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MS FF - Yeh Ishq Hai [Part 25 PG.14] (Page 2)

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Thanks *PakiBeauty*, i'll consider it. And thanks for the comment, i'm going to post part 3 up really soon, probably today so keep commenting. They're appreciated!
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Part 3

Soni:"Yeh Tumne kya kiya Mahi? Tumne Shabd se itna bhala boora kyon kaha?"

Mahi:"Soni, yeh tum kya keh rahi ho? Usne yeh sab kiya, usne hi shuru kiya hai aur tum keh rahi ho ki maine kya kiya?"

Raji:"Theek hai, jo ho gaya so ho gaya. Ab tum sab kuch bhoolado aur age bharo. Tum dono kitne achay lag rahi the ek saat."

Mahi:"Nahin Raji di. Aap jaanti hai Shabd humare bare mein kaise soch tha hai? Nahin, main uske surat bhi nahin dekhna chati!"

Soni:"Par Mahi?"

Mahi:"Please Soni!"

As the girls tried their best to persuade Mahi into forgetting all this, the boys tried with all their might to convince Shabd to forget about all this.

Veer:"Baat samajh ki koshish karo Shabd, tum khamakga is baat ko badi banara hai."

Jeet:"Haan, bhai theek keh ra hain. Yeh sab kuch bhool jao."

Shab:"Main yeh kaise bhoola doon Mahi mujhse kya kaha? Usne mujhe saandh kaha!"

Veer:"Par phir bhi Shabd, koshish to karo."

Shabd:"Please Veer, main is baare mein aur discussion nahin karna chatha."

Veer:"Theek hai. Aur kuch karte hain."

Jeet:"Ek kaam karte hain, kyon nahin Shabd humare liye gana gaye?"

Shabd:"Kya? Main aur gana! Nahin!"

Jeet:"C'mon Shabd, apne bhairon ki liye bhi nahin. Please?"

After Shabd gave it a thought, he decided to sing after all.

Shabd:"Theek Hai, chalo."

Jeet:"Thanks Shabd! Ladies and gentleman, mera bhai Shabd apke liye ek gana gane wala hai. Put your hands together for Shabd!"

Shabd:"Thanks Jeet, yeh gana mere nahin dost ki liye" smirking at Mahi.

Mahi:"Yeh saandh ga bhi sakta hai!"

Raji:"Mahi!"

Mahi:"Kya?"

Ladki Kyon from Hum Tum

Ladk kyon na jaane ladko se nahin hoti
Sochti hai zyada kam vo samajh ti hai
Dil kuch kehta hai kuch aur hi karti hai
Ladki kyon na jaane ladko se nahin hoti

Pyar use bhi hai magar shuruaat tumhi se chahe
Kudh mein uljhi uljhi hai par baalo ko suljhaee
(Shabd comes around Mahi while Mahi is fixing her hair but immediatly stops when Shabd sings that line)

Hum ache dost hai par us nazar tumko dekha nahin
Woh sab theek hai par uske baare mein ne nahin socha
(shabd imitates Mahi's voice)

Sab se alag ho tum kehke paas tumhari aaye
Aur kuch din mein tumhe alag sa kuch bhi na usko paa'e

uff yeh kasis shirt pahante ho yeh kaisi baal katte ho
Gaadi tez chalate ho jaldi mein kyon khaate ho
(Shabd goes near Jeet and Veer and puts his arms on their shoulders)

Veer:"Arre Shabd, yeh to baat sahi hai!"

Tumhe badalne ko pass woh aati hai
Tumhe mitaane ko chaal bichati hai
Baaton baaton mein tumhe satati hai
Pahale hasati ha phir bara rulate hai
Ladki kyon na jaane kyon ladko si nahin hoti

Mahi:"Acha, main batati hoon ladki kyon ladko se nahin hoti!"

Soni:"Haan Mahi, sikado ki ladkiyan kaisi hoti hain!"

What turned out to be a normal performance for their entertaiment turned out to be a war between the men and the women (the adults decided to leave the kids alone and enjoy and went o have dinner).

Ae itna hi khudh de khush ho to piche kyon ate ho
Phool kabhi to hazaar tophe aakhir kyon late ho

Apna naam nahin bataya apne coffee pine chalenge
Main apko ghar schord doon, phir kab milenge
(goes towards Shabd with a smirk)

Raji:"Tum bilkul sahi keh rahi ho Mahi. Ladke aise karte hain," said Raji giving a look at Veer.

Bikhara bikhara bematlav sa toota phoota jina
Aur kehte alag se hain hum taanke apna sina
(imitating Shabd's Stance)

(Mahi goes towards Jeet, Veer and Shabd)

Bhiga toya farsh pe tootpaste ka dhakan kahin
Kale ke moze ulatke pahane waqt kuch bhi nehosh nahi

Jina ka tumko dhang sikhati hai
tumhe jaanwar se insaan banati hai
uske bina ek pal reh na sakoge tum
Usko pata hai yeh keh na sakoge tum
Is liye ladkiyan ladko se nahin hoti

Jeet:"Shabd, Jawab dena!"

Shabd:"Jawab mil gaya."

(Walks towards Mahi that their inches apart)

Jaane kaun kaunse din woh tumko yaad dilyae
Pyar ko chahe bhool bhi jaye tarikein na bhoolaye

(Shabd walks around Mahi)

1st March ko nazar milaye
4 April ko main milne ayi
21 May tumne chooha tha
6 June mujhe kuch hua that

Ladkon na kya hai, kisis bhi more pe woh mur jaye
Abhi kisi ka hai abhi kisi aur se woh jur jaye
(stomping Shabd on the toe with her heel making Shabd jump around in pain)

Tumhari mummy daddy ghar par nahin hai main a jao
Tumhari firend akeli ghar jari hai bechari mai chod aon

Ek haan kahane ko kitna dahalati hai
Thak jaate hain hum woh jii bahalaati hain

Mahi:"Buddhu kahin ka!"

Woh sharmati hai tabhi chupaati hai
Ladki jo haan keh de use nibhati hain
Is liye Ladkiyan ladko se nahin hoti

The song finished, with the men agreeing with Shabd and the Women agreeing with Mahi. Soon, the D.J. put the music back on and everyone forgot the mini war between the men and the women except the six.


Soni:"Jo bhi tumne ladko ki bare kaha, bilkul sahi hai. Ladko aisi hi hoti hai," said Soni when the six got into a small group in the hall again.

Jeet:Arre, tum ladkiyo kuch kam bhi nahin hai. Bahut chalaak hoti hain."

Veer:"Haan, Jeet bilkul sahi hai."

Jeet:"Thanks bhai."

Raji:"Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Veer? Tum ladkon ka dimaag chota hai, waise jaise ek jaanwar ki tara!"

Brij:"Yeh main kya sun raha hoon? Tum log kyon jaghar re ho?"

Mahi:"Dekhiye na daddyji, Shabd keh ra hai ki ladko ladkiyan se ache hai. Shabd ghalat hain na?"

Aditya:"Shabd, yeh main kya sun raha hoon?Kya maine tumhe yeh hi sikhaya hai kya?"

Shabd:"Nahin, bas who main..."

Moni:"Theek hai, ab yeh jagra nad karo. kyon bacho jaise lard rahe ho."

Mahi:"Par mummyji..."

Moni:"Par war kuch nahin Mahi!"

Mahi:"Theek hai."

Yash:"Arre Brijsahib, mujhe apse kuch pooch na tha."

Brij:"Kya hai Yashsahib?"

Yash:"Mujhe lagta hai ki hum in bachon ko chute main behjna chahiye. Mera ek farmhouse hai Goa mein. wahan bahut nazaa ayega or bachein relax bhi ho jeyenge shaadi se pehle. Kya kehte hain?"

Brij:"Idea to bura nahin hai. Theek hai, tum dono jao sakte ho."

Jeet:"Dono kyon, Mahi bhi humare saath ayegi, uske bina mazaa nahin ayega."

Soni:"Haan daddyji, Mahi bhi hamare saath ane di jiye na."

Brij:"Theek hai, par tum charon apne ap mein busy honge, Mahi bore ho jaye gi."

Veer:"Bore kahan unclejee, Shabd bhi humare saath ara hai. Kyon Shabd?"

Mahi+Shabd:"KYA!"


Edited by taran13 - 04 July 2008 at 6:45pm
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That was a really nice part. Please continue soon Smile
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Thanks guys for the comments! they really are appreciated; and to the silent readers! just don't give up on the story! I'll post Part 4 and 5 in a couple of hours! And thanks once again!
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really great ff
can't wait to find out what happens at the farmhouse
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Part 4:

Shabd:Nahin Veer, main nahin a sakta, mujhe bahut kaam hai.

Aditya:Koi kaam nahin, tumhe chute mil gaye. Jao, enjoy karo.

Aditya:Par dad...

Aditya:Par war kuch nahin. Tuma jare ho and that's final.

Veer:To theek hai, hum tum teeno ko subha 7 baje pick up karne a jayenge. Tayyar reh na.

Raji:Fikar mat karo, hum tayyar honge.

Veer:Just in case, ladkiyan usually bahut waqt lete hain tayyar hone main.

Durga:Veer!

Veer:Kya?

Sunita:Theek hai theek hai, tum bachon khana kha lo aur apne chute ki liye plan bhi bana le na.

Jeet:Haan...mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai. Chalo khate hain.

Soni:Haan chalo. Arre, Mahi, Shabd, tumhe khana nahin kkhana kya? Bhook nahin lagi?

Mahi:Nahin, mujhe bhook nahin lagi.

Shabd:Mujhe bhi nahin.

Jeet:Theek hai, hum khana khake ate hain.

And the four left to eat dinner while Shabd and Mahi seperate ways; they decided to mingle with the guests that attended the engagement.While the two were mingling, the other four were hatching a plan to make the two realize that Shabd and Mahi were indeed attracted to each other. They just had to get them to realize it.


Raji:Dekho. Woh dono kaise kare hain. Saaf saaf nazar ara hai ki woh ek doosre se attracted hain. Par un dono ka ego...

Veer:Tum sahi keh rahi ho Raji.Hume kuch aisa karna chahiye ki woh dono apna ego bhoola dein aur samajh a jaye ke woh dono ek doosre se kitna attracted hain.

Jeet:Haan...aur aisa karne kya mere pas ek idea hai. Suno.

And Jeet started to explain his plan to get Shabd and Mahi together.


Soni:Jeet, yeh to bahut acha plan hai. Yeh to kamyab hi hoga.

Jeet:Thank you.

Durga:Tum charon ne khana kha liya?

Veer:Ji mama, humne kha liya.

Durga:Theek hai, tum hum chalte hain. Subha ki tayyarian bhi karni hai. Goa aur Bhatinda bahut door hai. Jaldi to janna hai na?

Moni:Theek hai Durga ji. Namaste.

Everyone said goodbye and they left for the door. Veer and Jeet winked at Raji and Soni about the plan while Shabd and Mahi just glared at each other.


Brij:Mahi puttar. Tum sab ko darwaze tak chod ao.

Mahi: Ji daddyji.

By then all the other guests had already left.Everyone went to their cars; only Shabd was left at the door.


Mahi:Ab tum yahan kyon khare ho?

Shabd: Woh isl iye kyunki mujhe yeh batana that tima par tayyar ho jana. Mujhe der honi ki adat nahin hai.

Mahi:Accha, to main zaroor der karongi.

Shabd:Whatever.

And Shabd left to go to his car. He didn't wait at the door to tell Mahi to be on time. In fact he wanted to apologize for what he said at the party, but him and his ego; it got in the way.

(In Mahi,Soni and Raji's Bedroom)


Soni:Aaj kitna maza aya na? Aur Shabd, Wah! Kya gata hai!

Raji:Haan, Bahut maza hai aya. Aur Shabd aur Mahi kitne ache lagre the ek doosre ke saath gate waqt.

Soni and Raji were trying to get Mahi to get Mahi to admit that she infact did like Shabd. They could see it in her eyes when they were dancing together;but her and her arrogance.


Mahi:Yeh aap kay keh rahi hain Raji di? Main aur woh saandh! Aap ka dimaag to theek hai na?

Raji:Maine aisa kya keh dia? Shabd acha ladka hai, thoda sa arrogant hai, par tum bhi hona. Par woh acha bhi hai na? Tum dono ki jodi bahut achi lage ki. Kyon Soni?

Soni:Haan Raji di.

Mahi:Ab bas bhi kijiye, bahut ho gaya. Subah jaldi nahin uthna?

Soni:Kyon, intezaar nahin hota Shabd ki liye?

Mahi:Fitteh mooh tera Soni. Aap bat ker rahe hain. Chup chap so jao.

And Mahi turned off the lights making the others go to sleep as well.


Raji:Theek hai, so jate hain.

Mahi felt excited and nervous to go to the farmhouse with Shabd. She also wanted to apologize but her arrogance got in the way and put those feelings aside and fell asleep.

The Next Morning


Jeet:Shabd! Jaldi karo! Hume ladkiyon ko pick karna hai. Jald kar na!

Shabd:Theek hai. Abhi aya!

Jeet:Kehta hai ki ladkiyan bahut waqt laga ti hain tayyar hone main, kudh abhi tayyar nahi hoya.

Shabd didn't know why but he wanted to look his best to impress. So he wore khaki shorts with a white t-shirt showing off his muscles with his hair spiked and gelled.


Shabd:Chalo, ladkiyon ko pick karna hai, Said Shabd running down the stairs with a hint of excitedness that he tried to hide. Unfortunately, Jeet noticed and knew that he was excited to see Mahi; but wouldn't admit it.

Jeet:Bhai apka bahar wait kar rahe hain.

Jeet was wearing black shorts with a red t-shirt and hair all messy while Veer was wearing cut off jeans and black t-shirt and his hair in a neat messy type of style.


Veer:Kitne der karte tumne Shabd. Tumhe late hona pasand nahin hai na?

Shabd:Late kahan hua hoon. Ab chalo.

Veer:Theek hai, chalo.

And the three got into the car to get the Malhotra girls.


Raji:Mahi! Jaldi nahar a jao. Woh log ate hi honge.

Raji was yelling at Mahi from up the stairs even though she knew why Mahi was taking so long to get ready. She wanted to look nice, dress to impress.

Raji was wearing a blue skirt and a white sphagetti strap top with her hair down.


Mahi:Ayi baba!

Mahi came running down the stairs in her knee high khaki shorts and blue tank top. She had her hair down as well and was wearing a necklace that said Mahi on it.

Mahi:Raji di, Soni kahan hai?

Soni:Main yahan hoon.

Soni came down wearing capri with a white t-shirt that had a red heart on it.

As the girls bid good-bye to their parents, the boys arrived.


Jeet:Arre, tun teeno to tayyar time par hogi.

Veer:Aur bahut achi lag rahi ho tum teeno. Kyon Sgabd?

Shabd kept on staring at Mahi, she looked so beautiful in these modern clothes. Not even the girls in Mumbai could even attept to look this beautiful the way Mahi looked.


Shabd:Haan, bahut achi lag rahi ho, ab chalein?

Veer:Theek hai, chalo.

Veer pulled Raji into the front seat while Jeet took Soni into the middle seat. The only seat left was beside Shabd which Mahi did not want to take.

Raji:Mahi, behet jao na, der ho rahi hai.


Mahi:Theek hai.

Mahi unwillingly sat next to Shabd who wasn't so pleased either.


Shabd: Gadi start to karo Veer.

Veer:Theek hai, itni bhi jaldi nahin hai.

And they drove off to the farmhouse in Goa to put their plan to get that Shabd and Mahi were falling for each other and admit it into action.


Hope you liked it. Will post Part 5 soon. Please comment. It motivates me. Thanks




Edited by taran13 - 04 July 2008 at 6:45pm
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Part 5:

Shabd:Itna gussa mat utaro, mujhe bhi shauk nahin hai tumhari saath behte ne ka.

Mahi:Mujhe bhi shauk nahin hai. Koi seat nahin bachi the is liye, warna kaun behthna chata hai tumhari saath. Saandh ho tum.

Shabd:Main aur saandh? Tun ek pagli ho. NAhin ek pagli bhi nahin, tum ek chipkali ho!

Mahi:Chipkali, aur woh bhi main?

Shabd:Haan!

Jeet:Bhai, aur kitne door hai, mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai. Jaldi karo na!

Veer:Farmhouse abhu door hai. Ek kaam karte hain, khana piche gadi mein hai, chalo woh nikalte hain aur kha lete hain.

Jeet:Theek hai, jaldi gadi rokiye. Bahut bhook lagi hai.

Veer:Yeh lo, gadi rok di.

Raji:Main aur Soni khana nikalte hain. Chal Soni.

Soni:Ji di.

Mahi:Ek minute Soni, main bhi aati hoon. Mujhe is saandh ke saath ek minute bhi nahin reh na.

Shabd:Phir usne mujhe saandh kaha!

Veer:Thand rakh Shabd. Mahi aisi hi hai. Gussa bahut karti hai par dil ki bahut achi hai.

Shabd:Dil ki bahut achi hai my foot!

Jeet:Yeh sab bhool jao, khana aye gaya!

Shabd:Tumhe khana hi yaad hai? Aur kuch nahin?

Jeet:Haan!


Everyone took their sanwiches and pop and started to eat. The couples wanted to eat together and to get Shabd and Mahi to get to bond so they went off to eat in a nerby park; so Mahi and Shabd were left alone again, eating their dinner on a big rock near the car.


Shabd:Ab main Mahi ko sikhata hoon. Mahi, ky tumne kuch dikhay deta hai kya wahan?


Shabd pointed towards the road to distract her attention from her plate so he could place a fake apider into her plate. What did he know that Mahi was REALLY scared of spiders!
AsMahi turned to look around yo see what Shabd was pointing at, Shabd put the fake spider in her plate.


Mahi: Mujhe to kuch bhi dikhay dera.

Shabd:Mujhe laga wahan kuch tha. Chalo, khana khatam karte hain.

Mahi:Andha kahin ka.


Mahi began to eat when she noticed the spider in her plate. She yelled so loud that Shabd even dropped his plate full with food to cover his ears to not hear her scream. But he also doubled up in laughter. Mahi then realized that it was all a joke played by Shabd.


Mahi:Saandh kahin ka. Shabd main tumhe nahin chodungi!


And she ran after Shabd, hittim him as hard as she could. While Shabd ran away from Mahi, Mahi tripped over a rock, lickily, sha also caught Shabd taking him down in the fall. Shabd then fell on top of Mahi having an eye lock session between them. Even though they were so close together, it felt right (in a way). They jumped up looking awkward when they heard the others coming.


Raji:Kya hua? Tum log chilare kyon the?

Mahi:Dekh ye na di, Shabd ne meri plate mein ek cockroach dala tha.

Shabd:Woh nakli tha Raji.


Raji and everyone started to smile.


Soni:Tumko pata nahin ki Mahi spiders se kitna darti hai. Bachpan mein maine aisa kuch kiya tha aur...

Veer:Ab bas bhi karo, Shabd, Mahi se maffi mango.

Sabdh:Main maffi mangu aur is chipkali se? Kabhi bhi nahin!

Veer:Please. Dekhna woh kitna dar gayi hai!

Shabd:Theek hai. Sorry!

Mahi:It's ok.

Jeet:Ab chalo, farmhouse nahin jana kya?

Soni:Haan chalo.


Everyone got into their original seats and went off. However, Shabd and Mahi sat as far as possible, not because of the spider incident, but because of the closeness they felt when they fell together.

Shabd also felt bad about the little prank he played on Mahi. He had no idea she was so scared of them. He really wanted to apologize but not in front of everyone; his ego once again got into the way.

It was wee ours in the morning but they finally made it to the farmhouse.


Veer:Hum a gaye.

Jeet:Finally, mujhe bahut neend ara hi hai. Chalo Soni, hum apna room dekhte hain.

Soni and Jeet shared a room and Raji and Veer shared a room (all the rooms had two beds each, it really wasn't that big of a farmhouse; it was normal size, nothing fancy).

Soni:Yeh hai tum dono ka kamra.

Mahi:Lekin Soni, yeh to ek hi kamra hai.

Soni:Haan, ek kamra to hai lekin do bed to hai na. Tum aur Shabd yeh kamra share kar lena.

Shabd+Mahi:Kya?!

Hope you guys liked it. Please comment.




Edited by taran13 - 04 July 2008 at 6:46pm

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