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george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 29 August 2008 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

to update karo baba.
 
tu apna chahat update kar pehle Tongue, haan karoongi, abhi likha maine restuarant scenesTongue too eager to share it with all of u, par thoda intezaar karTongue, thodi editing karni hai

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Posted: 29 August 2008 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by george eliot

Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

to update karo baba.
 
tu apna chahat update kar pehle Tongue, haan karoongi, abhi likha maine restuarant scenesTongue too eager to share it with all of u, par thoda intezaar karTongue, thodi editing karni hai
yaar ek din me kitne update doon mai?ConfusedConfused
abhi diya hai ek update ab doosra kal doongi na.ShockedShocked
george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
EPISODE 23:
 
Vikas keeps looking at Priyanka as they both sit in the car

Priyanka: kya hua? Chalna nehi hai?

Vikas smiles

Pri: array!!!!!

Vikas: tu bhul gayi na? Bilkul?

Priyanka: kya? Kya bhula maine?

Vikas: aaj date kya hai bata

Priyanka: kyon?

Vikas: tu bata na, khud hi pata chal jayega

Priyanka: hmm, aaj shayad february 10th hai, hai na?

Vikas is still looking at her and smiling

Priyanka: toh kya hua?................oh my God! Oh my God!

Vikas: yaad aya?

Priyanka: goshhhh Vikas, how can I forget it?!!!!!!!! It's your birthday!!

Vikas: yes darling

 

Priyanka felt extremely bad, how could she forget his birthday?!! Last time Vikas had arranged a midnight party on her birthday, she was woken up from sleep with flowers and cakes, it was such a pleasant surprise'aur usse yaad bhi nahi aaj Vikas ka birthday hai! Na koi gift na kuchh, sara din beet gaya ek birthday wish bhi nehi kiya usne'she felt like disappearing with shame

 

Pri: I am so sorry Vikas, she said with a genuine regret in her voice, pata nehi kaise bhul gayee'

Vikas looked sadly at her: it's okay Priyanka, pata hai tu kisi cheez ko lekar pareshaan hai, par tu toh mujhe kuchh batati hi nehi...tu mujhse dur hoti ja rahi hai Priyanka

 

Pri: aisi koi baat nehi hai, hum abhi bhi best friends hai na?

 

Vikas: mujhe nehi lagta'.tu mujhse dur hoti ja rahi hai Pri'aaj toh bol kya baat hai, aisa kya ho gaya tere aur mere beech?

 

Priyanka felt very uncomfortable, Vikas's questions made her think of things she tried to forget'and perhaps she was scared to face'she felt guilty too, it's true Vikas had been more than a friend to her, at least before the shooting started'but now? Does she care about him in the same way?

 

Vikas smiled again seeing her silent: chhod, tu nehi batayegi na? dekh tu kitni kam khayal rakhti hai mera'maine kaun sa shirt pehna hai yeh bhi notice nehi kiya, na?

 

Priyanka noticed his red shirt and remembered, it was the same shirt she had gifted him for his last birthday''she heaved out a sigh'things are certainly not the same between them'

 

Udhar jaise hi Aliya and Rajeev came out of the academy gate, a car went by, splashing muddy water at Aliya's red saree!

Aliya: ewwwww, he bhagwan poori bheeg gayee

Rajeev: are you okay? Of ho yeh log bhi na, ab kya karoge? Change karna padega na?

Aliya: of course change karna padega, this is disgusting, tum car mein ruko main change karke aati hun

Rajeev: hmmmmm ab koi doosri color ki saree pehenke ana

Aliya: haan, sab tumhare wajah se hua hai, mere lal saree pe nazar dal diya tumne

Rajeev: hahahaha, ab yaad rakhna, mere samne kabhi lal saree mat pehen na

Aliya: kyon? Saand ho kya? bewaja der ho gayi, tum ruko main abhi ayi

Aliya rushed inside the gates...Rajeev man hi man sochta hain

'Sach mein Aliya, shayad sach mein tumhare red saree par nazar lag gaya, kyon ki red saree sirf ek pe hi jachta hai, hai na Prachi?'

Kucch samjhe na samjhe, Prachi yeh sunkar khilkhilar haas uthti hain! Prachi has been in a great mood today'this was the first time Rajeev had taken her out of the guest house and the sets and she had enjoyed every bit of it'Prachi grew excited as they passed through the academy garden and gates, she was almost jumping in his lap'poor kid, how she must have died to go out'

 

 

Priyanka and Vikas reach a five star restaurant in the outskirts of the town. Jaise hi dono gaari se utarte hai, they are taken inside with special treatment

Priyanka: kya baat hai Vikas, in logo ko bhi pata hai kya ki aaj tera birthday hai?

Vikas just smiles and doesn't say anything

They are taken inside and given a special table at the 2nd floor of the restuarant; Priyanka could see all the other people sitting there in the floor below them, only theirs was a special table decked with flowers and candles in a floor above everybody else.

 

Priyanka: tune itna sab kuchh arrangement kiya hai? Mujhe laga hum aise ki ja rahe hai dinner ke liye'

Vikas: kya karoon bol, kisiko agar mera birthday yaad nehi toh khud hi yeh sab karna padta hai..

Priyanka: please Vikas, mujhe aur guilty feel mat karwa, I am reaaaaly sorry, achha bata tujhe kya gift chahiye bol, let that be my compensation

Vikas: mujhe jo chahiye tu degi mujhe?

Priyanka: bilkul, anything for you, tu bolke toh dekh

Vikas: thik hai, aaj hi maang lunga...achha filhal toh khana ka order dete hai, tere liye woh penne with vodka sauce and capicola bol doon? Yahan milta hai

Priyanka: tujhe yaad hai?

Vikas: haan yaad nehi hoga? Mr. aur Miss TV ke shooting pe uss Italian restaurant se roz khati thi, fir kisi aur restaurant mein itna achha nehi mila

Priyanka: array haan usi show ke dauran tere girlfriend tujhe chhod diya than a? hee hee

Vikas: tere wajah se...I don't regret that, he keeps his hand on hers, and kisses it, 'I am glad I got you''

 

Before Priyanka could take her hand away she sees Rajeev and Aliya entering the restaurant...and she freezes there...

 

Rajeev: aha, good choice, I like this place, chalo upaar jaake baithe?

Waiter: sorry sir, that floor is booked, we have a special place for you  too Sir

Rajeev: achha? upar bhi special guests?

Waiter: haan bada hi romantic couple hai, waise aaplogo ki bhi bahut sweet family hai

Rajeev: hmm, ok chalo baithte hain

He sits facing the top floor and then...suddenly he spots Priyanka and Vikas sitting there...

 

Priyanka's heart started thumping loudly as she saw Rajeev, Vikas was sitting with his back to the entrance, only she could see them...Aliya had dressed up in a gorgeous black salwar, they had also brought Prachi and looked like a happy family.

 

Rajeev couldn't take his eyes off them'romantic couple huh? They have booked the entire floor just for themselves'Vikas seemed like kissing Priyanka's hand and she was sitting there without protest...Rajeev felt a pain in his heart'

 

"kaise dekh raha hai Rajeev Aliya ko..." Priyanka thought...she was indeed looking too beautiful, "Rajeev seemed to be oblivious of his surroundings, his whole attention was directed towards Aliya" Priyanka felt a sharp pain in her chest

 

Vikas: tu kya soch rahi hai? Achha ek baat sach sach batayegi please? What do you think of me as a person?

Priyanka was feeling a mixture of emotions: anger, frustration, jealousy..she kept looking at Rajeev with the corner of her eye: IDIOT she said aloud

Vikas: kyaa?

Pri: kya kyaa?

Vikas: aaj mere birthday ke din tu mujhe idiot bula rahi hai?

Pri felt embarrassed: nehi nehi tujhe nehi'

Vikas: mujhe nehi toh kya tu apne aap ko idiot bol rahi thi?

 

 

 
Cut to Rajeev-Aliya:

Waiter: okay madam, aur kuchh?

Aliya: nehi bas, dessert baad mein order karenge

As the waiter left Rajeev muttered under his breath: smart boy huh? Man kar raha hai ek punch maroo

he was still fuming over the sight of Vikas kissing Priyanka's hands..

Aliya: kyaaaaa? Bechare waiter ko kyon marna chahte ho? Kya kiya usne?

Rajeev comes back to his senses: array nahi waiter nehi'mera matlab...

Aliya(laughing): kisko ghusa marne ka man kar raha hai janab?

Rajeev: kuchh nehi, jaldi se khana khakar chalo chalte hai

Aliya: arrey tumhare mood ko kya hua?

Rajeev: uff Aliya, tum bahut sawal karte ho, kya kya order kiya?

 

 

"Aha..Aliya was laughing out ...zaroor kuchh funny hua hoga, very good, enjoy your dinner, sirf mere upar chillana mat bhoolna" Priyanka thought angrily. She felt stupid to feel jealous and it made her more angry..."toh mujhe avoid karke woh Aliya ke saath rehna chahta hai, very good, go ahead, I don't give a damn"

Sochte sochte Priyanka suddenly gets up

Vikas: kya hua tujhe?

Priyanka: chal dance karte hain

Vikas: wow, my pleasure, thanks dear

Priyanka pulls Vikas up and hold his shoulder and hand'the whole floor is theirs and she takes him to an area where the lights are dim'but all the while facing Rajeev's table, looking at him from the corner of her eye'

 

 

A couple of people recognized Rajeev and asked for his autograph, but his whole attention was directed towards the upper floor'

 
"Hmm ab "romantic couple' dance karne lage! Dono kitne paas paas dance kar rahe hai...idhar toh media se bolte ho "we are just good friends"Rajeev thought. He had seen Priyanka asking Vikas for a dance and he felt miserable..."kya yeh sab woh mujhse gussa hokar kar rahi hai? itna bhi nehi samajhti ki main kyon tumhe dur rakhna chahta tha...ab tum sach mein mujhse dur ja rahe ho" suddenly Rajeev's jealousy was replaced my a sense of sadness...he doesn't even know Priyanka's feelings...how could he even presume things...what has happened between them? Nothing...she had just helped him, nothing else....perhaps she loves Vikas.....

 

"All Rajeev's niceties were perhaps because she had helped him and Prachi...perhaps it was just gratitude...nothing else"Priyanka thought with a heavy heart

 
Ouch ouch, Priiiiiiiiii, Vikas screamed out

Pri: kya, kya hua?

Vikas: tu apne high heel se mere pair ka satyanash kar diya'ouch

Pri: oh I am sorry, I didn't realize I was stepping on you'

Vikas: baapre what a birthday gift, chal baba baithte hai'abhi 8.30 bajnewale hai

Pri: kyon 8.30 baje kya hai?

Vikas: a surprise for you and time for my birthday gift

 

The clock strikes 8.30 and suddenly all the lights in the hall go off'then a light blue light falls from above just on Pri and Vikas' table, everybody turned around to look at them with surprise and tabhi we hear a voice:

 

Ladies and gentlemen'we are pleased to inform you about a special event being held here. We have among us the famos actors Vikas Manaktala and Priyanka Bassi, who are the special guests of the evening, we have another celebrity guest too'however it's Vikas' birthday today and what makes it more special is this big event coming up'.

 

Priyanka looks in utter surprise at Vikas sitting on his knees in front of her'he held out a ring for her and said:

"I love you Priyanka, will you be mine?"

Priyanka hides her face with her hands in utter shock

 

Everybody claps thinking that it's Priyanka's way of saying yes and tabhi the whole hall hears a child crying out loudly as if it had been attacked by someone

 

Lights are put on immediately, Prachi is screaming out loudly, her hands stretched out towards Priyanka!!

She had seen Priyanka the moment the lights were put off and the blue light had been focused on her...she had stretched out her hands for her, cooed out at her and Rajeev had tried to shut her up, holding her hands down tightly and finally scolded her...but that was too much for her...she loved Priyanka and she had missed her for the last few days and now with Rajeev's scolding she wanted to go to Priyanka, now....

 

All eyes were turned to Prachi now, she was crying her lungs out, Rajeev tried in vain to stop her...the whole hall was looking at her'the manager and some of the staff came to attend them, some people who hadn't noticed Rajeev, Priyanka and Vikas till now, surrounded them too...here Prachi was inconsolable; she wanted Priyanka, right now!

 

Priyanka got over her shock and she came down to Prachi'she didn't care what Rajeev would say to her'she loved the child immensely and couldn't bear to watch the child crying like that for her'indeed they had grown a deep bond: feeding her, playing with her, putting her to sleep, she had almost become her daughter too as much as she was Rajeev's'Priyanka walked down boldly in front of a gaping Vikas, the people and an embarrassed Rajeev and took Prachi in her lap! And Prachi stopped crying immediately!!

 

Priyanka took Prachi to the terrace adjoining the restaurant, Vikas had wanted to join but she had asked him to sit'she wanted some time alone'she held Prachi close to her and felt like crying"oh God what is all this happening, kya trouble kafi nehi tha ki Vikas achanak serious sawal poochne lage...aur Rajeev ne sab dekha"

 

Suddenly she felt someone standing behind her...she turned around and saw a rugged looking old man, looking at her intently: who's this kid? He asked in a gruff voice

Priyanka felt a little scared, she was alone with Prachi'she could see Rajeev through the glass door, looking at her'she tried to signal him'

Priyanka: mere dost ke beti hai

Man: jhooth mat bolo, sach sach batao, yeh bachhi tumhe kahan mili?

Priyanka was evidently scared now: I am telling you, she's my friends daughter'she said in a nervous voice

The man scribbled something on a piece of paper and gave it to her: I know what you are looking for, keep this, and don't show this to anybody'and yes keep the kid safe

He said and went away from the terrace

 

A terrified Priyanka came back to her table. Prachi refused to leave Priyanka for the rest of the time they were there'Priyanka and Vikas ate their food quietly with Prachi by their side'people had congratulated them but she had not spoken a word about his proposal after getting back to their table, and Vikas sulked immensely'he looked at Priyanka's face and didn't dare to ask her anything'

 

Rajeev and Aliya ate their food in silence too'Aliya tried to crack some jokes but Rajeev was non responsive'he was angry with himself for bringing Prachi and making himself a public nuisance'and yet he could not help feeling relieved too'after all only his daughter knew his innermost desires'

 

After an hour both the pairs were leaving'Priyanka passed over a sleeping Prachi to Rajeev, he could only utter a feeble thank you, Priyanka didn't answer him'Rajeev kept looking at a Priyanka's grave face'he did mess up the evening for her'he also wanted to ask her about the old man he had seen talking to her, she did seem like signalling him something through the glass door, but before he could go, she was back to her table'

 

Vikas pulled the car in front of the academy gates and looked at Priyanka': please Priyanka, aaj ke din toh mujhse gussa mat ho

Priyanka: do you even know what you have done (she said coldly)

Vikas: I love you Priyanka and I wanted to make it the most romantic proposal

Priyanka: without even asking me before??? A public drama like that??? Mujhse toh pehle pooch liya hota ki main tumse pyar karti hoon ya nehi!!!

Vikas: wohi toh poochha

Priyanka: aise? Sab logo ke samne tamasha karke? Vikas tum shayad bhul jaate ho ki humlog public figures hai, hamare har ek harkat par media ki nazar hai

Vikas: thik haai, ab toh public nehi hai, sirf tu aur main, ab toh mere sawal ka jawab de

Priyanka: tumhare sawal ka jawab nehi hai mere paas, i am too angry now, yun sabke saamne...Rajeev bhi wahan the...

Vikas: toh yehi asli baat hai, real life mein ab reel life ka influence ho raha hai

Priyanka: please Vikas mujhe tumse kuchh behs nehi karni, raat ho chuki hai, good night and a very happy birthday

Vikas: (smiling sadly) sahi mein happy birthday hi hai, mujhe mera gift bhi mil gaya

 

Now Priyanka felt bad, perhaps she was too rude to him, she lowers her voice and said softly: Vikas I am sorry, I didn't mean to hurt you but trust me main sach mein tujhe abhi koi answer nehi de payoongi

Vikas: chal thik hai, kam se kam tu poora na toh nehi kar rahi hai'

Priyanka: i don't know Vikas what to say

Vikas: you don't have to tell me anything now, just look into your heart and see, I'll wait for your answer'

 

 

Rajeev Prachi ko room mein sulakar Aliya ko darwaze tak chodne aate hai'he saw both Vikas and Priyanka's room locked, that means they are still out, spending time with each other'and perhaps Priyanka will properly say yes to Vikas now that there's no Prachi to disturb their moment'he felt the sharp pain in his heart again

 

Aliya: goodnight Rajeev

Rajeev: goodnight Aliya

Aliya: by the way ek baat poochhoo tumhe Rajeev?

Rajeev: haan bolo na

Aliya: tumhe kya main zyada chipku lagti hoon? Ki yeh ladki hamesha gale pad jaati hai

Rajeev felt uncomfortable: aisa kyon bol rahi ho Aliya?

Aliya: (looking at him intently) nehi Rajeev I don't want to impose myself on you'yes it's true I have fallen in love with you,I want you, but I will never force myself on you'at least take me as your good friend, I want nothing else'goodnight

And she shut the door on a stunned Rajeev's face!!

  guys just a small request, if you are a silent reader of my fic and you don't comment...it's okay...bas just let me know at least one time that you r reading my fic, bas ek baar let me know if u are a reader, i won't ask you to comment again....
 i see many views but lesser n lesser responses n it confuses me whether the same people r reading it or r there more people tooConfusedConfused
also i should also know if i m doing an awful job in trying my hand in fanficsLOLLOLLOL
 
love u alllllllllll


Edited by george eliot - 30 August 2008 at 9:04pm

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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
Hi dear
It was one of the best updates ...I just love the pain ,jelousy n love in your update..Vikas loves Pri n Aliya loves Rajeev N rajeev n Pri love each other..Too much of a confusion...Who was dat old man?????
I love the way in which Vikas proposed Pri but dat was all spoiled by Prachi.
She knows dat her dad likes her..Why the hell Rajeev is not talking to Pri so dat all misunderstandings can b cleared..
u r 1 of the best writers here so dont ever think dat u shudn't have tried hands in writing.
 
waiting for another update..
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Posted: 30 August 2008 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
wow both RP r feeling jealous.they both deserve this.ok now plz cont soon n clear the misunderstandings b/n dem soon.........
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Posted: 31 August 2008 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Wow!!!What an update dear.!!!!!!!!!!!!ClapClapThumbs Up
simply loved it.Smile
Raj and Pri getting jealous!!!!!!Embarrassed
Aliya is definitely fishy.DeadAngry
She seems to be too much interested in Raj.AngryAngry
Raj and Naina are upset Unhappy
Jaldi se misunderstandings clear kar dena plzzzzzzzBig smile
Too Good.
Update soon......
Take care


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Posted: 31 August 2008 at 8:31am | IP Logged
damn cool
update soon
long asap
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Posted: 31 August 2008 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by suhana_dixit

Hi dear
It was one of the best updates ...I just love the pain ,jelousy n love in your update..Vikas loves Pri n Aliya loves Rajeev N rajeev n Pri love each other..Too much of a confusion...Who was dat old man?????
I love the way in which Vikas proposed Pri but dat was all spoiled by Prachi.
She knows dat her dad likes her..Why the hell Rajeev is not talking to Pri so dat all misunderstandings can b cleared..
u r 1 of the best writers here so dont ever think dat u shudn't have tried hands in writing.
 
waiting for another update..
 
Thank you sooooooooooooooooooo much dear, you made my dayTongue yes everybody loves everybody else, just reminds me of midsummer night's dreams Tongue perhaps we need soem love juice to make Aliya and Vikas fall in love with each other LOLLOL
 
haan Vikas toh puri taiyari ke saath field pe utra tha, par kya kare, man proposes Prachi disposes LOLLOL
after all Rajeev ki beti hai, apne papa ke dil ki baat janti haiTongueEmbarrassed
 
Rajeev will try to talk to Pri in the next update, but these people are going thru extreme emotional turmoils, we might not see the desired results...Confused
but don't worry, u don't have to wait tooo long for a face to face confession for these twoTongue
so please keep reading
lots of love
muaah


Edited by george eliot - 31 August 2008 at 9:03am

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