuchh galat kaam mein involved the, unhe gaddar karar diya gaya hai

Priyanka gasped aloud….no not again! Another similarity with the serial………..she felt a cold shiver going down her spine…..jitna bhi door rehna chahe, reel life is making its intrusions into real life….Priyanka shivered a little out of fear

Iqbal: log unka naam lene se darte hain, koi kuchh nehi bolega unke baare mein…aur haan tumlog bhi kabhi unka naam mat karna…baapre bahut danger hai….

Priyanka: tumne dekha tha kabhi unhe, ya fir unke biwi aur bachhe ko?

Iqbal: nehi yeh sab hamare aane se pehle hi ho chuka tha…hum toh naye batch hai, bas 4-5 months hua hai idhar…yeh toh sab seniors se pata chala

Priyanka was still feeling a shiver running in her. She was worried about Rajeev now….they had gone to ask about Arun Sharma, agar un logon ko pata chal gaya ki Rajeev unke baare mein tehkikaat kar raha hai toh kahi unhe bhi……….she remembered all the incidents that had happened after they had come here….the attack on Rajeev outside Galaxy stores, Priyanka's accident, Rajeev's accident, the baby sitter trying to take Prachi away, their visit to the Galaxy owner's house…..everything………..and then she remembered Aliya's conversation over the phone…………. " kaam hote hi main un dono hatha dungi"
 
Priyanka was damn sure she was involved in something related to this. Rajeev jitna bhi gussa kyon na kare, unhe Aliya se dur rakhna hi padega.

 

Priyanka came back to the guesthouse and sat on her bed thinking. The fear was still running in her…she wished she could take Rajeev and Prachi away from here and go back to Mumbai…but if Prachi's mother is alive they should find her for Prachi's sake….Priyanka felt like crying….tears came to her eyes…why is the serial story happening again, aur itne khatarnak log….now what if something happens to Rajeev…….he bhagwan yeh kahan fansh gaye hum.

 

Tabhi Rajeev came in her room: Pri tum kahan…..

He stopped seeing tears in Pri's eyes: Pri tum ro rahi ho? Kyon shona?

As Priyanka ran to hug Rajeev, Aliya came in her room, Pri stopped…..Aliya: guys we have to be there for shooting right now, Misraji is angry for our delay…come on fast.

 

Pri turned to get ready for the shooting: Rajeev main change kar leti hoon, tum bhi jaake ready ho jao

Rajeev: par jab tak tum batayoge nehi kya hua hai tumhe main nehi jayoonga

Pri: baad mein batayungi, abhi please chalo shooting ke liye

She could hear Aliya's voice in the corridor, she could have come any moment. Priyanka could not take any risks. This is not the right time to tell Rajeev.

 

 

Rajeev kept thinking about Priyanka as he got ready for the shoot…why was she crying? Did I hurt her? Is she hurt because I went with Aliya? Or because I didn't believe her when she complained against Aliya…Rajeev took a deep breath, pagal ladki, usko samjhana padega.

 

Priyanka looked so upset during the shoot that even a couple of people noticed. Rajeev's heart bled seeing Priyanka's sad face…why is she so upset? Let the shooting get over, I will repair her mood.

 

The shooting went on, it was raining outside, so only indoor shots were only taken….

 

Harshad came running to Rajeev in one of the breaks.

Harshad: Have you heard?

Rajeev: what?

Harshad: they took me back in Kis desh mein!

Rajeev: wow really? That's great news

Harshad: thanks to you

Rajeev: array nehi…maine kya kia?

Harshad: you put in a word with that director, he liked my work…and now there is a directorial change in Kis desh mein, apparently he spoke to Ekta seeing the TRP s going down

Rajeev: really? I am so happy for you

Harshad: thanks a lot for your support….seriously you are like a real mentor

 

Rajeev smiled and placed his hand with assurance on Harshad's shoulder…he was happy to see this young man so happy!

 

Tabhi Misraji came in with Priyanka.

Misraji: achha Rajeev Priyanka keh rahi thi ki ek cadet hai jise hum film mein use kar sakte hai, tumne baat kiya hai usse

Priyanka: main cadet Iqbal ki baat kar rahi thi

Rajeev: o haan, I told him we could use him for a guest appearance

Misraji: no problem, waise bhi hume do chaar real cadets toh chahiye hi as extras

Rajeev: I am sure we'll get plenty of them….by the way Misraji aaj hum shooting kab wrap up kar rahe hai?

Misraji: pata nehi dekhte hai, aaj toh outdoor shooting ho nehi payega…kyon tumhe koi kaam hai?

Rajeev: haan bas ekbar bahar jana tha

Pri: kya kaam hai Rajeev? Bahar kyon jana hai?

Rajeev: woh tumhe baad pe pata chal jayega…tumhe bhi saath chalna hai

Misraji: wait wait, pehle shooting khatam karo guys, uske baad apna romance karna

 

 

Poor Rajeev….there were some technical difficulties…the shooting went on till the evening! Rajeev was growing restless to talk to Priyanka par bechare ko fursat hi nehi mili! When Misraji declared that they are going to go for a night shoot too, Rajeev cursed his fate! There was no way he could protest, professionalism comes first!

 

It was Naina's marriage with Huda that was to be shot. The story had Naina marrying Huda after Rajveer dies. Priyanka came down dressed up as a bride, in her red lehenga and jwellery. Everybody clapped, she looked so beautiful!!

 

Rajeev kept looking at her, sighing a breath of regret. He wished he had a wedding scene to be shot with her today!
 

"Sir aapka bhi chance ayega….script mein likha hai" Rajeev startled to turn back and saw Kumar standing there, smiling sheepishly. He had come to call Rajeev for the press meet, but Rajeev was engrossed in Priyanka's beauty so much that he didn't hear….

Rajeev: Kumar tum bahut zyada bolte ho, bolo kya kaam hai?

Kumar: Sir presswale aagaye hai, chale?

Rajeev: haan chalo.

 

It will take a long time to shoot the wedding scene, it usually does….and anyway he had no desire to stand and watch Priyanka and Vikas's wedding scenes! He went on to meet the press.

 

The interview:
There were 6 reporters in all, one from Saas Bahu aur sajish, they were all excited to know about the real life love story between Rajeev and Priyanka!

 

"Doston aaj hum aye hain Left Right Left film ke sets par! Aaj yahan par Naina aur Huda ki shaadi ki shooting chal rahi hai, aur hamare saath hai capt Rajveer Singh Shekhawat yani ki Rajeev khandelwal, toh aapko kaisa lag raha hai, aapka pyaar Naina Huda se shaadi kar rahi hai toh?

Rajeev: filhal toh mera character dead hai, ishiliye Naina Huda se shadi kar rahi hai, main zinda hota toh yeh shaadi kabhi nehi hone deta

REPORTER: aapka character toh serial mein kabhi wapas nehi aya, kya film mein Rajveer Sir wapas ayenge?

R: filhal toh woh suspense hai, aap logon ko film dekhne ke baad hi pata chalega

Re: ab hume apni real life love story ke baare mein bataiye, aap aur Naina yani ki Priyanka ki real life story

R: story kuchh nehi hai, bas hum saath shooting ke liye aye the aur pata nehi kaise dhire dhire pyar ho gaya

Re: par aapke saath toh Amna Shariff ko link kiya jata tha aur Priyanka ke saath Vikas ko?

R: wo sab sirf rumors the, nahi mere aur Amna ke beech mein kuchh tha aur naahi Priyanka aur Vikas ke beech mein, hum dono achhe dost hai, so is Pri and Vikas

Re: Amna ji aajkal Aftab ke saath nazar a rahe hai, apka kya kehna hai?

R: mera kya kehna hoga, I am very happy for her and I wish her all the best

Re: Nach Baliye 5 mein ek possible couple hai Amna aur Aftab, agar aapko aur Priyanka ko approach kiya jaaye toh kya aap participate karenge?

R: Zaroor, if Priyanka wants to, I'll surely participate, it'll be fun to dance with her, waise who bahut achhi nachti hai

Re: aap apne beti ke baare mein bataiye, aap usse iss shooting pe saath laye hai na?

R: first of all woh aise meri beti nehi hai, I can't imagine myself taking the responsibility of a father! I just sponsor the kid, nothing more

Re: lekin aap toh usse apne saath shooting pe bhi laye

R: woh mere saath nehi ayi hai, incidentally woh Nawgaon mein thi, un logon ka orphanage trip hota hai annually, she had come for that. Woh mere saath nehi hai

Re: lekin hume toh pata chala hai ki woh aapke saath ki reh rahi hai, fir aap aapne beti ko chhupa kyon rahe hai?

R: (laughing) why should I hide her? I am just telling you no need to drag her in the interview, she is a simple kid, yes I spent a lot of time with her and I take her out, but she is still in the custody of the orphanage, she is not with me.

Re: can we see her?

R: She's not here, aap usse chhodiye na, aapko aur kya poochna hai bataiye

 

Rajeev's heart was thumping loudly. This is what he had feared. The media gets information about everything and he knew it would be very difficult to hide Prachi from media attention, he tried his best…but God knows if his effort counted or not.

 

If not Prachi then it was to be Amna, the media was never tired of asking questions about her!

 

When the interview got over, it was already 10pm. He went over to the set and saw the wedding shooting was still going on, it was a huge affair. Priyanka will be busy till late night, Rajeev gave up any hope of talking to her that night. He was feeling tired and decided to go back to his room and sleep. Tabhi Misraji came and told him since they will be working till late night, there will be no morning shoot next day.

In a break Rajeev caught hold of Priyanka: suno main room mein ja raha hoon, tum shoot khatam karke mere room mein aa jana

Priyanka: ok, press conference kaisi rahi

Rajeev: bas thik thak tha, tumse zyada woh log Prachi mein interested hai!

Priyanka: hmmm

Rajeev: achha jaan, main chalta hoon, tum jaldi se shooting khatam kar lo, by the way you are looking gorgeous

Priyanka smiled: thank you

Rajeev: bas dukh yehi hai ki aaj tum kisi aur ki dulhaan ho

He kissed her cheeks and bid goodbye and came to his room

 

When Priyanka returned from her shoot and came to Rajeev's room, she saw the door was open but he had already slept. Prachi was sleeping by his side, dono baap beti ghore bechkar so rahe the! She turned off the lights, pulled the blanket over him and kissed him on his forehead. And tabhi Rajeev murmured Priyanka's name in his sleep! "I love you pri!"

"I love you too" whispered Priyanka as she quietly slipped out of his room.

 

She was woken up by bangings on her door! Gosh it was 9 AM! It was still raining outside.

She sleepily got up and opened the door. Rajeev was standing there all dressed, with a wide grin on his face

Pri: kya Rajeev, subah subha utha diya na (she said yawning)

R: sweety jaldi se taiyyar ho jao, we don't have morning shoot today, main tumhe kahin le jana chahta hoon

Pri: kahan?

R: chalo toh sahi, jaldi se ready ho jao, pleaseee, I'll give you 15 minutes!

Pri: par  iss barish mein

R: Pri your countdown starts now 1,2,3,4,5….

Pri: okay okay main ati hoon

R: aur haan aaj white dress pehen na

What is Rajeev upto?? watch it in the next episode on 'Pri-Rajeev special rainy day out'EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Friends, sorry to keep you waiting, my semester got over just now. i'll post the next update very soon, on 16th december Big smile.

By the way, i know all you are very busy, but i feel really nice if you leave even a one word comment. However, it's just a wish, no compulsionTongueTongue
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hey dear.... im so sorry for nt being regular all these days,.... was jus too caught up

this episode was awesum
so finally the secret is ouit.... im sure prachi is arun sharma's daughter..... poor arun......
hope his wife is safe..... but even if she is nt.... prachi had found such loving parents in raj and pri.....
loved the last scene of the interview.... the press is truly irritating....
waiting for the next epi....


Edited by Deeya - 12 December 2008 at 9:20pm
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Posted: 12 December 2008 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
damn cool
simply superb
raj is so worried about pri, he is so caring
waiting for the next part
update soon
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Posted: 13 December 2008 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Wonderfull........Clap

            hey i know it's short comment but m really sorry dear m soooo busy now a days so just can't write more than this becouse i want to comment on other fics also....hope u don't mind......it's  just to tell u that m reading ur fic n also luving it sooo much.
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Posted: 13 December 2008 at 12:34am | IP Logged
Hey it always feels nice to read ur FF n leave the comments. So I am actually compelled to leave a comment on ur fantastic FF. BTW gr8 part. I'm happy that Aliya cudnt find anything abt ARUN SHARMA whereas Priyanka has got sumthing. I hope That Raj-Pri get a wonderful outing in the rain. I'll be w8ing eagerly for 16 DEC.
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Posted: 13 December 2008 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Hey ye kaise film ban rahi hai jis me Vikas se shaadi kara rahein hai Pri ki WackoWackoWacko. I am not happy with this idea AngryAngryAngry aur mujhe dekhna bhi nahi hai ErmmErmmErmm. Kyounki kuch bhi ho Pri ki shaadi kabhi bhi us Vikas se nahi ho sakti Stern SmileStern SmileStern Smilechahe offscreen ya onscreen Thumbs DownThumbs DownThumbs Down. Mujhe total update accha laga par movie ka ye concept raha to movie pakka pit jaayegi.PinchPinchPinchVikas to khush ho raha hoga na ki onscreen hi kam se kam Pri se shaadi to hue us ki varna to................................... Broken HeartBroken HeartBroken Heart
Raj ne Aliya k saath BS se milne ka socha tha na ab baj gayi band aur kuch bhi pata nahi chal paaya Evil SmileEvil SmileEvil Smile na aur le kar jaaye us Aliya ki bacchi ko vo jahan bhi rahegi vahan kabhi koi chain se nahi baith sakta.DeadDeadDead Arjun ne sahi kaha ki do ki story k beech me ye third kahan se aa gaya AngryAngryAngry not good.Arjun ki bhi gf hai nice to know that but us se jhagda kyoun kiya us ne ConfusedConfusedConfused? Aaj kal vo bus har jagah jhagda hi kar raha hai chahe MJHT ho ya yahan TongueTongueTongue. Prem is back in KDMHMD to kitna khush ho gaya tha na Harshad aur us ne Raj ko kaha ki vo us ka true mentor hai.ApproveApproveApprove
Raj ne media k saamne apne aur Pri k baare me sach accept kar k bahut accha kiya ClapClapClap n i am happy for both of them.Big smileBig smileBig smile Raj ne ye bhi clear kar diya ki us k aur Aamna k beech kuch nahi tha TongueTongueTongue tat's nice too. Par na chahte hue bhi us ko Prachi k liye sab se jhooth bolna pada. UnhappyUnhappyUnhappyYe media waale bhi na jis k peeche pad jaayein us ki jaan hi le kar rahenge AngryAngryAngry. Raj ne par situation ko bahut acche se handel kar liya. WinkWinkWinkHe is really master in that.ApproveApproveApprove
Pri wedding dress me bahut acchi lag rahi thi EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed to Raj us ko bus dekhe hi jaa raha tha that's superb.Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming Kumar bhi na Raj ki leg pulling karne laga shaitaan nahi to LOLLOLLOL aur kaha ki us ka bhi waqt aayega ye baat to sahi hai WinkWinkWink. Raj ko accha nahi lag raha tha Pri ka sad face dekhna OuchOuchOuch aur poore din vo baat bhi nahi kar paaya acche se DisapproveDisapproveDisapprove Pri se aur shoot ki wajah se us ko apna programme bhi cancel karna pada UnhappyUnhappyUnhappy . Akhir kaam humari Pri ne hi kiya,Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up us ne Ikbal se pata laga hi liya ki Arun Sharma ka sach kya hai SmileSmileSmile aur ab ye to confirm hai ki beti ye Arun Sharma ki hi hai Prachi.OuchOuchOuch
Late me pahuchi jab Pri us k paas to baap beti aaram se so gaye the aur neend me Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreamingbhi Raj Pri ko hi yaad kar raha tha Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming, hieeeeeeeeee kinna sweet hai na voHugHugHug.Pri ne bhi kaha i love u too. Pri dar rahi hai ki reel life jaisa sab ho raha hai us k aas paas ShockedShockedShocked kahin reel life jaise fir is baar vo Raj ko na kho de CryCryCry. Kyounki ye sab bahut khatarnaak hota jaa raha hai D'ohD'ohD'oh.BS vaise bhi is baare me koi baat karne ko ready nahi the UnhappyUnhappyUnhappy. Ab kahan le kar jaa raha hai Raj Pri ko vo bhi white dress me?ConfusedConfusedConfused
 
waiting for 16th december.TongueTongueTongue
 


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 December 2008 at 2:57am

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