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I decided that I wanted to start a new FF on Mahi and Shabd..if you like it I will. Let me know.

Character Outline

Mahi Malhotra - young, bubbly, talkative, beautiful daughter of the Malhotra family. She is the youngest of 3 sisters and majors in modelling. (she is not always in a salwar kameez...but is quite modern)

Shabd Sareen - Only son of Aditya and Sunita Sareen. He just finished his college in Mumbai majoring in photography. He is rich, and sometimes arrogant but sweet at heart.

 

 

Raji Malhotra - She is eldest of the 3 sisters. She is shy, beautiful, smart and heplful.

 

Veer Khurana - He is a very inquisitive man. He is the Managing Director of his fathers Modelling Agency where Shabd's father is his partner.

 

Soni Malhotra - She is energetic, confused, happy and loveable person. She cheers up anyone that is around her.

 

Jeet Khurana - He is musical, shy and smart biy. His ambition is to become a famous singer one day but helps out at the office.

 

Prince - the youngest out of all the children in the malhotra family.

 

Brij and Moni Malhotra

Durga and Yash Khurana

Aditya and Sunita Sareen

 

Please tell me how it sounds...so far then I will post part one. Thank you

 

 

 



Edited by taran13 - 23 July 2008 at 1:49pm

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Here's the first part! Don't mind my hindi.

Part one:

Moni:Arre Mahi! Jaldi kar, mehmaan kissi waqt bhi a sak the hain, yelled Moni at her youngest daughter.

Today was the engagement of 2 of the daughters in the Malhotra family, Raji and Soni. They were getting married to the love of their lives, their high school sweethearts, Veer and Jeet Khurana. Raji was getting engaged to Veer while Soni was getting engaged to Jeet.

Mahi:Uffo! Ayi Mummyji! Main Raji di aur Soni ko tayyar karri hoon. Bas...abhi ayi!

(Mahi was wearing this nice ocean green salwar kameez with matching bangles and with her hair left down)

Raji:Arre jaa na Mahi. Mehmaan a bhi honge...dekhna kaun aya hai, main aur Soni kudh tayyar ho jayenge.

Mahi:Mere cute si badi behen. Aap mujhe itna bewakoof smjha hai kya. Aap kyon nahin kehte ki aap veer jiju ka besabri si intezaar hai. Aur tu bhi Soni, dekhna, kaisi sharmari hai. Tere sagai ki din par aisa hal to suhaag raat mein kaisi hogi?

Soni:Tu ab bahut bolne lagi hai Mahi, tu jaa warna Mummyji tumhe bahut daanti gi.

Mahi:Haan haan, jaari hoon, and Mahi left after looking at her sisters flushing red.

Mahi:Kya kam hai mummyji?

Moni:Tu Prince ko leker mehmaan ka swagat karri gi. Mujhe kitchen mein kuch kam hai.

Mahi:Theek hai mummyji, chal Prince," she motioned to her younger brother.

As Mahi and Prince welcomed their guests, Soni and Raji were still getting ready. Soni in her blue and yellow lehenga and Raji in her green and pink lehenga with matching jewelry with their hair left down nicely straightned.Both of them were getting excited to get engaged to the love of their lives.

Soni:Hun kitne lucky hai na ki humari shaadi humari mann pasand ki ladke ki saat ho rahi hai. Aur dekhna, hum ek hi ghar mein jayenge!

Raji:Haan..hum bahut kushkismat hai, par ab meri yehi rab se prarthna hai ki Mahi ko acha ladka mil jaye.

Mahi:Aap fikar mat ki jiye, meri shaadi ki liye bahut waqt hai, said MAhi while entering the room.

Mahi:Ab aap dono neeche aa jaye, Veer aur Jeet jiju neeche aap ka intezaar kar re hain.

As Mahi brought Soni and Raji down the stairs to the hall, Veer and Jeet couldn't get their eyes off their to be wives. They were so beautiful!

They didn't look bad themselves. Veer was wearing a nice maroon sherwani while Jeet was wearing a blue one.

Prince:Arre jiju, ap kahan kho gaye?

Jeet+Veer: Kahin bhi nahin turning red while coming out of their trance.

Brij:"Chaliye, ab sagai shuru karte hain. Uffo, Mahi kya tum phool ki thali darwaaze ki paas liye agi. Hume bad mein pooja ki lye chahiye.

Mahi:Theek hai daddyji. Abhi leker aati hoon.

As Mahi was coming back with the plate full of floweres, she bumped into a tall handsome man wearing a black and silver designed sherwani spilling the flowers over both of them while being lost into each others eyes.

Mahi:Fitteh mooh tera! Tum dekh kar nahin chal sakte kya? Maine kitna waqt lagaya that phoolon ko sajane mein. Saara kam kharab kar diya.

However, the man still didn't come out of his trance, he was to busy admiring her beauty. He had never seen someone so beautiful before, not even the Mumbai girls.

Mahi:Hello mister. Tum ghoor ghoor kar kisko dekh rahi hain. Yeh sab aapke wajah se hua hai...sare phool girade.

Shabd:Meri wajah se..tum bhi to dekh kar chal sakti thi. Anyways, mein maffi mang let hoon. I'm sorry.

Mahi:Ab tum sirf sorry bhi kaho gay yaan meri madat bhi karo gay?

Shabd:Kitne batameez ladke ho tum, theek sai mehmaano se baat bhi nahin kart sakti.

Mahi:Excuse me, yeh tumhari wajah say hua hai.

Shabd:Whatever.

Brij:Mahi jaldi kar. Shubh mahurat nikal jara hai.

Mahi:Ayi daddyji!

Soni:Kahan thi tum Mahi? Itni der kyon laga di?

Mahi:Kyon Soni...intezaar nahin hota tumse?

Soni:Mahi!

Moni:Theek hai. Nahut ho gaya. Sagai shuru karte hain.

And then one by one they exchanged rings to their high school sweethearts. After, all the guests came to give their hearty congratulations to the newly engaged couple after the pooja was done.

Raji:Arre Veer, kisko dhoondh rahein?

Veer:Woh meri massi ka beta, meri massi to yahan hai, par uska beta Mumbai se aane wala tha. Shayad woh humari sagai par nahin a saka.

Shabd:Veer tum kaisay bate karte ho. Mere bhai ki sagai aur main na aon?

Jeet:Shabd..tum kab aye? Maine sagai tumhe nahin dekha. Kahan the?

Shabd:Woh main...

Veer:Koi baat nahin. Ao, tumhe tumhari hone wali bhabhion se milata hoon. Raji, Soni...yeh hai Shabd, mera doosra bhai.

Shabd:Namaste.

Raji+Soni:Namaste.

Raji:Bahut khushi huyi, tumse milkar.

Shabd:Mujhe bhi. Par mujhe apne aap par tarass ara hai.

Soni:Woh kyon?

Shabd:Aap mere bhaion ki liye luch zyada khoobsoorat ho. Ab is bhai ka kya hoga?

Everyone laughed at what Shabd said, and began a conversation; how they were, what they were doing and etc.

Veer:Arre, mujhe apni hone waali sali nahin dekha deri. Woh Kahan hai?

Mahi:Jiju..main yahan hoon. Apne bulaya aur main na aoon. Yeh ho sak ta hai kya?

As Mahi entered the area where Veer, Raji,Soni,Jeet and Shabe were, she stopped dead in her tracks. The man who was impolite to her was laughing with her sisters and brother-in-laws.


Edited by taran13 - 04 July 2008 at 6:43pm

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this is very cute continue soon

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VEry nice pleasee do continueee Love it..

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That was really good... Smile
Please continue soon

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very nice Clap Clap Big smile

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Smile Thank you so much for the comments...I will post the next two updates really soon. Once again, thanks for the comments...they are really appreciated! Smile

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Thanks for the comments...part two is up! 

Part 2:
Shabd:"Tum!"

Everyone was shocked to see that Mahi and Shabd knew each other; and by the looks of it, they didn't get off to a good start.

Raji:"Tum dono ek doosre ko jaante ho?"

Mahi:"Ji Raji di, iski wajah se maine saare phool girade aur sagai ke liye der hogi."

Shabd:"Maine sorry to kaha tha na?"

Mahi:"Haan, kaha that. Par aise ghoor ghoor kar dekhre the ki tumne kabhie ek ladki ko dekha nahin. Phir meri madat sahi tara nahin karte."

Shabd:"Theek hai, maiin phir se sorry keh ta hoon. Sorry."

Mahi:"Ab iska kya faida. Mera phool to kharab ho gaya na. Par koi baat nahin. Ap ko maaf kar diya."

Shabd:"Thank you."

Soni:"Good. Ab chote bachon ki tara haat milao aur dost ban jao."

Mahi:"Theek hai. Friends?" Asked Mahi taking out her hand.

Shabd:"Friends" shaking her hand.

Jeet:"Good job!"

As the party went on, Shabd and Mahi got to really know eachother.Shabd was suprised to find out that Mahi was interested in becoming a model. He talked about how his dad was half owner in a modelling agency. They talked more about the fashion world and what they liked and disliked. Soon a the song Hum Tum came on with all the couples going on the dance floor.

Shabd:"Mere saath dance karogi Mahi?"

Mahi:"Umm..."

Shabd:"Come on Mahi. Please?"

Mahi:"Theek hai. Chalo," putting her hand in Shabd's hand and walking to the dance floor.

Raji, Soni, Veer and Jeet noticed how close they were dancing. They could notice that they were falling for each other; or were atleast attracted to each other.

Shabd took Mahi's left hand put it on his shoulder, taking her right hand in his and placing his other hand on her waist.

saanso ko saanso mein Dhalne do zara...
dhiimii si dharkan ko bharne do zara
lamho ki guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaye
hum hum tum
tum hum tum
aankho mein humko utarne do zara
baaho mein hamko pighalne do zara
lamho ki guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum
saanso ko saanso mein
silvate kahin karvate kahin phail jaa'e kaajal bhi tera
nazaron mein ho guzarta hu'aa
khwaabon ka koi qaafila
jismo ko ruuho ko jalne do zara
sharmo kaayaa ko machalne do zara
lamho ki guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum
saanso ko saanso mein Dhalne do zara
chhuu lo badan magar is tarah
jaise suriila saaz ho
andherii chupe terii zulf mein
kholo ki raat aazaad ho
aanchal ko sine se Dhalne do zara
shabnam ki buunde phisalne do zara
lamho ki guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum
saanso ko saanso mein Dhalne do zara
baaho mein hamko pighalne do zara
lamho ki guzaarish hai yeh
paas aa jaa'e
hum hum tum
tum hum tum

The song finished and a more energetic one came on but Shabd and Mahi were still dancing. They were lost in each others eyes. Shabd liked that Mahi's eyes showed her bubbliness but also her simplicity while Mahi liked that Shabd's eyes showed his sweetness and protectiveness.Just then, Jeet and Soni came and snapped their fingers in front of their faces coming out of their trance.

Jeet:"Tum dono ko kya hua? Kahan kho gayi the?"

Shabd:"A...kahin bhi nahin Jeet, hum to bas..."

Soni:"Theek hai, theek hai. Chalo dance karte hain."

Mahi:"Nahin, tum teeno jao, mujhe yeh gana pasand nahin hai."

Shabd:"Kaisi baat kari hi Mahi, gana to itna acha hai."

Mahi:"Mujhe pasand nahin hai."

Shabd:"Tum ladkiyon ek jaisi hi hain, koi taste nahin hai."

Mahi:"Kya kaha tumney? Hum ladkiyon mein koi taste nahin hai. Tum ladkon mein ko taste nahin hai! Sab ek jaise hot hain. Koi dimaag nahin hota; saandh kahin kai!"

Shabd:"Saandh? Aur woh bhi main? Tumhe dikhta nahin ki main kitna handsome hoon. Balki tum ek pagli ho. Nahin....ek chipkali ho tum.

Mahi:"Tum...aur handsome? Mazak kar re ho kya? Bandar jaise ho. Tum ladkon mein ghamand bahut hai!"

Shabd:"Tum apne aap ko samjthe kya ho?"

Mahi:"Main samjhte hoon ki ladkiyan ladkon se behtar hot ti hain. Bas!"

Shabd:"Nahin...ladke behtar hote hain!"

Mahi:"Ladki!"

Shabd:"Ladka!"

Raji:"Kya hua? Tum dono to abhi..."

Soni:"Woh Raji di, Mahi aur Shabd..."

Mahi:"Kuch mat kaho Soni. Yeh ladke bhi na apne aap ko samjthe kya hain. Chalo Raji di, Soni!"

Raji:"Par Mahi..."

Mahi:Nahin Raji di. Chaliye hum is saandh se door chalte hain."

Veer:"Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho...please aisa mat karo."

Shabd:"Nahin Veer...is ladkion ki koi zaroorat nahin hai! Chaliye yahan se!"

Jeet:"Par Shabd..."

Shabd:"Chalo!"

And with that, they went their seperated ways. What could have been a nice friendship took a nasty turn.

Please do comment!




Edited by taran13 - 04 July 2008 at 6:44pm

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