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FF:Love Story - Upd. March 28th Page 23 (Page 6)

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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Kya fanfic hai...
Fabulous, marvelous mindblowing.
I have read your FF and I'm very impressed with your writing. You are great writing and thanks for the english translation. Keep it up I just wish you all the best and best of luck with everything. Continue soon when you get some time and BTW what's your name?


Love S.Rina

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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 4:39am | IP Logged
hi
 
i read ur f from the beginning. it is really good. plz try to update as much as possible on weekends since u cant update from monday to friday.
 
SIDE NOTE: sindoora is so evil! i hate her! here is a thought: sindoora try's to get flirty with sagar. sagar stops her and yells at her. he tells vidya. vidya tells him good job and stay away from sindoora as much as possible. they go home and gayatri bahu is there and she is  making hema chachi and chandra do house chores. when sindoora comes she tells sindoora to do dusting of the house. then when she is alone with vidya and shalu, she gives vidya a new phone and tells them a plan to make chachi, chandra adn sindoora do work and make vidya and sagar together! it is boring but how did u lke it?!
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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 6:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LoveBMTD

Kya fanfic hai...
Fabulous, marvelous mindblowing.
I have read your FF and I'm very impressed with your writing. You are great writing and thanks for the english translation. Keep it up I just wish you all the best and best of luck with everything. Continue soon when you get some time and BTW what's your name?


Love S.Rina
 
Thank you!! Smile
 
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Posted: 07 September 2008 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bmtd_ks

hi
 
i read ur f from the beginning. it is really good. plz try to update as much as possible on weekends since u cant update from monday to friday.
 
SIDE NOTE: sindoora is so evil! i hate her! here is a thought: sindoora try's to get flirty with sagar. sagar stops her and yells at her. he tells vidya. vidya tells him good job and stay away from sindoora as much as possible. they go home and gayatri bahu is there and she is  making hema chachi and chandra do house chores. when sindoora comes she tells sindoora to do dusting of the house. then when she is alone with vidya and shalu, she gives vidya a new phone and tells them a plan to make chachi, chandra adn sindoora do work and make vidya and sagar together! it is boring but how did u lke it?!
 
Thank you for the side note it wasn't boring it was good. Smile
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Posted: 09 September 2008 at 5:11pm | IP Logged
That was an amazing update! Please continue soon! Smile
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Originally posted by svforever

That was an amazing update! Please continue soon! Smile
 
Thnx Smile I will try to continue on Friday.
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Posted: 12 September 2008 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
Part 10:
 
 
Everyone is around Sagar's Desk listening to him playing guitar he ends his song and then everyone starts to clap. The teacher also walked in while Sagar was playing.
 
Girl listening to Sagar play: OMG that was amazing
 
Sagar: Thank you
 
Sindoora: Wow Sagar itna acha - (Wow Sagar that was good)
 
Teacher: Tumhara naam kya hai - (What is your name?)
 
Sagar: Sagar
 
Teacher: Tum to merse bhi acha play kerte ho tumko to dusri class main hona chaiye - (You play better than me you should be in the other class.)
 
Sagar: Thank you sir per maine 4 saal guitar lena hai aur phir main is saal guitar 4 main jayoon phir agle saal main phir guitar nahi le sakta - (Thank you but I want to take 4 years of guitar so if I go to guitar 4 then I can't take guitar all 4 years.)
 
Teacher: Theek hai per kabhi kabhi meri help kerni paregi - (OK but you will have to help me sometimes.)
 
Sagar: Theek hai - (OK)
 
Girl in class: Sagar tum ek aur gana sunaoge. Mera favorite gana hai hai Main Agar Kahoon from OSO- (Sagar will play another song for us.)
 
Teacher- Hain Sagar ek aur gana - (Yes Sagar one more song)
 
Sagar: Theek hai
 
(Sagar start to play and while he is playing everyone is looking at him and enjoying the song)(The song ends)
 
Teacher: Sagar ek din merko apne jaise guitar play kerna sikhana. 2 minute main class shuro ho rahi hai- (Wow Sagar one day you have to teach me how to play guitar as well as you. Class is starting in two minutes)
 
Sagar: Main dil se play kerta hoon - (I play from my heart)
 
Girl in class: Sagar mera birthday March 4th ko hain tum aa sakte ho. Apne guitar ke saath. Mera naam aditi hai.- (Sagar my birthday is on march 4th will you come. bring your guitar. My name is Aditi
 
Sagar: Merko bata dena kahan pe hai tumhari birthday party main ajayoonga. Main apni girlfriend ko saath le ayoon. - (Tell me where the party is I will come. Can I bring my girlfriend.)
 
Aditi: Yes. Yeh Jo apke saath sit ker rahi hain apki girlfriend hai. - (Yes. The girl sitting next to you is that your girlfriend)
 
Sindoora: Nahi main Sagar ki girlfriend ki cousin hoon. Mera naam Sindoora hai - (No I am Sagar's girlfriends cousin.)
 
Aditi: Sorry, Merko pata nahi tha - (Sorry I didn't know)
 
Sagar: Koi nahi - (No big deal.)
 
Aditi: Sindoora aap bhi ajana - (Sindoora you should come too)
 
Sindoora: Theek hai. - (OK)
 
Teacher: Acha aab saab apni seat main baath jao. Class main 30 minutes hain aur pehla hafta hai to phir isliye basics dekhange - (Now everyone sit in you seats. We have 30 minutes of class left. Since it is the first week we will look at the basics.)
 
(The teacher continues talking and the class ends)(Sagar and Sindoora have the next class togther too so they walk together in the halls.)
 
Sagar: Meri favorite class hai guitar. Vidya hoti zaada maaza ata.- (Guitar is my favorite class. If Vidya was there it would be funner.)
 
Sindoora: Main Vidya jitne fun to hoon nahi. -(I am not as fun as Vidya.)
 
Sagar: Nahi aap bhi achi haan. - (No, You are nice too.)
 
Sindoora: Thanks per tum to baas yunhi ke rahe ho. - (Thank you but you are just saying that.)
 
Sagar: Nahi, Main kabhi jahoot nahi bolta - (No, I never lie.)
 
Sindoora: Thank you Sagar tum bhi bahaut ache ho. - (Thank you Sagar you are very nice too.)
 
Sagar: Class agayi. - (Class is here.)
 
(Sagar walks in the class and Vidya is already there waiting for him Sagar and Vidya both sit down they can talk the first 5 minutes because the teacher is always late.)
 
Sagar: Vidya Maine tumhare ko miss kiya. Tumne merko miss kiya. - (Vidya I missed you did you miss me.)
 
Vidya: Nahi. - (No)
 
Sagar: Kya? - (What?)
 
Vidya: Tum bhi sari baatein serious le lete ho. - (You take things so seriously.)
 
Sagar: Merko pata tha ki main itna hot hoon merko kaise miss nahi ker sakti. - (I knew it I am so hot how can you not miss me.)
 
Sindoora: Sagar class main kitna maaza aya tha. - (Sagar class was so much fun.)
 
Sagar: Vidya tum bhi guitar le leti kitna maaza ata. - (You should have taken guitar it would have been fun.)
 
Vidya: Art class itni boring hai. Main dekhoongi ki main class badal sakti hoon ya nahi. - (Art class is so boring. I will see if I can change clasess.)
 
Sindoora(Thinking): Nahi yeh Vidya ajayegi to mera plan kharab ker degi. - (No, if Vidya comes into that
 
Sindoora: Per tum itni achi artist ho Vidya. Kya hua agar class boring hai. - (But your such a good artist Vidya. It doesn't matter if the class is boring.)
 
Vidya: Vaise to main sabse achi hoon aur teacher bhi keta hai ki main achi hoon. - (Well I am the best and the teacher also says I am good.)
 
Sagar: Main to batana hi bhool gaya March 4th ko kya ker rahi ho. - (I forgot to tell you. What are you doing on March 4th.)
 
Vidya: Kuch bhi nahi. Kyun? - (Nothing. Why?)
 
Sagar: Hum dono ne ek party pe jana hai. - (Both of us have to go to a party.)
 
Vidya: Kiski - (Whos?)
 
Sagar: Aditi woh kehti hai ki main uski birthday pe guitar le ker ayoon. Tum bhi mere saath ayogi. Tumhare Sindoora Di bhi a rahi hai - (Aditi, she says that I should come to her birthday with my guitar. You will come with me too won't you. Your Sindoora Di is coming too.)
 
Vidya(Thinking): Sindoora di a rahi hain to merko bhi chalna parega. -(If Sindoora Di is going I will have to go too.)
 
Vidya: Aacha theek hai. - (Ok.)
 
(Class begins when the teacher enters.)
 
 
Sorry for the short update. I might update Saturday or Sunday.
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Posted: 12 September 2008 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
so good <3 wonder what will happen at the party, continue soon please

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