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d101 Goldie

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 6:26am | IP Logged
hey really great concept Clap Clap Clap gr8 idea

gidha Senior Member

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Posts: 441

Posted: 13 May 2008 at 6:32am | IP Logged
yogzz IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 8:15am | IP Logged
wow hina di great part Clap
ankita yaar
continue soon
d101 Goldie

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 11:17am | IP Logged

hey me continuin..hope u guyz dont mind. Big smile Wink

muskaan:mein phone lagati hoon..she dials..

aramaan:(trying to imitate automated teleservice voice) yeh rahul ka phone nahi hai...kripya apne phonebook pe sahi number dekh kar milayein...ting tong

muskaan: armaan bhaiyaa..kahan ho..bus nikalne wali hai Angry Angry

armaan: kya baat hai aaj bari yaad aa rahi hai...lagta hai aaj barra jhatkaa lagne walla hai...

muskaan: woh to lagega hi..zor ka jhatka dheere se

armaan: kya??

muskaan:mene kaha bus nikalne waali hai aap aa jao jaldi se

armaan: as usual im way ahead of u... Wink im already here

muskaan: kya????

armaan: haan meri maa..yahan ke clinic me kuch kaam tha to mein subhe ki bus se hi aa gaya..ab jaldi se apne raowwl ka address bol..uske ghar jakke apni sewa karwata hoon Wink

muskaan: hai ki kar ditta

armaan: abbe thand rakh...address bol

muskaan; haan..likho Cry

cuts da phone...
muskaan: par gayye thand

rahul: oye tujhe abhi se thand lag rahi hai...abhi to bus nainital ke liyee nikali bhi nahi

muskaan; gaddhe..thand mujhe nahi humare plan ko lag gayyee...hai rabba bachcha lena

meanwhile armaan rings da bell at rahuls house..ridhima there alone...makin cake for her brother

hope u liked it

luv deepika

Edited by d101 - 14 May 2008 at 12:36am
hinz Viewbie

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Great continuation D101,

Please name yourself,agey jaake bohot kaam aney wali/waley ho tum

U've given this ff a new twist already

Well done and hope Ankita takes it from her tomorrow
unless anyone else has any ideas

It sounds good for now
bazingaaa Senior Member

Joined: 24 March 2008
Posts: 446

Posted: 13 May 2008 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
hey continue really really really fast wa all are waiting please hurry Cry
ami_princess IF-Dazzler

Joined: 18 April 2007
Posts: 2600

Posted: 13 May 2008 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
as riddhima heard the bell she smiled broadly! she was going to see her brother now!
she quickly ran to the room and hid behind it. she had a naught smile on her face. she looked up and saw a bucket full of water and rotten eggs! she slowly opened the door but now fully. she was still hiding behind teh door.

armaan saw the door was unlocked. he was confused why nobody opened it though. he tried to knock again but it opened slowly. he thought to open the door by himself. as he opened the door widely, the bucket full of water and rotten eggs fell on him. he looked shocked, angry, confused, wet and stinky.

suddenly he hear a loud laugh from inside. he looked around and found a girl emerging from behind the door. he can see that she was in a beautiful red dress. he was awed when he saw her turn around. he saw a beautiful angelic face in front of him.e
to him she looked no less lik angel. he laugh was so soft and so sweet to her, her green eyes which had a naughtiness in it were way to attracting, her rosy lips were drawing himself to her.....
for a second he was lost and he didn't knew that riddhima had actually stopped laughing and was looking at him in an guilty face.

as riddhima turned around she found their was other man instead of her brother. she was guilty, angry and scared. the was the men was staring at her was freaking her out.

she coughed a bit to get his attention but he didn't budged. she made the noise again but he didn't listed so this time getting angry she pinched him.
armaan immediately came out of the trance and looked at her angry face.

A: ouch wat was that for...
R: well you weren't coming out of your day dream so i pinched you to tell you that it is reality.
Armaan looked embarrassed!

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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Smile nice start...

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