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A NEW HOPE (Page 7)

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:13am | IP Logged
That's the end of part one.... i'll be continuing the remainder of the update at night.....

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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
hey where s the update?? waiting Smile
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Update starting in 5 mins....
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Once Major General Gaur leaves with Gunny, everyone else begins discussing their new duties and positions as teachers in KMA… it is only when Huda suddenly stands up and shouts for attention does everyone fall silent.

"Abbey shaane, tu kaiko itna chilaata hai… apun sab behre nahi hai…" Aalekh said looking angry for he had been talking about something with Neelu who looked equally annoyed.

"Jaanta hoon kaidi ki hum sab behre nahi hai, lekin mujhe ko ek announcement karna hai…"

"Haan toh jaldi bolo na, hum sabko zyada talktime nahi hai, Jatt…"

"Oye punjaban, sun toh… aaj shaam ko ek party hai… Huda ki treat hai…"

"Bhai wah Lt. Huda, kis khushi mein yeh party ho rahi hai…." Abhiamnyu asked.

"Sir, party aapke promotion aur humaare duties ke liye…" Huda said.

"Don't forget ki yeh party asal mein Major Rajveer and Major Navin ke liye rakhi jaa rahi hai Huda…" Yudi said.

"Oh haan, woh bhi… toh party shaam ke saath baje shuru hogi…" Huda said…

"Aur kahan ho rahi hai yeh party, Huda?" Naina asked him.

"Oye meri Phoolan Devi, party toh yahan nahi hogi na… hum log Blue Lagoon jaa rahe hai… chalogi mere saath?" Huda asked smirking at Naina.

"Abbey, agar Naina jaana bhi chahti, toh tere saath nahi chalti…" Aalekh told him.

"Kyun bhai kaidi?" Huda asked still unaware of the fact that Rajveer and Naina were together now.

"Kyunki jatt, Naina ka lifetime connection Shahrukh ke saath jud gaya hai… free incoming, outgoing sab kuch…" Pooja told him.

"K…kya? Naina aur…" Huda said stammering as he realized what Pooja had just told him.

"Yes Lt. Huda, meri behen aur Raj ab ek saath hai…" Navin told Huda, almost on the verge of laughing.
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"Oh… koi baat nahi, punjaban mere saath party mein chalogi?" Huda asked Pooja trying to find some luck.

"Main to Ali ke saath jaa rahi hoon…" Pooja said.

"Neelu, tu toh kisi ke saath nahi jaa rahi hai, na? Iss jatt ke saath nahi chalogi?" Huda said knowing that this too would go in vain.

"I'm sorry Huda, main tumhaare saath chalti, but Aalekh asked me before, toh main uske saath hi jaoongi…"

"What? Neelu, tum Aalekh ke saath jaa rahi ho?" Yudi asked looking surprised.

"Lt. Sahani, itna nervous hone ki zaroorat nahi hai, tumhaari behen sirf party ke liye Lt. Aalekh ke saath jaa rahi hai, aap relax kar sakte hai…" Abhimanyu told Yudi.

"Err… alright. Toh phir, Shalini ma'am kya aap mere saath party mein chalogi?"

"Sure Yudi, main party mein tumhaare saath chaloongi."

"Ms. Roma, aap kiske saath jaa rahi hai?" Rajveer asked her.

"Mujhe pata nahi tha ki main bhi party ke liye invited thi…" She replied.

"Of course tum party mein aa rahi ho, tum ab humaare saath yahan reh rahe ho toh humaare saath party mein bhi chalogi…" Navin told her, "Ek kaam karo, why don't you go with Abhi?"

"Hum?" Abhimanyu asked, looking flushed.

"Haan kyun nahi, Chauhan, tum Roma ke saath party mein jao…" Rajveer told his friend.

"Theek hai, humein koi problem nahi hai…"

"Mujhe bhi nahi hai, in fact Captain Abhimanyu ke saath mazaa aayega…" She said, muttering the last part under her breath so that no one except Abhimanyu would hear what she said.

"Toh Gunny aur Huda kya karenge?" Navin said.

"Main toh akele jaa raha hoon sir, Huda ka jadoo kisi bhi janani par nahi chal raha hai, behtar yahi hoga ki main akele hi party mein jaoon."

"Chinta mat karo Hudabhai, hum sabke liye koi na koi toh bana hai, aapke liye bhi koi hoga... bas thoda sa intezaar karna hoga…"

It was then did Huda do a weird unexpected thing which shocked everyone and made them laugh as well… he began singing...


"Intehaa ho gayi, intezaar ki,
Aayi na kuch, khabar mere pyaar ki,
Yeh humein hai yakeen, bewafaa who nahi,
Phir wajah kya hui intezaar ki…"


"Shouldn't we tell him that it's 'yaar' and not 'pyaar' sir?" Yudi asked Rajveer.

"It's alright Lt. Yudi, Huda iss waqt apne pyaar ke liye gaa raha hai… yaar ke liye nahi…" Rajveer replied.
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While all the friends were discussing plans for the party inside the house and watching Huda sit depressed repeating the same lines over and over, Gunny was talking to M.G. Gaur outside. It was quite noticeable that there was an air of awkwardness between the two of them as they spoke, but neither would shed light on that fact for a while longer. The two of them were talking about the new academic year of KMA that was to begin in the next 15 days.

"Major Randhawa, KMA ke naye cadet's ke batch mein mera beta Rummy bhi shaamil hai…"

"Yes sir…"

"Main chahta hoon ki usse koi bhi special treatment na mile… woh baaki cadet's ke tarah hi treat kiya jaana chahiye… usse ek Major ke bet eke haisiyat se light punishments mat do, usse pata chalna chahiye ki ek army officer banana kitne khatin aur mushkil hai…" M.G Gaur told him.

"Yes sir, aap mujhpar yeh zimmedaari chodiye, I'll see to it ki aapke bete ko baaki cadet's ke tarah hi treat kiya jaayega."

"Good… lekin ek baat ka dhyaan rakho… Rummy ke punishments bahut hi hard aur frequent hone chahiye…"

"Lekin sir, bina kuch galat kiye, main kaise kuch kar sakta hoon… I'm sorry sir, par main aapke bete ko sirf tab punish karoonga, jab usse punish hone ke liye kuch galat kiya ho…" Gunny replied.

"Theek hai, but make sure ki in do-teen saalon mein, Rummy ek accha, taakatwar sipahi ban jaaye, he should be the best cadet…" M.G. Gaur told him.

"Yes sir…"

"Okay… thank you Major, main ab chalta hoon… KMA mein meeting ke liye der ho rahi hai…goodbye Major." M.G. Gaur told Gunny before getting into his car and leaving the chalet.

Gunny stood outside the house, on top of the hill, staring down at the city and lost in his thoughts. He stood there for about 5 minutes, with a sad and depressed look on his face. Before he turned around and went back inside to join his friends, the mask of a happy face was back up. He wasn't ready to tell anyone just yet.

When Gunny went back inside the house, he went to the den where everyone was sitting, he was told about the plans for the party and also that he didn't have a date for the party as all the girls had been taken. To his friends' surprise, Gunny didn't seem to mind it at all that he didn't have a date for the party.

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"Arre yaar Gunny, tu itna khush hai… tujhe party ke liye date nahi hai, phir bhi…" Navin asked him.

"Toh kya hua Navin? Hum sab ek hi party mein jaa rahe hai… hum sab saath mein honge, toh even if mujhe date nahi hai, tum sab toh saath mein hi ho right?"

"Baat toh sahi kaha hai, dost… lekin don't worry, Huda ko bhi date nahi hai…" Abhimanyu told him.

"Ha-ha, kya hua Lt. Huda, koi janani nahi mili?" Gunny asked him.

"Nahi mili sir, hum dono ka luck khatam ho chuka hai…" Huda replied for the first time after he had stopped singing.

"Well, it's no problem; hum ab bhi party mein mazaa karenge… wahan par kaafi single ladkiyaan honge..." Gunny replied grinning.

"Haan… Huda ka jadoo shayad party mein chalega…good idea…thanks sir…"

"You're welcome Lt. Huda"

"Tu sach mein party mein yeh sab karega?" Rajveer asked Gunny.

"Pagal ho gaya hai, Raj. Main toh bas Huda ko gaate hue nahi sunana chahta tha… Pooja keh rahi thi ki behtar hota agar Huda naa gaaye, warna saare bhoot humaare ghar mein aa jaate…" Gunny told Rajveer.

Hearing Pooja's comment about Huda's singing waking the dead from their graves made everyone laugh. Luckily, Huda wasn't around to hear what Gunny had said because he had run up to his room after thanking Gunny. Everyone decided to go upstairs to their rooms and rest for a bit before getting ready to go for the party.

So, for about an hour, the whole house was silent while everyone stayed in their rooms relaxing before the party. Naina was in Rajveer's room which was fortunately empty as Rajveer's room-mates, Aalekh and Abhimanyu had gone to some other room…

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hmmm.... nice one.. u still got more parts for today??

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