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Posted: 03 September 2008 at 11:29pm | IP Logged

hi, i am the new one .aap ne likha tha ek note for ur silent readers. par mujhe nahin lagta k  mera is fic k liye kuch bhi likhna  sahi hoga. bcoz yahan par awsom ya phir mindblowing aisa kuch bhi likhna aap k liye bahat kum hoga, ur just superrrrrrrrrrbStar Star ur a star.....

george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 04 September 2008 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
[QUOTE=Shaina_b]

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Arjun aur Priyanka itna imporant discussion kar rahe hai aur issi waqt Vikas ko tapakna tha!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

hee hee bechare pe itna gussa mat hona, woh pyar karta hai Priyanka se
 
Vikas Priyanka ko dinner pe lejana chahta hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveAur usse zaroori baat bhi karni hai!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveYeh peecha kyun nahi chhodta!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry
 
kyonki usse ishq hua, bahut zor se hua, ab Rajeev idiot kuchh karega nehi toh aisa hi hoga, koi aur priyanka ko le jayega

Rajeev is now feeling bad for his behaviour with Priyanka!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile SmileThats good!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve 

kitna confuesd hai na banda, sooooooooooooo saaaaaaaad
He is remembering their conversation in the infirmary!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileHaaiii!!!Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
aag dono taraf laga hai, bas aag mein jalnewalo ko yeh pata chale tab na

Priyanka had said ke katro se akele larne se accha hai ke woh saath lare!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile She is right par yeh Rajeev samjhe tab naa!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

woh toh hum sab jante hai, par Rajeev ko kaun samjhayeAngryAngry 
Yeh Mr.Malhotra phir se unki training karwane waale hai!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryThats bad!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove
actually no, it's going to be actually good, we'll see why Wink

Aliya ke daant khane par Rajeev ne jab usse poocha toh phir Aliya Rajeev pe line mar rahi hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveO God!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

sirf line mar rahi hai???????????? woh toh haat dhokar peechee padi haiAngryAngryAngry ab bechari ka kasoor bhi kya hai, koi bhi Rajeev ko dekh ek fiad ho jaayeEmbarrassed
 
Accha huya Rajeev changed the topic!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve

Mr.Malhotra ko Raj aur Naina ke romance mein filmy dance aur ek do semi bed scenes chahiye!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Waise agar yeh dono off screen aisa kuch kare toh it willl be great!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

hee hee tujhe bhi yehi lagta hai, tab toh offscreen scenes dalna hi padega EmbarrassedLOLLOL tu zara help karna haan, i'll feel shy to write themLOL
 
 
Yahan tak toh theek tha Smile Smile Smile magar Huda aur Naina ki shaadi!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedThats preposterous!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry
 
 
producer ko ajeeb ajeeb ideas aate hai, par aisa film neib vi dikhaye toh main mar jayoongiCry

Woh toh isse Ekta ka serial banane pe tula huya hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

bilkul sahi kahan tune, Rajeev jitna ekta se bhagna chahta hain, utna hi ekta uske peeche a jata haiLOLLOL
Rajeev should put his foot down and demand to stick to the original script!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyAfter all he is the star in the film!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile
 
 
good idea, ruk rajeev ko bolti hun aisa hi kareTongue

Ish movie ko toh ab bhagwaan hi bachaye!!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused

Yeh Aliya toh Rajeev ko kuch bolne hi nahi deti!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryRajeev ko dinner pe leja rahi hai!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Great!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryJust great!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryEk taraf Vikas aur doosri taraf Aliya!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryEk taraf khai aur doosri taraf kuya!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyLife just can't get any better!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

he ehee don't get so angry dear, next update pad, dekhna sara gussa thanda ho jayega TongueTongue par haan cross connection hona bilkul achhi baat nehi hai, jaldi se in dono ko line pe lana padega
 
 
 
Arjun ne pata laga hi liya ke Rajeev ko Priyanka ke spying ke baare mein kuch nahi pata hai!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve

He is right!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileRajeev is not showing any intention of hiding Prachi!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused

Ab Prachi ki mom is feeling irritated ke how can Prachi's dad be so careless about her!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Akhir Prachi ko khatra hai!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Prachi's mom is much better tahn Prachi's dad, Prachi's dad should never keep teh child away from her mom
 
 
Arjun is right!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveShe should wait till Prachi's case is solved!!!!Smile Smile Smile
 
par kahi tab tak zyada der na ho jaayeConfusedOuch

But Priyanka now starts thinking ke aur kya wajaye ho sakti hai ke Rajeev is angry with her!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused

Ab yeh producer Yudi ko gay banana chata hai!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedYeh pagal ho gaya hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused Tongue Tongue Tongue

 
hee hee waise in reality the producers do make a lot of inordinate demandsOuch
 
Kunal is right!!!!Smile Smile SmileToh Bobby Darling ko bulayo aa!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
imagine bobby darling in lrlLOLLOLLOL

Kunal bilkul sahi keh raha hai!!!!!Smile Smile SmileAise toh uske future ka kabada ho jayega!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Priyanka wants tow warn Ghazal but Harshad is also right!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileThey should not interfere in someone else's privacy!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyHarshad is so cute!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedUsse toh khaane ke alawa aur kuch sujhta hi nahi hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Kya timing hai yeh scene shoot karne ka!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Rajeev aur Priyanka ka real life mein bhi ab kuch aisa hi situation hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyTheir situation did remind me of this and now they are shooting this part also!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

hai na???????? their reel and real lives are getting entwined with each other so much, ishiliye Priyanka will feel worried .later, she doesn't wnt the LRL story repeating in real lifeCry
 
Even Priyanka is thinking ke thats what is happening in real life now!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile SmileBut ab she connects and wonders whether thats the reason Rajeev is avoiding her!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile
 
 
reel and real life are so similar to each other, taht's why Pri wondered if that's teh caseOuchOuch

Aliya red saree pahenke taiyaar hoke jaa rahi hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryO no!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Rajeev ko kuch yaad aagya isse!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueI know what he remembered!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkWahi hai naa???Smile Smile Smile Smile

of course wohi hai, red saree se sirf usse hi nahi hum sabko wahi yaad ata haiEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
Rajeev is just too good!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileWoh Prachi ko bhi lekar jaraha hai saath mein!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Aliya ki so called date ki aisi ki taisi!!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveUska face toh dekhne layak tha!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

hee hee Rajeev is scared kahi Aliya usko akela pakar humla na kar deLOLLOLLOL
 
Waise agar Priyanka hoti naa toh Prachi ko khushi khushi saath lekar jaati!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rajeev aur rakho Prachi ko Aliya ke paas!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

 
next update mein dekh na, kaise Prachi becomes the main heroine of the night Big smileBig smile 
 
 
ab jaldi se next update padh aur comment de yaarTongue
 
 
 


Edited by george eliot - 04 September 2008 at 1:04pm
george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 04 September 2008 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by srojaleen

hi, i am the new one .aap ne likha tha ek note for ur silent readers. par mujhe nahin lagta k  mera is fic k liye kuch bhi likhna  sahi hoga. bcoz yahan par awsom ya phir mindblowing aisa kuch bhi likhna aap k liye bahat kum hoga, ur just superrrrrrrrrrbStar Star ur a star.....

 
 
thank you dear for your wonderful comment, you really made my day, par please aisa mat bolo that u r not worthy of commenting on thisCry i want to hear from you, your comments are precious to me, main bhi toh new writer hoon, i want my friends telling me if they liked my writing, aur agar bura lage toh bhi batanaTongue par batana zaroorTongue
lots of love
 
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Posted: 04 September 2008 at 2:46pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Priyanka Vikas ka birthday bhul gayi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueGood for her!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Vikas ne last time Priyanka ke liye midnight party organise kiya tha!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Vikas had been more than a friend to her!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapprovePar ab she is thinking whether she care for him in the same way or not!!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused

Priyanka ne yeh bhi notice nahi kiya ke Vikas ne ussi ki gift ki huyi shirt pehni hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueAnd this is also red!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveNow I am seeing red!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Things are not the same between them!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveToh Vikas kyun peeche pada huya hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryChhod kyun nahi deta uska peecha!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveHe behaves just like Huda!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Aliya ki red saree kharab ho gayi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueVery good!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveWaise bhi red saree yahan sirf ek hi par acchi lagti hai!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Aliya Rajeev ko blame kar rahi hai uski saari par nazar dalne ke liye!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedRajeev bhi kum nahi hai kehta hai ke uske saamne kabhi lal saree pehenke mat aana!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Rajeev bhi kehta hai ke shayad wakai uski nazar lag gayi thi!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Woh bhi kehta hai ke red saree sirf ek hi pe jachta hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Prachi also agreed with him!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueKhilkhilakar has uthi!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile So sweet!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileLagta hai usse pata chal gaya ke uski mom ki baat ho rahi hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

5 star restaurant aur itna sab kuch!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyI am smelling a rat!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Vikas ki girlfriend ne usse Priyanka ki wajah se chhod diya tha!!!!!Confused Confused Confused ConfusedVikas said he does not regret it because he got Priyanka!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

He kisses her hand!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryIski toh mai!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Ish waiter ki toh main!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryKehta hai ke Rajeev ki bhi bahut sweet family hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryIsko Rajeev,Priyanka aur Prachi ko saath mein dikhana padega tab isse pata chalega ke kisse kehte hai sweet family!!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

O no!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedRajeev ne Vikas ko Priyanka ka haath kiss karte huye dekh liya!!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchMar gaye!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyHe felt a pain in his heart!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileAahhhh thats good!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve

Priyanka's heart also started thumping loudly when she saw Rajeev!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Priyanka also felt a pain in her heart when she saw Rajeev and Aliya together!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileGreat!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve

Priyanka ne anjaane mein Vikas ko kya sahi jawab diya...IDIOT!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLBilkul sahi kaha!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveWoh idiot hi hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Rajeev ka dil kar raha hai ke woh Vikas ko ek punch mare!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHamare khayalat kitne milte julte hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile SmileMera dil toh humesha yehi karta hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile

Aliya ko haste huye dekhkar Priyanka is so jealous!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileJealousy toh pyaar ki nishaani hoti hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Priyanka ko lagta hai ke Rajeev usse avoid karke Aliya ke saath rehna chahta hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyO no!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Rajeev ko dikhane ke liye ab woh Vikas ke saath dance karne chali gayi aur Rajeev yeh sab dekh bhi raha hai!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

He is feeling miserable!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryUsse laga ke yeh sab Priyanka ne usse gussa ho kar kiya hai but then he is not sure!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused

Rajeev ko lagta hai ke Priyanka ne uski madat ki hai and Priyanka thinks it was maybe just gratitude!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchThings are really going from bad to worse!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Priyanka ne apne heels se Vikas ke pairon par stamp kiya!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLGood for her!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveChalo kuch toh accha kiya!!!!Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Lo ab sabke saamne Vikas ne propose bhi kiya!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryThings clearly can't get any worse!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Prachi started crying!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueKya timing hai!!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap ClapI love you for this Prachi!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Hug Hug Hug Hug

She wants to go to Priyanka!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueGood for her!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveShe wants to go to her mom!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileWoh apni mom ko thode hi kisi aur ke paas jaate huye dekh sakti hai siwaye uske papa ke!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Priyanka boldly walked to Rajeev and took Prachi in her lap!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueGood for her!!!!Smile SmileSmile Smile Smile

Akhir Prachi uski bhi uthni hi beti hai jitni woh Rajeev ki beti hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileWoh apni beti ko aise rote huye kaise dekhti!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Poor Priyanka!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryThings can't get any worse for her kyunki Vikas ne achanak itna serious sawal poocha aur woh bhi Rajeev ke saamne!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch  Ouch

Koi admi ne aakar Priyanka se poocha ki yeh bacchi kiski hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused ConfusedAnd he scribbled something on a paper and gave it to Priyanka saying that he knows what she is looking for and asked her to keep Prachi safe!!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedVery strange indeed!!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused

Prachi ne toh iske baad Priyanka ka saath hi nahi chhoda!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueGood for her!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rajeev bhi chup chap tha and he was angry at himself but is relieved too!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHaan bilkul!!Smile Smile Smile SmileSirf uski beti hi uske dil ki baat janti hai!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Priyanka is right!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveVikas ne aise sabke saamne tamasha kiya bina usse pehle pooche!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveAfter all they are public figures!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyHe is just impossible!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Vikas bhi Priyanka ko kaise bol raha tha ke asal baat yehi hai ke Rajeev waha tha!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveHe is behaving just like Huda!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryAccha hoga agar Huda aur Raj ka woh match bhi Aliya abhi shoot karle!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileNatural hoga!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink

Aur kya keh raha hai ke Priyanka poora naa toh nahi kar rahi hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryO God!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Vikas aur Priyanka ka room ab tak locked kyun hai??Confused Confused Confused ConfusedUsse dekh kar Rajeev ko laga ke Priyanka wil now properly say yes to Vikas when Prachi is not there to disturb them!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveHe again felt the sharp pain in his heart!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryBechara!!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Ab Aliya ne keh diya ki she has fallen in love with Rajeev!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveGreat!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyJust great!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Arre yeh Priyanka aur Rajeev ke beech ki misunderstandings toh badhti hi jaa rahi hai!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryJaldi se unhe ek karo naa!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 
george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 04 September 2008 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

thaaaaaaaaank youuuuuuuuuu sweetheart
 
Priyanka Vikas ka birthday bhul gayi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueGood for her!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile
bechare Vikas pe kuchh toh rehm kar, bechare ka birthday hai aaj Ouch
 
Vikas ne last time Priyanka ke liye midnight party organise kiya tha!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Vikas had been more than a friend to her!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapprovePar ab she is thinking whether she care for him in the same way or not!!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused

haan they were close to each other at some point of time, ab things have changed, lekin yeh Priyanka samjhe tab naConfused
 
Priyanka ne yeh bhi notice nahi kiya ke Vikas ne ussi ki gift ki huyi shirt pehni hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueAnd this is also red!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveNow I am seeing red!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry
 
 
heee hee hee hee, soooooooooooo funnyLOL

Things are not the same between them!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveToh Vikas kyun peeche pada huya hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryChhod kyun nahi deta uska peecha!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveHe behaves just like Huda!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

pyar karta hai bechara usse, Priyanka bhi toh kafi close thi uske, ab agar Priyanka palti khaye toh woh kya kare?ConfusedWink
 
 
Aliya ki red saree kharab ho gayi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueVery good!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveWaise bhi red saree yahan sirf ek hi par acchi lagti hai!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile
 
pata hai maine yeh part sirf tere liye likha hai, mujhe pata tha tu bahut khush hogi TongueTongueTongue
 

Aliya Rajeev ko blame kar rahi hai uski saari par nazar dalne ke liye!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedRajeev bhi kum nahi hai kehta hai ke uske saamne kabhi lal saree pehenke mat aana!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

rajeev ne finally keh hi diya, sach mein Aliya ko red saree pehenni hi nehi thiTongueTongue
 
Rajeev bhi kehta hai ke shayad wakai uski nazar lag gayi thi!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Woh bhi kehta hai ke red saree sirf ek hi pe jachta hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing
 
Prachi also agreed with him!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueKhilkhilakar has uthi!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile So sweet!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileLagta hai usse pata chal gaya ke uski mom ki baat ho rahi hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink
 
 
prachi ko toh main zor ka ek hug doon TongueTongue she's soooooooooo sweet and sooooooooo much more understanding, saitan sab janti haiTongueWinkWink rajeev bhi na, ek 3 saal ke bachhi jo janti hai, usko lekaar itna confused haiOuch

5 star restaurant aur itna sab kuch!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyI am smelling a rat!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Vikas ki girlfriend ne usse Priyanka ki wajah se chhod diya tha!!!!!Confused Confused Confused ConfusedVikas said he does not regret it because he got Priyanka!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

yaar vikas is deeply in love with pri
 
He kisses her hand!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryIski toh mai!!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry
 
 
shukr hai tu waha nehi thi, nehi toh borthday ke din peet jata becharaOuchLOLLOL

Ish waiter ki toh main!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryKehta hai ke Rajeev ki bhi bahut sweet family hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryIsko Rajeev,Priyanka aur Prachi ko saath mein dikhana padega tab isse pata chalega ke kisse kehte hai sweet family!!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

ab waiter ka kya kasoor, teeno aise ayenge tohAngry rajeev ki toh main, kya zaroorat thi Aliya ke saath aane kiAngryAngry tune sahi kahan agar Pri-Rajeev-Prachi ko dekhe toh he'll knwo what is a happy family
 
 
O no!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedRajeev ne Vikas ko Priyanka ka haath kiss karte huye dekh liya!!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchMar gaye!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyHe felt a pain in his heart!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileAahhhh thats good!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve
 
achha hi hai na, hone do uskp jealousLOLLOL
 

Priyanka's heart also started thumping loudly when she saw Rajeev!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Priyanka also felt a pain in her heart when she saw Rajeev and Aliya together!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileGreat!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve

kahan ha na aag dono taraf laga hai, jo haal dilka idhar ho raha hai, woh haak dilka udhar ho rah ahai
 
Priyanka ne anjaane mein Vikas ko kya sahi jawab diya...IDIOT!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLBilkul sahi kaha!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveWoh idiot hi hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL
 
 
poor thing yaar, mujhe Vikas se bahut sympathy haiOuchWinkLOL

Rajeev ka dil kar raha hai ke woh Vikas ko ek punch mare!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHamare khayalat kitne milte julte hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile SmileMera dil toh humesha yehi karta hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile Evil Smile

yehi tere liye hi likha hai maine, mujhe pata tha tujhe bahut maza ayegaLOLLOL
 
Aliya ko haste huye dekhkar Priyanka is so jealous!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileJealousy toh pyaar ki nishaani hoti hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Priyanka ko lagta hai ke Rajeev usse avoid karke Aliya ke saath rehna chahta hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyO no!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch

Rajeev ko dikhane ke liye ab woh Vikas ke saath dance karne chali gayi aur Rajeev yeh sab dekh bhi raha hai!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

He is feeling miserable!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryUsse laga ke yeh sab Priyanka ne usse gussa ho kar kiya hai but then he is not sure!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused

Rajeev ko lagta hai ke Priyanka ne uski madat ki hai and Priyanka thinks it was maybe just gratitude!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch OuchThings are really going from bad to worse!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

dont worry dear, things will be soon from worst to best , jealousy is good fro healthLOLWink
 
 
Priyanka ne apne heels se Vikas ke pairon par stamp kiya!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLGood for her!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveChalo kuch toh accha kiya!!!!Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Lo ab sabke saamne Vikas ne propose bhi kiya!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryThings clearly can't get any worse!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

 
baapre tu toh bahut upset ho gayiiiOuchOuch ab rajeev kuchh nahi karega toh aur koi akar chance marega na?
 
Prachi started crying!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueKya timing hai!!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap ClapI love you for this Prachi!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Hug Hug Hug Hug

She wants to go to Priyanka!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueGood for her!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveShe wants to go to her mom!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileWoh apni mom ko thode hi kisi aur ke paas jaate huye dekh sakti hai siwaye uske papa ke!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

kahan tha na prachi is the star of the evening, sahi mein kya timing hai, usse saaaaaab pata hai, jo kaam papa na kar paaye beti karke dikhayiClap
 
Priyanka boldly walked to Rajeev and took Prachi in her lap!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueGood for her!!!!Smile SmileSmile Smile Smile

Akhir Prachi uski bhi uthni hi beti hai jitni woh Rajeev ki beti hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileWoh apni beti ko aise rote huye kaise dekhti!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

bilkul, prachi aur priyanka ki bond bhi kya kam hai?TongueTongue
 
Poor Priyanka!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryThings can't get any worse for her kyunki Vikas ne achanak itna serious sawal poocha aur woh bhi Rajeev ke saamne!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch Ouch  Ouch

Koi admi ne aakar Priyanka se poocha ki yeh bacchi kiski hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused ConfusedAnd he scribbled something on a paper and gave it to Priyanka saying that he knows what she is looking for and asked her to keep Prachi safe!!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedVery strange indeed!!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused Confused

one step coser to solving the mystery, lets see what happens next
 
Prachi ne toh iske baad Priyanka ka saath hi nahi chhoda!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueGood for her!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rajeev bhi chup chap tha and he was angry at himself but is relieved too!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHaan bilkul!!Smile Smile Smile SmileSirf uski beti hi uske dil ki baat janti hai!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

hee hee, yeh bachhi sach mein bahut smart hai
 
Priyanka is right!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveVikas ne aise sabke saamne tamasha kiya bina usse pehle pooche!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveAfter all they are public figures!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyHe is just impossible!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry
 
 
awwwwwwwwwww itna gussa mat ho na uspeOuch becharaWinkLOL

Vikas bhi Priyanka ko kaise bol raha tha ke asal baat yehi hai ke Rajeev waha tha!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveHe is behaving just like Huda!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryAccha hoga agar Huda aur Raj ka woh match bhi Aliya abhi shoot karle!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileNatural hoga!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink

great idea, will surely put that in some update, thanks for the suggestionTongueTongueTongue
 
 
Aur kya keh raha hai ke Priyanka poora naa toh nahi kar rahi hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryO God!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Vikas aur Priyanka ka room ab tak locked kyun hai??Confused Confused Confused ConfusedUsse dekh kar Rajeev ko laga ke Priyanka wil now properly say yes to Vikas when Prachi is not there to disturb them!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveHe again felt the sharp pain in his heart!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryBechara!!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

good for him, he deserved thatAngryAngry for hurting pri n not confessing his loveAngryAngry
 
 
Ab Aliya ne keh diya ki she has fallen in love with Rajeev!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveGreat!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyJust great!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy
 
 
 
hee hee hee hee

Arre yeh Priyanka aur Rajeev ke beech ki misunderstandings toh badhti hi jaa rahi hai!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry CryJaldi se unhe ek karo naa!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

 
bas one more update and a lot of romantic things coming up after thatTongueTongue 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 
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Posted: 04 September 2008 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
episode 24:
 
The whole unit was called next day morning to the drill fields..all the actors had to practice some drills and combat skills with the real cadets, on Malhotra's demand. Captain Ranveer was their instructor and as they gathered there, they saw Iqbal, Nayanika, Huda and Pooja waving at them.

 

Rajeev was in a foul mood, he had a couple of fights from the morning. He looked at Priyanka standing at a distance, her face showed nothing…so did she say yes to Vikas last night? He tried looking for a ring in Priyanka's fingers…The thought had tortured Rajeev throughout the night, he felt extremely restless, he couldn't sleep…he felt strangely possessive about Priyanka, it was as if somebody was taking away his most valued possession…sleepless all night he realized how much he is in love with her…but perhaps she never thought of him that way…she is getting engaged to somebody else…he wished he could ask her at least once…he regretted all the rude behavior he has done to her…he has perhaps lost the faintest chance of bringing her close…uske upaar Aliya's confession, uff this is total madness

 

 

Priyanka felt a splitting headache standing there, she had not slept all night, thinking about Vikas' proposal…her mom had called her up to ask if she said yes, apparently both Vikas' mom and her mother knew about it, they were just waiting for the good news

Priyanka's mom had asked her with joy: toh tune haan bol diya na finally? Bechare bachhe ko finally birthday ke din tera haan mila

Priyanka couldn't say a word….

Her mom was going on talking about how she is planning her wedding, the dates to be fixed with the pandit…

It took her a while to stop her mom…: ma

P's mom: haan beta bol

P: ma maine usse haan nehi kahan

P's mom silent

P: maaaaaaa

P's mom: toh itne din jo tere aur Vikas ke beech mein tha who sirf tera khilwad tha?

P: nehi ma...pls samajhne ki kosish karo

P's mom: kya samajhe ne ki kosish karoon? Tune socha bhi hai uss bechare ki upar kya beet rahi hogi? Chhi chhi ab jab sab kuchh set hai tu na bol rahi hai????????

P: ma tab ki baat alag thi, tab sach mein Vikas aur main kafi close the....par aaj

P's mom: aaj kya?

P: pata nehi ma, aaj i don't feel the same way

P's mom: kyon? Koi aur a gaya kya tere zindagi mein

P silent

P's mom: main tujhse kuchh pooch rahi hoon, jawab de

P: shayad haan ma

P's mom: kaun hai who?

P: ma…pata nehi kyon…mera matlab hai…mujhe yeh bhi pata nehi who kya sochte hai…ma main kaise batau….ma I love Rajeev

She finally blurted out what had been eating her for all these days

 

P's mom(shocked): kaun Khandelwal? tere serial ka?

P: haan ma

P's mom: tera dimaag toh thik hai Pinki? Tujhse kitna bade hai who, Amna Shariff ke saath uska steady relationship hai, tu usse thik se janti bhi nehi, aur tu usse pyar karti hain?

P: ma please

P's mom: Pinki, pagalpan ki bhi koi hadd hoti hain, tu aaj hosh mein nehi hai, mujhe tujhse aur koi baat nehi karni

And she slammed the phone down

Priyanka heaved a sigh…she knew she would have to face it some day and face her true feelings sooner or later…what was she scared of? She had never felt like this for Vikas as she felt now for "him"…All night of soul searching has made her come face to face with the truth…she loved that man in black shirt standing there, perhaps oblivious of the turmoil going inside her, the man named Rajeev Khandelwal: once just a co actor but now a lot more…but does he even care for her, does he even think of her that way? The thought tortured Priyanka like a pest, she's putting at stake her emotions, the emotions of another man, family obligations…everything…everything for the man who doesn't even want to talk to her leave alone love her! Is there a greater fool than her?

 

Udhaar he couldn't take it anymore, seeing Priyanka made him restless than ever, he needed to talk to her, now…

 

Priyanka suddenly saw Rajeev coming towards her…she felt like her heart will burst out, she had had too much of an emotional turmoil all night, and now if he comes closer, she knows she will lose control completely…she looked around, the whole unit was there, Vikas was there…she couldn't dare to face him now, she knew it would be a scene if he comes any closer…Priyanka could't trust her control anymore…she needed to run away, she can't face him now, for God's sake….

 

Rajeev saw Priyanka saw him coming and went off from that place!! Why did she run away? A stunned Rajeev thought to himself…is she scared of my intentions?

 

Okay guys, get ready for the drill, we'll do the drill with the bars first, Ranveer's voice boomed across the field…

Ranveer appointed Nayanika to lead the drill, she came forward, smart and confident, and undoubtedly the ablest of the lot

Iqbal was whispering to Kunal standing by his side: ab matashri karke dikhayegi aur fir ek lamba sa speech maregi

Kunal: achha? she looks like a sweet girl, tumlog line nehi marte uske upar?

Iqbal: uske upar???????? Yeda hai kya? Waise bhi apun ko ladkiyan pasand nehi

Yeh sunkar Kunal hairan ho jata hai: ladkiyan pasand nehi..ky..kyon?

Iqbal: kyon matlab kya, academy mein jo hai sab ek ek namuna hai, naah apoon ko koi interest nehi ladkiyon mein, Iqbal looked at Kunal: apoon ko tujh jaisa ladke pasand hai, funny type ke, tu apoon ke saath drill ke baad coffee peene chalega?

Now Kunal was evidently scared: ham...hamara shooting hai iske baad

Iqbal: thik hai, tu karle shooting, humlog raat ko milte hai

Kunal: raat…raat ko?!!

Iqbal: haan, raat ko bhi shooting hai kya?

Kunal: nehi raat ko main jaldi so jata hoon…

Iqbal: tu kya mere se darta hai? Array main tapori sirf bolta hoon, taporiwala kaam nehi karta

Kunal: ok ok, baad mein dekhenge, abhi drill kare?

 

Rajeev's mood hit the worst...Priyanka's avoiding him had hit him hard..he felt more miserable than ever...certainly she doesn't care about me, he thought with a heavy heart…when called for the exercise Rajeev tried hanging from the bar but his wound started oozing out blood…

Ranveer: Mr Khandelwal, it's okay, you take rest, waise bhi you guys are not real soldiers, and anyway not all actors are serious about this drill

Ranveer's comment was directed towards Priyanka and Vikas, as he turned around to see them talking to each other at a distance, they had not joined the drill…

Rajeev's temper shot up seeing that…and Ranveer's comment felt like an insult

Rajeev: it's the dedication that matters Captain, whether you are a soldier or an actor

Ranveer: but listen…

Rajeev was fuming with anger, he continued with his drill…the cadets and his co actors saw how he went on with the drill with blood oozing out profusely from his bandage…at least this pain was lesser than the pain he was going through in his heart…

Aliya came running to him as he finished his drill and slumped on the ground

Aliya: are you okay Rajeev, yeh kya pagalpan hai?

Rajeev: Aliya please leave me alone

Aliya: oka baba ok, tum mujhse gussa ho pata hai, but don't take it out on yourself, waise bhi subah se tum sabse jhagra kar rahe ho

Rajeev got up without looking at her, he knew he had over reacted, and he felt ashamed for losing his temper

 

On the other hand all the real cadets were clapping for him

Ranveer: I like your spirit man, you are a true soldier material par filhaal tum actor hi bane raho, by the way I didn't mean it that way

Rajeev felt ashamed of losing his temper, he smiled and looked down

All the cadets had left except cadet Pooja…

Rajeev: kya baat hai, kuchh kehna hai aapko?

Cadet pooja: nehi bas yehi poochna tha apne yeh kaise kiya? aapko pehle se yeh sab drill karne ki aadat thi?

Rajeev: nehi cadet

Pooja: hmm ab samjhi, tab toh fir aap ko zaroor dil pe chot laga hai

Rajeev: kyaa?????

Pooja: haan aise khoon behte hue koi aisa tabhi kar sakta hai jab ya toh woh sach mein soldier ho, ya fir pyar mein ghayal ho

Rajeev: stop it cadet

Cadets, Ranveer called out again, ready for the next drill

 

Priyanka couldn't see what was happening there, Vikas had kept her busy, asking her what they should tell their mothers and totally distracted her…when she heard the commotion, she knew it was something concerning Rajeev--- the cadets, Aliya and Captain had gathered there, but she didn't know if she should go too…she felt extremely restless

At the end of the drills she caught hold of his spotboy

Priyanka: achha suno Rajeev ji ko kuchh hua kya? Kahan hai woh?

Spotboy: woh dekhiye udhar baitha hai, pata nehi ma'am aaj unka mood kuchh zyada hi kharab hai…

Priyanka: achha? kyon?

Spotboy: pata nehi ma'am subah se mood kharab hai, dialogues ke file ready nehi hai bolkar mere upar chillaye, who kabhi mujhse bura bartaw nehi karta…fir date ko lekaar manager se kuchh hungama ho gaya unka, phone par pata nehi kispar chilla rahe the, aur ab drill mein zabardasti action karne gaye toh khun behne laga…pata nehi kya ho gaya hai unhe aaj…main abhi ja raha hoon unke paas, pata nehi fir se na chilla de…

Priyanka soch mein pad jati hai: achha suno…

Sb: yes ma'am

Priyanka: yeh unko de dena, lekin batana mat maine diya hai, she took out a bar of Cadbury's from her bag

Rajeev's bedside table is full of chocolates, and not all was for Prachi, Priyanka could make that out

 

The spotboy went and gave the chocolate to him, he was surprised

R: yeh kya hai?

Sb: sir…sir cho—chocolate

R: woh toh mujhe bhi dikh raha hai, lekin kyon?

Sb: ss..sir…aapka mood thik karne ke liye, maine laya

R: tumhe kisne kahan chocolate se mera mood thik ho jayega? Sach sach batao yeh kisne diya tumhe? Aliya ne?

Rajeev looked angrier than ever, his face was red and he was staring straight at Kumar

Kumar: please sir main kuchh nehi janta Priyanka ji ne mujhe yeh dene ko kaha lekin aapko itna aitraz hai toh main fenk deta hoon I am sorry mujhe pata nehi tha…

Rajeev: ok ok stop it, Priyanka ne kya kahan?

Kumar: kuchh nehi, bas aapko yeh dene ke liye boli aur..... boli thi aapko na batau

Rajeev: hmmm, achha ek baat batao tumne Priyanka ji ke haath mein koi ring dekha?

Kumar: kya sir?

Rajeev: ring ring, angoothi, left hand pe?

Kumar: nehi sir…par dekh ke ayoon? Kaisa ring Sir?

R: leave it (he felt stupid asking that question)

Kumar: nehi Sir main dekh ke ata hoon

R: Kumar ruko…

 

Kumar tab tak ja chuka hota hai…

Kumar goes and stands near Priyanka, observing her hands

P: kya baat hai? Kuchh kehna hai?

K(still looking st her hands) : nehi yehi bolne aya ta ki maien chocolate de diya

P: woh toh meine dekha, tumne usse bataya toh nehi maine diya hai?

K: nehi ma'am

P: good

K: ok ma'am kaam ho gaya

P: kaisa kaam

K: kuchh nehi bas

 

He comes jumping back to Rajeev: mila sir mila

R: kya?

K: ring mila Sir, woh pehni hui hai, ek sundar sa diamond ring, maine dekh liya

He was jumping with joy at his success

"Enough Kumar,get the file," snapped Rajeev with an angry voice

Tabhi Aliya comes there: Rajeev tumhara gussa thanda ho gaya ho toh ek kaam ki baat karoon? Kal hum sab jungle scenes shoot karne jayenge, forest ranger se permission mil gaya, we'll stay there for two days and wrap up our shooting

Rajeev: jungle mein? Hum sab?

Aliya: haan aur kahan, we'll leave tomorrow morning, main poori unit ko khabar karti hoon, u be ready

 

Somehow Rajeev felt nice hearing about going to the jungle, something inside him told him this trip is going to be important in his life.

 
Rajeev: okay, aaj shooting mein kya hai?

Aliya: aise pooch rahe ho jaise dinner mein kya hai!! dekhte hain, abhi toh paramilitary training chal raha hai…Priyanka is doing quite well, she improved a lot from last time

Rajeev turned around to see Priyanka sweating out in the drills, her face looked grave and tired, he remembered the chocolate and smiled to himself…he was proud of his Pri.

 

After drill they needed to shoot some scenes with Vikas and Priyanka, after all it was the producer's idea that they have a proper love triangle with Pri, Raj and Vikas. Vikas had to propose to Priyanka, and Priyanka would say I love Rajveer Sir

 

Camera rolling…

Vikas proposes, love in his eyes

And Priyanka looks at him intensely and says: nehi Huda, main sirf Rajeev sir se pyar karti hoonLOL

 

Aliya okayed the shot

Malhotra looks at Aliya stunned

Aliya: it's okay, we'll fix that in sound editing

Rajeev looked at priyanka in disbelief…Vikas looked at her in disbelief too: tune kya bola?

Priyanka: kyon??

Vikas just repeated what she said, instantly Pri turned to see Rajeev staring at her in disbelief

And she felt like sinking in the ground…. Embarrassed

KRIZZY Senior Member
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Posted: 05 September 2008 at 12:23am | IP Logged
fantastic yaar
it was a awesome ud
and now raj and pri both hav realised dat they love each other
fantastic
and priyanka saying that she only love RAJEEV was very nice
akhir dil ki baat zubaan pe aa hi gai
i loved the ud
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Hi!!!!
How are u?????
Oh !!!What an update!!!!ClapClapClap
Too Good!!!
Loved it when Raj was feeling jealous.....
Toh akhir zubaan par dil ki baat a hi gayi!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Fabulous Update.
Continue soon.
 
 
 
 
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