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A NEW HOPE (Page 5)

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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
"You told yourself years ago
you'd never let your feelings show
the obligation that you made
for the title that they gave"


"Raj…" Naina's voice was almost in a whisper, as she said his name for the first time.

"Baby, I'd love you to want me
The way that I want you
The way that it should be
Baby, you'd love me to want you
The way that I want to
If you'd only let it be"


"I love you Naina…"

"I love you too Raj."

The wait was finally over. They both had finally said it, accepted their love for each other and after two long years of waiting, they both hugged each other. Naina's tears began to fall as she clung on to Rajveer, hugging him like she had two years ago moments before she thought he had left her alone.

"Tere liye, hum hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, hum hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, hum hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Tere liye, hum hain jiye, honton ko siye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye"


As they stood there hugging each other, neither of them was aware of their surroundings, they only cared for each other, knowing that they were together at last lifted their spirits higher than ever. Naina's heart was finally complete, she was the same Naina two years ago, only this time she was with the man she loved the most, more than anyone else in the whole world. They both were happy beyond any joy in this world.

"Zindagi, le ke aayi hai, beete dinon ki kitaab
Zindagi, le ke aayi hai, beete dinon ki kitaab
Ghere hain, ab hamein, yaadein be-hisaab
Bin poochhe, mile mujhe, kitne saare jawaab
Chaaha tha kya, paaya hai kya, hamne dekhiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye"


They finally broke apart after what seemed to them was ages and ages. Still holding her in his arms, Rajveer smiled down at Naina; happy to be with her at last after all these years of hiding their love and staying apart.

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"Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair
Kya kahoon, duniya ne kiya, mujh se kaisa bair
Hukam tha, main jiyun, lekin tere baghair
Naadaan hai woh, kehte hain jo, mere liye tum ho ghair
Kitne sitam, hampe sanam, logon ne kiye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye

Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye
Tere liye
Tere liye
Tere liye…"


"Naina…" He said smiling as he looked at her. She looked up at him and smiled. It was the first time she had smiled with all her heart in these 2 years and of course she would, she was with Rajveer, her mentor, her teacher and most of all, her love.

He took her face in his hands and slowly bent forward to kiss her. Their lips met and they kissed, releasing all the love, all the passion their hearts held. How long they stood there like that, no one knew… not even them, for they were lost in each other's kiss.
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
He took her face in his hands and slowly bent forward to kiss her. Their lips met and they kissed, releasing all the love, all the passion their hearts held. How long they stood there like that, no one knew… not even them, for they were lost in each other's kiss.

Once they broke apart, Naina still held on to Rajveer breathing heavily, eyes closed. After a few minutes of standing like this, Rajveer led Naina to his bed and made her sit down while he knelt down on the floor beside her, holding hers hands in his. It was Naina who broke the silence first.

"Raj…"

"Bolo Naina, kya hua?"

"Raj, bhaiya se hum kya kahenge?" Naina asked him looking a little bit worriedly.

"Navin se hum yeh kahenge ki hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai…aur kya keh sakte hai?"

"Raj, mera matlab tha ki hum bhai ko kaise batayenge… kab batayenge?" Naina said to him.

"Hmm… ek kaam karte hai, yeh kaam mujhpar chod do, kal interview ke baad main Navin se baat karoonga, and don't worry jaan, kuch nahi hoga… Navin mera sabse accha dost hai, agar usne maana nahi toh main usse manaake hi waapis aa jaoonga…"

"Okay… tum toh Navin se baat karloge, par mujhe Aalekh se baat karna hai…"

"Toh kya hua? Main ek baat kahoon, Naina… tumhaare dono bhaaiyon mein se, main Aalekh se zyada darta hoon… kyunki itne saalon tak usne tumhaara khayal rakha hai… aur main usse baat nahi kar sakta…tum hi usse baat karo…" Rajveer told her.

When Naina heard that Rajveer was a bit scared of Aalekh, she started to laugh, which made Rajveer get angry.

"Accha, toh madam mujhpar hans rahi hai… ab dekho main kya karta hoon."

"Kya karloge Raj?"

"This."

And he began tickling her, which made Naina get all jumpy, and she fell on the bed with Rajveer on top of her. He stopped tickling her and she stopped giggling. The two of them were lying down on the bed breathing heavily staring into each others eyes. Rajveer slowly bent forward to kiss Naina… but they were interrupted by the clock's ringing.

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The clock rang 4 times which indicated that it was 4:00 am. It was then did Naina sit up straight, while Rajveer sat next to her, looking worried.

"Naina… kya hua?"

"Raj, its 4:00 am… tumhe apni medicine leni hai…main toh bhool hi gayi thi…"

"Oh-ho Naina, tum isliye uth gayi, mujhe laga ki koi problem hai aur tum medicines ki baat kar rahi ho…how unromantic"

"Ha-ha, main unromantic nahi hoon, tum ab bhi poori tarah se theek nahi ho…chalo dawa kha lo…"

Naina got up and gave the medicines to Rajveer who swallowed them without saying anything to her and then he calmly went on the sofa with a blanket and a pillow and tried to get some sleep.

Naina was about to protest that since he was injured, he should take the bed… but then decided no to. It was quite late and Rajveer had a long day in front of him, so Naina went towards the bed and within minutes she was fast asleep.
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Done.... i promise that i will update twice tomorrow.... sorry about today...

Please leave ur comments... Smile
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
my goodness...what a mindblowing ff dear...amaaaaaaaaazing...continue soon dear...u deserve this Clap
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Posted: 14 May 2008 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
so nice.. really good da... pls cont soon... waiting for your updates.. Smile
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Posted: 15 May 2008 at 3:05am | IP Logged
@ quietrajpri - thanks a lot...

@ koolarch - thanks...

Update part one coming up now and part 2 at night...

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