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FF:Bhulbhulaya #2 LAST PART PG-67 12/11 (Page 67)

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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 7:55am | IP Logged
RESERVED ooooh my God excellent ending
i just loved it but lil sorrow to y did it end
but ur ending was so sweet that it overcomed
 it very nice FF
 very nice concept
n dada dadi concept was soooo beautiful
weldone yaar
plzz if u open one more ff do tell me
 
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Edited by shweet29 - 12 November 2008 at 8:20am

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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Part is nice!!!!!!!

BUT AN UNEXPECTED ENDING!!!!!!

I was expecting a real time horror at end but it was plain normal
when compared to the story upto last epi!!!!!!!!!!

But nice!! something really different!!!!!!!!

but if u have some other diff., ending in mind
 try 2 change but wait for other responses as
many people may like this ending!!!!!!!

I liked it only 75% so i was expecting 100%
as I loved this FF 100% till today!!!!!!!!!


don't mind if i hurt u !!!!!!!!

but definetly i liked it !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 8:25am | IP Logged
hey pinky omggg yaar it ws brilliant,it ws scaryng bt nt tht msh yeah it ws thrillng,adventurous seriously yaar i jst lvd it yaar nd evry1 ws soooo shockd seeing her condition gttng worsd as devyana kept hittng her nd ar ws nd he surrendr her fr sake of his lfe his life riddhima exctly lke wch i told u tht movie bt use bhi kahi zyada scaryng tha yaar nd thn devyana turnd into devi laxmi maa wowwwwwwwwww yaar icnt believ ths tht ws sooooooo unexpectd i thought suddenly changd bt seriously thtts ws d surprisd fr us tht she did bcz seriously yaar whtevr she hd told evrythng is true seriously its d truth in our life  TongueTongue.....it ws soo emotional yaar wht she said nd evry1 ws so shockd seeing her in tht roop bt thy had 2 believe tht its true nd bcz of their true lv thy survivd nd omgggggggg yaar whn he had surrenderd i thought lke tht it would be tht movie bt it suddenly turnd into wowwwwwwwww yaar ridz condition ws soooooooooo worse  devi maa ki jai ho............i jst lvd it 2 d core yaar i hv no words 2 xpress it ws dammmmmmmmmmmmm gud nd scaryng omgggggggg yaar i ws so scard wth grt ending yaar i still cnt believe ths tht ths is d end of d story nd wow yaar 50yrs hehehehehe she ws tllng their grandchildrens omgggggggggg yaar nd 50yrs mein bhi still their romance increasng nd their fghts wowwwwwwwwww yaar choooooooooooooooo cute yaar jst lvd it marvellous .............
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thnku sooooooooooooo mch fr d pm
tc
luv u a lot nd sooon opn wth new ff lke ths i would lv 2 read ab to adat ho gayi hai hehehhe..........
yachuSmile


Edited by yachna - 12 November 2008 at 9:12am
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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 9:06am | IP Logged
nice update. it was definitely unique as u wanted it to be. at first, before lakshmi ma came i was feeling as though i was reading krishina cottage ending. lakshmi ma at the end was a surprize , it was surely unexpected. but as u asked , i am telling what i feel. i didnt like lakshmi ma as devyani. whatever u said about karm and all was ok, but i somehow didnt like lakshmi maa to be cruel. again AR as dada-dadi was also nice. but i couldnt imagine AR as dada-dadi. on the whole the end was fine. no need to write it again according to me. thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 9:34am | IP Logged
really sweet and unusal endin! i liked it!
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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 10:12am | IP Logged
hey, amazing prt, luved it so much
luved the laxmi mataji scene nd all things in tht scene
cant believe dey r dadaji nd dadiji nw, nd those thr
luved the ending scene whn she caught him nd thr cute scene
dn wry, dis concept ws awesome as well, nd really enjoyed dis whole fanfic nd all the twist of itBig smile
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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 11:22am | IP Logged
woooow grt ending really good
tnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 November 2008 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
WOW just fantastic i luved the end it was just perfect it was a fantastic FF i loved reading every bit of it thnxs for giveing us such a wonderful FF luv nruti

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