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FF:Bhulbhulaya #2 LAST PART PG-67 12/11 (Page 12)

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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 12:56am | IP Logged
hey pinky thnk god armaan knows d truth omg yaar chalo ab to vishwaas hoga poor ridz nd zoya wll hlp hm bt agar devyana ko bhanak tak padgayi ridz to gayi omg yaar no probz we wll wait r ur prt bt i am toooooooo excitd 2 read ur nxt prt wow cnt wait
cont sooooooooon vry intrestng promo
luv yachu

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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 1:05am | IP Logged
thank god atlast armaan ridz par vishwas to karega
plzzzzzzz continues soon
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THANX 4 PROMO. WAITNG 4 D PRT.PLZZ CONTD SOON Smile
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 9:53am | IP Logged
wooow grt promo finally armaan knows that ridz is not mad and that devyana is really there
pls continue soon
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 10:11am | IP Logged
wow very nice promo
plz continue soon pinky di
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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 11:56am | IP Logged

Originally posted by pinky_5

NOTE:
I'm really very sorry for the delay........I was going to update part 34 today but i've guests at my home so i'll post it tomorrow......Till then you can read the promo.... Smile

NEW PROMO:
Zoya proves to armaan that ridz is not mad & devyana is really using her.Armaan is terrified with this info.Zoya tells she'll think of a way out of this but till then devyana should not come to know that we know the truth else she'll destroy ridz completely......

Nice promo thankx god he got to know ridz is not mad i was so sad for her....well wil be waiting for the update...do pm..

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Posted: 22 May 2008 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
YEAH!!
its so interesting
now finally armaan will belive ridhimma
cant wait till tomorrow!!

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Posted: 23 May 2008 at 6:07am | IP Logged
RECAP:
              Everyone plays holi.AR cute moments.Armaan attacked by ridz followed by shashank & two patients.Ridz finally sent to mental asylum.

PART 34:
PRESENT:
Armaan & Zoya sitting on sofa in armaans room.Armaan has tears in his eyes.Even zoya has silent tears after hearing the tragic love story.
Z: par aap usse mental asylum kaise bhej sakte hai?
A: toh aur kya karte hum.Roz kissi par hamla.Kabhi patient to kabhi hum log.Humme apni jaan ki fikar nahi thi par patient ki jaan ke saath kaise khel sakte?Kitni koshish ki usse samjhaane ki.......par woh maan ne ko tayaar hi nahi thi......Pura 1 mahina lagaa humme yeh decision lene mein.Hum sab usse bahut pyaar karte hain.Hum chahte the woh theek ho jaaye par woh kissi doctor se milne ko tayaar hi nahi thi.Jab usse lagaa koi uski baat nahi maan rahaa toh usne aatmahatya karne ki koshish ki.Isliye fir humme finally usse sanjeevani ke mental asylum mein rakhna padaa.Peechle ek hafte se woh wahaan ke bandh kamre mein hai.Na kuch khaati hai na kuch peeti hai.Yahaan tak ki woh chain se so bhi nahi paati.Humme majboori mein usse sleeping pills dene padhte hai kyunki usse sleeping pills ki bahut buri aadat lagi aur iske bina usse neend nahi aati.Kitne doctors gaye usko dekhne par koi nahi samajh paaya ki aakhir uski bimaari kya hai.Koi psychatrist is bimaari ke baare mein pataa nahi lagaa paayaa.....
Z: aur agar usse koi bimaari ho hi na toh?????
A: kya matlab????
Z: agar woh jo keh rahi hain woh sach ho toh?
A: yeh kaise ho sakta hai???Devyana khud hamare saamne us gaav ko chodkar chali gayi.Ridz kehti hain usse uska chehra aaine mein dikhta hai toh phir humme kyu nahi dikhta?sirf ridz hi usko dekh sakti hai......Hum isse sach kaise maan le?
Z: iska matlab aapko riddhimaji par bharosa nahi hai?
A(shocked): mujhe ridz par poora bharosa hai lekin.....
Z: lekin kya????aapne unpar tab bharosa nahi kiya jab usse sabse zyadaa aapki zaroorat thi......aapko kya lagta hai us asylum ke bandh kamre mein rehkar woh theek ho jaayegi????Aap toh usse pyaar karte hai phir bhi uspar bharosa nahi kiya?Uspar toh chodo aapne apne pyaar tak par bharosa nahi kiya??
A: mujhe ridz par bhi poora bharosa hain aur apne pyaar par bhi......par mein kya karta?????Jo cheez mujhe deekhayi nahi deti main usse kaise maan lo????
Z: life main bahut cheezein hai jo deekhti nahi par iska matlab yeh nahi ki woh hoti nahi......kya aap Hawa ko dekh sakte hai????par phir bhi aap jaante hai ki woh hai....kyu maante hai aap ki hawa hai??
A: kyunki mein usse mehsoos kar sakta hu.....
Z: aur bhagwaan????kissi ne unhe nahi dekha par log maante hai ki woh hai....
A: kyunki unhe bhi mehsoos kiya jaata hai.....
Z: aur aapka pyaar????pyaar ek jasbaat hai jo deekhta nahi par mehsoos kiya jaataa hai.....kya aapka pyaar itna kamzor hain ki aap uske dard ko mehsoos nahi kar paaye???
A(shouting): MERA PYAAR KAMZOR NAHI!!!!!MAINE HAMESHA RIDDHIMA PAR BHAROSA KIYA........
Z: toh ab aap ka bharosa kahaan gayaa?????
A: mera bharosa kahin nahi gayaa.......main haalaad ke saamne majboor tha......Mujhe lagaa tha ki shayad ridz sach keh rahi ho isliye maine aapko contact karne ki koshish ki thi.......par aapka contact nahi ho rahaa tha......Main dobara us gaav mein gayaa tha par gaav mein koi nahi tha.Ek insaan bhi nahi tha wahaan par.Aas paas ke logon se pataa chala ki gaav ke log bhaag gaye kyunki Bhukamp(earthquake) aane waala tha.Main jungle mein gayaa baba ko dhoondhne par woh bhi nahi the.....Main waapas aagaya aur haalaad ke saamne kamzor padh gayaa.....Kya karta mein?Logon ki jaan par ban aayi thi......Isliye mujhe haar maankar sabki baat maani padhi.....
Z: aur agar ab aapko pataa chale ki woh sach keh rahi thi toh????
A(shocked): toh.....main khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paogaa......
Z: woh sach keh rahi hai........Devyana waapas aa gayi hai....
A: aap yeh kaise keh sakti hai????
Z: kyunki aaj subah maine riddhima ji ka saaya dekha hai.......
A: kya matlab?????
Z: aaj subah jab aap usse shaant kar rahe the maine unke peeche unka saaya dekha.Kuch toh ajeeb baat thi us saaye ki.Us saaye ko dekhkar lag rahaa tha jaise ki woh kissi aur ka hai aur usne khudko riddhimaji ka saaya banaaya hai.....
A: aapne.....devyana ko dekha????????
Z: jee nahi......devyana ko koi nahi dekh sakta.Agar usne sach mein khudko riddhimaji ka saaya banaa diya hai toh usse main bhi nahi dekh sakti.......Par main riddhimaji ko dekhkar itna zaroor keh sakti hu ki jo saaya unke saath rehta hai woh unka nahi hai........Aur is baat ko saabit karne ke liye maine kuch kiya hai......
A: kya????
      Zoya removes a red cloth from her bag.The cloth was folded & covering somethings inside.
Z: isse maine aaj subah riddhimaji ke kamre mein rakhaa tha....aur yaad hain maine aapse kaha tha ki main idhar kuch chodkar jaa rahi hu jo lene main shaam ko aaogi.....Maine issi ke baare mein kahaan tha......shaam ko maine isse unke kamre mein se le liya tha......
A: par yeh kya hai????
Z: isme woh cheezein hai jo saabit karegi jo riddhimaji keh rahi hai woh sach hain ya jhooth.Kya waaqay devyana waapas aagayi hai ya yeh sirf unka bhram hai.Isme teen cheezein hai.Kuch hari mirchi(green chillies),kuch chaawal(rice) aur ek nimbu(lemon).Agar riddhimaji par koi bura saaya mandraa rahaa hai toh......
A: toh????
Z: aap khud dekh lijiye.......
      She opened the cloth & to armaans horror there were no green chillies.Inplace of green chillies there were red ones.The rice was no longer white instead it had turn red in colour.The lemon was as it is.
A: iska kya matlab hai?????
Z: iska matlab hai ki riddhimaji sach keh rahi thi......mera shaq sahi tha.......yeh mirchi hare rang se khoon ke rang ki ho gayi.....Chaawal bhi safed rang se khoon ke rang ka ho gaya.....
A: par yeh nimbu....isme to koi farak nahi hai....
Z(smiling): abhi pataa chalega.....
She took a knife & cut the lemon into two pieces & to armaans horror blood was falling from the lemon inplace of lemon juice.....
A(softly): iska matlab ridz sach keh rahi thi....
Z: Jee haan woh sach keh rahi thi......Kaash main thoda jaldi aati toh yeh sab na hua hota.....
Armaan gets up instantly.
Z: kya hua????aap kahaan jaa rahe hain?????
A: riddhima ke paas......mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi aur ab main usse sudharooga......Main jaakar devyana ko riddhima se alag kar dooga.....
Z: aur yeh aap kaise karenge????
A: main nahi jaanta par ridz ko ab aise jeene nahi de sakta.......main devyana se keh doonga ki ab woh ridz ko chod de aur mera saamna kare......Mujhe pataa chal gaya hai ki meri riddhima pagal nahi hai....
Z: aap aisa kuch nahi karenge.
A: kya matlab?????main ridz ko kissi bhi haal mein bachaaooga....
Z: aap aisa karke uski jaan khatre mein daal rahe hai......Kya aap samajhte nahi devyana ab kya chahti hai?????
A: kya???
Z: devyana soch rahi hai usne jeeteji aap dono ko alag kar deeya hai......Aur ab woh aapko maarkar hamesha ke liye apne saath le jaana chahti hai......Riddhimaji aise hi nahi chilati ki woh aapko maar daalegi.....Devyana usse dhamkaati rehti hai ki woh aapko maar daalegi....
A: toh usne abtak mujhpar hamla kyu nahi kiya???
Z: woh isliye kyunki usse is khel main bahut mazaa aa raha hai......Riddhimaji ko is tarah dekhkar usse bahut khushi milti hai aur woh yeh khushi kuch aur din mehsoos karna chahti hai....
A: toh ab hum kya kare???
Z: agar devyana ko pataa chal gayaa ki aap saari sachchaai jaan chuke hain toh woh gusse mein aakar kuch bhi kar sakti hai..... riddhimaji ko maar sakti hai.....Humme pehle koi aisa raasta sochna padhega jisse hum devyana ko riddhima se alag kar sakein kyunki aisa karne ke baad hi hum sab usse dekh sakege aur uska saamna kar sakege......
A: jo bhi ho main ab riddhima wahaan nahi rehne doonga....
Z: par...
Just then armaan gets a call from hospital.He gets up shocked.
Here is part 34......I hope you enjoy it..I'm sorry if it was boaring with only armaan & zoya in the part...I'm very sorry for the delay.....Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz leave frank comments or atleast press the thank you button so that I know how many like my ff........


Edited by pinky_5 - 23 May 2008 at 6:13am

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