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A NEW HOPE (Page 29)

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"Wow… yahan bahut sundar kapde hai… main toh pagal ho jaoongi…" Sameera said.

"Haan Sam, this place has wonderful clothes." Sherry said, fingering a beautiful dress that was white but too simple for an engagement.

"Kya yaar, humein bahut time hai shopping ke liye, kal challenge… abhi mahal mein chalo…" Huda whined.

"Huda bhai, humein zyada waqt nahi lagega…" Ali explained calmly.

"Haan Huda, jaise hi humaari shopping khatam ho jaayegi, we'll head back to the palace." Roma said.

"Mujhe mil gaya." said the excited voice of Shalini.

Shalini came out from the changing room wearing a very beautiful white sari that had a thin silver border all over it. There was some silver work done on the pallu as well, not too heavy and not too simple; it looked amazing; she was lucky that the store had a ready made blouse and petticoat which was the right size. The blouse was plain white, corset style, sleeveless and backless blouse with only strings at the back. The first customer was satisfied, now there were only 4 more outfits to be finalized.

"Bhaai, isse dekho, tum par bahut accha dikhega…" Naina said.

"Okay, main abhi try karke aata hoon." Navin said.

Within the hour, Shalini, Navin, Pooja, Sameera and Ali had finished getting their outfits for the engagement and finally listening to Huda's pleas, they all left the mall and headed back to the palace where they lay in the dance hall until it was dinner time and shortly after that everyone retired to their rooms early and plonked off to sleep. Even Rajveer, who was always in the mood for some mischief and romance decided that one night without sneaking to meet Naina was fine, and so he too went off to sleep.

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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
DONE!!!!!!!!

Please R&R....

Next update mostly on Monday....
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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
wow dear...u have done lots of research...great job and a oooouuuuuuutstanding update...thanku soo much for this awesum part
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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
2nd part was hilarious and very interesting...excellent part...
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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
nice ones dear.. but made us wait long and goin to make us wait longer... Cry anyway ll be more than happy to wait for your update... Smile
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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
Hi

Great update. Clap How do you know so much about places in Jodhpur. It was nice to read about them.

THe second part was very funny....typical boy-girl shopping problems...but very excitingly narrated.... Wink

Will wait for your next update.....try to give one as soon as possible ...please Clap
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Posted: 29 May 2008 at 8:29pm | IP Logged
awesome Clap .cont soon........
Armaan'sGal Senior Member
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Posted: 30 May 2008 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
@ quietrajpri - thanks... glad u liked the update...

@ Archana - sorry about that; but i need some time to prepare for the next update...

@ Dazzling_glory - I got all the information about Jodhpur from the net; wikipedia has it all...

@ Rajeevian - hey, nice to see a new face... thanks for commenting....

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