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MY DMG (imagenary story)PART 32 on pg 14 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kvn1983

please update it soon

thnxs a ton for u luvly coment i will defenatly PM u when i update my story

plez keep on reading it n keep on comenting

~Nruti(arluver15)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: urmila_17

hey wow really superb update its mind blowing so lovely and romantic πŸ‘
loved the way arman teasing angie saying ridz as alarm clock
omg muskis parents r comming
thanks for pm
plssssss continue super soon

thnxs a ton for u luvly coment i will defenatly PM u when i update my story

plez keep on reading it n keep on comenting

~Nruti(arluver15)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Jst finished readin it all n I'm loving da story. πŸ‘ Loved da way u brought AR  n RM 2gethr n da way u brought Dr Rahul in as Armi's dad ...... n Minnie is bk 2. πŸ˜ƒ Da alarm clock scene is 2 funny. πŸ˜† plz continue soon n wen u do PM me da link πŸ˜›

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey just finshed readin the story..intrestin concept..wow her parents are cmin wonder what will happen...contineu soon..can u pls PM me when the next part is posted pls..
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Posted: 15 years ago
they al r in shoke to hera that muskan's parents r coming
ridz : ab kya karnaga
muskan: kuch nahi main unko sabh kuch sach sach bata dungi
armaan: laki who to tum ko..........
muskan: koi bat nahi guys mana juth bola to muje saja bhi to milangi
rahul; muskan tu chunta mat kar main hun na tara saath
armaaan: hum bhi hai tara saath
ridz: ha muskan hum sab milka tumhara parants ko mana yanga
musakn: nhai mere wajase tum mas aur koi mushibat main nahi padanga aur wasa bhi zyada se zyada papaji muje patiyala lajanga aur mare sadi kisis ka saath karadanga
rahul: tere sadi sirf aur sirf mara saath hogi aur main tara papaji ka saath bat karunga aur washa bhi who to muje bahut pasanda karta hai na tu chinta mat kar
then muskan leaves n gets ready to face her parents armaan, ridz & rahul goes with her
@ muskan's house
her father n mother r very shoked after hearing the truth
her fater goes to hit her n rahul comes in between
papaji: rahul putyer tu muje chod de tuja pata nhi isna muje kahi ka nahi choda
rahul: nahi uncleji ap isko kuch nahi karanga
muskan is crying n ridz is with her
armaan: uncleji ap plz sant ho jaya dekha ya jo bhi hua usmain uska dos ha lakin ap to asa bat kara raha ki is pat ka koi solution nhai hai
papaji: to tum hi bata o mai nkya karu
armaan: muskan ki shadi kara dijiya
every1 is shoked
papaji: lakin isa shado kon kara ga
rahul: main karunga aur wasa bhi hum dono abh ek dushra ko pasand karna laga hai
papaji: lakin mera parivar ko to armaan ka bara main pat hai
armaaan: koi bat nahi ap boldana ki who bahut hi gira hua admi tha aur mara bara main jitna bura bolna ho bol dana aur phir in do no ko shadi kara dijiya
papaji: lakin.............
rahul: lakin kya uncle ji armaan bilkul thik kaha raha hai
they al agree but papaji is not talking with muskan
muskan is still crying n rahul goes to her n consult her n tell her that papaji tuj se kuch din tak nah ibat karanga but bad main tuje se hi bat karna ayanga trust me who tumse bahut pyaar karta hai zyada din tak naraz nahi rha sakta
armaan n ridz goes to muskan n tell her to b pasent every thing will b f9 then they leave
rahul says main yaha ruku kuch der ya chalun
muskan: tum jao main tun se kal bat karungi n ha thanxs mara saath dana ka liya
rahul: tu pagal ho gay hai main tujse pyarr karta hun aur tu muje thnxs bol rahi ho
muskan blushish n smile
rahul: thats like my muskan
her papaji is looking @ this says sayd main kuch zyda hi over reacet kargaya
muskan smiles n goes to bed
armaan n ridz both reaches armaan's house
armaan: chala ridz minne hamara intazar kara rahai hogi
just then minne comes out running n insted of huging her bf she strat goes to ridz
minnie: di ap ko itna lat kyun ho gaya muje bahut bhukh lagi hai
ridz: think hai main kuch banathi hun chala ander
araman: this is nor done year ya mare gf aur muje ek bar dekha bhi nahi
minnie: bf tum to mara saath bat bhi mat karo tumna kaha tha ki tum muje phone karoga lakin tumna nahi kiya but di na kiya aur muje se dher sari bat ki
armaan: kya??????????
ridz: minnie tumhara bf aj bahut bussy tha aur usna abhi tak kuch khaya bhi nahi hai muje aj thoda kum kam tha isis liya mana phone kiya tha aur tum ko pata hai na ki dr kirti phone nahi karna dathi hai to isi lia armaan phone nahi kara paya
then minnes goes to armaan n huges him n gives him a kiss then they al go inside ridz makes some food n al of them enjoy n eat it now dr rahul goes to his room n takes minne with him so now armaan n ridz r left alon
armaan: thnxs tuna aj muje bacha liya main bhul gaya tha minne ko phone karna tha aur tum na use phone kiya aur muje bhi bhaliya
ridz is fixing the kitchen n sasy: i know armaan muje pata tha ki tum bhul gaya tha isi liya mana phone kar diya
n then she goes to the kitchen n start cleaning the dish armaan comes from the behind n putes his hand on her hand start washing dishis with her ridz get very very shy n start blushing
ridz: armaan dad ya minnie ajaya gi
armaan: to ana do mara pas ya karna ka liya licence ha
ridz: armaan plz muje kam karna go aur tum jaka aram karo tum thak gay honga
armaan: tumhara pas ata hi mari sari thak dur hojati hai
then his hand moves from her hand to her waist his hands r al weet in cold water n he puts her hand on her waist n she shivers with his touch n also coz of that cold hand of his
then he start kissing her neck
ridz: armaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
armaan: ridzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
they both r lost in their romace n but sudenly ridz dropes a plate from her hand in to the sink armaan comes to the reality
armaan: ridz tum thik to ho na
ridz: ha main thik hun sorry who dish tut gay hai
armaan: koi bat nahi main tumhari mada kardat hun
then they both clean the kitche n goea to their room then armaan is thinking to ask ridz if she wants to stay up late and want to talk
armaan (to himself): use puchu ya nhi aur puch aur use bura laga to , bura lagna jasi to koi bat nahi hai n keep on thinking
ridz sees this
ridz: armaan kya bat hai tum kya soch raha ho
armaan: kuch nahi woooooooo
ridz: armaan muje tumse kuch bat karni thi
armaan: ha kaho
ridz: main soch rahi thi ki huma minnie ko koi achisi school mian bhejna chahiya
armaan: ha main bhi yahi soch raha tha lakin
ridz: lkin kya armaan???
armaan: school ka log iski information manga ta hai jasa ki unska pareants n her birthdat n al aur min kuch bhi nahi janta si wa uska naam
ridz: to kya hua tum apna naam likwadna as a father aur as mither mara naam likh dana aur rahi bat uska dat of bith ki who hum log asahi bana langa to koi problem nahi hai na
armaan is staring @ her n not responding to any of her question
ridz: armaan kya hua??????/
armaan: ridz tum kitni achi ho na tuma bini kuch socha ya kahdiya ki tum minnie ki maa ho aur uski kitni chinta hai tumha jab ki uska tum se koi was ta bhi nahi hai
ridz: wasta kasa nahi hai ager who tumhari gf hai to main uski di hun na
armaan: laugh n says main ya soch rha tha ki ager koi minne ko adopt karna chahai to
ridz: lakin armaan tum hia nahi lagta ki hum bhi uska khayal rakha saktha hai
armaan: ridz main aur tum abhi sirf ek inter hai huma abhi bhut kaam karna hai aur isma minne ki zimadari uska khayal kon rkhaga main aur tum sara din hospita main dad bhi wapis london chala jayanga to minne ka khaya kon rakhaga
ridz: mai nrakhungi hamari shadi ka bad main rezignation da dungi aur ghar pa rah kar minnie ka khayal rakhungi
armaan: ridz tum pagal ho gay ho tum asa kasa kaha sakthi ho bhul gay who promiss jo tumna apna dad ko kiyatha uska kya hoga aur wasabhi main nahi chahata ki tum apni internship chod do
whil they were discussing al this dr rahul over heard them
dr rahul: ridz armaan bilkul thik kah rhaia hai tum asa apna dad ka dream nahi tod sakti aur rahi bat minnie ki use main apna saath london lajaunga aur uski parvarish wahi karunga armaan pa main dhyan nahi de paya lakin muje minne main armaan ki zalak dekhay dati hai who bilkul armaan ka jasi hai saatan kahi ki aur isi tara main apna ap ko mana lunga ki mana armaan ki dekhbhal ki hai
armaan goes to his dad n huges him
armaan: dad i luv u. u r the best dad
dr rahul: thik hai ab jaka so jao gud night
armaan n ridz: gud night dad n they both look @ each other n goes to their room
armaan liying on his bed n think about what ridz had told him earlier about minnie n he says to him self mana apna liya dunya ki sabse pyaari aur abse achi ladki dhundi hai i luv u ridz
ridz on the other hand toss n turns on her bed n try to go to sleep but she cant n she keep on remebering that armaan was thinking about her n her dream to full fill her father's dream n syas to herself mana apna liya is dunyka sabsa acha aur sande sa hot ladka dhunda hai i luv u armaan
now armaan cant sleep so he decidet to go see ridz is she is not slpping then i will talk ot her n if shs is then i will just look @ her al night long
then he goes to her room without knoking thinking that she is in a sleep n ridz was wering a sexxxxxxy night gown without knoing that armaan is there
armaan goes nera her to see if she is fall a sleeep or not n she get scared by the shadoe of armaan n about to screem but armaan puts his hand on her n tell her thatr its him
but as soon as she sees him n he sees her they both get shoked coz ridz was wering her sexxxxxxxxy night gown n armaan was bear chest only wering his shortes they both look @ each other like they have neer seen each other before then armaan comes close to ridz n held her by her waist n pull her close to hid bare chest ridz gets very shy n start blushing n she putes her hand on his chest armaan is tring to make eye contect with her but she it toooooooooo shy to look @ him but then armaan hold her chick n ask her to open her eye n ridz opens her eyes n lookes @ him he is keep on pulling her closers n closer now they r sooooooooooooooo close that ther is no space for an air to pass through
armaan: ridz u r lookin very sexxy in this gown
ridz: armaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
armaan puts his finger on her lipes n says shhhhhh
n he start kissing her neck n make his way to her ear
n he wispera basket u r looking very hot
ridz get carid away that she putes her hand in his hari n while he is kissing her n her hand is in his his hair then ridz goes to his ear n wispers armaan u r looking hot toooooooo in ur shortes then they both r now lost in to each other but later armaan realise that this is wrong n moves away from her nridz gets scared n gets al emotional thinking that ab armaan mara bara main kya sochat hoga armaan think that ridz mara bara mina kya soch ti hogi n they both says sorry ot each other n armaan goes to his room but now thwy both r not ablr to sleep n keep on think about what had just happen
next day morning every1 wakes up n armaan goes down thinking thta aj mai nridz ko coffee pilunga aur use kal raat ka bara main muafi mang lunga but as soon as he goes to kitchen n sees ridz ther making coffee
armaan: ridz tum itni jaldi yaha
ridz: who kal raat muje nind nahi ayi thi
armaan: ridz muje muaf kardo main to sirf waha tumse baat karna aya tha aur tum ko asa dekha to ....................
ridz inturup: armaan muje pata hai but main ya soch rahi thi ki tum mara bara main i mean mara dress aur........
armaan: muje pata hai ki who to sirf tum raat ko pahanti ho aur wasa bhi aho tumpa kafi sut karta taha [with a naughty smile]
ridz get shoked
armaan: muje nahi pata nahi ki kal raat jo hua who tika tha ya nhi lakin muje asa laga ki jo bhi hua who hama ek kamzor pal tha jiamain hum dono masa kisi ki bhi gal thi nahi hai aur main kabhi bhi tumhara bara main kuch galat nah isocha ta ha itna zaroot tha ki who night gown was just awsom n u were looking very sexy n hot ager shadi ka bat asa kapda pahno gi to mine ek docter se pasent ban junga who bhi tumhara
ridz start blushing n run away from there
they both get dress n goes to sanjeevani
locker room:
atul was the first one ther n sees AR come togther n says hi
armaan: hi champ kya bat tu aj bada jaldi agaya
atul: kya karu mari land lady na muje uska bath room use karna se mana kar diya isis liya mana soch ki main yaha jaldi aja ta hun aur yaha pa hi shower lala th hun
just then rahul comes in n sayr hi to al
al: hi rahul
rahul: tumna muskan ko dekha
armaan: kya bat hai itna bat kyun ho raha hai use milna ko thnd rakh ati hi hogi
rahul: armaan muje bahut tention ho rahi hai uska papa kahi use yaha ana se mana to nahi karada
armaan: are rhul tu bhi na asa kuch nahi hoga
ridz: hai rahul b positive
armaan: kyun b posotive bole rahi ho ya tumha ra bool grup hai
then they al bust out lughing
just then muskan comes in she was looking very butyful she was wearing her salvar kamis it was very cute
rahul lookes @ her n slipes in to the dream land
armaan: ya la teri muskan agay man kaha tha na who aya gi
then armaan realiz that he has lost the rahul while back n start laugung
muskan goes to ridz n start talking to her
muskan: hi ridz kaso ho
ridz: main to think hum tum kasi ho kal koi problem to nahi hu na
muskan: nahi aur thnxs tum na aur armaan na muje suport kiya
ridz: its ok muskan dost ho ta kis liya hai
anouncement: al the intern dr kirti ko riport kara imideatly
________________________EPISOD ENDS____________________
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow,
heheheh i m the first one to comment gr8 part dear cont sooooon
luv ya
@nkit@
Edited by magicgirlankita - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
excellent update ya!! πŸ‘
excellent !!!
cont soon and thanks for the PM 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey excellent update..thanks for the PM..will b waiting for teh next one...
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Posted: 15 years ago
gr8 part...ws worth the wait...
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww 😳 really cute and long update!! loved it!! soo cute and romantic!! 😳 😳 plz continue soon!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘