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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 8:25pm | IP Logged
dat was amazing, sriously<<3
cont sooon<<3

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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
omg i'm so curious now
plz update soon
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Posted: 26 June 2008 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
awesome job! it was really sweet. Big smile
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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 8:39am | IP Logged
amazing update mushtari....can u countinue todai ?
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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 10:13am | IP Logged
eheheheh srry i couldnt be first this time Tongue
hehe i was sooo damn busy and i still am...
will be back after 1/2 hour to comment on ur updates which r always amazing hun Big smile Big smile Big smile
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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 10:28am | IP Logged
OMG THOSE LAST TWO UPDATES WERE AMAZING HUN Big smile Big smile Big smile
HOW DO U CUM UP WIT THESE IDEAS???? Tongue Tongue
I JUST LOVED IT SOOO MUCH MUSHI Big smile Big smile Big smile
and whats sagar's plan anyways??? i hope it doesnt mess up SV's relationship at all..
plez plez plez plez plez continue soon hun
for me???
plez
btw i prolly wont be first anyways cuz im prolly gonna be out all day...so moomoo here's another chance for u to be first LOL haahaha
BUT PLEZ PLEZ PLEZ CONTINUE HUN CUZ IM DIEING TO NOE AS SOON AS I COME BACK HOME Smile Smile Smile
luv u Smile

wooooohhh this is long Tongue
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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
hello everyone im glad you all liked my previous update..enjoy the next one :D

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- next day..
vidya had gotten dressed and was trying make the bed but sagar hadnt woken up yet.
v-sagar get up..see its 12:00 we have to go to priyas farmhouse...comeon..
no answer.
v-sagar[whinned]

sagar was awake the whole time, he just didnt wake up. he remembered the promise he made to himself....::i wont let this afternoon happen the way youve planned..i just cant trust rohan....
--
v-sagar...
vidya sat beside him on the bed and started shaking him. then she got an idea*LIGHTBULB* she started tickling sagar. sagar turned and grabbed vidyas waist and lifted her. he flung her over to his other side and starting tickling her.
v-hahaaha..stop..okok sorry..[she couldnt breathe, she was laughing so hard]
sagar stopped, but he still had her in his arms.
v-ok now lets goo
vidya tried releasing from his grip, but was unsuccessful.she gave up and gave him a look.
s-wat??...no morning kiss...[puppy face]
v-ye rite...[she then looked at his reaction and felt sorry].
she held his face and kissed his cheek.

then he got up..thought::: ok well go...but ill keep a good eye on that lousy rohan

they reach their house. they have a backyard barbeque. they then decide to play volleyball. sagar & vidya vs. Rohan & priya.
they have a score of 2:2...priya serves, vidya bumps the ball back, and rohan slams... IT GOES OUT..
sagar yelled- OUT
priya-NO WAY...that was sooo in..
meanwhile vidya ran to get the ball. and so did rohan.
on the other hand::
s-it was out..what are you talking about..
p-nope..IN
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vidya took the ball and turned to be SO CLOSE to rohan. he "was about to fall'' so he grabbed onto vidyas waist for support, then apologized. vidya looked down disgustedly. she walked away. rohan called her
r-vidya
vidya didnt wanna listen but she wasnt that mean...so she turned to face him.
r-wats wrong..
vidya was confused...
r-listen...i just want to say that ill be there for you[wink]...vidya was disgusted to hear that
r-AS A FRIEND...[vidya was relieved but still disgusted]
they ran back to the game.

sagar saw vidya running up to them with the ball
v-that was out.
p-ok com on lets play .. serve
v-its too hot..i dont think i want to continue.
p-oh vidya come one
v-sorry priya
she walked inside the house. sagar followed.
he grabbed a water bottle and drank from it.
s-wats wrong..you were so into the game...but why so suddenlY?
v-its nothing..[forced smile]..im tired actually , can we go..
s-ok now i know there IS a problem..did rohan...oh no he didnt..im going to.[sagar was going top walk out when vidya grabbed his arm.
vidya thought:: i cant tell him the truth, or else hes going to hurt rohan..and thatlll hurt priya....
v-no sagar..im serious it has nothing to do with rohan .. i just am tired...plus yesterday was pretty hectic so ye[smiled]
s-you better be telling the truth vidya, because i know i cant trust him.
v-have i ever liied to you..
they both smile.

they say their goodbyes and they go home---night time

sagar was sleeping but vidya was crying to herself. their backs were facing eachother. vidya didnt want to make it so obvious, so she held all her sobbing in, and let her tears out. sagar, in his sleep, had turned and hugged vidya around her waist. vidya jumped a little because she was thinking of what happened earlier today with rohan.
since she was crying, sagar felt her breathing hard. he woke up and saw vidya crying.
sagar thought:: why, why did you lie to me vidya, i know its rohan
sagar sat up
s-vidya
vidya cleaned her tears and sat up beside him she forced a smile and made herself seem as if she had been sleeping.
v-yeh ["yawn"]
s-vidya please...stop this... now tell me what rohan did while you were getting the volleyball.
v- i said rite? noth--
s-VIDYA STOP
vidya jumped. sagar never yelled at her before
s-STOP LIING, I KNOW WHAT HAPPENED. YOURE JUST NOT SAYING ANYTHING BECAUSE YOURE AFRAID ILL DO SOMETHING. AND YOU JUST DONT WANT YOUR FRIEND TO GET HURT. I KNOW YOU TOO WELL, YOU CANT LIE TO ME, STOP, OK JUST STOP.
viddya had been looking down the whole time.
sagar got out of bed and went to the washroom. vidya started getting tears. she ssat back leaning on the back board of the bed.
vidya thinking:: i knew we shouldnt have gotten involved , im sorry, sagar im sorry.
she shut her eyes and tears started rolling down her cheeks.
when sagar came out of the washroom, he saw vidya in tears. he walked upto her and sat beside her. he cleaned her tears.vidya slowly opened her eyes.
s-im sorry--
v-no..i am..i shouldnt have gotten involved with them in the first place...im just so stupid why..and i ve NEVER lied to you in my life...but sagar please believe me, i only did it--
s-for your friend and me[smiled]
v-ye and ill never do it again.
bmtd11 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 June 2008 at 1:11pm | IP Logged

first!

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ok GREAT UPDATE!! OOH NOW TIME 4 THE LIST!

1.Amazing

2.Outstanding

3.Soo Cute

4.Loved it

5.Marvelous

6.de best

7.Excellent

8.Stupendous

9.outrageous

10. All of the above

I loved it! PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE SOON! ClapClapClap



Edited by bmtd11 - 27 June 2008 at 1:20pm

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