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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sony_123

Originally posted by magicgirlankita

Originally posted by sony_123

nice going. but i have some doubts. plz clear them whoever is writing.
in the first part rahul says "di ko wo abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti wo abhi ek successful doc ban na chahti hain". but then when armaan and ridhima introduce to each other theri conversation goes some thing like this
"R:well m done wid my studies n searchin fr a gud job but i dont think i wud be doin ny job
A:may i knw y?
R:coz my mom n dad wanna get me married
A:oh....n wat bout u?
R:well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me "
what is all these? you made armaan a business man. can anyone tell me if atleast ridz is doctor??????
see dont mistake me whoever has written the part. i dont mean to hurt them. but i just wanted to tel thet it is contradicting the first part.
anyone plz clear my doubts before updating next parts. plz.........

HEY HEY HEY NO WORRIES DARLING THE MAGICGIRL IS HERE SO ABT UR FIRST DOUBT

    YUP RIDZ IS A DOC BUT ARMAAN IS A BUSINESSMAN
  • AND RIDZ DOES NOT WANNA MARRY COZ SHE THINKS AFTER MARRIAGE SHE LL NOT BE ABLE TO CONCENTRATE ON HER CAREER

I HOPE NOW UR DOUBTS ARE CLEARED AND STILL IF ANY DOUB PLZZZZZZZ ASK US  

if this is the reason, ridz could have told armaan the same reason. why did she tel him that "well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me".

well to that i would say that many different writers are writing the ff so choti-choti galtiyaan ho jaati hain

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sony_123

Originally posted by magicgirlankita

Originally posted by sony_123

nice going. but i have some doubts. plz clear them whoever is writing.
in the first part rahul says "di ko wo abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti wo abhi ek successful doc ban na chahti hain". but then when armaan and ridhima introduce to each other theri conversation goes some thing like this
"R:well m done wid my studies n searchin fr a gud job but i dont think i wud be doin ny job
A:may i knw y?
R:coz my mom n dad wanna get me married
A:oh....n wat bout u?
R:well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me "
what is all these? you made armaan a business man. can anyone tell me if atleast ridz is doctor??????
see dont mistake me whoever has written the part. i dont mean to hurt them. but i just wanted to tel thet it is contradicting the first part.
anyone plz clear my doubts before updating next parts. plz.........

HEY HEY HEY NO WORRIES DARLING THE MAGICGIRL IS HERE SO ABT UR FIRST DOUBT

    YUP RIDZ IS A DOC BUT ARMAAN IS A BUSINESSMAN
  • AND RIDZ DOES NOT WANNA MARRY COZ SHE THINKS AFTER MARRIAGE SHE LL NOT BE ABLE TO CONCENTRATE ON HER CAREER

I HOPE NOW UR DOUBTS ARE CLEARED AND STILL IF ANY DOUB PLZZZZZZZ ASK US  

if this is the reason, ridz could have told armaan the same reason. why did she tel him that "well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me".

ohk sweetz it was all my mistake nt ankita's actually i dint remember ankita writin about ridz being a doctor actaully sm1 wot n one part tht armaan is already their @ patiyala because he had sum wrk ryt there so i thought tht he might not be a doctor in this FF so letz ridz also nt be a doctor but a gurl of business management

newayz i'll edit it but tell me wat shud i ryt bout ridz occupation n as well armaan's

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 6:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sheena_12

Originally posted by sony_123

Originally posted by magicgirlankita

Originally posted by sony_123

nice going. but i have some doubts. plz clear them whoever is writing.
in the first part rahul says "di ko wo abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti wo abhi ek successful doc ban na chahti hain". but then when armaan and ridhima introduce to each other theri conversation goes some thing like this
"R:well m done wid my studies n searchin fr a gud job but i dont think i wud be doin ny job
A:may i knw y?
R:coz my mom n dad wanna get me married
A:oh....n wat bout u?
R:well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me "
what is all these? you made armaan a business man. can anyone tell me if atleast ridz is doctor??????
see dont mistake me whoever has written the part. i dont mean to hurt them. but i just wanted to tel thet it is contradicting the first part.
anyone plz clear my doubts before updating next parts. plz.........

HEY HEY HEY NO WORRIES DARLING THE MAGICGIRL IS HERE SO ABT UR FIRST DOUBT

    YUP RIDZ IS A DOC BUT ARMAAN IS A BUSINESSMAN
  • AND RIDZ DOES NOT WANNA MARRY COZ SHE THINKS AFTER MARRIAGE SHE LL NOT BE ABLE TO CONCENTRATE ON HER CAREER

I HOPE NOW UR DOUBTS ARE CLEARED AND STILL IF ANY DOUB PLZZZZZZZ ASK US  

if this is the reason, ridz could have told armaan the same reason. why did she tel him that "well i dont have ny problem in gettin married but m waitin fr sum1 whom i trust n can make sure tht hez the only ryt person fr me".

ohk sweetz it was all my mistake nt ankita's actually i dint remember ankita writin about ridz being a doctor actaully sm1 wot n one part tht armaan is already their @ patiyala because he had sum wrk ryt there so i thought tht he might not be a doctor in this FF so letz ridz also nt be a doctor but a gurl of business management

newayz i'll edit it but tell me wat shud i ryt bout ridz occupation n as well armaan's

oh not at all sheena di its alright well make ridz a doc and armaan a businessman

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 7:22am | IP Logged
thanks for answering my doubts. nice parts. continue writing
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 8:08am | IP Logged
hey ankita awesome parts Clap
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 10:28am | IP Logged

Originally posted by magicgirlankita

hey deepika,
luved it gal u r awesome i m sure we ll all rock it,kyunki hum sab ko milkar abhi bohot likhna hai yaaron lets do it
hey yachna,
do cont u r also v.good
and lastly hey sheena di,
wassup yaar i can wait to read the next part plzzzzz cont asap plzzzzz plzzzzz
luv ya
@[email protected]

hey ankita thanxEmbarrassedabsolutely adored ur part...loved da atta baarishWinkWink

sheena amazn part..rajma wid pasta n rotiLOLLOL gotta try dat

yachna yaar do continue i love d way u right

da ffs so light n fun...amazn work guyzz

n thanx hina, yogitha n sony..(sorry dont know ur name)Embarrassed

luv deepika



Edited by d101 - 15 May 2008 at 10:32am
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 10:36am | IP Logged
hey guy koi toh continue karo........
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 10:57am | IP Logged

here goes guyzz

muskaan: oye dekh
rahul:dekh hi to raha hoon
muskaan:(holds his chin n turns it towards AR): gadhe mujhe nahi unhai
rahul: kya zamana aa gaya hai..girfriend ke bajayae uske bhai ko dekh raha hoon...koi dekhega to kya sooche ga..
muskaan: abbe chup
n they both lean against da door trying to get a good view

armaan and ridhima are lost in each others eyes..suddenly ridhima realizes shes on top of him..
getting io
ridhima:(shes looking down) im sorry
armaan: still lost..stands n before he knows what hes doing, he puts back the strands of her hair obstructing his view and gently strokes her cheek
ridhima: what..what r u doing?
armaan: suddenly realizing: uhh...arre aatta..haan aatta hatta raha tha..tumhare baaloon mein abhi bhi hai..rukko
before ridhima even realizes what hes doin he bring water n starts trying to clean her hair with it
ridhima: yeh kya kar rahe ho??
armaan: saaf kar raha hoon aur kya?
ridhima: mere aatte bharre sarr par tumne paani dalla..dimag out of order hai kya?? pagal mere sar par aata gundhae ga kya??
armaan: goondhane ka to patta nahi..par tumhare gussae bhare sar par kadak roti zaroor ban jayegi
ridhima: urgh..bhaad me jaoo...n she storms off

muskaan: yaar rahul..in donno ne to humare achche bharre plan pe atta phaer diyaa..hai rabba lagta hai mein kawari hi mar jaongi

hope u guyzz like it Big smile

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