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Reel & Real life:(RN): 2 remaining updates posted (Page 36)

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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rituka7

too good
update soon........
 
thank u dear, here's my next update

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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KRIZZY

hey the ud was really very very cute and it was fab.
but plzz pri ko kuch nahin hona chahie
ud soon..........
 
thank u sooooooooo much, don't worry dear, pri ko kuchh nehi hoga, after all woh hamari heroine haiTongue
here's my new update
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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vvdn

Hey ,
update is really cool. Priyanka is really very brillient. Rajeev impressed by her n that's good. yeh kaun hai jo Raj ko marna chahta hai but thankfully Pri ne bacha liya , ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
        plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon.
 
thank u dear,
haan rajeev is all impressed by Pri, or even moreTongue
Raj aur pri zaroor kuchh dangerous mein fansh gaye hai, dekhte hai aage aage hota hai kyaTongue
please keep reading and commenting, here's the next update
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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 6:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Priyanka is really taking care of Prachi and and keeping an eye on Rachna as well!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile 

haan Pri kuchh zyada hi khayal rakhti hai, hai na?
 
 
Par when Rajeev thanked her she said under her breath ke prayaschit hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused ConfusedO no!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyYeh ho kya raha hai??Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove 
 
well, Pri ne kuchh toh kiya hai jiske liye woh guilty feel kar rahi hai, par dont worry, kuchh zyada serious nehi

Priyanka has not yet met this namuna called Cadet Pooja!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Rajeev ne sahi kaha!!!!Wink Wink Wink WinkOnscreen and offsreen Poojas having a conversation!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

haan and they are so cute with each other, hai na?
Pooja is really sweet to Ghazal!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

I loved Pooja's remark ke Rajveer Sir aur Naina real life mein bhi saath saath!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink  Wink Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing BlushingSo sweet!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

apni Pooja bahut smart hai yaar, usse sab pata hai
Pooja ne sahi kaha ke jaisa screen mein dikhate hai waisi unmein unity nahi hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

But Rajveer aur Naina ka romance same to same hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueAur dono yeh baat sunke sharma jate hai!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHaaaiiii!!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile 

sach mein yaar in dono ka romance to off screen bhi kamal hai, dono kaise saath saath a jaaye hai
 
Pooja ne sahi kaha dono saath saath bade cure dikhte hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileAnd she is smart enough to leave them alone!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Both are sipping their coffee and Rajeev is admiring her!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHe had an urge to put the hairs back behind her ear!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHow romantic!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Rajeev toh gaya kaam se, bechara
 
Waise Pooja bol sahi rahi hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveDono ko pyaar toh hai!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileBas woh dono mante hi nahi hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove
 
don't worry, bhag ke kahan jayenge dono?LOL pyar toh hona hi hai
 
Priyanka was thinking of Prachi!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileRajeev thinks woh kitna sochti hai Prachi ke baare mein and he wanted to hug her!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHow cute!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

But Priyanka yeh kya bol rahi hai!!!!!Confused Confused Confused That they are waiting for the right moment aur khud hi darr jaati hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

She thinks she can't let anything happen to Prachi or Rajeev!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileGood for her!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve

Priyanka ko achanak itni jaldi yun hai??Confused Confused Confused

Priyanka is so clever!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveUsse toh detective hona chahiye tha!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileHai bhi!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkWow kya idea hai!!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap ClapAkhir owner ka naam aur address le hi aayi naa!!!!Smile Smile Smile

hai na apna Priyanka kamal ki? jo kaam Raj aur Aliya kar na paya, Pri asani se kar leti hai
 
Rajeev was impressed and happy seeing her happy!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Rajeev is too funny!!!!Smile Smile Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLShantiniketan dekh ke he said kahi Virani parivaar na nikal aaye!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

He also said to Priyanka's question ke jo log 200 saal tak zinda rahe aur marke bhi wapas aajaye woh log abhut dangerous hote hai!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFLROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLHe is just too much!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

hahahahahahaha, I found thsi too funny too, sach mein Raj ko Ekta gang se bahut allergy hai
 
 
Priyanka saath mein make up bhi layi hai!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveRajeev said that she is brilliant and called her Pri!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkHaaaiiiiiii!!!!Tongue Tongue Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedThats so sweet!!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

They go to the house in disguise!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApprovePriyanka was uncomfortable and she grabs Rajeev's hand!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkHaaaiiii!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing BlushingAnd Rajeev also pressed her hand back in reassurance!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

dono kuchh zyada hi cute hai, hai na?Embarrassed
Yeh kya un dono ka koi istemal karna chahta hai!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Aur un dono ka combo todna chahta hai kyunki unka combo bahut dangerous hai!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryWaise woh toh hai!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Unhe Priyanka ki zaroorat hai toh Rajeev ko hatana chahte hai!!!!Confused Confused Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry  Angry 

Waise woh dono Mr. and Mrs Trivedi ban gaye!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmilePriyanka has a plan!!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveI hope it works out!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Sab set par dono ka wait kar rahe hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueAb stars ka toh wait karna hi padhta hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Kunal ne sahi kaha Rajeev hai naa Priyanka ke saath tohfikar ki baat nahi hai!!!!! Approve Approve Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Finally dono aate hai aur night time scenes ki shooting hoti hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Priyanka jumps in time to save Rajeev!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Approve Approve Approve ApproveThank God warna pata nahi Rajeev ka kya hota!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Cry Cry Cry Cry CryGreat act by her!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

last time Raj ne bachaya tha, toh iss baar Pri bancha leti hai, bas dono ka balance equalBig smile
 
But she faints from the electric shock!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedI hope woh theek ho jaye!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

The mystery just keep getting deeper and deeper!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveAkhir Prachi hai kaun??Confused Confused Confused

haan mystery toh kuchh zyada gehra ho raha hai, bad aage aage dekh hota hai kya
 
And since you are showing the cadets when do we see some romance between Ranveer and Nayanika??Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
 
and on your demand here's Ranveer and Nayanika, but in a fighting mode

 

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Posted: 10 August 2008 at 6:06pm | IP Logged

Priyanka comes back to her senses in the infirmary…she looks around to see Arjun and Vikas talking to the doctor… she gets up slowly

All three turn to her: "kaisi feel ka rahi hai?" Vikas and Arjun asked her jointly

Doc: keep lying, u are still unstable, shukr hai electric shock zyada nehi laga

Priyanka's eyes looked around for Rajeev, she had seen the lights go off and a loud crash…but what happened to Rajeev, is he alright? This time he's not the one who brought her here…she was scared to think about any mishap, unconsciously her heart let out a silent prayer for him…

Arjun noticed the look on her face: Priyanka tu rest le

Priyanka: (in a whisper) sab thik hai na Arjun?

Vikas: haan tu bilkul thik hai, bas rest le

But Arjun perfectly understood what she meant: haan thik hai, tu rest le

 

Doctor: Priyankaji aap rest lijiye, please itni baate mat kijiye, guys leave her alone

Before anyone else could say anything, the doctor drove them out of the infirmary and put off the light: aap rest lijiye….

 

Priyanka lay wide awake. Her mind was restless, nobody told her anything about Rajeev…did her efforts fail then? Was it all in vain? It can't be an accident again, the experience at the Patel house was enough to prove something was fishy… She recounted their experiences in the evening

 

They walked inside the house dressed as Mr. And Mrs. Trivedi, Prachi's mousa and maasi…

The servant made them sit in a large living room, the room was decorated with expensive artifacts but everything had a gloomy look around them, it is as if some mishap had happened in the house….

A young gentleman comes out after while:Kahiye main aap ki kya madad kar sakta hoon

Priyanka: namaste hum Guriya ke mousa masi hai

Young man: Guriya?

Priyanka: haan ji Guriya, aapke dost ke bachhi

Young man: I am sorry par main samjha nehi, kaun se dost?

 

Priyanka: array aap ka dost, jisne apni bachhi ke liye aapke dukaan se angoothi mangwaya tha, ajeeb admi hai aap, payment bhi nehi liya aur angoothi delivery kar di! aap kya sab ko aise delivery dete hai?  Toh Guriya ke mummy papa ne kaha, tumlog usi side se ja rahe ho toh payment poori kar do, kab se due hai…. yeh lijiye 6000 rupaye, ab register mein enter kar lijiye, laiye na register, wahan sab records hoga

 

Suddenly the young man's face grew stern, he narrowed his eyes with suspicion: achha aap uske masi-mousa hai? Aur aap paise dene mere ghar tak chale aaye?

 

Rajeev: oh actually…..hum ne socha itne achhe admi se mil bhi lete hai, aaj ke zamane mein payment poore kiye bina koi kahan delivery deta hai…toh hum dukaan se sidha aap ek ghar chale aaye

 

The young man's face grows sterner, he tightened his jaws and told them: achha?abhi  nikal jaiye yahan se, ya fir main police ko bulayoon?

 

Both Priyanka and Rajeev were flustered, they had not anticipated this!

 

The man: Fools! What do you want from us? Jhooth pe jhooth bole ja rahe ho! Pehle apne admi bhejkar papa pe humla karte ho, aur aab doosra tarika dhoondh ke aye ho?!! Guriya ke mummy papa ne bheja hai, ha?? Then u are messengers from the dead, huh? I don't know captain Sharma ke saath iss ring ka kya connection hai par aur ek baar agar aap hume ring ke liye pareshaan kiya toh main aap logo ko jail bhejwakar rahunga….ab ek second mein yahan se nikal jaiye ya main police ko phone karta hoon…

 

Rajeev had literally dragged Priyanka out of the house, they breathed heavily after reaching the streets, they held each others hands tightly out of tension…dono 5 minute tak chup rehte hai, and then

Pri: Prachi's parents are dead

Raj: Captain sharma

Pri: somebody attacked them

Raj: captain sharma ke saath ring ka connection hai

and then together

Raj, Pri: they are dangerous people

 

A sense of fear runs through both of them and yet both felt comfortable in each other's company…both shared the same concerns, both went through the same dangers and it built a strong camaraderie between the two…Rajeev's gratefulness knew no bounds for whatever Priyanka was doing, yet he felt a sense of relief to have her beside him…Priyanka felt content that she could do something for the man who had saved her, the man she has harmed perhaps beyond repairs….  

 

Priyanka infirmary mein lete lete yehi soch rahi thi, there's a lot more to this case than just a simple ring, Rajeev was right, shayad sab se zyada khatra Prachi ko hi hai…Priyanka felt her pangs of guilt again…kash she had not contributed in it in her small way…

The lights go on and to her surprise Ghazal was standing with her food.

Pri: array tum

Ghazal: jaldi se khana kha lo

Pri: Arjun kahan hai?

Harshad: Arjun Prachi ke paas hai, Rajeev ji ka operation...

Pri lets out a sharp cry: Rajeev's operation?

Ghazal:haan, woh light Rajeev ji ke upar gir pada tha, thank God tumne power off kar diya tha

Pri's heart sank, she asked in apprehension: usse bahut chot aya hai kya?

Ghazal: nehi zyada serious nehi, bas kuchh glass pieces unke shoulder pe ghus gaya hai, usika operation ho raha hai…

Priyanka let out a sharp cry of pain imagining how it might have felt… she said in a weak voice: can I meet him?

Ghazall: abhi toh nehi, tum jaldi se thik ho jao fir milna

Saying this she sits by her bed. She holds her hand affectionately…Priyanka felt like tears coming to her eyes, she really missed her friend for all these days…Ghazal!

She doesn't say a word, then she softly says: take care

and leaves.

Priyanka felt like crying, she had indeed been so careless about Ghazal in all these days, she was never there in her pain, in her difficulties and yet when Ghazal stood beside her today she realized how much she missed her…

 

Rajeev comes back to his senses, he felt a sharp pain on his left shoulder, as he opened his eyes she saw Aliya standing by his bed

 

Aliya: uhun, lete raho, baapre maut ke muh se lautke aaye ho tum

Rajeev remembered the horrifying events one by one, the lights going off, the heavy light crashing on him, the sharp pain in his shoulder…a couple of people in the set had run towards the main switch box, there was a bright spark seen…

 

Rajeev looked around and was a little disappointed, he couldn't see any other co-star, especially Priyanka…he felt a little hurt

 

Aliya went on: aaj agar Priyanka na hoti toh…and she tells him how Priyanka had saved him…. "array tum kahan chale?" she asked surprised, as she saw Rajeev getting down from his bed and wearing his slippers…

Rajeev: mujhe Priyanka ke paas jana hai

Aliya: woh abhi rest le rahi hai, tum let jao

She forcibly lays him down and sits beside him

Rajeev is extremely restless: Priyanka thik hai na? kuchh serious toh nehi? Mujhe milna hai usse

Aliya: nehi baba, tumhara chot zyada gehra hai, ab so jao tum, Arjun Prachi ke paas hai

 

Yeh kehte hue Aliya Rajeev ke sar par haath rakhti hai aur dhire dhire apne oongliyan Rajeev ke baalo mein chalane lagti hai…

 

Rajeev felt too uncomfortable, he felt like a stranger was touching him,…he wriggled out of her grasp…ahem Aliya it's okay, tum jao rest lo, mujhe Priyanka ke paas jana hai,

Aliya: (hurt) kyon main massage kar rahi hoon tumhe achha nehi lag raha hai?

 

Rajeev: dekho…actually I am not so comfortable with a woman touching me, unless she's too close to me…don't mind please

 

Aliya: (leaning over to him) now Iam close to you, amn't I? Rajeev tum mujhse bhi sharmate ho?

Rajeev: Aliya listen, you are a very good friend of mine, but it's my fault that I am not so physically comfortable with girls, perhaps my conservative upbringing…ab please main jayoon?

Aliya: (laughing) aur perhaps you are gay Rajeev, you are too cute, achha chalo tum rest lo, main chalti hoon, good night (she kisses him on the cheek just to tease him again)

 

Rajeev couldn't shake her away this time as his gaze froze on the door…Priyanka was standing at the door

He got up as if he had got an electric shock: Pri-Priyanka tum????????

 

Aliya: Hi Priyanka,good to see u in a good state, take care Rajeev chalo main chalti hoon, byee( and she winks at Rajeev)

Priyanka: main bhi chalti hoon

Rajeev jumps down from his bed and hugs her instantly: I am so happy to see you safe, main toh daar hi gaya tha

 

Rajeev's hug sent shivers into Priyanka's spine! It was completely startling and yet she didn't want to release herself from his grasp…his genuine concern moved her, so did the protectiveness of his arms, and the intensity of his passion touched her to the core…after the initial shock she hugged him back too, realizing how happy she was to see him alright…..Being in his arms gave her an inexplicable pleasure that she didn't want to let go, yet her heart ached with a strange sense of jealousy as she remembered Aliya kissing him 

 

Priyanka: I am sorry Rajeev, (she said releasing herself) shayad main galat waqt pe aa gayi, I just came to see if you are alright, but you seem to be doing perfectly fine

 

 Rajeev was quick to sense her tone this time and he could sense the reason for that too :please Priyanka, tum kuchh galat mat sochna, woh toh aise hi mujhe tease kar rahi thi

(while he was eager to clarify his position he almost felt happy that Priyanka did mind Aliya's kiss!)

Priyanka: it's ok, u don't have to explain it to me, it's your life, you are not answerable to me, main kaun hoti hoon…

Rajeev: (looking at her seriously) if I am answerable to anyone here it's only you, I owe my life to you. Lekin tum pagal ho gaye the kya? I am sure yeh unlogo ka hi kaam hai….lekin tumhe kuchh ho jata toh?

 

Priyanka couldn't resist asking the obvious question: mujhe kuchh ho jata toh?

 

Rajeev: toh I would have never forgiven myself (takes her hand and looks at her meaningfully) do u know how much u mean to me, the way you are by my side in this crisis…tumhe dene ke liye thanks bhi kam pad jaaye

 

Priyanka felt her heart will burst out…she wanted to hug this man tightly, wanted to confess what she had done and cry out loud…she was sure he would forgive her and console her like a child…and everything will be fine

 

She came closer to him and looked up at him: Rajeev….mujhe tumse kuchh kehna hai…

Rajeev: haan bolo na (Rajeev could see the pain in her eyes)

They were so close that they could sense each other's breath…while Priyanka felt like hiding her face in his chest and confessing, Rajeev wanted to wrap her in his arms and throw away the pain that was troubling her….

 

"excuse me, did I leave my purse here!" both start to turn and see Aliya barging into the room…Aliya stood stunned to see them so close and then a mischievous smile spread on her face… "aha, I think I came at a wrong time…"(looking at Rajeev): "after all 'conservative people' are not conservative all the time!" Rajeev blushed hearing this…Priyanka looked at both questioningly

Tabhi the doctor came in to check on Rajeev: Priyanka tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Jao rest lo, jao abhi…

She sent her back, priyanka gave a long parting look to Rajeev and had to go.  

 

"Ma'am captain Ranveer wants to talk to you for a moment" declared the nurse to Priyanka. Vikas was feeding her soup when captain Ranveer walked in. Vikas had stayed up almost all night to look after Priyanka and Priyanka felt bad for him, she knew he loved her…and yet she had no answer for her….her confused mind didn't want to admit the irresistible attraction she felt for Rajeev, and yet she couldn't ignore how she felt everytime she's close to him…..

 

Captain Ranveer walked in with a couple of his cadets and they recognized Nayanika and Huda among them…Ranveer was a young handsome man, but too serious looking and her face showed a complete no-nonsense attitude.

 

Ranveer: Hello, I hope you are feeling much better now, bas mujhe aapse kuchh sawal poochna hai

Priyanka: haan poochhiye na

Ranveer: dekhiye this is the second accident in a row and since it's all happening inside the campus, we are all worried about its security, aap bataiye, kya aapko yeh accident lagta hai?

Priyanka was about to say yes when she remembered it's better to keep mum about the information they had gathered so far…: p-pata nehi…shayad haan

Ranveer looked at her intently: are you sure? Waise u are quite brave for a girl, u shouldn't be afraid to tell me the truth

Nayanika: aapko kyon lagta hai ki normal ladkiyan brave nehi hote?

Ranveer: well, she is definitely braver than most girls

Nayanika: yehi toh aap mardo ki problem hai, aap samajhte kya hai ladkiyon ko?

Ranveer: (looking at her sternly) main baki ladkiyon ki baat nehi janta, par yeh bol sakta hoon ki tumse bad mannered ladki maine aaj tak nehi dekha

Huda: (nervously) chup ho ja na Nayanika, sir se jhagra mat kar

Nayanika is furious now: tu chup reh, yeh hai mard na namoona, aur aap ladkiyon ke baare mein comment kar rahe hai!

Ranveer: cadet, can I please do my work?

Nayanika: please do, but don't make such generalized comments about women

Ranveer: okay, can we please proceed? So Ms Bassi, you are sure u don't suspect anybody?

Priyanka: no

Ranveer: hmm….jab se yeh shooting unit aya hai tabse yeh sab ho raha hai…(sarcastically) but the shooting has to go on, right?…okay I have built a task force with some of our cadets, they are going to be on vigil for extra security n the head of this team in cadet Nayanika…

Nayanika: who's a woman for your kind information

Ranveer: cadet tum apna bakwaas bandh karoge? So just let them know if you spot anything unusual, I'll go and meet Mr Khandelwal now, take rest.

 

Priyanka panicked…she hoped Rajeev was not that nave to spill out all their doubts about the accident…she wished Ranveer had met them both together…

 

Rajeev was lost in deep thought…something troubled Priyanka from the day she has actively got involved in Prachi's case…and she has been harmed twice physically too…the poor girl is going through all this just to help him out… "no, I can't let her be in this, this is too dangerous…I can't be so selfish" Rajeev thought to himself… he made up his mind… " I have to keep her away from this, anyhow…I can't let her in danger just for me, chahe uske liye mujhe kuchh bhi karna pade..."

 

A week has gone by after this, they were all back to the sets, Priyanka was in a depressed mood…she had hardly seen Rajeev after ther first meeting in the infirmary…the doctor had strictly asked her not to get up from bed….but what surprised her was that Rajeev had never come to check on her….nor could she go to meet him, he had given instructions to the nurse that nobody disturbs him!!! She had sent a couple of get well soon cards to Rajeev but there was no response…she wondered what was up with him…

 

Priyanka had been greeted in the sets with a loud applause of welcome…an elderly gentleman had come forward and praised her for her bravery….he was Misraji, the director of the film. He had a fatherly attitude and looked like the most calm man in the world.

There were a couple of new people on the sets, Arjun told her one of them was the new producer, Mr. Malhotra

Priyanka looked at him with surprise!: matlab sach mein new producer aa gaya?

Arjun (lookinh guilty) haan Ghazal usdin jhooth nehi bol rahi thi…usne shayad woh rassi nehi kati thi…  

Priyanka (thinking hard): no it was not Ghazal's doing

Arjun: haan shayad accident tha, but we misbehaved with her so much

Priyanka: poor her! Misraji usko convince kar paya? Woh film chhod rahi hai finally?

Arjun: shayad nehi, dekh na naye producer ke saath uska kuchh zyada hi rapport hai, shayad usne mana liya

 

Priyanka saw Mr.Malhotra talking animatedly with Ghazal, somehow she didn't like the look of Malhotra, he looked like a shrewd man, the way he was measuring each part of Ghazal's body was certainly uncomfortable…but Ghazal hardly noticed

 

Her attention was diverted by a loud applause again, this time it was Rajeev who had entered the sets! Everybody went to greet him, Priyanka was relieved to see him fit and fine, she went forward to talk to him…

"Welcome back," she said warmly but a little hurt that he hadn't responded to her "get well" note

"oh thanks" Rajeev said coldly, " if you don't mind excuse me, I need to talk to Misraji"

To Priyanka's surprise Rajeev ignored and walked past her, leaving her standing there stunned!!Cry

 

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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 2:59am | IP Logged
hey update was really gud n i updated it in Orkut too..Its really popular there..Well why is Rajeev ignoring Priyanka ?????????
Mystery behind Prachi is really getting darker day by day......
 
Do update soon
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 3:16am | IP Logged
Hey dear ,
Update was too cool.Clap
Finally Pri saved Raj.WinkWinkWink
Alisha was too good with teasing.Wink
Pri ki entry bhi tabhi honi thi.Tongue
Vikas really loves her a lot.Ouch
Kitna care kar raha hai Pri ki aaj kal.LOL
Kitna dangerous case hai Prachi ka.CryCry
Kahan fuss gaye dono is me.Confused
They must save their lives first.SmileSmile
Pri kuch kehne jaa rahi thi Raj ko par pata nahi kyoun ye Alisha tapak gayi.Wink
Ghazal is also good friend of her, she cares of Pri much.Smile
Aayi dekhne us ko.Smile
Naynakia aur Ranveer k beech itni ladaii kyoun hoti hai.LOL
Humare Raj aur Naina me to nahi hoti thi na itni ladaii.Tongue
Vo kothi waala part to kamaal ka tha.Shocked
Ye Major Sharma kaun hai?Confused
Suspense kaafi deep hota jaa raha hai n it's all too risky.Angry
Pata nahi kuch abhi to nahi aa raha hai samajh me.Confused
Achanak ye Rajeev ko kya ho gaya hai.Shocked
Y is he behaving so rudely with Pri?Angry
He shouldn't do so.Ouch
update soon.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 11 August 2008 at 3:24am
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Posted: 11 August 2008 at 3:53am | IP Logged
fantastic yaar
and i must say ur a very nice mystry fic writter
rajeev jaldi se jaldi pri ko ignore karna chor de bas
keep it up!Thumbs Up

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