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george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 01 August 2008 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Priyanka is very naughty!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkUsne Rajeev ko Moov bheja!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLRajeev also laughs seeing it!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Now the spot boy is teasing Rajeev!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue

Rajeev had the sense to hide it from Aaliya!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveThank God!!!!Smile Smile Smile

Rajeev is in disguise now!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveBan gaya pura Hercule Poirot!!!Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

But he is right!!!!Approve Approve ApproveSomeone is watching him!!!!!Ouch Ouch Ouch 

Arjun is quite close to guessing!!!!!Wink Wink Wink WinkPriyanka ka pura dhuyan Rajeev ke note par hi hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHaaiii!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Rachna Prachi ko lekar bahar jaa rahi thi!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveShe is behaving very suspiciously!!!!!Confused Confused Confused Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Iqbal ne sahi kiya jo usko rok kar!!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveAur usne Nayanika ko bhi sahi samjhaya!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileHar ladki ko aise sadhu samjhe yeh bhi theek nahi hai!!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Iqbal is absolutely like Aalekh!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueUsne sahi kaha ke kuch toh gadbad hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileEven Arjun was right!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up 

Arjun now thinks ke Prachi ka khayal rakhne ke peeche Priyanka ka kuch aur hi wajah hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThats interesting!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Aaliya kuch nahi laa payi!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveAb naam ka record bhi gayab!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyThats very very suspicious!!!!Confused Confused Confused Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Rajeev ne ush note mein phir se Priyanka ki khichai ki thi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHow naughty!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Waise slim fast tablets!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileIska matlab jab woh phir se faint hogi tab bhi Rajeev hi usse gode mein uthayega!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkHaaaaiiiiii!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Ab flowers bhi leke jaa raha hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileSo sweet!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Satyabad brat!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFLRajeev phir shuru ho gaya!!!!!Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Rajeev ne toh Ekta ko dil kholke gaali di!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueAur DJs ke baare mein toh bilkul sahi kaha usne!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Clap Clap Clap

Priyanka ne sahi kaha agar yeh koi reporter sun pata!!!!Smile Smile SmileRajeev ka pol khul jata!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink

Rajeev ne akhir Aamna ke baare mein bhi sach bata hi diya!!!!!Approve Approve Approve 

Aur Aamir film mein ke baare mein bhi sahi kaha usne!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Dil ke seat ka sawal aate hi Rajeev kehta hai ke koi jo usse acchi lagti hai aur Priyanka ki taraf dekhta rehta hai!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Priyanka ko bhi ajeeb lagta hai aur woh apni nazrein jhuka leti hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Haaaiiiii!!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Rajeev ki aankhon mein dekh rahi hai!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedHaaaiii!!!!Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing BlushingLagta hai inka ankhon hi aknhon mein baatein real life mein bhi chalu ho gaya!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Priyanka ne kaha Vikas uska favourite co-star hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyVery bad!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Priyanka ko Ekta ke kisi bahu ka role zyada pasand hai kyunki waha jewellry aur make-up karne hota hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL 

Rajeev ne kaha ki woh Fresher's Ball ke din woh bahut khubsurat lag  rahi thi!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Haaaiiii!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Priyanka confuse ho gayi aur yeh keh baithi ke she is falling in love with him!!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWow!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedThat is too good!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Rajeev now looks at her in the signature expression of his!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkEmbarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed EmbarrassedO God!!!Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing BlushingThis is so romantic!!!!Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing BlushingThose Raj and Naina scenes!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Clap Clap Clap Clap

Kya scene chal raha tha lekin aa gayi kabab mein haddi!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveAnd they again came out of their trance!!!!Confused Confused Confused Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyO God!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Accha huya Priyanka ne Rachna ke baare mein Rajeev ko bata diya!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveRachna is really behaving very strangely!!!!Confused Confused Confused Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapprovePriyanka is right!!!!!Smile Smile Smile

Yeh Rachna definately unlogo se mili huyi hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveIn fact unhone ne hi usse bheja hoga!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Finally Rajeev ne Prachi ke baare mein Priyanka ko sab kuch bata diya!!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveAt last he did a sensible thing!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Priyanka ne jo kaha sach hai!!!!Smile Smile Smile SmileWakai mein sahi cheez pakdi hai usne!!!Approve Approve Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

Rajeev bhi maan gaya that she is a genius!!!!Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap

Ab dono mil kar Prachi ke case ko solve karenge!!!!Approve Approve Approve Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs UpAkhir undono ki beti jo hai woh!!!!Smile Smile Smile Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

 

 
sach mein yaar rAJ pRI itne funny hai ki spot boys bhi teasing karne lage hai! bechara Raj, sabko pata hai sirf usse pata nehi un dono mein kya chal raha hai!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
 
wahan Arjun Pri, yahan Iqbal Nayanika, hui na real aur real life mein parallel! lekin woh dono kitna jhagarte hai yaar, apna Pri Arjun ko dekho, prefect friends
Arjun bilkul sahi guess kar raha hai, usse Pri ke har soch ki khabar haiWink
 
Rajeev bhi na, kitna teasing karta rehta haiAngry bechari PriEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed par teasing karte karte sach bhi bol deta hai, but he's too witty, hai na? Priyanka hamesha sharma jati hai, bechariEmbarrassed haan dono ka signature expression toh hona hi hai, after all they looked sooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute looking at each otherEmbarrassed
dono bin kahe baate samajh jaate hai, bilkul screen story ke tarah
 
par Rachna ki toh main......Angry lekin case hai kya? mystery badta hi ja raha hai....dekhte hai agle episode mein kuchh solve hota hai ya fir aur ulajh jata hai...Priyanka Rajeev ke saath hogi ya fir...........
 
keep reading and commenting, aage aage aur mysteries haiTongue

george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 01 August 2008 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Rajeevian*

awesome.cont soon.....Clap
thank u dear, here's the new updateSmile
george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 01 August 2008 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
 
 EPISODE 18:
 
Hello guys, am bacccckkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
missed u all soooooooooooo much! thanks for bearing with me and excusing my absence, here's the new update, hope u like it Tongue
 

Raj: u r a genius priyanka, sach mein koi bina payment ke delivery kyon dega? Yeh toh tabhi ho sakta hai jab …

Priyanka: haan jab yeh customer koi aisa ho jiske saath malik ka jaan pehchaan hai

Rajeev: correct!

Priyanka: dukaan ke malik ke saath meet karna padega, the salesman won't know anything

Rajeev: right, mujhe abhi jana padega

Priyanka: abhi bahut raat ho chuki hai, kal subah chalenge, thik hai?

Rajeev: hmm, tum thik kehti ho Priyanka, I shouldn't be drawing too much attention, waise hi Prachi ke bare mein shayad kayee aur ko pata chal gaya hai

Priyanka becomes a little unmindful hearing this….

Rajeev goes on….: mujhe pata hona chahiye tha I can't hide Prachi like this…agar Prachi ke saath koi raaz chhupa hai toh sabsa zyada danger Prachi ko hai..

Priyanka still keeps on thinking about something:…: hmmm

Rajeev: perhaps someone from the unit itself had leaked out Prachi's news…anyway mein chalta hoon aur Aliya ko jaake tumhara idea batata hoon

Priyanka: Aliya?? kyon?!!!

Rajeev: array aaj usine toh mera help kiya

Priyanka: (in a little semi-hurt tone) oh really?! Then u already have help, I don't need to be with u…

Rajeev: main tumhe lekar bhi nehi jata, tumhari tabiyat abhi bhi thik nehi hui hai, u should take rest, aur fir itni si kaam ke liye 3 log jakar kya karenge!!

Priyanka: (hurt) don't worry, main nehi aa rahi hoon

Rajeev: that's like a good girl, tumhe abhi rest ki zyada zaroorat hai, good night

 

Priyanka stands a little hurt, the conversation left a bitter taste…usse agar Aliya pe zyada bharosa hai toh that's his decision, aur fir sahi bhi toh hai….but more than hurt it was  guilt that ate her from the core, Rajeev's words were piercing her soul like glass shards…she had indeed broken his trust, and she could never tell him what she had done… "kyon bharosha kare Rajeev uspar?"…With the sudden realization of the gravity of the situation Priyanka feels more guilty…she had really not understood things were so serious…she would have never done it if she had known…

 

Priyanka grows more restless, she dials a number.

 

Priyanka: hello, haan main bol rahi hoon

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Priyanka: dekho tumlog jo kar rahe ho woh abhi please immediately bandh karo

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Priyanka: try to understand, things are pretty serious, main nehi kar sakti, the kid might be harmed

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Priyanka: I don't care damn it, main abhi jakar Rajeev ko sab kuchh bata deti hoon

 

Priyanka slams the phone and starts thinking, she felt more and more guilty about the damage she might have caused…if only Rajeev had told her the whole story a little earlier…it was indeed unethical on her part but if she had known things were like this she would have never agreed to it, never, never, never…..

She needed to tell Rajeev before more damage is done, he should know…Priyanka runs to Rajeev's room…

 

Priyanka runs in so much hurry that she enters Rajeev's room straight without knocking

 

Rajeev was shirtless, in his towel, changing….(remember the Ritu-Rajveer shirtless scene!)

Rajeev: Pri-Priyanka tum?????!!!!!!!!!

Priyanka: oh I am so sorry, (she runs out of the room) aap change kar lijiye

 

By this time Rajeev had also fled to the bathroom, he changes and comes out…both blushing…

Rajeev: woh…mujhe pata nehi tha darwaja khula hai…

Priyanka: I am sorry maine knock nehi kiya…

Rajeev: lagta hai Naina ka role karte karte tumhe knock na karne ki adaat padh gayi hai!!

Priyanka: (more embarrassed) I am really sorry…

Rajeev: it's okay, I really don't mind a cadet Naina Singh around me, in fact I need one now!

Priyanka looks up at him, surprised

Rajeev: jispe main khud se bhi zyada bharosha kar sakoon, jo iss muskil mein mera saath de…(looks at Priyanka) seriously Priyanka, I was thinking about the whole thing and it seems our real lives are no less happening than the stories in the serial!

Priyanka keeps listening…

Rajeev: ab sach mein agar serials ke achhe characters real life mein aa jaaye toh life thodi easy ho jata hai

Priyanka: (softly) true…

Rajeev: ab dekho na aaj hi tumne itna achha idea diya mujhe, u r like the real "Naina ah Singh," in rescue of her captain!

Priyanka feels more guilty, she says softly: perhaps real and reel lives are not similar always, the real life "Naina" might not be as trustworthy as the reel one…

Rajeev: (looks at Priyanka with adoration)  the real life "captain" is very ashamed of the one time he suspected his real life "cadet", please forgive me for that…tum mere liye, Prachi ke liye itna sab kuchh kar rahi ho aur maine…maine tum pe hi sak kiya…how can I not trust you…

Priyanka: par….

Rajeev: I know you will never break my trust, ab batao itne raat gaye tum kya bolne ayi thi…

 

Priyanka couldn't bring herself to tell Rajeev what she had planned to confess…some other time perhaps…par aaj nahi, not right after Rajeev had declared his trust in her so much…

Rajeev: Priyanka….

Priyanka: woh…main…bas kuchh nehi…good night bolne ayi thi

Rajeev: hmmm, tum bina knock kiye raat ke 12 baaje mere room mein daudkar aate ho…SIRF GOODNIGHT BOLNE KE LIYE??????? Tab toh case kuchh gadbad hai (smiling mischievously)

Priyanka: of ho, aap bhi na, nehi bas main…o haan, mujhe ekbaar Prachi ke ring dekhna tha

Rajeev laughs loudly: good, raat ke 12 baaje tumhe jasoosi sujha hai? Lagta hai tum Naina se kuchh zyada hi influenced ho, wahan red box, yahan ring! Great going cadet singh! Bas mujhpe goli mat chalana!

Priyanka: (muttering under her breath) goli toh shayad aap mujhpar chalate agar aapko pata hota toh….

Rajeev: kya barbara rahi ho?

Priyanka: kuchh nehi…ok Prachi so gayi hai, toh mein chalti hoon, good night

Priyanka leaves

Rajeev: bilkul pagal hai yeh ladki, kuchh bolne ayi thi lekin batayi bhi nehi!!

 

Priyanka comes out of Rajeev's room and tabhi meets Vikas in the corridor. Dono chauk jaate hai

Priyanka: tu yahan?

Vikas: yehi sawal main tujhse pooch sakta hoon, raat ke 12 baje tu style icon ke room se nikal rahi hai?!!!!

Priyanka: haan mujhe kuchh kaam tha

Vikas: bas kar, hum sab budhdhu nehi hai Priyanka, lekin tu jo kar rahi hai woh sahi nehi hai

Priyanka: dekh Vikas mujhe abhi tujhse koi behs nehi karni, main ja rahi hoon

Vikas: mujhe bhi tujhse koi behs nehi karna, bas tujhe yeh kehne aya tha ki teri ma tujhe phone par try kar rahi hai, tu nehi mili toh mujhe call kiya aunty ne

Priyanka: thik hai main call karti hoon

Vikas: aur aunty ko bata dena ki next time agar tujhe dhoondna ho toh Mr.Khandelwal ke phone par call kare

 

Next Day at shoot

 

Everybody is gearing up for their usual shooting schedule. Rajeev performs a stunt that invites loud gapes and applaud from everybody. Sher Khan is exceedingly happy with Rajeev's shot: "one day you become very big actor I say you see," he said bubbling with joy

 

Kunal keeps clapping at Rajeev….so does Priyanka! Vikas notices that…

Vikas: oye shot khatam ab clapping bandh kar

Kunal: did you guys see how he did it? Wow, amazing, he's a real hero man

Vikas: tu usse itna impressed kyon hai?

Kunal: I really like him, aur fir tumlog jab mere saath pranks khel rahe the toh he was the only one who stood by me, usine mujhe bataya tumlog baste mein stones dal rahe ho

Vikas: aha, tabhi tujhe pata chala aur tune ulta chal chal diya, ab samjha

Kunal: yes, that was really sweet of him

Vikas: ji nehi, that was being a spoilsport

Harshad reaches the sets a little late…the whole unit was waiting for him

Aliya: ayiye, finally aap aaye…lagta hai celebrity symptom lag gaya hai aapko

Harshad: array aaj mera breakfast miss ho gaya tha, isliye thoda late ho gaya

Aliya: thoda late? U r 2 hours late Harshad, adha din yehi pe nikal gaya! Ok guys we need to shoot the next scene, all cadets gather here, but where's Ghazal?

Everybody gathers together and notices Ghazal was missing from the shooting today.

Aliya: yeh kya unprofessionalism hai?  Guptaji please pata kijiye Gazal kahan hai

Arjun: zaroor kuchh plan bana rahi hogi

Rajeev: aisa mat bolo Arjun, woh bimaar bhi pad sakti hai

Gupta : ma'am Ghazal's manager wants to talk to you

Ghazal's manager comes over after sometime: Ghazal is resigning from this film

All: whaaaaat?

G's manager: yes, these are the contract papers, legal formalities, and the rest of the paperwork, also she is suing the cast and the unit for infamy, she wants to resign in a week, please settle her bills as soon as possible

Aliya: what do you mean she wants to resign? Our director Miahraji is joining the unit tomorrow, there seems to be a problem with the producer and Ghazal wants to leave now??

G's manager: we don't know anything about it, she has already decided

Aliya looks evidently upset: ab mein Mishraji ko kya jawab dungi? Law suit bhi file kar rahi hai This was my first assignment…oh God mere saath hi yeh sab kyon hota hai?

Arjun (looking guilty): mein ek baar usse baat karoon, I think woh uss din ke wajah se naraz hai

Harshad: uss din toh hum sab milkar usse ulta sidha kahan tha, chal hum sab chalte hai

Kunal: good idea, chal sab chalte hain

 

They all come back after a while…all upset.

Arjun: kya ho gaya hai usse, ek newspaper article se woh itna upset hai?

Kunal: lekin media ko pata kaise chata iss incident ke bare mein

Harshad: media ko sab pata hota hai, par haan it is a big blur on her career, the article was really rude

Priyanka: yeh sab mere wajah se hua hai, tum log bhi na, kuchh soche samjhe nehi uspe ilzaam daal diya

Vikas: array par she was the most possible person, ab hume kya pata tha ki poori incident magazine mein chhap jayegi, humlog toh yahan kab se pade hai, press mein kya ho raha hai dekha bhi nehi

Kunal: haan aur kya title hai, "Is Ghazal the real life villain?" yeh dekh kar koi bhi upset ho jaaye

 

 

Aliya: I really can't think of anything now, let Mishraji come, unhiko sambhalna padega…

Kunal: matlab aaj ka shooting cancel?

Aliya: cadets ke group scenes toh cancel karna hi padega, Priyanka, tum rassi wali scene ka retake do fir

Priyanka: aaj hi?

Aliya: haan aur issbar rassi main khud check karoongi, it is an important scene, can't delete it….chalo fir

 

The unit prepares for the retake of the scene, the same setting, the rope being hung from the tree…only Priyanka feels a little unnerved…the memory of the previous accident is still fresh in her mind and she shuddered to think of the same shot again…fir se rassi tut gayi toh…

 

Aliya: all right, Priyanka rassi se latak jao, maine ab khud check kiya hai

Rajeev double checks it for more safety: Priyanka it's absolutely perfect, chalo go ahead

 

Priyanka comes forward, she feels her legs shaking as she walks near the spot…the accident has really shaken her up…she tries wearing the rope on her feet….and then stops midway…

Priyanka: I…I can't do it today…

Aliya: what nonsense Priyanka, I told you I checked the rope myself, nothing will happen, go ahead…

Priyanka tries doing it….

Aliya rolls the camera….lights, camera, action…. Three seconds and Priyanka lets out a sharp cry….

Priyanka: mujhe neeche utaro….pleaseeee

Aliya: cut! Cut! What happened?

Priyanka: (still nervous) I…I am not feeling well, sach mein main nehi kar sakti, kisi aur din karenge please, aaj kuchh doosra shoot kar lijiye

Aliya: (angry) do you think this shooting is a joke? Sab apne man marji kar rahe hai!!

Priyanka: (almost pleading) Aliya I know, i am serious about my job too, but aaj sach mein mujhse nehi hoga…

Aliya: enough! What nonsense is this, I have never seen a more unprofessional cast, koi der se ata hai, koi beech mein shooting chhod ke ja rahi hai, kisi ko shot nehi dena!! Yahan pe koi circus ho raha hai kya?

Rajeev: Aliya please, we can understand you are upset about today's incidents par Priyanka ke situation bhi samjhne ki kosish karo, she must be facing a trauma

Aliya : (hurt) wonderful Rajeev, ab tumlog hi decide karo yeh film kaise chalani hai, resign toh mujhe karna chahiye…let me call up Misraji and tell him I can't handle this anymore…

 

She storms off

Vikas: aaj shooting ka saytanash ho gaya, ruko mein jakar usse manane ki kosish karta hoon

 

Udhar Arjun consoles a nervous Priyanka…she squats on the ground, evidently disturbed. Rajeev goes over to her…

Rajeev: Priyanka…

Priyanka looks up, tears in her eyes

Rajeev: yeh kya tum ro rahi ho??????!!!!!!! Silly girl

Priyanka: i know i...i acted like a fool but believe me I really felt so scared doing it

Rajeev: I can understand Priyanka, par you are a brave girl, I know you can do it

Arjun: main bhi tabse usse yehi bol raha tha

Priyanka: I can't…

Rajeev: of course u can, accidents toh bar bar nehi hote, aur rassi maine khud check kiya hai, dekho kuchh nehi hoga

Priyanka looks at him

Rajeev: mujhe tumhare capabilities pe poora bharosha hai, aur fir agar rassi tut bhi jaaye toh main hun na tumhe pakarne ke liye, yeh bharosha hai na mujhpe?

Priyanka: hun

Rajeev: fir? Don't worry, u can do it, now get up and get going, I am standing here, all ready to catch you! Aur fir iss bar toh Moov bhi hai na!

Hearing this Priyanka laughs loudly

Arjun: Moov hai? matlab?

Rajeev: kuchh nehi (winks at her) chalo I'll call Aliya, tumlog bhi na, bilkul bachhe ho sab ke sab

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
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Posted: 01 August 2008 at 11:59pm | IP Logged
hi dear welcome back.Smile
 too good update yaar.Clap
maza aa gaya padh k.Star
laut k aane k baad kitna accha likha hai tune.Star
 
Ye Pri ki story nahi samajh aa rahi hai.Confused
Kaun us se kya karva raha hai ye bada hi confusing hai yaar.ConfusedConfusedConfused
Raj Pri par itna vishwaas karta hai aur jab Raj ko pata chalega ki Pri involve hai is me tab kya hoga.Confused
Raj ko kitna bura lagega.Confused
 
Pri ka vo Raj k room me daud kar jaana vala scene kamaal ka tha.Wink
Raj ka shirtless scene to kaafi accha tha.Wink
aur jab Pri kehti hai ki mai good night bolne aayi thi to Raj bhi samajh jaata hai ki Pri asli baat gol kar gayi.LOL
Prachi ka secreat to bumper hai yaar.Angry
 
Vikas kitna bura hai na.Angry
Aise baat nahi karni thi us ko Pri se.Angry
Us ko kya karna hai Pri kahin bhi jaaye.Angry
Us ka ye comment accha nahi laga ki next time apni mom ko bolna ki Raj k phone par call kare.Angry
 
Kitna dar gayi thi na Pri us accident k baad.Cry
Raj ko fir bhi Pri par kitna bharosa hai na.Big smile
Us ko aur Arjun ko pata hai ki Pri can do it.Wink
Move waala comment bhi kaafi funny tha na.LOL
 
update asap.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 02 August 2008 at 12:08am
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Posted: 02 August 2008 at 12:17am | IP Logged
too good
awesome
update sooon.............
vvdn Senior Member
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Posted: 02 August 2008 at 2:58am | IP Logged
Hey Hiiiiiii,
      welcome back dear......happy that ur back n about the update it was really Owsome.Clap
        but what's going on with PriyankaConfusedto whom she talking on phone???
i hope there nothing serious, plz ab Raj-Pri ke bich koi misunderstanding na ho.
     waise mujhe Raj aur Priyanka ke sare scence acche lage.hope Gazal bhi sab bulkar wapis shoot join kar le so, waiting for next update plzzzzzzzzzz update soon.
         phirse gayab mat ho janaWink
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Posted: 02 August 2008 at 5:21am | IP Logged
welcome back
update was just too gud ..Wat has Pri done yaar???????????
n where is ghazal??????????
too many ques naa
i updated it in orkut too
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Posted: 02 August 2008 at 11:08am | IP Logged
welcome back dear Smile
and that also with a bangStar
i loved the udTongue
and wat's that wat priyanka wanted to tell raj Confused
good suspense ClapClap
waiting for next ud........SmileSmile
ud as soon as possibleThumbs Up


Edited by KRIZZY - 02 August 2008 at 11:11am

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