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update it please

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Plzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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HeyWink!..I just read the whole thingBig smile!..Its soo cuteLOL!..."Operation marriage".LOLLOL....Funny title hunLOLLOL

Sheena di,Ankita,Deepika & all the others who have written the parts- Owesome workClap

Somebody Continue soonWink..I'll be waitingBig smileLOL

Love KanuHeart

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Originally posted by *[email protected]@*

HeyWink!..I just read the whole thingBig smile!..Its soo cuteLOL!..."Operation marriage".LOLLOL....Funny title hunLOLLOL

Sheena di,Ankita,Deepika & all the others who have written the parts- Owesome workClap

Somebody Continue soonWink..I'll be waitingBig smileLOL

Love KanuHeart

thank u sooooo much fr yo comment kanika between nice name n kanu sounds more sweet



Edited by sheena_12 - 24 May 2008 at 3:11am
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Plz cont. soooon Wink
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Hey friendes

Since you all are depressed I thought that I would continue to write.Its my first attempt, so plz forgive me if its bad. So friends cheer up.

After they ate the dinner, they decided to watch a horror movie ( u can imagine one of ur fav horror movies. Ridz didn't want to but muskaan and rahul convinced her. They decided to sit in the basement room, it was one of rahul og muskaans idea to bring armaan and ridz closer. Rahul and muskaan sat on one couch together and it was one coach with two seats where ridz and armaan had to sit together. Armaan slightly felt happy inside, but he didn't know why.
They started to watch the movie. Ridz was so scared that she started moving closer to armaan. She didn't know what she was doing at all. It was no space left between them both.
Ar- darr lag raha hai? He whispered in her ear. Riddhima came out of her thought and moved her head to look at armaan. They were so close that they could hear each other's breath. They stared in each other's eyes, till rahul asked ridz to get some chips and cold drink from the kitchen. Armaan and Ridz came out of the trace. Ridz tried to move from armaan, but her duppatta was stuck in armaans shirt button which made her crash in armaans chest. They both took out the dupatta. Rahul and muskaan couldn't see the scene between then bcoz they sat in the front while armaan and ridz sat behind them.
-     Haan main abbhi leke aati hoon, she replied to rahuls question
-     Di, mujhe pata hai appko kitchen akele jaane se darr lagta hai jub hum koi horro movie dekthe hai. Armaan bhain plz aap di ke saath jayenge?
-     Affcourse he said with a slightly smile on his face.
They both moved out of the room. Armaan and ridz didn't talk with each other.
-     Tumhe kosi cold drink chaiye, ridz asked armaan while she took out the snacks and drinks
-     Jo bhi tum dena chati hoo. Ridz looked at him with a shy face, but she didnt know why she was so shy right know. Suddenly the light went off, and ridz run and hugged armaan. Armaan suddenly felt a current through his body. She held him so hard, and she never wanted to let go off him. Armaan hugged her back, and tried to assure her that everything was okay. Ridz moved slowly out of armaans arm, and tried not to make any eye contact with him. Armaan was in very naughty mood know, so he tried to scare her
-     Ridz vaha par koun hai, he said pointing behind ridz. Ridz got so scared that she fastly covered her eyes with her hand.
-     Ridz dekhoo na, mujhe bohoot darr lagra hai
-     Nahi armaan, main nahi dekoo gi. Plz tum mat darro, nahi to tum behos hojaoy ge, aur phir mujhe us bhot se bhohot dar lage ga. Armaan laugede at her silly talks. He duddenly got an amaizing idea. He fell on the floor, acting like he was behoos. Ridz removed her hand slight from her eyes
-     Armaan plz uttho, she said while she kept his head on her lap. She didn't dare to look behind her, bcoz she thought someone stood there.
-     Armaan plz uthoo, mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai. Armaan finaly opned his eyes and looked at ridz, ridz quickly hugged him and asked him if he was good. She felt so secured in his arms.
-     Tumhe pata mein kitni darr gaye thi. Tum plz mujhe choor ke mat jana, she said without knowing why she said that, but she felt good after saying those words, but why did she say that, she thought
-     Kyio na choor ke jao, he asked her
She didn't answer him, bcoz she didn't had any answer of his question.
-     Chaley, he asked her
-     Per who bhoot?
-     Mein mazzak kar raha tha, wha par koi nahi hai, he said
-     Toh tum mazaak kar rahe the? She said while hitting hum hard on his arm
-     Ouch, kiya kar rahi hoo, dart hota hai
-     Tumhe pata hai me kitna darr gayi thi, you stupid idot, she said to him
Ridz started move towards to bring the snacks, and went to rahul and muskaan.

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very nice part Embarrassed . plese continue soon

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