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Reel & Real life:(RN): 2 remaining updates posted (Page 40)

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Posted: 25 August 2008 at 7:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gazal_sameer

too good
what a update
\update asap
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hello dear friend, thank u so much for ur first comment, ab please comment karna bandh mat karna, i want to know ur response
here's my new update for u, hope u like it

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Posted: 25 August 2008 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Kahan ho yaar?

update to karo na.

 
bas abhi kar rahi hoonBig smile
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Posted: 25 August 2008 at 7:49am | IP Logged
episode 22:
 
Arjun: tu information de rahi thi yeh bhi usne bata diya kya?

Pri: nehi usne source ka naam secret rakha, lekin usse kya fark padta hai...information toh leak out ho gaya na?

Knock knock, Priyanka and Arjun turn and see Vikas entering the van. He looks surpisingly at both of them…they had to stop their conversation abruptly…

Arjun: Priyanka main chalta hoon, u take care we'll talk later….

Priyanka: ok

They make eye signals at each other…seeing this Vikas becomes serious.

Vikas: Pri aaj shaam ko tu free hai?

Pri: haan…kyon?

Vikas: tujhe dinner pe le jayoonga, ek bahut achha restaurant hai yahan

Pri: woh thik hai, shaam ko dekhenge

Vikas looks at her with determination: mana mat karna Pri, tujhse zaroori baat karna hai

 

 

The team gathers for a post lunch session shooting, Rajeev was still thinking about his rude behavior to Priyanka, "usse kitna bura laga hoga" Rajeev thought with a heavy heart…he remembered their conversation in the infirmary when he had hugged her seeing her unhurt…

Rajeev: Priyanka tum mujhse ek promise karo

Pri: kya...

Rajeev: please keep yourself from all these...this is too dangerous

Priyanka had looked up and looked into his eyes…then smiled

Priyanka: Rajeev tum bhi toh khatre mein ho, main kaise tumhara saath chhod dun?

Rajeev: par Pri…

Priyanka: kuchh par nehi, khatro se akela larne se achha hai hum saath mein lade…….

 

His reminiscence is broken when he heard Aliya getting scolded by Mr.Malhotra

Malhotra: action scenes ke liye actors ka actual paramilitary training kyon nehi ho raha hai?

Aliya: woh actually actors ke liye training zyada bhari pad raha tha…

Malhotra: what nonsense! I want the training to begin from tomorrow…kal se roz ek ghante ke liye the actors should learn the actual military techniques along with the cadets of this academy…I'll take Br.Suryakant's permission

Aliya: okay sir…

 

 

Aliya looked evidently disgusted, Rajeev comes up to her

Rajeev: Malhotra scolded you, why didn't you tell him that it was me who asked you to stop the training

Aliya: please Rajeev, tum already itne pareshaan ho

Rajeev: fir bhi mere liye tumhe daant khane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Aliya looked at him with meaningful eyes: some day you'll understand that…

 
Rajeev felt uncomfortable…Aliya had been trying to convey something to him for quite some days…he didn't know if was her way of joking but whatever it is he didn't want to hear it…he quickly changed the topic.
 

Rajeev: ok ok…achha aur kya bol raha tha Malhotra

Aliya flared up: bas poochho mat…Malhotra apne tarike se film chalana chahta hai…usse lagta hai script zyada filmi nehi hai, usse aur filmy cheez chahiye!!!

Rajeev: jaise?

Aliya: jaise Raj Naina romance mein filmy dance, ek do semi bed scenes……..

Rajeev: kyaaaaaaaa??????????

Aliya: aur nehi toh kya!!!! Unka kehna hai Raj Naina mentorship program mein camp mein saath saath rehte hai, ek doosre se pyaar karte hai, aur kuchh hota nehi hai??????

Rajeev: what nonsense! Please Aliya don't kill the story, isse Ekta ke serial jaisa mat banao!!

Aliya: main kya karoon, aage aage dekho na story mein kya kya twists ata hai! Huda ke saath Naina ka shaadi ho jata hai, Raj ki yaddash chali jaati hai, fir dono ekdin milte hai, he needs twists in the story……oh God…disgusting…I really need a break…achha suno aaj shaam ko kya kar rahe ho?

Rajeev: kuchh khaas nehi, kyon?

Aliya: great! Toh hum dinner ke liye chalenge, yahan pe ek bahut achha restaurant hai

Rajeev: array par…

Aliya: kuchh par war nehi…we are going

 

Priyanka was dying to talk to Arjun…their conversation was left incomplete…she had wanted to ask for advice…should she go and apologise to Rajeev now? Of course she needed to say sorry…she will explain why she did it…and perhaps things will be alright…

But no! no she didn't dare to meet him again…perhaps she should write a letter to him…

Priyanka thinks of doing it right then when Arjun comes to her, taking her to the corner of the sets

Arjun: mujhe nehi lagta Rajeev ko tere spying ke baare mein pata hai (he said in a whisper)

Priyanka is utterly surpised: nehi pata? How do u know?

Arjun: sun jisko pata hai uske upar spying ho raha hai woh aise behave karta hai kya? Dekh tu usse, is there any effort on his side to keep Prachi away from the limelight?

 

Priyanka looks at Rajeev and Prachi…….true, there was no effort of hiding Prachi, in fact many people in the sets were playing with Prachi, taking her for a short walk and Rajeev showed no intention to hide her!! There are so many people around: the spotboys, the cameramen, lightsmen, makeup men, electricians, technicians, the director, producer….anyone can report about Prachi, anyone!!

Priyanka felt a little irritated with Rajeev's unconcerned attitude…how could he be so careless with Prachi?!!!!!

Priyanka: usse toh yeh pata hai ki Prachi ko khatra hai (she said angrily)

 

Arjun: lekin dekh ke toh lagta nehi... perhaps he trusts the people in his set…nehi Pri mujhe bilkul nehi lagta usse zara bhi sak hai ki uske upar yahan se hi spying ho raha tha…aur fir usse batayega kaun??

Priyanka: shayad tu thik keh raha hai (she said unmindfully) yeh baat toh kisi aur ko pata bhi nehi….

And then the big question strikes her again: then why is he behaving like this? Toh fir kuchh aur baat hai kya? ……

Arjun: sun Pri, usne khud tujhe kuchh nehi bola na? toh fir tu bhi abhi kuchh mat batana, pehle Prachi ka case solve ho jaye fir bata dena…

Priyanka was still thinking of another reason why Rajeev might be angry with her…

 

"This is disgusting" a fuming Kunal came storming up to them.

Priynka: tujhe kya hua?

Kunal: iss naye producer ko toh main….

Arjun: array hua kya?

Kunal: kya yaar, mere character ka kachumbar bana raha hai, bolta hai Yudi ko gay dikhana padega! Can you beat that?!! I have to play a gay role now?????

Priyanka: par kyon? Tere role toh macho honewala tha na?

Kunal: that's what Aliya had told me, but this ****** is changing it all, uska kehna hai ab har film mein ek gay character ka hona zaroori hai, he wants one in this film too, toh Bobby darling ko bulao na, mujhe hi kyon????

Arjun: hahahaha

Priyanka: tu usse itna seriously kyon le raha hai, it's just another role

Kunal: (voice thick with frustration) u won't understand, jab se industry mein aya hun sab sissy roles hi mil raha hai L koi toh mujhe ek achha macusline role de! Ab sakl bhi feminine hai, aur ab gay ka role bhi karna padega, mera toh future ka kabada ho gaya…

 

Tabhi Harshad came in, smirking…

Harshad: hey tumlogo ne ek baat notice kiya? dekha hai woh Malhotra kaise dekhta rehta hai Ghazal ko? Usse bahut pasand hai Ghazal J

Priyanka: mujhe uske looks bilkul achhe nehi lagte, may be we should caution her

Harshad: arrey chhod na, Ghazal ki aasique Ghazal samjhe, lets not get into this…main ek sandwitch lekar ata hoon

Priyanka: please Harshad, kabhi toh khana chhodkar kisi dusre ke baare mein bhi soch? Perhaps she might be in danger….

Harshad: array maine kya kiya? I just don't want to interfere in people's private life…and take my advice, tu bhi logo ke privacy mein interefere mat kar, nehi toh sab ke samne log aise hi insult kar dete hai…didn't mean to hurt you, it's just a friendly advice…

Arjun: Harshad!!!

Harshad: kyon maine kuchh galat kahan? Mujhe bhi achha nehi laga jab Rajeev ne Priyanka ke upar chillaya, woh bhi sab ke samne…she should really mind her own business

Arjun: jo tu samajhta nehi uske baare mein comment mat kar...

 

"Guys can I have you all on the sets," Aliya's voice boomed across and they all walked there.

Yes cadet singh

Sir main aapse yeh poochna chahti hoon ki aap mere mentor hoke bhi mujhse baat kyon nehi kar rahe hai?

Cadet singh aapko aur kuchh poochhna hai toh puchhiye nehi toh bhul jaiye

Kya kya bhul jayoon sir? Apne dosto ke beech ke jhagre ko ya fir yeh bhul jayoon ke aap mere mentor hai?

Cadet singh sit down

 

Rajveer walks with a sad heart and Naina cries over Alekh's shoulder: "sab log mujhse dur kyon chale jaate hai?"

Problem tujhe nehi Rajveer sir ki hai…

Usse lagta hai tujhe usse pyar ho gaya hai...

 

 

"Wow great shot, that was so natural," all clapped after the shot

Misraji: tum dono ke expressions bahut hi achhe the, it looked so real

"It has to be natural, after all that's what's exactly happening in real life too," Priyanka thought with a sigh and suddenly the thought strikes her….is that the reason for Rajeev's behaviour too? Is he avoiding me because he thinks I am in love with him?

 

It's 7 o clock, Priyanka gets ready for the dinner, she had felt like staying in her room but Vikas was too insistent. He also wanted her to wear the new dress she had bought but she just wore her casuals. "Fir kabhi, jab mood achha hoga," she thought as she slipped in her jeans n kurta. Vikas came all dressed to pick her up

Pri: kya baat hai, aaj bada saj dhajke
Vikas: it's a special day for me, chale?
 
 

Knock knock. Rajeev was ready in his casuals for dinner, he tried his best to dissuade Aliya but she was adamant…he opened the door to see Aliya dressed in a red saree, her hair open and wearing a special perfume. "chale?" she said with a smile.

Rajeev: red saree??

Aliya: kyon koi problem hai? Tumhe red saree pasand nehi hai kya?

Rajeev: (khoye huye) nehi…red saree se kuchh yaad a gaya…

Aliya: ofho ab kya sochne lag gaye?  chale?

Rajeev: ek min, Prach bhi ready hai, usse lata hoon

Aliya looked disappointed: hum Prachi ko saath le ja rahe hai?

Rajeev: (innocent expression) haan usse kahan rakh ke jayoon, usse bhi saath le chalte hai na, kyon tumhe koi problem hai?

Aliya: (disappointed) nehi……chaloLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 25 August 2008 at 11:33am | IP Logged
nice part
update soon..............
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Posted: 25 August 2008 at 12:34pm | IP Logged
Wow!!Great update
Now Raj and Pri will meet each other in the same restaurant.Smile
Red Saree......mujhe bhi bahut kuch yaad a gaya....*sigh*CryCry
Too good.
Continue soon.


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Posted: 26 August 2008 at 2:55am | IP Logged
superb.plz cont soon.........
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Posted: 26 August 2008 at 3:46am | IP Logged
great yaar
 vaise red saree se to mujhe bhi bohot kuch yaad aa gaya
and ab shayadpri raj ko aliya ke sath aur rajeev pri ko vikas ke sath dekh kar jelous feel karenge.
i know it's going to be fun
waiting for the next part
ud soon.
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Posted: 26 August 2008 at 4:53am | IP Logged
The mystery is continously increasing..I think Aliys is not sooo innnocent as she pretends..Wat is going in the producer's mind..Wat stupid scenes he wanna add in the movie..Raj n Naina love scene,Yudi as gay God save the movie n the stars..I think both the pairs r going to the same restaurant...Do update soon

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