MY DMG (imagenary story)PART 32 on pg 14 - Page 3

Posted: 15 years ago
awww such a cute amazing part!! love it!!! really cuuteE!! plz continue soon!!
Posted: 15 years ago
πŸ‘ waitin for the update i actually hav a lil request can u mke a scene only for AR like they go smewhr n mke it realllllllllllllly romantic PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEe if possible... love the update though... thx... πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 15 years ago
mk the lyts go off
R gts scared n hugsA
A tks her 2a lonely plc
proposes her in a grand way...etc etc
tht ws jst suggestion...sry if u didnt lyk me interfering...
Posted: 15 years ago
wow just caught up with ur ff its awesome the way u wrte is out of world i loved it a lot πŸ‘
hatss off to ur great work i realy appreciate that i just love ur ff
hmmm i think that g.f is minnie πŸ˜‰
if u dont mine pls try to pm me
pls pls update soon
Posted: 15 years ago
awesome parts πŸ‘
plz continue soon
Posted: 15 years ago
after this dance every1 is very happy n apreceat them al
armaan takes ridz to the corner n start kissing her on the neck
ridz: armaan tum kya kar raha hao
armaan: tum se pyaar kyun koi problem hai
ridz: who............koi dekha laga to
armaan: main tum hara mangater hun aur muje adha lisanace to mil gaya hai
ridz start blushing armaan's grip over ridz is vert tight n ridz is trying to get out of it n armaan is still kissing her neck n making his way up to the chick
ridz: armaan plz chodo muje
armaan: tum kyun itni unromantic ho
ridz: asi bat nahi hai armaan lakin ager hum ko kisis na asa dekha liya to problem ho jayagi par jab hamari sadi hojayagi tab tu ko jo karna ho who tum karshak tha ho
armaan: lakin muje to abhi karna hai
ridz: kya??????
armaaan: tum se pyaar
ridz satrat blushing n armaan is now coming toward her lipes
armaan holds ridz's face n kiss her on the lips with lods of pation and with this ridz forgets everything n kiss him back with pation. then armaan let go of her n ridz's face is al red now n she huges armaan n try to hide her red face on armaan's chest armaan is very happy n hold her face up but ridz's eyes r closed
armaan : ridz tum ap ne ankha kyun bandh kar li
ridz dont say any thing
they both hear
nani: ridhi beta kaha ho tum
ridz get scared
ridz: armaan muje chodo nani arahai hai
armaan: naai un ko bhi janana do ki main tum se kitna pyaar karta hun
ridz: armaan plz muje chodo n then she start rubing her finger across his lips
armaan: kya kar rahi ho
ridz: who lipstic lagi hai
armaan: raha na do aur chalo patry main chalata hai
ridz: plz armaan
armaan laught n sasy ok f9
then they both clean their face n go to the party
nani: are ridzi tum yaha ho mana tum ko sara ghar main dhun rahi thi
then they both go to where sashnk n dr rahul r standing
armaan comes there too
dr rahul: dr shashnk main ya soch raha tha ki ager ap ko koi problem nahi ho to kya mian ridhima ko pana ghar la ja shakta hun
shashnk: ya sure
after hearing this armaan is al happy n exicted
ridz is very shoked n very nervers
shashnk: ridhima ja o jaka pani bag pack karlo
ridz: lakin dad muje kal se duty join karni hai
shashank: to koi bat nahi armaan to hai na who tum ko laka ajaya ga
armaan: ya rit( with a chicky smile)
ridz go up n start packing anji n muskan goes to help her
but they r pulling her leg they r rshing her insted of hwlping her
ridz: ko bhi ha bolna ki kya zarurat thi
then thay al go to down stare then every1 has left including armaan, ridz dr rahul n minnie
armaan is driving nfixing his merro to see ridz
but ridz is playing with minne n armaan smiles @ this when he sees ridz playing with minne
they reaches their house armaan gets out of the car n get ridz's beg
they al go in
armaan takes ridz's beg to one room n dr rahul takes minnie with him
ridz is confused armaan comes n takes her to the guest room
armaan: tum yaha raho gi tum fresh ho kar so jao kal subha ki duty hai aur ya ha hai bathroom isma sab kuch hai ager kuch chahiya to muje bulana aur who samna wala kamara mara hai
armaan try to leave n
ridz: thnxs armaan
armaan turns around n ghoes to her n gives her a gud night kiss inher chich n says: its ok basket so jao gud might
then ridz goes to change her clothes n armaan goes to his room
its morning now ridz is the firt one to wake up
she takes a bath n change r clothes n goes to the kitchen
she makes a coffe 4 dr rahul n armaan n takes out mile for minnie
then she goes to minne's room n try to wake her up minnes sleeps on her lap ridz is trying to wake her up n armaan walkes in
armaan: minnes tum ab tak so rahi ho
minne: bf muje sona do
armaan: lagta hai tum asa nahi mano gi
then he goes to minnes n tell ridz to tiggels her in sing language
then they both start tigaling her n then she wakes up
ridz:get ready n come to the brekfat table n armaan mana tumhari aur papa ka liya coffee banai hia to tum bhi aja na tayar ho ka
araman: thik hia main papa ko bol dunga
then after the brekfast armaan n ridz both go to sanjeevani
in the locker room
atul: are kal to bahut maza agaya tha
rahul lookes @ muskan n: ya bahut maza aya tha
muskan start blushing
armaan n ridz enters the locker room
atul: hi ridz n armaan, ridz anji nahi ayi aja
ridz: muje nahi pata, sayad di jaldi aka nurstation pa hogi
lovely comes in
sis lovely: are dr ridhima ji ap kasi hai ap
ridz: main thik hun
sis lovely: ap ko pata hai dr anjali kaha hai
ridz: nahi kyun who nurse station pa nahi hai
sis lovele who to abhi tak ayi nahi hai
every1 is shoked
ridz: muje pata hai who abhi tak so rahi hogi
armaan: abi thak so gi who
ridz: nahi armaan di ki nind itni jaldi nahi kulri hai aur mine unka alarma clook hun to phir who uthagi
then ridz calles her but there is no answer
ridz: muje lagta hai muje jana padaga
armaan: lakin abhi to hama breffing ka liya jana hai
rit then anji comes in running   
ridz: di ap der se uthina
anji: ya muje uth na main der ho gaye then armaan start laughing
anji: shut up armaan ya sab tum hai waja se hua hai
armaan: mari waja se
anji: hai ager tum ridz ko apna saath nhi laja ta to as kuch nahi hota
then she huges ridz
armaan: laga ta hai ab tum ko uska bager uthnaki adat dalni pada gi kuynki kuch time ka bad ya mara alarm clock ban jayagi
ridz start blushing
@ the nurse station dr kirti comes n gives duty to al n then she leaves
after few hours they al r sittting in the cafe njoing their break
armaan: to anji kya soch hai tumna
anji: kia basra main???
armaan: tum hara alarm clock ka bara main
then they al start laughing
muskan is in the locker room talking on the phone
then she hange up n tears r starting to come out
in the cafe every1 ask rhul wher is she n just then she comes in there
rahul: oy tu kaha thi khana nhi khana
then he sees tears coming down her chich he gets up
rahul: musakn tu ro kyun rah hai
she does not say any thing
rit then atul n anji gets a page they both leave
muskan: muje tum logo se bat kara ni hai
al: kya ?????/
muskan: mara parents yaha araha hai
tehy al get shoked
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg 😳 sooooo cuuutee 😳 😳 soo romantic!! loved it!! uff..muskaan's parents coming hope she clears their misunderstandings and gets engaged to rahul πŸ˜› plz continue soon! πŸ‘
Posted: 15 years ago
Your FF is amazing.just loved it.......
You written it so well,
Good Work πŸ‘
Can't wait for next part.
Keep rocking.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
reallya nice one thanks for updating please continue it soon
Posted: 15 years ago
hey wow yaar it ws soooooooooo romantic yaar jst lvd it yaar ...............it ws chooooooooooooooooo romantic yaar jst lvd it.............wow armaan ko hlf license mil gaya hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.................thts grt nd now R,A,Rnd miniie in ar house fr 1 day hmmmmm wow lvd it d way armaan nd ridz woke up minnie it ws sooooooooo fnnnnnnnny nd angie ka alarm clock ridz hai or thodi din bad nd she ws blushng bcz aftr few days armaan ki alarm clock ban jaygi hayeeeeeeeeeeee soooo romantic nd he ws laughng at her heeeeeeeeeeeeeee......................omg ye nayi musibat muskaan ke parents aa rahe hai ohhhhhhhhhhhh god nd she ws cryng nd all wre shockd...................
cont sooooooooon it ws brilliant
luv yachu

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