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FF:Bhulbhulaya #2 LAST PART PG-67 12/11 (Page 52)

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Posted: 04 August 2008 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
oh great part pinky and plz try to update next part soon finally they know how to save ridz frm devyana just can't wait to know how they will do it plz update soon

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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 11:01pm | IP Logged

I'm very very sorry.........i know i havent replied to everyones comments yet but i'm really short of time....i've tried not delaying my ff much this time....

RECAP:

            Armaan attacked by ridz.Armaan finds a way to seperate ridz from devyana.

PART-38:

             Ridz was surprised with the surprise party armaan had threw for her.This was least expected from him & that too without any occasion.She still remembered how shocked she was in the morning when she saw the whole hall shattered.Armaan was glad she dint remember anything.He covered up saying that some thief had come but he got caught.Ridz still felt that he lied to her & tried hiding something.Then in afternoon armaan just came as a shock telling her they are going out in the evening & be ready.She was damn confused with his behaviour.She had tried hundred times asking him what he was up to but all in vain.She got frustrated & finally gave up asking him.Then he bought her to this hall & she was shocked to see such a huge party thrown for her.When she asked him the reason he told that he's very happy that she is no more in the asylum.She came out of her thoughts when anjie called her.

An:  ridzi,kya kar rahi hai tu????chal na cake cut karte hai.....

R:  cake?????par di mera birthday thodi hai aaj......

An:  toh kya hua????hum sab bahut khush hai isliye humne socha ki tu cake kaategi......(in her mind: waise bhi aaj tujhe bahut badi khushi milney waali hai.)

R:  theek hai.....chalo.....

       She cuts the cake & gives the piece to armaan who winks at her.He was in real good mood today as he knew that today his ridz would seperate from devyana.His only tension was if devyana harms ridz before this seperation.Ridz noticed the change in armaan & not only armaan but everyone else was also very happy.She was forced to think that AA,RM & armaan knew something that she didnt.But what was it?Before she could think more armaan pulled her on the dance floor alongwith others.Looking at them so happy after such a long time she forgot all her worries.Even she started enjoying herself.They were dancing to all remix songs.It wasnt any sort of couple dance this time.Everyone were dancing in groups like friends.AA,RM & AR were dancing in one group.They all went mad becoming so happy after such a long time.It was like their old days were back.Shash & padma were dancing with nani,shubh & keerti.Later they were joined by AA,RM & AR & they formed a very big group.After much much awaited time everyone were happy & tension free all thanks to armaan.He threw this party telling he wanted to bring back old days & revive all memories which will make ridz smile & he achieved this.Everyone had died each minute to see the smiling & glowing face of ridz.

              She alongwith anjali & muskaan were surprised once more as atul rahul & armaan screamed on the mike literally bursting into everyones ears that tomorrow is friendship's day & they dedicate this evening to all those friends who were,are & will always remain close.They announced that whatever happens with them they'll always remain together.They joined their hands & came down & gave their hands to girls who gladly took their hands & raised their hands in the name of 'friends forever'.Ar,Ra & At gave cards & soft toys & chocolates to girls & tied them bands.Everyone present in the hall were admiring their friendship.And why wouldnt they???Everyone in life needs such true friends during ups & downs of life......

              But as we say all good things dont last for long.Armaan was waiting impatiently for zoya to come.His plan was to throw this party & seperate ridz from devyana forever.He wanted to this in front of the world to prove to everyone that his ridz was never mad.He had to prove this to shash & padma who dint believe his story.Only AA & RM were aware of his this planning & were very happy with armaans idea.But somewhere he still feared that what would devyana be planning now.After knowing that armaan finally knew her truth she just couldnt be sitting.Maybe hopefully she was too shocked at the moment to react.He hoped if that was the case than she remains shocked for some more time.He tried calling zoya but it was not reachable.Finally his 10th call hit it & he spoke to zoya.

Ar:  aap kahaan hai????

Z:  main raaste mein hi hu aur hamaara kaam ho gaya hai......yeh taaweez bahut shaktishaali hai aur ab isse devyana choo nahi paayegi....aap fikar mat kijiye &.........the call ended due to network problem.

           Armaan was happy that their plan worked.He was waiting impatiently when he saw the reflection of those red eyes on the opposite glass.He turned abruptly & saw riddhima was going somewhere.He stood there for a moment shocked.Was it his imagination or he really saw those red eyes????If it was just ridz y would she go away without talking????If it was devyana than did she know he was talking to zoya???but she couldnt know that as he dint use her name.If it was devyana then y dint she harm me when she had this golden opportunity???His thoughts were broken as he heard a loud shriek from outside.

            He ran out & saw ridz was throwing all the things here & there.Everyone in the hall was terrifed at her behaviour.She smashed all the cold drink bottles on the floor & threw all the snacks on floor.She became wild.Most of them thought she again got some kind of mental attack.Only AA RM & armaan knew the truth.Atul mustered courage & went forwards to stop her but she aimed the broken bottle on him.He was just saved as armaan ducked on the right time & pulled him down but the bottle injured atuls right hand leaving a deep cut into it.Anjali screamed atul's name & was terrified at seeing the blood.But armaan tied a cloth to his wound.This scene increased the terror in people.No one uttered a word.If this was not enough she started walking on the broken pieces of bottles piercing her feet deeply in each glass piece.Armaan could no longer take it & went forwards to pull her but instead he was pulled by her on the glass pieces.She kept both her legs on armaans legs which were heavily bleeding.But armaan was ready to take these glasses in his own feet if it meant that ridz feet would be saved.Everyone started pitying over armaan.Rahul made a move towards him to help him but armaan pointed him not to come as he couldnt risk anyone else's life.Meanwhile devyana was staring at armaan & giving him a wicked smile.Armaan hated those red eyes.He just wished zoya comes soon & then she entered.Armaan saw her enter through the door.Devyana was standing opposite to her.He afraid if she turned back she would see zoya.His legs were terribly paining & giving away.He threw his body over her hugging her tightly for support.Then he did a small nod to zoya to come from behind & put the taaweez.Zoya quietly moved & put the taweez around ridz neck.With a shriek of scream AR's body was thrown away.Devyana couldnt resist the powers of the taweez & pushed armaans body while she left ridz body abruptly throwing her off the floor.But fortunately both AR were ok.Everyone in the crowd was surprised/shocked at what just happened.Rahul & muskaan helped armaan & ridz get up & gave them support.Meanwhile devyana once again appeared shouting & terrified.

D:  TUM LOGON NE MERE SAATH DHOKA KIYA HAI......MAIN TUM LOGON KO CHODUGI NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!US BABA KA TAWEEZ TUM LOGON KO ZYAADA SAMAY BACHAA NAHI SAKTA.....TUMNE MERE SAARE KIYE KARAAYE PAR PAANI DAAL DIYA(pointing towards armaan & zoya).....KITNI MUSHKIL SE MAINE APNE AAP KO US RIDDHIMA SE JODAA THA......TUMHE IS SABKI KIMAT CHUKAANI HOGI....AUR TUM.(pointing towards ridz).....TUMHE KYA LAGTA HAI TUMNE MERE PRITHVI KO MUJHSE CHEEN LIYA?????NAHI PRITHVI IS JANAM MEIN AUR AANEWALE HAR JANAM MEIN SIRF MERA HOGA......MERE PRITHVI KO MUJHSE KOI JUDAA NAHI KAR SAKTA.....MAIN WAAPAS AAOGII....ZAROOR AAOGII.....APNE PRITHVI KO APNE SAATH LE JAAOGII.....AUR TUM SIRF DEKHTI RAHOGI......

With this she vanished in thin air.A shocked & terrifed silence followed 2 minutes after this.Some guests actually had their mouth open.After all you dont get to see ghosts regularly in mumbai.Infact 75% population doesnt even believe in ghosts.But today their minds were changed.Shash & padma still couldnt believe that there was actually some ghost......some devyana behind their lives.But all this moan came to a halt as AR fell on the floor unconscious due to excessive bleeding.Actually in ridz case it was more due to the fact that she was shocked that devyana actually came in front of them & more to the fact that armaan already knew that she wasnt lying ever......

 

Okay heres the part 38.....dont know if u all will like or not but i've tried......i'll try to reply all your comments this time......sorry if its disappointing.....this ff is coming to an end.....i think only 3-4 parts are left.......

 

P.S: Sorry i've exam coming this monday again so i cant send any pm's now......i'll send them after monday..... I'll update laaga chunri mein daag by next Wednesday or Thursday......

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Posted: 08 August 2008 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
wonderful update. really happy to read it. happy that ridz, zoya are separated. i liked your idea of showing everyone that devyani existed and it is because of her ridz behaved in such a way. this part is very very nice.
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 12:13am | IP Logged
omg very nice part yaar
it was too good
fianlly devyana se chutkara toh mila
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 12:43am | IP Logged
hey, dis prt ws awesome
its gud tht arman didnt told anytin to ridz
nd its gud tht everyone were enjoyin it until tht devyana show her eyes
poor atul, nd it so painful for arman nd ridz to stand on broken glasses
bt thank god zoya made an entry in end
im so happy wid dis prt as finally ridz is free frm tht bitch
wat- jsr 3-4 prts leftCry
continue soon wid yur awesome prtsSmile


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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 12:58am | IP Logged
hey pinky wowwwwwwww yaar terrific update yaar seriously fst ridz ws soooo confusd bt happy also tht he did fr her 2 mke her happy nd all wre sooooooo happppppy nd specially armaan nd aa nd rm bcz ths gonna be her last dy.....wow yaar realy it ws mindblowng yaar thy all wre enjoyng soooooooo mch superb soooooooo happppppppy nd lst omg yaar devyana again throwng all thngs nd atul got injurd nd devyana omg yaar ridz nd ar nt 2 gt her hurt he hurt himself nd all wre soooooooo shockd tht actuly ghost wre der myyy god yaar....nd finally devyana gt seperate frm ridz body nd she ws soooo angry specially on ar nd zoya nd guest hd their mouth opn kyu na ho ghost ko jo dekh liya nd ridz ws soooooooooooo shckd tht ar ws knew evrythng omg yaar it ws soooo scaryng yaar.........god its kkkkkkkk yaar..........all d bst fr ur exms........
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 5:36am | IP Logged
why dat was amzing finally she out
aww poor ar had to suffer coz of her luved da updte
it was greta really nce
shame its coming to and end bt enjoyed readin it ,oads
cnt wait 2 read mre do updte sooon
 
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Posted: 09 August 2008 at 6:10am | IP Logged
WOW!!! Continue now,, I want to know what happened.

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