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MY DMG (imagenary story)PART 32 on pg 14 (Page 13)

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Posted: 09 June 2008 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
nice update please update it soon


Remember 2 remember me.4get of 4getting me,even if u try 2 remember 2 4get me,i will never 4get 2 remember 2 remind u 2 remember me..Dost


Edited by kvn1983 - 09 June 2008 at 9:18pm

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hey wow yaar vryy nce update sch a cute thnk god ye gf pro solvd nd ridz realizd wow vryy cute update armaan goi 2 be faint wow she ws lookng stunning wow sooooooo romantic na..................wow armaan to khushi ho gaya now thy wll be alone..........wow thts to guuuuuuuuud.............jst lvd it,.........
kahi bhi suru ho jate hai nd kya dekha aisa.......
cont soooooooon
luv yachu
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Posted: 18 June 2008 at 7:00am | IP Logged

Originally posted by dmglovernimisha

Claphey....i am the first one soooooooo....thanks a lot...plzzzzzzz continue soon....it is lovelyClap...Clap..thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!! 

Originally posted by zhasan2

awww Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed such a cute romantic part! glad the whole GF problem is out of the way LOL plz continue soon!

Originally posted by coolvini4u

wow..........it was such a romantic part..... Clapthanxxxxxxxxxxxx..........plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....

Originally posted by AngelicSoniya

amazing part...very romantic...
cont soon

Originally posted by sacred shrine

finally an update...ws a gud1

Originally posted by kvn1983

nice update please update it soon


Remember 2 remember me.4get of 4getting me,even if u try 2 remember 2 4get me,i will never 4get 2 remember 2 remind u 2 remember me..Dost


Originally posted by yachna

hey wow yaar vryy nce update sch a cute thnk god ye gf pro solvd nd ridz realizd wow vryy cute update armaan goi 2 be faint wow she ws lookng stunning wow sooooooo romantic na..................wow armaan to khushi ho gaya now thy wll be alone..........wow thts to guuuuuuuuud.............jst lvd it,.........
kahi bhi suru ho jate hai nd kya dekha aisa.......
cont soooooooon
luv yachu

hey guys thnxs a ton 4 al ur lovely coment sorry i was not able to PM each n every1 of u but thnxsa agine 4 loving my story n i m realy sorry for the late update but i was sick now i m lil better so decided to come n post the story its comming in a bit

luv

~Nruti

 



Edited by arluver15 - 18 June 2008 at 7:01am
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armaan n ridz finds dadi on the flore she is a diabitic n she had a low suger seeing dadi like this armaan is totaly lost n dont know what to do so ridz takes the charge n takes dadi to hospital dr kirti putes ridz incharge of dadi's case now she is still not gud (coz whaen u have a low suger ppl tend to pass out n they can even sleep in to coma) ridz is trying she level best n she sussede but dadi is still unconseous
ridz is looking 4 armaan to tell him the gud new that dadi is now shaved but he is no where to be found then sudenly she remember waht happen to armaan when minne was sick so she stright went to stare case n he was there crying ridz went to him
ridz: armaan............
armaan got up n went to ridz
armaan: ridz hows dadi doing???
ridz: armaan dadi is doing very nice she out of danger she is sleeping rit now but will wake up in an hour.
armaan did not say any thing n just huged her realy tight ridz huged him back armaan was still crying
ridz: armaan dadi ab thik hai tum rona bandh karo
armaan:.............................
ridz: armaan tum sun raha ho na mana kaha tum rona bandh karo
armaan: thnxs ridz
ridz: kia liya
armaan: tum na dadi ko bach liya warna mai napna ap ko kabhi muaf nahi karpata
ridz: armaan tum ko kya ho gaya hai tum kabse itna formal ban gaye who bhi mara saath!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
armaan: ridz muje laga ki aj mana dadi ko kho diya u knoa mare ma ka bad who hi ek hai jisna muje samja hai lakin dad ki waja se main aur dadi alag ho gaye aur aj jab itna salo ka bad hum mila aur unko is halt mai ndekha ka mara dimag kam karna band ho gaye aur main ya soch na laga ki mana dadi ko khi diya aur tum na sab kuch samabal liya muje aur mare famili ko....
ridz: galat tumhar nahi humara parivar our family armaan aur any way this prooves that i m better doc then u r(just light tine the mood) n then they both start laughing
armaan: indeed u r hahahaha
NEXT DAY @ SANJIVANEE
atul,anji,armaan n ridz r in the cafe
every1 know about armaan's dadi
atul: armaan dadi kasi hai ab
armaan; ab who thik hai
anjil: of course ho gina mere bahan ki pasent hai
every1 start lauginh
just then muskan n rahul comes in with a big hude smile on their face
muskan: hi guys
al: hi
rahul: guys v have agud news 4 al of u
atul: "v" waht do u meen by "V"
muskan: iskan ya matkab hai ki main aur ya
anji: ha to bolo na gud news kaya hai
rahul: main aur muskan shadi kar rahai hai
ridz: kya? kab?
atul fell from the chair n he fainted (ha ha ha ha)
armaan get some water n try to splase some water on his face but no point so finaly armaan get a bucket full of water n throw it on atul then he comes to the sence
anji: atul r u ok??? waht happen?
atul: ya anjali i m f9 but rahul dont do this agine it was very gud joke. but as u can se i was about to have a heart attace so plz dont do this agine.............
rahul: atul ya mazak nahi tha
muskan: ha atul
anji: comon muskan tum kab se rahul ki side lana lagi
muskan looking @ rahul: jab se mai nuse pyaar karna lagi!!!!!!!!!!
then armaan just hold ault as he was about to fall agin (ha ha ha ha)
anji: waht??????????????
ridz: di ya thik kah rahi hai
arman: champ apna ap ko sambhal ya log mazak nahi kar rahi hai
while this was hapenning rahul n muskan had a eye lock rahul cud not belive that muskan finalty sad it n in fron of every1 so he was shoked n he was starting at musakn with wide open eyes n open mouth n muskan was just blussing @ rahul's condition
then they brok as the anounce ment came
:SARE INTERN DR KIRIT KO REPORT KARE
armaan: chala warna yaha pa koi bhi shadi ya pyaar karna ka layak nahi rahi ga
every1 laught @ this n they al make their way to the nurse station
dr kirti: gud morning aj ap log bade kush lag rahai hai kya bat hai
atul: ji waho rahul aur muskan shadi kara rahaihai na isi liya
dr kirit was surprised but she was very happy.
she went ot muskan n said: have a happy life ahaed lagta hai sanjivanee main aj kal sab ka dil mail rahai hai
every1 was shoked to her this from kirti
armaan: ma'm kya apka bhi dil mill gaya dr shubhanker ka saath
kierti gave him a dadly anger look
armaan to him self: armaan tu to gaya aj ridhma ILU
then suddenly kirti start lauginh
kirti: dr armaan mai nto sirf mazak kar rahi thi ap to such mai ndar gaye
then every1 had a another shoke but the gus one n every1 start laughing
kirti: ok bahut ho gaya hasi mazak main ap ko ap ki duty alot karti hun
kirti: dr rahul ap dr muskan ka saath children ward main, dr atul ap dr anjali ka saath roundes karanga n dr armaan ap aur dr ridhima genral ward main rahai ga aur hai aj ap sab ki lunch ka bad chuti hai
atul: kyun???
kirti: kyunki aj koi naya case nah ihai aur ap log na pich al kitna dino se bahut hi acha kam kiya hai so i think that u al deserv this ok then back to duty
then she leaves
every1 is realy happy
atul: are aj ya hitlar ko kya hua hai gabar se basanti kasa ban gay
rahul: aba tu na usko basanti kyun bola
armaan: tuje kya problem hai
atul: hai tu je kya problem hai
rahul: dhano ko kya yaha pa
atul: muakan ki sccoty
rahul: exatly to phir musakn hu na verru ki basanti
armaan: to verru ko hai
rahul: tuja nahi pata college main ko veeru banta tha????
armaan: tu ......................ohhhhhhhhhhhhh ab samja to tu hai sanjivnee ka veeru aur muskan hai tere bashanti
at this muskan start blushing
atul: ok sorry baba lakin muje abta samj nah iaraha ki tum dono shadi karna wala ho
rahul: atul tu na suna na muskan na kya kaha cafe main who boli ki who muje se pyaar karti hai aur mai nbhi use pyaar karta haun aur uska oaents aur mara parents na ha bol di shadi ka liya to ab hum shadi karanga lakin abhi tak shadi ki dat fix nahi hu hai aur hamari saga yahi agla hafta
armaan: idea kyun hun sath main shadi kara
atul: armaan tu pagl ho gayah ia tere ridz ka saaht shagay ho gay hai aur tu chi chi chi ah obhi uskan sam na main na nah isoch that ki tu asa niklaga armaan
armaan: aba chamoa main aur ridz and rahul aur muskan ek hi din shadi karnaga
ridz: yes armaan itsa very gud idea hum asa hi karnaga kyun musakn
muskan is so blushing that she can take it any more n run from there rahul try to go after her but armaan hold him n they al go to their duty
@ dadi's room
armaan come to see dadi
armaan: Hi gf kasi ho tum???
dadi: mai nthik hun tu kasa hai??
armaan: ek dam fit n fine
just then ridz comes in for the check up
dadi: ya lo mer bati a gya tere hi rah dekha rahi thi
armaan: wow dadi main apka pota hun aur muje se bat kana ki baja ap dr basket ko yad kar rahi thi
ridz: dadi mai nthik hun mage kya pana apka promiss pura kiya
dadi: hai kiya
armaan: kon sa promiss???
dadi: isana muje se promiss liya hai ki ager main apna khayal rakhjun gi aur ager kuch bhi gad bad ho to mian use ya tuje bat du aur asa nhia kiya to waho muje se kabhi bat nahi kara gi
after hering this armaan get realy happy(to himself): ab to pura yaki ho gaya ki tum se shadi akrna ka jo mara fasla hai who ek dam sahi tha thank you ridhima for every thing that u do 4 me n our family ILU ridz my basket
ridz: armaan muje lag ta hai ki main dadi ko aj deschar kar sak ti hun tum dekho na inki progress kafi achi hai
araman comes out of the thought n lookes @ the report
armaan: ya dadi ridz thik kah rahi hai lakin ridz tum ko nahi lagta ki huma dr kirti se bat karni chaiya pahala
ridz: u r rit armaan
they were about to leave n dadi stoped then
dadi: armaan tum ise kabhi jana mat dena ya bahut hi pyaari bachi hai
armaan looking @ ridz: ha pyaari to hai
then they leave they were talking to each othern ridz sees somthing in the starcase so they both go ther n pick in ther
its rahul n muskan
rahul was holding muskan by her waist n muskna had her head on his chest.
rahul: muskan muje tum se kuch keahna hai
muskan: hummmm bolo
rahul: muskan tu khus to hai na???is shadi se????
muskan: oy tuje kya mai nlikh ka du ki main tuj se pyaar kasrti hun n then start bliushing
rahul: kya bat hai pehla gusa dekha ti hai aur bad main sharmati bhi hai main to mer jaunga
muskan blussis even more
out side the stare case
ridz: armaan dekhona ya do no kitna acha lagtahai na ek saath
armaan: main dekh hi to raha hun its just beutiful
(armaan was staring @ ridz )
ridz sees that armaan was staring @ her not looking @ RM she start blushing just then she shes a shadow behind them
ANY GUESS????????????????????????
_______________EPISOD EDNS_________________


Edited by arluver15 - 18 June 2008 at 7:02am
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oh come on. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Smile
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nice and sweet one please update it soon


"Don't make your feelings like the garden; so that everybody walks on it...But let your feelings be like the sky, so that everybody wishes to touch it."


Edited by kvn1983 - 18 June 2008 at 9:50am
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an amzng 1.... bt a biggggggggggggggggggggggg secret.... update sooon........ luvd d prt... Smile Smile
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amazing part.... Clap
cont soon

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