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MY DMG (imagenary story)PART 32 on pg 14 (Page 8)

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really nyc..cont asap

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please update it
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Hey Nruti,

Just finished reading the whole story
U'r a fab writer yaar
Very well done
and do keep updating
The way u write is cool!

Love
Hina
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please update it
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THANXS EVERY ONE FOR READING MY STORY N COMENTING ON IT N I M SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDAT I WAS BIT BUSSY

BUT HERE U GO NJOY N PLZ PLZ PLZ COMENT


al the intern goes to the nurse station
dr kirti start giving out the duties but no one is leasinig to her coz they al r toooooo bussy lauging @ dr shubhanker who is staring @ kirti
kirti sees this n call him but shubhanker does not respond he is toooo bussy staring @ kirti then his pagger start ringing but he is still not come out his dreem
kirti: shubhanker apka pager ki ghanti bajrahi hai
subhanker: tum ko dekh ka mara dil ki ghanti bajtihai
every1 is very shoked after hearing this
then dr shashnk comes there n stand rit by shubhnaker he does not realises that he putes his hand on shashnk's solder
shubhanker: kirti tum bahut kubsurat ho aur tum achi ladi ho ek achi doc bhi ho aur tumko dekh ka mara dil ki ghanti itni jor se bajti hai ki ab tum bhi sunrahi ho to kya tum mujse saadi karogi kirti ?
there is a big shoke on every1's face n incuding the ppl other then inter, dr shashnk n kirti every1 is looking @ kirti
shubhnaker: kirti jawab do kya tum muje se shaadi karogi tum itni achi ho ki tum ko to koi bhi pasand kara laga mager muje to sirf aur sirf tum se hi shadi karni hai bolo kirti tum chup kyun ho
now there is a huge silence


kirti: ha main tum se shadi karungi shubhanker
after hiaring this shubhnaker comes out his dreem n realiz that it was not his dream he actuly did propose to her n she replyed n said yes to him after getting this setuation shubhnaker gets al exited n huges kirti n sasy I LUV U KIRTI but when they come apart he sees al the intern stasding there n as soon as he turns he sees dr shashnk standing next to him
his eyes r wid open n mout is open n he is in a big shoke n he also start sweeting
shashnk: congratulation dr shubhnaker n dr kirti n he pates him on the back n leaves
then al the intern comes there n says
al: ISQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ HAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
then kirti gets shy n leaves from so does al the girls there n al the boys huges shubhanker n
armaan: sir huma lagta tha ki dr kirti ko dekh ka apka to pasina chut jata tha to aj itni himat kasa
rahul: ha sir aur who bhi dr sashnk ka samna
atul: ap to asa khada tha jasa dr shashnk koi piler ya khmabha ho aur unka samna apna dr kirti ko pucha apna kiya kasa
shubhnaker: boys muje khud nhi samjama araha hai muje laga ki mai to sirf imaging kararaha tha aur use propose karna ki practis kara raha tha muje thodi pata tha ki who such main hai
armaan: sir u r briliant kya bat hai lakin ab apko nahi lagta ki ap ko dr kirti ka pas jana chahiya unho na ha kaha hai
then they al leave to their duty
after duty in the locker room every1 is talking about SK
anji: muje abi tak wisha was nhi ara hai ki shubhnker sir na dr kirti ko propose kiya hai
ridz: hai aur to aur dr kirti na unko ha bola hai
just then sis lovely comes n tell every1 that nana is not well plz comes
every1 goes to nana he is sleeping there with his hand on his heart
armaan: nana kya hua hai apko
nana: muje heart attak aya hai
al: kya
anji: nana apko heart attack aya hota to ap is waqt bat nahi kara rahai hot ap ICU main hota
just then shubhnaker comes running kya hua nana ko
nana gets up n hold shubhanker by his tie
nana: ab salsa mara samna hi mari soni ko utha ka lagaya
shubhanker: kya????????
armaan: nana ap bath jaya
nana: nahi aj main bathunga nahi main isa nah ichodunga isna mari soni muje se chin li hai
nana try to jump on shubhnaker but armaan hold him
nana: are main itna der se bhagna ki kosis kara raha hun aur main hilabhi nahi (coz armaan was holding on to his shirt with one hand)
then every1 explain to him n calm him down then nana also understand n he clam down every1 leaves
locker room
anji gets a page
anji: ridz mare night duti hai to tum armaan ka saath ghar chala jana
ridz: di.......lakin....................
befero she cud say any thing anji was out of locker room
armaan gets realy happy n start dancing n every1 is lauginh @ him
rahul: chal muskan hum bhi chal ta hai tara papaji tera intazar karta honga
after hearing word INTAZAR
atul start singing
lalalalalallala laru
lalalalalallala laru
lalalalalallala laru
lalalalalallala laru
hummmmmmmm
inteha ho gai intazar ki
aina kuch kabar mara yaar ki

(he has a very sad face)
ya hama hai yaki bawafa who nahi
phir waja kya hui intazarki
inteha ho gai intazar ki
aina kuch kabar mara yaar ki
ya hama hai yaki bawafa who nahi
phir waja kya hui intazarki
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every1 looking @ him n thinking what the hell is he doing
hummmmmmmmmmmmmm
bat jo hai us main who bat yanhi kisi main
who hai bas mari ya hi shor hai gali gali main
saath saath hai who mara gum mai nhar kushi main
zindagi main who nahi to kuch nah imari zindagi main

atul goes near anji's locker n sings the songs
bujna jaya ya shama etbar ki
inteha ho gai intazar ki
aina kuch kabar mara yaar ki
ya hama hai yaki bawafa who nahi
phir waja kya hui intazarki
then he imagin anji coming toward him n singing the song
ooooooooo mara sajna loooooooooooooooo main agai
atul runs tooooooo n they both hug
tatatatatat
then there is a suden change in atuls expration n every1 is ahoked coze few min ago he was al cring n sad n now he was al exited n happy n dancing
atul n anji both start dancing like amitab n jayaprada
ooooooooo mara sajna loooooooooooooooo main agai
armaan rahul ridz n muskan r just staring @ him with their mout open coz he was dancing not with anji but al bye him self but in his magination he was dancing with anji

logona diya hunga bada bada nazrana layi hun main dil mara
dil manga yahi duwa ki kabhi na juda mara hi mara rahai dil tera
ya mere zindagi hai tere
ya mere zindagi hai tere
tu mara sapna main tuje pagai
ooooooooo mara sajna loooooooooooooooo main agai

guma ka andhara dhala bujta sitara jala
dekha tuja to dilo mai njan ai
hota pa tara na jaga arma diwana jaga
baho main aka asha tu sharmai
chagi phir wahi bakudi
chagi phir wahi bakudi
laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
as atul end the song with a huge smile on his face armaan n rahul went to him n ask him waht happen
atul came out of the dreaam land n realiz that anji was not there

n agin his face went low he was looking so sed
armaan: atul tuje ho kya gay tha tu asa gana gaya pehla tu abhut udas tha phir ekdam se kush hogaya aur abh pir se udar hogaya kya chal raha hai champ
atul: kuch nahi muje laga mari anjali agay
rahul: atul tu use itna pyaar kar ta hai
atul with a sed face: hai isi liya who mara dream mai nati hai lakin real life main nahi ati hai
armaan: koi bat nahi champ real life main bhi ayagi zaroor ayagi
atul: sach
rahul looking @ muskan: ager pyaar sach ho to who zarro ayagi
at this muskan start blushing
armaan looking @ ridz: ha dekha na example to tere samna hai mai naur ridz n rahul aur muskan ager do dushma pyaar karsak tha hai to ismai nto ek sid ka to paary hai to koi problem nahi hai
ridz: hai atul di bahara se ek atitude wali ladki dikh ti hai lakin ander se ekdam soft hai tum hai sirf who hard cover thidna hai
atul: lakin kasa
armaan: u dont worry champ ab hum tera saath demga in
"OPERATION ANJI PATAO"

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Edited by arluver15 - 23 May 2008 at 10:26pm
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aww cute and great part!! loved it!! plz continue soon!! glad s finally proposed to k lolz!
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no AR scenes? Cry
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thanks for the pm and update please continue it soon

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