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Posted: 11 July 2008 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
hiiiiii dear kaisi ho....Tongue
dekho is bar ki update par tumne mujhe comment sabse
pehle diya aur ab me bhi tumhe sabse pehle comment de
rahi hoo..dear..jaldi update karna..agale episode mujhe
kuch romance nazar araha hai dur se..RP k bich...but
is bar ka update to mindblowing tha..Raj Pri ko utha
kar le aya..how sweet.yar..just..too good.aur to aur
Pri shrma bhi rahi thi..wow...mind blowing update yar
aur pata nahin Pri ko nuksan kaun pahuchana chahta
hoga..wo job hi hoga.i hope wo jaldi pakda jaye.aur
ye kya Raj aur CPT k bich to thodi nok jhok hogayi .
heheheh..ne ways..Raj Pri ki awesome convo k liye me
agke update ka eagerly wait karungi yar..u r a great
wrighter yar...plzzz update soon.Tongue RitiTongue




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Posted: 12 July 2008 at 1:27am | IP Logged
too good
i loved it
update soon......
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Posted: 12 July 2008 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Rajeev subah subah Priyanka ke room mein pahuch jata hai because he missed his daughter!!!!! Smile How sweet!!!!! Embarrassed

Priyanka nightgown mein darwaza kholti hai aur Rajeev usse dekhkar flat ho jata hai aur sochta hai ke woh kitni khubsoorat hai!!!! Wink Haaaiiii!!!! Embarrassed

Priyanka toh ab Rajeev ko kehne lagi ki Prachi ko kya khilana chahiye aur Rajeev sun bhi raha hai!!!! Embarrassed Haan akhir Prachi ke baare mein Prachi ki maa ki baat nahi manega toh kiski manega!!!!! Wink

Woh dono saath mein shooting pe jate hai!! Wink Wow!!!! Embarrassed

I just loved Arjun's teasing ke maa baap saath mein aaye hai!!!! LOL Well said Arjun!!!!! Embarrassed

I understood Arjun's double meaning sentence ke situation serious hi hai!!!! Wink

Today the tree hanging scene was going to be shot!!!! Tongue Great!!!!! Tongue

The boys play a trick on Kunal!!!! LOL Bechara!!!!! LOL LOL LOL

Yudi is shown as a strong man in the film!!!!! Confused That different!!!!!

The boys are now making fun of Kunal!!!!! Disapprove

Vikas bhi naa!!!! Angry Kehta hai ke Yudi one piece hai!!!!!! Tongue

Rajeev Kunal ko sab kuch bata deta hai and gives him an idea to get back at them!!!! Approve Haaaaiiiiii he is so sweet!!!! Embarrassed

Priyanka is going to check on Prachi!!!! Smile How sweet!!!!! Smile Smile Smile Rajeev bhi uske saath jata hai!!!! Tongue Haan ab mom dad dono apne bacche ko dekhne toh saath jayenge hi naa!!!!! Embarrassed

Vikas dono ko dekh kar jal raha hai!!!! LOL Serves him right!!!! Approve

But what is Pooja upto?? Confused Confused Confused Woh kuch gadbad karne waali hai lagta hai!!!!! Disapprove

Kunal ne akhir unke hi plan se unhe hi ullu bana diya!!!! Clap

Now the tree hanging scene!!!! Smile

Priyanka tensed hai!!!! Smile Smile Smile I loved Rajeev teasing her about her being fatter now!!!!! LOL

Rajeev ka kamar tutne ka chance hai!!!!! Tongue He is so funny!!!!! LOL

But haan heriones ko utha utha ke haalat kharab ho jati hai as Shahrukh had said!!!! LOL

O God!!!This time neeche kanch ke toote huye tukde bhi pade hai!!!! Disapprove

Spotboys ko laga Rajeev rassi se latkega!!!! Tongue Rajeev ka teasing phir se chalu!!!!! LOL

O God!!!! Shocked Shocked Priyanka's rope snaps!!!! Shocked Shocked Shocked

Rajeev ne toh puri hero ki tarah Priyanka ko bacchaya!!! Tongue Wow!!! Embarrassed Kya baat hai!!!!! Clap Rajeev aur Priyanka dono ek saath gire!!!! Clap

This reminded me of the trust exercise in the serial!!! Embarrassed

Agar Priyanka gir jati wahan pe toh kya ho jata!!! Cry O God!!!! Cry

Ghazal ne yeh kiya!!!!! Angry Yaa phir kisi ko yeh laga ke Rajeev latakne waala hai and this trap was really for him?? Angry

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Posted: 12 July 2008 at 3:34am | IP Logged
wow Rajeev is a real life hero...N wats in dat chit...Update was superb
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Posted: 12 July 2008 at 3:36am | IP Logged
suprb plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon with more of raj pri scnes
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Posted: 12 July 2008 at 5:22am | IP Logged
hey the ud was awesome
yaar agar pri real me gir jati toh uska career toh finish
rajeev is a real hero.
aur us chit pe kya likha hai?
waiting for d next ud
ud soon Smile
Clap
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Posted: 12 July 2008 at 6:14am | IP Logged

Hey outstanding update yaar. Clap

I love Raj carried Pri .WinkVikas has missed the chance.WinkVo bechara dekhta hi reh gaya.LOLI like Arjun's dila ki tere bacchi k baap ne tujhe yaha laya.too funny.LOLLOLLOLLOL

Raj bechara Prachi k liye kahan kahan bhatak raha hai na aur Aliya is his good friend jo us ka har jagah saath de rahi hai.SmileSmile

I like the way Pri blushed when she came to know that Raj brought her here.WinkWinkAccha comment kiya us ne Vikas par ki keval kehte hi rehte ho ki ur my boyfriend kuch karna bhi padta hai.LOL

Ghazal par mujhe pehle se hi doubt tha AngryAngryki vo kuch gadbad kar rahi hai par abhi bhi mai shure nahi hoon ki is she really gulity.ConfusedConfusedConfused

Zara jaldi kiya kar na update.Smile

Waiting eagerly for next part.



Edited by Mahak Sinha - 12 July 2008 at 6:29am
george eliot Senior Member
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Posted: 15 July 2008 at 7:54am | IP Logged
EPISODE 17:
 
Rajeev goes over to his van and reads the note again.

Thanks for everything you have done and a small gift for my saviour so that he doesn't get a back pain

Wishes

Priyanka

Rajeev looks at the small packet that she had sent, it has a MOOV in it!

Rajeev remembered all the teasing and laughed out loudly. He also writes a note, packs something in a small packet and gives it to the spot boy: yeh Priyankaji ko de dena

Spotboy: (smiling) ji kuchh kehna hai?

Rajeev: nehi bas yeh de dena

Spotboy: (still smiling) aur flowers bhi bhejne hai?

Rajeev: Kumaaaar

Spotboy: sorry sir, ok mein chalta hoon

 

Aliya: Rajeev tum kya kar rahe ho?

Rajeev: bas aya

Aliya: Kuchh zaroori message tha? Is everything fine?

Rajjev: haan bas mera manager ka message tha, kuchh dates ke baare mein…!!!!!!!!!!!

Aliya looks at him suspiciously, and then says: ok chalo

 

Aliya and Rajeev reach Galaxy jwellers once again.

Rajeev: order number mujhe yaad hai, ab tum jaake naam pata karo, address nehi hogi

Rajeev waited outside while Aliya walked in the shop with the slip. Rajeev aaj thoda make up lagakar aya hai, a little bit of false beard gave him a completely different look. He looked all around him, people were all busy in their own work, nobody noticed him at all…but somehow he felt somebody was watching him from somewhere…

 

Priyanka room mein rest kar rahi thi, lekin uska poori dhyan Rajeev ke note par thi, it was so funny! She laughed aloud for some time…

Arjun: tu has kyon rahi hai akele?!!

Priyanka chauk jati hai: arrey tu kab aya?

Arjun: 5 minute se khada hoon idhar, par tujhe dikhe tab na! kya pad rahi hai? love letter?

Priyanka: haan love letter hi soch lo, ya fir insult letter

Arjun: woh kya hai? dikha mujhe

Priyanka: arrey nehi, bas kuchh nehi (she hides the note under her pillow) tu bata kaise ana hua

Arjun: bas tujhe dekhne aya thi, btw tujhe accident ke reason ke baare mein pata hai na?

Priyanka: reason? Nehi toh!

Arjun tells her all that has happened.

Priyanka: oh my God, par tujhe sach mein lagta hai ki Ghazal aisa kar sakti hai?

Arjun: pata nehi yaar, lekin kuchh toh gadbad hai

Priyanka: Arjun chal coffee peene chale, kab se room mein baithi hoon

Arjun: par tera bed rest?

Priyanka: tu chal na

 

They both come out and start walking towards the caf, tabhi they spot a commotion near the gates. Two cadets were standing there, along with Rachna, Prachi's babysitter.

Arjun: yahan kya ho raha hai?

Priyanka walks upto the group, she recognised one of them, cadet Nayanika.

Priyanka: Hi Nayanika, what's happening here?

The other one was cadet Iqbal

Ct. Iqbal: yeh bachhi aaplogon ki hai na? apoon janta hai isko

Priyanka: haan kyon?

Ct.Iqbal: yeh madam isse gate se bahar lekar ja reili thi, apoon ne isse roka

Ct Nayanika: haan aur isne iss ladki ke saath bahut badtamizi ki, mafi maango isse

Iqbal: kabhi nehi, pehle isse pooch bachhi ko lekar kahan bhag rehi thi

Nayanika: but that doesn't mean tu ek ladki ke saath aisa behave karega

Priyanka: hold on, hold on, ek min (To Rachna) kya hua Rachna, tum Prachi ko kahan lekar ja rahe the?

Rachna: mein toh isse sair karane le ja rahi thi, par isne roka…

Priyanka: Rajeev se poochha?

Rachna: haan unhone ne hi kahan ki Prachi ko thoda ghuma layoon, woh room mein rehna nehi chahti

Iqbal: yeh jhooth bol rahi hai, shakl se hi lagta hai

Nayanika: stop it Iqbal

Iqbal: you stop, feminism ka matlab yeh nehi ki tu har ladki ko sadhu samjhe

Priyanka: oh my God, Rachna tum Prachi ko lekar room mein jao, sahi mein gate se bahar jana thik nehi hoga

Rachna: ok ma'am

Rachna chali jaati hai.

Arjun: tere proposal se yeh ladki kuchh khush nehi hai, lekin woh Prachi ko campus se bahar kyon leke ja rahi thi?

Priyanka: wohi toh pata nehi Arjun, mujhe kuchh thik nehi lag raha hai, ispe thoda nazar rakhna padega (To the cadets) ab tum log jhagarna bandh karo, (to Iqbal) thanks for your concern for prachi

Cd. Iqbal: ek baat bolun? Bachhi ko zara sambhalkar rakhna, kuchh toh garbar hai

He leaves.

 

Arjun: ek baat bata, tu Prachi ko lekar itna concerned kyon hai?

Priyanka: arrey, chhoti si bachhi hai, bechari ki ma nehi hai, hum sab ko uska khayal rakhna chahiye

Arjun: tu kuchh zyada hi soch rahi hai usko lekar, koi aur baat toh nehi hai Pri?

Priyanka: kya baat

Arjun: tu achhi tarah se janti hai mein kya mean kar raha hoon

Pri: oh ho Arjun, tu bhi

 

Aliya comes out of the shop.

Rajeev: kuchh mila?

Aliya: very strange! Pehle toh mujhe kuchh batana hi nehi chahta, fir naam poocha toh naam ka bhi record nehi tha!

Rajeev: !!!!!!!!!! strange, iska matlab hamare paas kuchh aur suraag nehi hai! this is disgusting

Aliya: don't worry Rajeev, chalo wapas chalte hai, kuchh baithkar sochenge, achha tumhare paas aur kuchh hai jisse ki Prachi ka kuchh pata chale?

Rajeev: nehi Aliya………chalo

 

They reach the academy, Kumar, the spot boy comes to him: Priyanka ji ne aapko bulaya hai Sir

Rajeev: okay

Rajeev goes over to Priyanka's room. "Shayad Priyanka mujhse gussa hai, usse itna tease nehi karna chahiye tha,"he thinks. He remembered the note he sent her

 

"Thanks that you remembered my poor back, here's a small gift for you so that when you faint next time I won't sprain my back again!" He had sent her a packet of slim fast tablets!!……… "kuchh zyada hi ho gaya shayad, ladkiyon ko unke weight ke baare mein tease nehi karna chahiye" he kept thinking…he needed to compensate the damage…he picked up a bunch of flowers from the garden before going to her room………..

 

Rajeev: may I come in ma'am?

Priyanka looks at him with mock anger

Rajeev: This is for the lovely lady (gives the flowers to Priyanka)

Priyanka: who's fat too!

Rajeev: arrey nehi nehi, woh toh bas main mazak kar raha tha…

Priyanka: hmmm…toh aap boliye ki main moti nehi hoon

Rajeev: woh actually Priyanka, aaj mera brat hai toh aaj main jhoot nehi bolunga!!!!! hahahaha

Priyanka: achha? yeh kaunsa brat hai??

Rajeev: hai ek brat! Satyabad brat! isiliye aaj mujhse itna bada jhooth mat bulwao !!! hahahaha

Priyanka: oho toh aj aap sirf sach bolenge?!

Rajeev: bilkul!

Priyanka:  achha?!! Toh fir thik hai, main aaj aapse jo kuchh bhi poochungi, apko sach bolna padega!

Rajeev: sure! Poochho na jo puchhna hai

Priyanka: Ekta ji ke baare mein aap kya sochte hai?

Rajeev: very smart haan? Thik hai aaj dil kholke sach bolunga! Ekta bahut hi ziddi, ghamandi, adiyal, aur idiotic hain

Priyanka: baapre aapne toh dil kholke gali de di!

Both laugh loudly!

Priyanka: achha yeh bataiye DJs ke baare mein aapka kya raay hain

Rajeev: woh toh aur bhi gaye guzre hai, satyanash kar diya hamare story ka!

Both laugh louder! Priyanka was rolling on the floor

Priyanka: aur Aamir kaisa film hai?

Rajeev: sach batau? story mein bahut gadbad hai! mujhe toh abi tak samajh mein nehi aya ki mere character ke saath hi itna sab kuchh kyon hua?

Priyanka: hahahaha, seriously Rajeev you are too funny, kash yeh sab koi reporter sun pata

Rajeev: haan Rajeev ka pol khul jata!

Priyanka: Hmm next question: Aamna Shariff se aap sach mein pyar karte ho? Dekho yeh baat sach sach batana, no diplomacy, haan?!

Rajeev: okay sach batata hoon, haan kisi zamane mein main sach mein unse pyar karta tha, par ab nehi, ab hum dost hai, sach mein bahut achhe dost…

Priyanka: achha toh ab aap ke dil ka seat khali hai?

Rajeev looks at her…keeps looking

Priyanka: kya hua bolo?

Rajeev: pata nehi … koi hai jo mujhe bahut achhi lagne lagi hai…lekin woh pyar hai ki kya hai pata nehi…

He keeps looking at her

Suddenly Priyanka feels a little alarmed…Rajeev's looks were a little disturbing, she regretted asking this question……she couldn't look into his eyes, she had also started feeling strangely about Rajeev off late…woh apne nazren jhuka leti hai

Rajeev: aur ek sach baat bolun Priyanka….(still looking at her intently)…

Priyanka: (cuts him off in the middle) okay okay, bas aap ka question answer session khatam hua!

 

Rajeev: thik hai, ab tumhari baari

Priyanka: matlab?

Rajeev: matlab ab iss game mein tumhari bari, ab sawal main poochhonga

Priyanka: aur main jhooth bhi bol sakti hoon, mera toh koi brat wat nehi hai!!!he he

Rajeev: isiliye tumhare liye rules thoda different hai, tum mere sawalon ka alternately sach aur jhooth jawab dena

Priyanka: matlab answer 1 mein sach bolun, toh answer 2 mein intentionally jhooth bolna padega? Wow this is fun!

Rajeev: haan ab tum decide kar lo ki tum sach se shuru karoge ya fir jhooth se

Priyanka: okay I'll start with truth

Rajeev: alright, here we go! Tumhara favorite co-star kaun hai?

Priyanka: sach: Vikas!! Hee hee

Rajeev: hmm ab batao tumhe Naina ka role zyada pasand hain ya fir Ekta ke kisi bahu ka?

Priyanka: okay, Naina ka role!

Rajeev: kyaaa? tumhe saas bahu ke roles zyada achha lagta hain? Ikkkkks

Priyanka: kya ikks ? wahan pe kitne ache ache jwellery aur make up hota hai! Naina bankar main lipstick bhi nehi laga payi!

Rajeev: kyon fresher's ball ke din? Tum sach mein bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi

Priyanka: oho thank you thank you, par aisa mouka roz roz kahan ata tha? Aapko toh kitne achhe achhe dresses diya jata tha, par humare liye wohi uniform L okay next question

Rajeev: Do you like me?

 

Now it was Priyanka's turn to say the truth but she had completely forgotten about it…!!!!!!

 

Priyanka: (thinking) oh my God yeh kya question hai? par iss baar toh mujhe jhooth bolna hai na? ok (LOUDLY) bas sirf like? mujhe toh aapse pyar hone laga hai!

Rajeev: (looking serious, but smiling inside) Priyanka tum game ke rules toh nehi bhul rahi ho?…tumhe ek baar sach bolna hai aur ek bar jhooth, alternately

Priyanka: (thinking) aha ab yeh mujhe confuse karna chahte hain (loudly) haan mujhe yaad hai, aur yehi mera answer hai

Rajeev: dekho iss game mein cheating nehi ki jati…

Priyanka feels a little uncomfortable, she tried to cover it up: main cheating nehi kar rahi hoon, promise

Rajeev: (looking straight into her eyes, with his signature expression in Raj-Naina scenes) yeh baat tumne mujhe pehle kyon nehi batayi

 

Now Priyanka feels evidently embarrassed, she sensed something in Rajeev's eyes and realized something must have gone totally wrong!

 

Tabhi they heard a knock on her door, they both come out of their trance

Rachna had come to hand over Prachi, she was leaving, she couldn't find Rajeev in his room, so she came straight to Priyanka!

 

The moment Rachna came, Priyanka remembered she had called Rajeev to talk about Prachi  

Priyanka: arrey dekho baton baton mein bhul hi gayi tumhe kis liye bulayi thi…

She tells him everything that happened concerning Rachna.

Rajeev: oh my god, maine usse Prachi ko guest house se bahar le jane ke liye mana kiya tha aur woh gate ke paas chali gayi? Koi usse dekh leta toh?  

Priyanka: haan Rachna ka behavior thoda ajeeb toh tha par aap itna tensed kyon ho? Aap Pachi ko chhupaa kyon chahte hai?

Rajeev: it's a long story Priyanka…

Priyanka: aap batao na, seems things are pretty serious…

Rajeev tells her everything.

Priyanka: oh my God, iska matlab us din jo apa pe humla hua tha woh bhi Prachi se related kuchh hai?

Rajeev: kuchh pata nehi Priyanka, koi suraag, koi saboot nehi hai mere paas, bas mera intuition keh raha hai ki main Prachi ko thoda sambhalkar rakhoon, shayad uske saath bahut saare raz jure hue hai…

Priyanka: aur aaj Galaxy jwellers mein bhi koi clue nehi mila?

Rajeev: no

Priyanka: achha ek baat batao, tumne kaha ki payment baki thi uss ring ka?

Rajeev: haan toh?

Priyanka: payment poore kiye bina hi ring ka delivery ho gaya?

Rajeev: arrey haan, this is quite strange!

Priyanka: kab ho sakta hai aisa? Socho toh

Priyanka's words struck a chord in Rajeev's head!! Sach mein, he had never thought of this! Priyanka you are a genius!

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