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narmz IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 9:51am | IP Logged
mushtari ur update was awesome...i realli enjoyed reading it please please countinue soon

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 10:04am | IP Logged
i just loved itttt... Clap
hate sindoora but good thing sagar knows her..
plsssssssss cont soon...sooooooooooonn
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 10:16am | IP Logged
I hope it was Sagar who helped them! Anyway beautiful update! Big smile
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bmtd11

ok i have some things to say about ur ff so here it goes:


1. Outstanding


2. Marvelous


3. beatuful


4. Interesting


5. so cute


6. hmmm... Amazing


7.*faint*


Ok there are probably way more stuff to write but this is all i cud think of,. Thank you hun 4 bringing me back my love! ooon what a great thing to fall in love it. not a man but an ff! ClapClap



aww sweety yur soo cute n i love urr ff 22222
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 11:13am | IP Logged
MUSHI!!!!
I LOVED IT SOOO MUCH HUN Embarrassed
AMAZING UPDATE Smile Smile Smile
plez plez plez continue soon!!!!!!! Smile Smile
luv u Big smile
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mushtari

Originally posted by bmtd11

ok i have some things to say about ur ff so here it goes:


1. Outstanding


2. Marvelous


3. beatuful


4. Interesting


5. so cute


6. hmmm... Amazing


7.*faint*


Ok there are probably way more stuff to write but this is all i cud think of,. Thank you hun 4 bringing me back my love! ooon what a great thing to fall in love it. not a man but an ff! ClapClap



aww sweety yur soo cute n i love urr ff 22222

thanks hun. ur sweet too.. and oh where r my manners not only do i love ur ff but i also love u! ur such a good frnd!

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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
chanx guys, tank you very much...deticated to all my readers <3

---
the guy gets pulled away by some 'dude[' who PUNCHES him right in the face...... shalu runs beside shalu .. shocked.they look up to see who helped them out..and was SURPRISED to see who it was!
---
v-TUSHAAR???
shalu-tushar?
the jerk ran away.
t-hi guys

shalu- OMG its been ages, where have you been[quick hug]
tushaar smiles, im here now arent i. i heard someone is getting married tommorow[wink & nudge]
shalu blushes.
tushaar- lemme guess...CHINU
shalu-yes
tu-i wish u two all the best.
sh-u ARE coming riiiite??
t-OFCOURSE.. u are my fav. cuzzo arent you.[looks at vidya] hows my other lil sis
v-im fine, where have YOU been.
t-ok, how bout we sit down and talk about this.

they sit down and talk.....--6:30***Tushaar is their older cousin and since shalu and vidya didnt have a bro , he was like a big bro to thm**

t-...and so now we live in delhi.
sh-so do u have a girl [wink wink]
t-actually i do..[shy]
v-omg who is it
t-her name...surili
vidyas jaws drop
v-su..su..surili
t-ye....
v-um tush--
t-now u tell me...how are you and sagar doing. i dont even know him, but i have heard of him
vidya smiles. we're fine thanks.
t-im sorry i couldnt make it to the wedding, i was travelling.
v-i understand
sh-so..howd u meet surili
t-surili..wow..lets see..lets just say i helped her out with something.[smiles]
vidya wanted to tell him who she 'really' was, but she saw how happy he was and thought--maybe surili changed

its 8:00

v-wow u guys weve been here for 6 hours..Confused
sh-o damn..im getting married tomorw...omgomgomgomg
v-tushaar , why dont u come over..maybe even for the night..i mean the wedding is tomorow.
t-id love to come, but i dont have any of my clothes with me..n plus i m going to bring surili along...if..u dont mind[lookin at shalu..]
sh-no..not at all[lookd woorrried]

--@sagars

vidya and shalu arrive. they go to their rooms.

vidya walks in her room and just drops oon her bed. her hands out and eyes shut.
v-ukh...soo tired[yawns]
she feels someone massaging her arms. she opened her eyes to see sagar . she sat up and looked back to face him.
s-hellooo
v-[smiles] hi
s-how was it
v-not bad..omg..i met my cousin tushaar after like 5-6 years..
s-tushaar?
v-o u didnt know him..but guesss what hes with surili[disgusted look]
s-uh..surili?
v-oh rite...nvm
s-anyhow...[pulls her towards him---her head on his lap--he starts massaging her head]
vidya QUICKLY gets up
v-uh wat do u think ur doing?
s-[confused] what??
v-u cant massage my head
s-why not?
v-well..because thats my job.
she crawls behind sagar and puts his head on her lap. she starts massaging his head.
s-i see no difference here//my head doesnt hurt
v-well..neither did mine.
s-ye but..u were tired
v-u seem tired too..[smiles]
s-fine wat ever[smiles]
v-so what did u do today,...mustve been a boring day..u know cuz i wasnt around[smiling]
s-actually i had the time of my life when u werent around[teasing]
v-[starts massaging HARD] oh really
s-ooww..too hard
v-[massaging lightly]sorry[she was approaching his forhead to give him a kiss]
sagar sees this and moves his head up..vidya kissed his lips. she was shocked!
she quickly moves away
v-heyyy
sagar sits up laughing. vidya turns her head the other way ""mad"" with her arms crossed
sagar lightly pulls her head to face him
s-listen to this....
he takes out his phone and plays..what he recorded...---'''pathetic...poor sagar, doesnt know whats hitting him..soon this whole place will be under MY name..[evil laugh] '''
vidya was shocked. she took hold of the phone.
v-omg do u know what this means[smiling]
s-actually i dont[''confused'']
vidya hits his chest lightly.[sagar smiles]
v-we have proof of sindoora confessing...we can show this to everyone in the house---
s-noo
v-wat why?
s-lets wait...i want to know WHAT shes upto...plus she told me her plan..i dont like it...
v-wat is it.
s-ok well tomorow is shalu and chinus wedding...and she wants me to make a big scene and yell at you---
v-wat, thats horrible...my lil sis wedding..noo dont do it sagar.
s-ye, dont worry i still have to figure out what to do..
v-ukh...i just cant wait till its over so we could all get on with our lives.
s-dont worry we have back up[takes the phone]

vidya smiles and gets up to go change. she opens the closet....takes out her PJs and goes to the washroom.
she comes out and sees no sagar. she goes downstairs to the kitchen to get water, there she sees sagar.
v-watcha doin
s-waiting for you
v-here?
s-ye...[walks closer]
v-sagar,...if sindoora sees??
s-pppsshttt...who cares
v-ok u couldve done this in the room
s-[laughs] o so...u dont mind?
v- i mean....uh ye...i do ido..its just...why here where sindoora could spot us?
s-listen ... im not taking orders from YOU[points a finger at her]
v-huh?
s-who do u think u are anyway..u know, ive always wondered how ive gotten along with u
sagar walks passed her. vidya grabs hold of his arm, but he tuggs it and walks away mad
v-wat the---[sad] she runs out the kitchen and is STOPPED by......


precap- chinu & sagars wedding
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Posted: 21 June 2008 at 2:20pm | IP Logged
1. Amazing
2. outstanding
3.Marvelous
4.intersting
5. love it
6. my fav!
7. so sweet
8. everything nice
9. repeat the list
10. It was the best thing i have ever read! your an amazing writer and everything that is good about life! keep it going! Smile LOL

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