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MS FF - Yeh Ishq Hai [Part 25 PG.14] (Page 17)

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Posted: 14 July 2008 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
awwwww so cute!
plsssss continue soon!

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Posted: 17 July 2008 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
hey sorry for the late reply ...but i was pleasantly  shocked with this update.the story has a come a long way and is taking a very interesting turn. I wonder if the new character is Angad?? I cant wait to read more..please continue soon
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amazinggg fanfic...just finished catchingg up entirely!! keep up the great worrrk

pooja =]
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please continue soon! CANT WAIT ANYMORE! lol =D
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Thanks to everyone who commented......I will post the next part shortly. I'm glad you liked the turn the story took....the mystery man will be revealed in the next part...so stay tuned!

Edited by taran13 - 23 July 2008 at 8:47am
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Sorry for the long wait!
 
Part 25:
 
In Bhatinda
 
Mahi, Shabd, Angad and Kripa arrive in Bhatinda that very same evening. They were all tired and the men were very hungry. They called their homes and said they would be arriving soon. They gathered their luggage and went outside to catch a taxi.
 
Mahi:Kripa, kal hum charon shaadi ki shopping shuru karein?
 
Shabd:Shuru?
 
Mahi:Of course Shabd. Shaadi tak sirf do hafte hai aur bahut kuch khareedna hai.
 
Kripa:Exactly. Shaadi ka joda, joote, gehne, sangeet ke kapde, mehndi ke function ka saman aur...
 
Shabd + Angad: Bas!
 
Mahi:Aur tum humare saath a rahe ho. Turns to Kripa. To kal main tumhe 11 baje mere ghar par milti hoon. Phir sara din shopping!
 
Kripa:Theek hai. Hum tumhe kal milte hain.
 
Angad:Hum?
 
Kripa:Oh c'mon Angad. Tum kal mere saath shopping karne a rahe ho. Ok bye mahi. Taxi a gayi hai. Goes towards the taxi pulling Angad along.
 
Mahi:Bye. She turns to face Shabd. Chalein. Humari taxi bhi a gayi hai.
 
Shabd:Chalo.
 
The taxi driver put the luggage in the trunk and they went to the Malhotra house.
 
Malhotra House
 
Mahi:Kitna hua bhaiya?
 
Taxi driver:150 rs.
 
Mahi:Theek hai. Yeh li jiyie. Hands him the money.
 
Mahi and Shabd got out of the taxi with their luggage and headed towards the house. Just then, they see Prince running towards them.
 
Prince:Mahi didi! Gives Mahi a hug. Shabd Jiju! Shakes Shabd's Hand.
 
Mahi:Kaisa hai tu? Aur mummyji daddyji kahan hai?
 
Prince:Main bilkul theek hoon aur mummyji daddyji andar hai. To jiju, aap kaise hain?
 
Shabd:Main bilkul fit hoon sale sahib.
 
Just then Brij and Moni come to meet them.
 
Brij:Mahi puttar. Shabd beta.
 
Mahi:Dadddyji, mummyji!
 
Shabd:Namaste uncle, namaste aunty.
 
Both Shabd and Mahi took blessings from Moni and Brij.
 
Brij:Tum dono ka safar kaisa tha? Tum dono ko koi takleef nahin huyi na?
 
Moni:Kya aap sare sawaal yahin pochein ge? Yeh dono thak gaye honge. Chalo, andar chalte hain.
 
The fiver entered inside and have tea and snacks. Mahi and Shabd tell Moni and Brij about their experience at the modelling agency. It got really late and Shabd had to leave. They had a lot of shopping to do the next day.
 
Shabd:Uncle, aunty ab mujhe chalna chahiye. Bahut der ho chuki hai. Namaste.
 
Brij + Moni:Namaste.
 
Mahi:Mummyji, daddyji, main Shabd ko bahar chod kar ati hoon.
 
Together, Mahi and Shabd walked to the end of the gate at the Malhtotra house. When Mahi was going to say good bye, she saw Shabd's lower lip jutted out in a pout.
 
Mahi:Shabd, kya hua? Mahi reached for Shabd's hand and he took it.
 
Shabd:Mann nahin kara tumhe chodne ki. Adat pad gayi hai na.
 
Mahi:Mera bhi nahin kara, par kya karein?
 
Shabd:Theek, main tumhe kal milta hoon. Love you wifey.
 
Mahi:I love you too Shabd.
 
After saying goodbye to Shabd, mahi said good night to Moni, Brij and Prince and went to her room to go to bed; she was really tired.
 
She went to her room and freshened up. As soon as her head hit the pillow, she fell asleep.
 
The Next Day
 
Mahi and Shabd met Angad and Kripa at Mahi's house and left to go shopping. Mahi was so excited, that she couldn't stand still in one spot. She'd pull Shabd to one shop and look at some clothes or jewelry then leave to go to another shop. Shabd just laughed at Mahi, he found her so cute; he held her hand the entire time so she wouldn't run off like a little child. But as the shopping went on, he did everything to make her happy, bought her anything she wanted for the wedding just to see that smile on her face.
 
While in Mumbai, the man was looking at some jewelry to gift Mahi when he saw her picture at the jewelry store. It was one of her campaign ads.
 
Man:Mahi! Aur woh bhi ek model. To iska matlab Mahi Mumbai main hai. He looks down to see the writing wriitne beneath the picture; Sareen-Khurana Modelling Agency.
 
The man left to go to that agency, ha had to find out where Mahi was immediately! He entered the agency and found the manager.
 
Man:Excues me, does Mahi Malhotra work here as a model?
 
Manager:Yes sir.
 
The man's heartbeat skipped a couple of beats, she was so close!
 
Man:Kya aap jante hain woh kab yahan ayegi?
 
Manager:Woh to 2-3 hafte tak nahin ayegi.
 
Man:Kyon?
 
Manager:Kyunki Mahi Malhotra ki shaadi Sareen sir ke bete ke saath - Shabd Sareen ke saath hone wali hai. Woh kal hi Bhatinda ki liye chale ge the.
 
Man:WHAT!
 
The man received the biggest shock of his life. It was like someone punched him and knocked the breath out of him. The woman he loved was getting married to someone else!
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And now...The revealing of the 'MAN',  you guys probably guessed it...It's Angad! But his name in here will be Jashan (As the orginal). Please comment! Promise the next part will be more exciting.


Edited by taran13 - 23 July 2008 at 1:48pm
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Posted: 24 July 2008 at 9:20am | IP Logged
gr8 part
so Jashan has made his entry
continue soon
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hey great job...I wonder what Jashan is going to do next..how are jashan and mahi related..childhood friends ??

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