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Reel & Real life:(RN): 2 remaining updates posted (Page 62)

george eliot Senior Member
george eliot
george eliot

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Posted: 26 September 2008 at 10:33am | IP Logged
LOLOYE MAIN AB AUR KYA KAHOON TUNE ITNA ACHHA COMMENT DIYA HAI KI MAIN TOH KHUSHI SE JHOOM RAHI HOON, TongueTHANK YOU DEAR, THANK YOU FOR SPENDING SO MUCH TIME AND GIVING EM SUCH A WONDERFUL COMMENTClap
 
 
 
 
 
Originally posted by watch rajeev

QUOTE=george eliot]
Suddenly a thought strikes Rajeev and he became serious, looking at priyanka he says: pri did we rush through things?

P: why are u asking such a question

R: nehi Pri this was so sudden, things happened so fast, I didn?t evet know if u were ready and I ???.(he sounded guilty, realizing the import of the things)hmmm...kitni jaldi yaad aa gaya......gud going rajeevLOLLOL 

TRUE but al least he realised it finallyLOLLOLLOL
P: looked at him adoringly, he cared for her so much:ab vo rajeev hai......itna pyaara ki usse tumhaari fikar hogi hi tumne koi zabardasti thodi kiya? I was equally partner in this (she said shyly)ye lo bechaari ladki ko samjhaana pad raha hai....aur hamaara rajeev sachi mein bhut sharmeela aur bhola haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
aur shararti bhi haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

R: fir bhi Pri??..this shouldn?t have happened like this???u know what I mean??..we didn?t take any protection?.if something happens??..

He was too concerned

P: ok ok chill, don?t worry, I?ll take measures?..

R: par kaise? We have already done it???..isne science nhn padhi lagtiLOLjo aise sawaal pooch raha hai

usse saari details chahiye naEmbarrassedWink
P: offffho, tum fikr karna bandh karoge? I?ll take a precautionary pill once I get back?ab yeh discussion bandh kare?mujhe to darr hai ki wahaan itni tension mein agar ye pill lena bhool gai to lene ke dene pad jaayenge
hahahaha, good one, then Prachi will have a  sibling soonEmbarrassedWink

R: tum keh rahi ho toh thik hai....oye tum yaad zaroor kara dena warna mujhe to poora shak hai ki pri bhoolne waali hai

P: now smile baba, come on dont look so glum, finally we are together

R: I hope nothing comes between us anymore (he thought to himself as he hugged priyanka with a sigh) kuch nhn aayega beech agar tum pri ka sach jaanne ke baad usse maaf kardo to...i mean vo to tum kar hi doge par mera matlab hai ki jaldi karna....aur plzzzzzzzz uss aliya ka bharosa mat karna mujhe vo bhut hi chaalbaaz lagti hai....aur pata nhn kyun aisaa lagta hai hi uska prachi se bhi kuch lena dena hai...u know wat i mean....

tune sahi kahan, Aliya pe Rajeev itna bharosha karta hain, mujhe bhi Aliya kuchh ajeeb lagti hainWink dekhte hai aage aage hota hai kya...aur woh tension toh hai, pata nehi pri ke sach janne ke baad rajeev kya kare...OuchOuch 

 

The unit had called up the forest ranger early in the morning

FR: kuchh connection ho raha hai unlogo se?

Aliya: naa, we haven?t heard from them since last evening, please Sir hume jaldi unhe dhoondhne nikal na chahiye

FR: ok, we don?t want many people, just 2 or three of you come with me

Aliya: I?ll go

Vikas: me too

Arjun: main bhi jayoongadekho kitna pakaa dost hai dost ko romance karne ke liye jungle mein rehne ke liye kehta hai aur fir sabke saath shariffon ki tarah anjaan bann kar ghoomne bhi jaa raha haiWink

sala nautankiLOLLOL
The jeep set off to the restricted areas of the jungle.

 

Rajeev and Priyanka were walking hand in hand when they heard voices calling out their name?soon they met the search party

FR: ufffffff finally aaplog mile?.I told you repeatedly, be careful of the restricted areas, fir bhi aaplog bhatak gaayelagta hai iss forest ranger ne kbhi romance nhn kiya aur abhi tak kuwaaara haiLOLLOLdekho kaise bacchon jaise sawaal kar raha hai

yeh forest ranger shayad DJ hai, romance se nafrat haiLOLLOL
Both looked down like errant students

Rajeev: humlogo ko pata bhi nehi chala kab yahan aa gayerajeev kam se kam bahaana to koi dhang ka banaateLOL

FR: come on Mr.Khandelwal, couldn?t you see the sign boards that said restricted area?actually vo kuch aur dekhne mein busy thaWinktumhaara sadaa hua board kyun dekhe ga vo??LOL

tu agar forest ranger hoti toh jhat se pakad leti
LOL Anyway, I am glad you guys are safe

They all sat in the jeep. Vikas was looking at Priyanka intensely, trying to find visible signs of what have happened all night?naaa soch zyaada sahaa nhn jaaayegaLOLLOLLOLPri and Arjun exchanged glances, Arjun noticed the look on Pri?s face and smiled, he knew whatever has happened, seeing Arjun smile made Priyanka blush again, she knew he had understoodye arjun bhi naaa aalekh ke character se bhut inspire ho gaya hai aur apna antaryaaami ka role nhn chodegaLOL?.Priyanka looked at Rajeev and smiled shyly, Rajeev looked at her dreamily?.haaae so sweetEmbarrassed

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Pri had just changed her clothes when Vikas came to her

Vikas: so?

P: kya?

Vikas: raat kaisi rahi?minus you.....fantastic

hahahahah soooooooo funnyLOLLOLLOL

P: baapre it was so bad, we were completely lost, raatbhar hum rasta dhoondhte rahe?.priiiiii jhoooth jhoothLOLye kaho ki tum dono chahte the ki raasta kbhi naa mile

lie detector test fail failLOLLOL
Vikas: (smiling sarcastically) kyon jhooth bol rahi hai, bol na Rajeev ke saath kya kiya?rehne de vikas agar usne tujhe bataa diya to tujhe heartattack ho jaayegaLOLLOLLOL
woh toh usse wise bhi a raha hai, kya hua hoga sochkarLOLLOL

P: kya matlab hai tera? Humlog kho gaye the....

Vikas: zyada bholi mat ban, maza aya uske saath? kamina sahi tone nhn use kar sakta....ghatiya soch

P: Vikaaaaaaas

Vikas: nehi bol na, mujhe ab koi fark nehi padta, was he good?thapad khaane jaise sawaaal kar raha hai kaminaAngry

Priyanka hated the way he asked her that question,even i hate dis tone of him she thought it?s time to put her foot down. She came face to face to him. Staring at him with a stern look she spoke up: Vikas, before you start making any more comments that you?ll be sorry for let me tell you something. Rajeev and I love each other and that?s official. Now I don?t want anybody, and that includes you too, to talk about our private life, now is that clear?wah wah pri.....keep it up i m proud of uClap

finally she took a strong stand
Vikas? face looked like a deflated balloon as he saw Priyanka walking out.LOLLOLLOL

 

Rajeev was reading his script, when he heard two spot boys talking:

SB 1: aapko kya lagta hai Priyanka aur Rajeev ji raat bhar jungle mein?.kuchh hua hoga?bas aur koi kaam nhn hai logon ko

zaleem duniyaCry
SB2: aur nehi toh kya, raat bhar kya taare gin rahe the dono?hahahahhahahahha....ye bhi sahi hai agar dekha jaaye to

SB1: lekin meine toh suna tha Priyanka ji ke saath Vikas sir ka kuchh hai??.

SB2: haan yaar mujhe bhi yehi pata tha, achanak yeh Rajeev sir kahan se entry mar diyaapna hero hai....dhulaniya to isi ko milegi naaaWink

haan yeh log bhi jaldi man jaye tab na
SB1: shayad woh log sach mein kho gaye the

Sb 2: array rehne de rehne de, yeh heroine type bhi na, kabhi iske saath toh kabhi uske saath, achha mouka mila, Rajeev ji jo fansha liya? tu dekhna Rajeev aur Priyanka ji ke beech mein ab chakkar chalega?.raat ka nasha abhi?kaminaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

They both sing dirtily?

SB1: bechara vikas sir, achanak girlfriend haat se fisal gayiii

 

Rajeev felt like punching those two guys but thought itarre maaarna chahiye tha naa....par i know rajeev bhut i samjahdaar aur calm banda hai aise chichore logon ki baaton sun kar scene nhn create karega? u are right, Rajeev kabhi ais abehave nehi karega, he's quite immatures best to ignore them, after all he didn?t want him n pri to be the laughing stock of the unit?so this is what they think: Priyanka was steady with Vikas and suddenly she has slept with Rajeev! These people had no idea about the depth of their relationship, their love, their passion??to dikhaayo naaa logon ko.....ise sharmaaane se fursat mile tab naaaa. nehi nehi usse toh koi dusra logic ki padi hai.perhaps it was all Rajeev?s fault, they had behaved like strangers in front of everyone?.and now when they are in relationship suddenly, people are finding it hard to accept?finally dimaag ki baati jaliBig smile

 

And tabhi the production manager came up to Rajeev and said: congratulations Rajeev, not everybody gets so lucky to spend a night with a beautiful lady in the jungle?ek se badhkar ek ghatiya aadmi hai set parand it?s even better if it?s somebody else?s chick, huh? oyeeee vo usi ki hai not someone else's chick....chhii mujhe to ye chick word bhi indecent lagta hai  sounds so dirty na???AngryAngryAngryHe he he he?(he chuckled)

Rajeev got up and left in front of the stunned man.

 

 

Uhar Kunal and Arjun had gathered around Pri

Kunal: bol na Priya, kya hua jungle mein

P: array kya hoga? Bas hum kho gaye the

Arjun: bol hi daal, humse kya chhupana

Tabhi Harshad enters: are you all right Priyanka? Did u get to eat something? Raatbhar bhookhi rahi kya?bas harshad ko to hameshaaa khaane ki padi rehti hai....bhukhaddLOL

K: hush hush?come to the point, tell us what happened

P: array fir wohi sawal? Kya hoga? Hum rasta dhoondhte rahe aur fir thak kar baith gaye?aur

All: aur??????????????hahahahahhahahha...dis is d beauty of frndship i guess....so sweeti know, bechari ko kitna sata raha hai sabLOLLOL

P: aur kuchh nehi?bas (she blushed deep red)

Harshad: come on guys, don?t ask her personal questions

 

Tabhi Ghazal came to see Priyanka and spotted a red mark on her neck which she had hidden with her dupatta.

G: priya, tere neck pe kya hua?jhali hi hai ghazalEmbarrassed

Arjun was standing there, smiling at her, he decides to play a lil mischief, he came up innocently and said: haan Priya yeh tere neck pe kaisa daag hai?arjun bhut naughty hai pehle khud hi kehta hai ki jungle mein raho aisa mauka fir nhn milega aur ab khud hi bechaari ka jeeena mushkil kar raha haiLOLLOLvery naughty, but he's a vety good friend tooTongue

Before Priyanka could hide it all were looking at it

Ghazal: oh my God (she suddenly screamed and then shut up, she had understood!!) sab kuch bigaaad ke tab samjhti hai

Kunal: ahem?.ab pata chala

H: kya baat hai, koi batao mujheye sab se bada namuna hai

Ghazal: ahem

H: arrey hua kya?

K: well jab koi bahut passionately kiss karta hai

G: toh?.toh?.toh?. aisa kuchh daag ho jaata hai?(Ghazal finally blurted it out)chalo bachi kuchi kasar bhi poori kar di kya kare ab hamare Harshad sab ke dimaag mein short circuit jo ho gaya hai, samajh hi neh pa raha hai

H: oh achha, ab samjha, array yeh dekh aur ekpagal banda....yahaan bhi sab ek se badh kar ek namune hainLOL

All this while pri felt like sinking in the ground, tabhi Harshad pointed out another red mark at the back of her neck?and soon the whole group teased her to death, finally pri gave up: okay okay guys, shut up, okay here I confess: Rajeev n I are in lovebechaari dere was no way out...thanx to her wonderful frndspar achha hi hai na, at least now its officalTongueTongue

 

All clap loudly, ?PARTY PARTY? they all screamed.

Vikas heard the claps and screams from a distance. He felt bad, not so much for losing pri than for not being a part of the celebration?he was pri?s best friend, he should have rejoiced in her happiness?he thought sadlypehle sab kuch khud hi bigaad ta hai fir khud hi pachtata hai

Aliya comes up to Rajeev with a cup of coffee: the reporters are asking for an interview

Ra: noooooooooooooooi can imagine rajeev's reactions haaye kitna cute lag raha hoga naaaEmbarrassedhe's angry nowOuch

A: ok, ok, main na bol dungi, par kyon?

R: i am in no mood for an interviewpoocho zaraaa aur kya mood hai janaab ka???Winkwoh toh ahem, tum aur hum jante hai

A: well whatever happened yesterday calls for an interview, and celebration

Not again, Rajeev thought irritatedly: what for?detail mein sunega tab shanti milegi kya????????sala sabhi ko details chahiye

  

Tabhi Malhotra came over to Rajeev, he had a very suggestive smile on his face which he didn?t like.

Malhotra: so?

Rajeev: yes?

Malhotra: hope you had a good time, he winked at him dirtilyloo ek aur kaminaa....pata nhn kahan kahna se bharti kiye hain sabAngryAngryAngrytehy are all drooling over pri yaar

Rajeev felt anger rising in his head but he chose to ignore this horrible man.firse ignore????????god....rajeev to sant haiLOLLOL

Rajeev: I don?t understand what you mean Mr. Malhotra, the jungle wasn?t the most comfortable place on earthjhoothaaa.......iskeliye to sab se khoobsurat jagah hogiWink

Malhotra: come on man, zyada bhole mat bano, mujhe mat sikhao tumdono ne raat bhar kya kiya hai?.come on man, tumhe ishiliye intimate scene se problem tha?.tum apna kismat kisike saath share nehi karna chahte??..by the way she is very hot huh?.rajeev yaaar kya kar rahe ho....isss baat pe to dho dena chahiye tumhein isse.....par as we all know rajeeev ji sab kaaam bhut hi soch kar aur thande dimaag se karte hain iss liye inse aisi umeed rakhna bekaar hai coem on tu bhi pri ki tarah bol rahi hai, real life mein thode hi koi itna jaldi kisi pe haat uthata hai?

 

Rajeev looked at him sternly, he tried his best to control his anger: Mr Malhotra I would prefer if you stop this conversation right now. It was just an accident that we got lost, nothing else happened.safeed jhooth

 

Malhotra nudged him with his elbow: oye hoye, aapko toh bura lag gaya, come on, saaf dikh raha hai raatbhar kya kiya tum dono nekamaal hai ye sab dikh kaise sakta hai???meri to samjh ke bahar hai?ab yeh heroines hote hi aise hai, maine toh suna tha Vikas ke saath iska chakkar chal raha hai, ab aap ke saath raat bitake ayi, not bad haan?.these women can do anything for their profession?kabhi mere saath bhi uska setting??..now this is really more dan enough.....is par to rajeev ko ghuusaa maarna hi chahiye thaAngryAngryAngry he is a disgusting manAngry

 

?Shut up Mr.Malhotra?bas sirf shut up?????? Rajeev thundered and walked away. He was fuming and came and sat on a chair, he felt like killing that horrible man?to kya pndit ji se muharat ka wait kar raha haihe hated coming back, he wished he could stay back at the jungle, what a contrast to the lovely time spent there?hahahahahhahapeople are disgusting, he was worried about Pri?how bad wud she feel if she heard these things?she shouldn?t know, not at all?and tabhi he saw Priyanka standing by his sidethink of the pri as the pri is hereLOLab lagegi rajeeev ki waaat......pyar ke side effectsWink...single hote hue kisi ko jawaab jo nhn dena padta tha ab to poora mahayud ho sakta haiLOLLOLbut i guesss ismein bhi apna hi ek mazaa haiBig smileEmbarrassedEmbarrassed true true, ab rajeev ko pata chalega girlfriend ka gussa kya hota haiClapClapClap

 
....

 

P: wonderful, thanks a lot (Priyanka?s eyes were glowing and het voice thick with sarcasm)

R: what? For what? Why do u look so angry? ( Rajeev was extremely confused)ye dekho abhi bhi samajh nhn aaya inhe

P: I see a man talking such bad things about me and u are doing nothingany woman wuld feeel like that we women expect a lot from our men

R: whaat?.what do you want me to do? I did ask him to shut up?hahaaahahahahhaha...lagta hai rajeev apne kiye hue roles se bilkul bhi inspire nhn huaLOLLOLLOL(he was still confused what he should be doing and why Priyanka was so upset)

P: yes what else can you do? Hai na? tumhe toh kuchh nehi jata?after all you denied our relationship?

R: wait a minute, that?s a different issue and I need to talk to you about that but lets settle this one first?why are you upset about me regarding Malhotra? What am I supposed to do? I did protest?.ahaaa chocolate hero....ussse action hero chahiyeLOLLOL

P: by just running away from him? Wonderful Mr.Khandelwal!!!mr.khandelwalLOLab pata chal raha hai ki bhut hi gussa hai

R: toh aur kya karu?that ugly man wouldn?t stop?ugly man????????hhhahhaahhaa...tumaare samne to sab wasie bhi ugly hi dikhte hainEmbarrassed

P: If I were a guy and any guy dared to say anything about my girl, I would have punched him hard in the facehahahahahhahahaha...pri bhut hi filmy hai usse bura jo lagaOuch

R: whaaat?????? Are you crazy????? You want me to punch my producer? And make a scene here? Pri please grow up?.this is not film?rajeeeev koi fayada nhn hai vo bachi hai tumhaaari tarah practical nhn hai.....

P: stop calling me Pri, you have no guts to stand for the person you love vaise agar main iski jagah hoti to mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta ......hai na? mujhe bhi bahut gussa a raha tha

R: Pri real life can?t be as dramatic as you think?I can?t believe you can be this immatureab age difference khn to nazar aayega hi naa.....hahahhahahahaha...par fir bhi u too rmade 4 each other rajeev aisa behave kar raha hai jaise he is teh most mature person on earth, LOLLOL

P: oh yeah, this is my immaturity isn?t it? To expect that you will stand for me, people are calling me sluts and you are just running away from them?.(Priyanka chocked on her words, she felt her eyes welling up)bechaari mujhe bhi ronaa aa raha hai....this is how society iss...kuch bhi hota hai sab ka sab ladki ke uppar hi aata hai zaleem duniya, do pyar karnewale ke beech hamesha aa jati hai

 
Suddenly Rajeev go very angry, he had had enough tension from the morning and now Priyanka bhi? Why is she acting all immature? He felt his temper rising:
I am sorry Ms.Bassichalo pri ka influence ho gaya ye bhi ms.bassi par aa gaya.... if I have disappointed you but let me tell you I am no superman as you might think of me?LOLu can be a superman if u really think about itperhaps you expect me to be real life hero like Captain Rajveer but I am Rajeev Khandelwal, a very ordinary man who can?t possibly be so melodramatic to punch his producerhaahahaha..bechaara samjhta hi nhn ki ek ladki apne pyaar se kya expect karti hai par i guess bhut jaldi samjhne lagega u are right, both are right in their own way, but somehow i still support Pri, perhaps because i am a girl and i can understand her expectations

P looked at him intensely, the anger in her eyes was replaced with sadness: yes Rajeev, perhaps I expected too much from you, when you are not even ready to acknowledge our relationship in public?i really am cryinggg...Cry

With that she left, leaving Rajeev more remorseful

Rajeev regretted saying those words, he has hurt her again, inspite of taking the vow that he will never see another tear in her eye, he has hurt her again?.rajeev felt his eyes burning, he got up to look for her, he can?t lose her with another stupid actdo min pehle dimaaag ki bati jali hoti to ye sab nhn hotalekin achha hi hai, thodi si fight for good for lovers

 

Tabhi Rajeev entered: Pri suno

P: mujhe kuchh nehi sunna, please leave Mr Khandelwalhahahahhaha...abhi bhi mr. khandelwal...waise dis sounds really cool and differentEmbarrassed

R: Pri suno toh??..

P: please Rajeev go away

Rajeev came forward to her and hugged her tight?Pri tried to push him away: ?leave me or I?ll call the whole unit? she cried?.but Rajeev refused to loosen his grip, he just buried his face in pri?s hair, uttering ?sorry??she tried hurting Rajeev, pushing him with all might but finally gave up as Rajeev held her more tightly?she collapsed in his arms and cried silently?Rajeev kissed her hair and then held up her face, looking into her eyes he said: I am sorryhaaaae aise pyaaar se chup to sirf rajeev hi kara sakta haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedi must say u really hv exceled in describing emotions in this particular scene....hats off 2 uClap thank you dear, yes Rajeev is too rmantic

P was still crying, unable to stop

Rajeev kissed her hands and kneeled down in front of her, then he embraced her waist and rested his head on her bellyhaaaaaaaaae main mar jaawanEmbarrassed

R: I am really sorry dear, really sorry for hurting you? ?it was  just that people were saying bad things since morning?. i love you sweetyso swweet pri yaar jaldi se maan jaaa woh to jayegi hi

P (was still angry): And u can?t do anything when people say bad things about me?!! All you do is deny our love in front of everybody!!!!!!! Look at me I like a fool declared it in front of all that we are in love!!! Huh! How stupid can I get?you just wanted to sleep with me for a night, that?s it, nothing else?it was all false?you don?t love me?.oh god...pri rajeev ke baaare mein aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hai???? gusse mein hai bechari, aur kya karegi she couldn?t complete her sentence as fresh bouts of tears came oozing out?..

R: Pri look at me

P looked unwillingly

R: look properly, do I look like a bas***d?rajeeev dont say it like dat....par its all not ur fault...pri ne baat hi aisi kahi hai

P was shocked at his use of this term?me tooo....

R: is this all the trust u have for me? How could u think I don?t love u and I had just exploited u??????how could u think that pri?ya rite

P: tumne fir deny kyon kiya?

R: because ppl aren?t saying nice things about us pri, you heard it yourself, because they didn?t know the depth of our love and they think we have just physically fallen for each otheryaaa rajeeev ye sab bakwaas subah se akele hi bardaast kar raha hai

P: how cud they????

R: well, we behaved like strangers, nobody had any inkling about what was going on in our minds, everybody linked u with Vikas and suddenly we get lost in the jungle and come back and declare our love????????? Will people ever think of it as anything except lust?he is really very mature at dis time...

P kept silent

R came closer and kissed her forehead I can?t bear ppl talking about my love in demeaning terms, we?ll surely declare our love, but ppl should know the depth of ittab tak to mujhe darr hai ki aur koi nayi prob aa jyegi....thanx to our writerWink oye maine kya kiya??ShockedShockedShocked dono jhagarte hai aur dosh mere pe ata hai? main toh sirf describe karti hoonLOL

P : and how r u going to do that?

R: well we?ll take it slow and ppl will gradually see we are coming closer, then it?ll be easy for them to accepthaan haan rajeeeev aaaram se 4-5 saal lagaao phir 4-5 saaal shaaadi karne mein lagaana..tab tak tumhaaare saare baaal jhad jaayenge aur tumhaare saarae daant baahara aa jaaayenge....bas kar yaaar samjhdaari dikhanaa kbhi kbhi pyaaar ke mamlon mein nasamjh hona padta hai...hahahahahahahha this is the best comment, oh my god i laughed so muchLOL

P: do u know u r equally supid?i agree

R: why?????

P: u think ppl are going to stop gossiping just because u will deny things? point

R: well?.

P: and they?ll believe u that we spent a whole night together n nothing happened just because you say so? again a gu point priRajeev, the more you deny, the more gossips spread

R: but?

P: and then just to prove your point, u?ll start keeping distance from me, n there will be misunderstandings again?.just like the serial story, it?s happening again??.the gossips, the distancing?.dekha jungle se wapas aate hi hamare beech problems suru!!!! ( priyanka panicked)chalo pri ne pehle hi rajeev ko uske agle step ke baaare mein bataa diya....acha hai agar pri nhn bolti to rajeeev exactly aise hi karata,......ab atleast ye sab dekhne ko to nhn milega naa...aur kuch differnt hone ka hum expect kar sakte hain....hud work priClap haan at least yeh dono serial ke tarah ajeeb behave nehi karenge ab, oh my god i hated those days in LRL, post mentorship- bhargav episodesCryCryCry

R: pri suno toh?.

P: I have had enough of the serial story happening in my life?well it was good till the point we fell in love, but not anymore?rite

R: ok stop stop, nothing is going to happen between us, it?s not the serial story, it?s our lives Priyanka, our real lives..... okay fine, lets break the link between real and reel lives now, but first decide whether you want a hero like captain Rajveer or you are happy with your ordinary Rajeev khandelwal?hmmmmm gud question

P: I love my Rajeev khandelwal, but what? What are u going to do?so sweet of her to say that

R: first punch that stupid malhotra and then you?ll see, come with megoshhhhh rajeeev kya sach mein usse punch karne waala hai?????????i cant wait 4 it...wait and watchWink

 

He held her hand and pulled her out of the van?..ok ab mera coment ho gaya....thank you soooooooooooooo much dear, a big hug from meTongueTongue yaar plzzz rajeev ki mama waali convo dikhaao aur pri ka prachi ke saath koi scene bhi....it'll be very interesting....afterall pri uski officially mummy banne waaali hai.... Pri Rajeev and Prachi scene is coming up in the next update....aur haan Rajeev ke mummy ko bhi jaldi pata chal jayegaTongueTongueaur plzzzzzzzzzzz do tell me ki tum next ud kab karne waali ho...i just can't wait 4 it............plzzzzzzzzz apni uds thodi jaldi kiya karo yaaar atleast 2 times a week....i cant force u but still i m requesting.....thanks for ur request dear, but kya hai na iss semester meiin main kaam ke maare mar rahi hoonOuchOuch so shayad week mein ek baar hi update kar payoongiOuchOuch plas yaar try to understand, please bura mat maanna....i knwo u will understand, u are my sweeeeeeeeeeet friend TongueTongue and yes this time make it a bit longer.....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ok dear will try to keep ur request

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Originally posted by riyaa_1985

Hi!!!!!!
Wow!!!what an update...loved the way Raj said sorry.....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
thannnnnnnnk you dear, yes raj is too romantic Embarrassed
Oh God is Vikas ka kya karein????Aisi baatein kyun karta hain???Angry
 
pyar mein pagla gaye hai
Aur yeh Mr Malhotra!!!!Angry
How dare he talks like that!!!!!Angry
saitan ek number ka
Dear...it's awesome.....ClapClapClap
mind blowing....Thumbs Up
 
thanksssssssssssss a loooot for ur complimentsEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Continue soon.
Take care.
 
 
 
 
love
Riya.
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UPDATE WILL BE ON SUNDAY, PROMISE , kya yaar hume yahan bhej diya, i'll miss LRLFCry
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it was a fantastic update...cant wait till the next part!!!!!
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Originally posted by george eliot

UPDATE WILL BE ON SUNDAY, PROMISE , kya yaar hume yahan bhej diya, i'll miss LRLFCry
seriously yaar.....i completely agree wid u.......aisa lag raha hai ki hum pni family se alag ho gaye hain....Cryaur haan agar aaj ud nhn ki to mujhse bura koi nhn hogaAngry
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EPISODE 28: IT'S OFFICIAL !
 
He held her hand and pulled her out of the van…..

Pri: ruko Rajeev, kahan ja rahe ho? tum sach mein Malhotra ko marne ja rahe ho kya?

R: aur nehi toh kya, nehi toh tumhe yakeen nehi ayega na ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon

P: ok baba, sorry, please aisa mat karo, ruk jao (she pulled his hand hard) pleaseeeeeeee

R looks at Pri: toh fir bolo kabhi mere pyar pe sak nehi karogi

P: nehi karungi, bola na sorry, ab ruko, pleaseeeeeee

R: thik hai Malhotra aaj banch gaya par doosra kam toh pura kar loon

P: aur kya kaam hai?

R: chalo toh sahi...let me create a new story different from the serial's

 

He held her hand and pulled her in the middle of everybody, then he called out loudly: excuse me everybody, can I have your attention

All turned to them

Rajeev:  I have decided it's time to declare that we are going around, and it had been going on for quite some time, we went to the jungle intentionally because we wanted to spend some quality time alone, we just wanted to share our happiness with you, hope nobody will have a problem seeing us together now…thanks for not disturbing us last night…..and he turned and kissed pri on her cheek, amidst loud cheers n claps.

 

Priyanka was in shock, she couldn't believe Rajeev could do such a thing!! She was feeling shy in public but she was happy too, she felt bad for saying the hard words to Rajeev, he did love her……..

 

They didn't really care what people thought now, having declared their love to the rest of the world gave them a sense of content…nothing can separate them again, nothing….

 

The day went on in shooting, it was their last day here, so people were busy wrapping up things. Priyanka was a little worried about her mom, and God forbid Vikas, he had avoided her company since the time she shouted at him…. "I hope he'll understand" Priyanka thought with a sigh.

 

In the middle of the shoot Kumar, Rajeev's spot boy, came jumping up to Priyanka

Kumar: Priyanka ji congratulations

P: thank you Kumar

R: mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha Rajeev sir aap se pyar karta hai

P: achha?

R: haan usne jab mujhe aapka engagement ring dekhne ke liye bheja tha tabhi mujhe laga tha daal mein kuchh kala hai…

P: engagement ring dekhne bheja tha?? Kaunsa engagement ring? Kab?

 

Tabhi Rajeev comes to the spot with Prachi: Kumaaaaaaaar, tum bahut zyada bolte ho, jao dekho mera shot ready hai ki nehi

Kumar left

P: (laughing) yeh kya bol raha tha

R: ahem…chhodo na, pagal hai woh, dekho main kisse laya hoon

Priyanka takes Prachi in her arms, she hugged her tightly and kissed her loudly: my baby (she said lovingly as she rocked her in her arms)

R: ek kiss papa ko bhi milega?

P: Rajeev!!! Set pet oh at least kuchh sharam karo!

Prachi started pulling Priyanka's nose and laughed aloud

R: kyon Prachi mummy pasand ayi?

Prachi pata nehi kya samjhi, she sqealed out in joy in priyanka's lap

P: yeh na sab samajhti hai, badmash (she said adoringly as she tickled her belly)

R: aur nehi toh kya, aur sabse zyada apne papa ko samajhti hai….chal Prachi tere mummy ab hamare paas booked hai, aur koi nehi le sakta usse

P: Prachi ke mummy hamesha Prachi ke liye booked thi, lekin can't guarantee that about Prachi's papa

R: achha? Prachi ke papa tumhe kahin jaane de tab na

P: oho...kya kar lega woh?

R: zor ka ek punch marega to any man who dares to come near you…ruko abhi marke dikhata hoon Malhotra ko

P: ok baba, thik hai, thik hai, ab fir se shuru mat ho jana

Vikas noticed it all from a distance

 

When they were shooting the mud scenes and getting lost in the jungle scenes, both couldn't help laughing in between the scenes, remembering how it had been in real life too! Aliya had to retake the scenes 20 times!!!

Aliya: cut cut cut, guys I understand tum dono ka aaj khushi ka din hai, par please concentrate on your scenes, hasna bandh karo

Arjun: kya baat hai, tumlog itna haas kyon rahe ho? Jungle mein sachmooch aisa kuchh hua kya?

Pri glared at Arjun and then turning to Aliya she said: sorry sorry, aage se serious shooting, okay ready

Aliya retakes the scene again and tabhi it's Rajeev's turn to burst out laughing

Aliya: offfffffffffffffffff again?!!!!!!! Tum dono ko na main....aur ek baar haasi toh aaj dinbhar mud pe pade rehna hoga, that'll be ur punishment!!

Rajeev: I don't mind as long as u r with me (he whispered to Pri)

 

Now it was time for the intimate scenes…..

As you know, in the shooting of intimate scenes, the crew is kept minimal, so not everyone gets to watch the scenes…Aliya cleared most of the unit away except a few

Arjun was regretting: hume bhi dekhna hai

Ghazal: haan hume bhi dekhna hai yeh dono kya karte hai

Kunal: khud pe kaboo rakhna Pri, sachmooch kuchh karna shuru mat kar dena

Priyanka: shut up u guys, am shooting a scene, not doing anything…..

Ghazal: haan woh toh hume pata hai, par fir bhi agar control nehi hotaaaa…..

Arjun: ek kaam karte hai, we'll take Aliya's mike and scream from here, CONTROL, CONTROL

Priyanka: tum logo ki toh main…….ruko baad mein dikhati hoon

 

They start shooting the scenes……..Malhotra insisted to supervise…Rajeev felt uncomfortable doing the scenes in front of him….though the scenes weren't that bold, Rajeev felt he was staring at every bit of bare skin that could be seen of Priyanka…..

 

Rajeev was so uncomfortable and conscious in a kissing scene that it had to be retaken….Rajeev was kissing Priyanka as if his lips were touching a hot cup…he was conscious that Malhotra was watching them closely…..it was the worst scene ever shot!!!!

Aliya: yaar yeh tum dono bhi na!!!!!!!!!! real life lovers ho aur on screen kissing mein itna uncomfortable?

Raj: ahem…Aliya we are trying, isse zyada mujhse nehi hoga….

Tabhi they heard Arjun's voice on the mike: CONTROL CONTROL!!!

Raj and Pri turned to Aliya with an incredible look!! He's seriously doing that???????????? Stop him for god's sake!!!!

The other people in the unit were giggling too…..disgusting!

Rajeev angrily looked at Pri: dekha? tumhara idea tha na ki we declare our love, ab sambhalo!

Pri was smiling too: achha? aur, agar unhe pata nehi hota toh these smiles would have been different, samjhe Mr. buddhuram? Aur tum aise weirdly mujhe kiss kyon kar rahe ho? Thik se karo aur khatam karo scene ko

Raj was angry at Pri for teasing him: achha? tumhe proper kiss chahiye? Fir yeh lo

 

In anger he kissed her strongly, this time there was no hesitation, the scene was okayed!!!

 

It was time to wrap up their shooting in the jungle…

 

On their way back in the bus all were in happy mood, Rajeev and Pri sat together, holding each other's hands, with Prachi by their side

Vikas sat alone, he had not said a word to Priyanka, and has remained mostly aloof from the rest of the gang

Arjun, Kunal and Harshad were together, seeing Priyanka whispering something to Rajeev's ears Kunal smiled: they look so cute together, hai na?

Arjun: haan, they are perfect

Harshad: pata nehi, par I think they are a little filmy, I mean aise, in public…

Arjun: kyon tujhe koi problem hai?

Harshad: arey nehi, mujhe kya prob hai? After all it's their personal life

Arjun: yeh tera naya nara kya hai? Personal life ka

Harshad: my funda of life guys, I like to keep the professional and the personal apart from each other….

Their conversation was broken by a peal of laughter from Ghazal. They turned around at Ghazal, sitting with Malhotra, laughing aloud at something he had said

Kunal: Ghazal is getting quite close to Malhotra, huh?

Arjun: I don't like that guy

Then they looked at each other and said: after all PERSONAL LIFE hai

 

Ghazal's laughter attracted raj and pri's attention too

P: yeh ghazal malhotra ke saath kya kar rahi hai?

R: hmm…maine bhi dekha she is getting quite close

P: hume usse batana chahiye what kind of a guy he is

R: she might not believe u pri n might misunderstand u…don't worry she is a sensible girl, she'll soon understand herself

P: I hope so…(she said with a sigh)…I hope everybody understands things soon…(she said looking at vikas)

R noticed that: really pri, I wish vikas was as understanding as Aliya

P: Aliya?? Kyon?

R: look at her, she proposed to me and yet when she came to know about us she acted so maturedly……

P: Aliya had proposed to you????????????????????????

R: haan, didn't I tell u? oh I must have forgotten….

P: but she was absolutely cool about us…I mean she was not excited or anything but she didn't look she was hurt or something (p thought aloud, confused)

R: that's what I am saying, she's so mature

P: but that's absurd Rajeev….if u love someone….are u sure she was serious about you?

R: of course she was, but she's very mature

Priyanka kept silent, somehow she found it a little strange, Aliya didn't react like a woman in love, not at all, was it her maturedness or was there something else?

Suddenly she remembered: Rajeev where's that piece of paper?

Rajeev had forgotten about it, he quickly brought it out: oh god, we completely forgot about it, lets see what's written

Dono paper ko dekhte hai aur dekhke hairan ho jaate hai!!!

 

 

Scribbled on the paper were the words capt Arun Sharma

R: yeh kaun hai?

P: is he the same capt sharma that the galaxy shop owner's son had mentioned?

R: you are right, the name he had mentioned was captain Sharma, perhaps he's Prachi's dad, we need to find more information about him the moment we reach the academy

P:  and we need to be careful, the whole affair seems to be so mysterious….

R: yes no need to tell this to anybody, except perhaps Aliya

P: why Aliya?

R: array it's better to have another person in the team, after all she knows everything about the case

Priyanka didn't say anything, somehow she had started getting a strange feeling about Aliya and wasn't very sure if they should include her, but Rajeev seemed to have a lot of trust in her…..she didn't want to appear as a possessive girlfriend that would keep all girls away from her man…so she kept silent



Edited by george eliot - 02 June 2009 at 8:57pm
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Originally posted by litika

it was a fantastic update...cant wait till the next part!!!!!
THANK u so much dear, it's updated
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dear readers,
If u are reading my fic (silently) and haven't got a PM from me saying it's updated then please let me know, then i can send u the link every time i update, otherwise it's impossible to find it hereCryCryCry

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