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A NEW HOPE

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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
Hey everyone, this is my first story on IF... it's an RN fic and I hope that you will enjoy it... I'm putting the first part of the story now and if you all like it then i will continue with it...





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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 1:59pm | IP Logged
She sat there in her room all alone dressed in an elegant aquamarine bluish green lehenga, with matching jewelry. Today was her engagement day and instead of being on cloud nine, she was not happy at all. She had no reason to be happy. She was sitting in front of her mirror in the room and was staring at her reflection wondering how much longer she could keep the mask on her face.

Her heart had been empty for the past 2 years and she knew that it would never be as alive ever again. She had not even expected to be left all alone on this day, when she was forcefully going to be engaged to a man she didn't love. But here she was, clad in her lehenga, and all alone. Not one of those who cared for her the most were there with her, save for her dad and her step-mother. Yes, her own mother had died a few months back with a disease and her father had remarried. Her new mother was just like they mentioned in those fairytales she had read since childhood, evil. And it was her step-mother who had forced her into getting married to this man, a man she despised with all her heart.

The to-be bride was anxious and nervous; all the people she loved were not with her, they had left her alone the previous morning after one of them had received some shocking news from headquarters. They all rushed to the car without telling her what the matter was and never called at all. She had no idea that what they had gone to do, what they had gone to find would save her life, save her from this horrible marriage, and they intended to save her before she was even engaged. Sighing, the bride waited patiently for the step-mom to come and bring her down. She got up from the chair and walked over to her dresser. She slid open the top-most drawer and then she slowly unfastened the chain around her neck, the locket contained her life, heart, and soul. Removing it from her neck would mean that she was giving up, after two long years of despair and depression; she was beginning to lose hope.

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She opened the locket and saw the pictures of the two people she loved more than anyone in the whole world. They were the two most important people in her life, but not anymore. They both had left her alone and lost in this world. She didn't realize when the tears started falling slowly down her cheek, or when a hand touched her shoulder. She turned around, the locket still clutched in her hand.

"Neelu! Tum yahan??" She asked her old friend.

"Haan, main yahan, mujhe bro ne phone kiya aur kaha ki tumhaare paas aa jaoon, so here I am." Neelu replied.

"Yudi ne? Kya usne bataya ki woh kahan par hai?" The bride enquired.

"Ah… nahi, he just said ki meri dost yahan akeli hai, isliye usne mujhe bhej diya…" Neelu lied to her. "Tumne apna locket utar di, kya main jaan sakti hoon kyun?"

"Maine usse utardi hai kyunki ab mujhe is dard se koi nahi bacha sakta hai… yeh do toh hamesha se hi lazy the, aur ab toh woh yahan hai hi nahi… raha sawaal baaki sabka toh pata nahin un sabne mujhe akela kyun chod diya."

Neelu was torn in conflict. There was a part of her wanting to tell her best friend that she wasn't alone, she wanted to tell her why her brother and the others had left her so mysteriously. But the other part of her told her to wait… they would be reaching the house soon. Neelu decided it was best to keep quiet for now. Suddenly the door opened and three to four girls came inside giggling. The bride shut the locket in the drawer and turned to face them.

"Bhabhi, chalo… sagai ka samay ho raha hai" one of the girls said.

"Haan bhabhi, bhaiya ko aur intezaar mat karao, chalo na…" the other girl said.

"Lekin auntyji ne kaha tha ki mahurat aadha ghanta baad hai, toh phir yeh niche kyun aa jaaye?" Neelu asked the girls.

"Mar gaye…" the third girl said. And without explaining themselves, they ran out of the room. The bride turned and walked towards her window, Neelu followed her, and together they watched as all the guests began arriving.

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"Thanks Neelu, pata nahin kyun magar mera dil aaj bahut bechain hai, aisa lagta hai ki iss sagai se bhi bada kuch hone waala hai…" The bride told her friend.

"Don't worry… aisa kuch nahi hoga, aur hua bhi toh shayad kuch accha hoga." Neelu tried to reassure her friend.

"Ha, meri zindagi kabse bigadte jaa rahi hai… ab toh kuch accha ho hi nahi sakta hai… main uss… uss aadmi se shaadi nahi kar sakti, magar meri majboori hai…" The bride replied.

"You never know, kuch bhi ho sakta hai…"

And Neelu knew that these words were going to be proved right very shortly. She glanced back at the clock; 5:08 pm. The bride was to be called down in the next 22 minutes. 22 minutes was all that they had to save their friend, Lt. Naina Singh Alhuwalia from this marriage. Would they all succeed? Only time would tell. and there wasn't much of that left...

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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 2:02pm | IP Logged
If you all like it, please comment, then i will continue
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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 8:21pm | IP Logged
Clap Awesome update please do continue...would love to read more... Smile
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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
@ Ladyinblu - thanks...

@ Shruti - thanks...

I will be updating in half an hour...
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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
PART 2:

While Naina was getting all worked up for her engagement, her friends were on the way back to Naina's house to stop the engagement from taking place. It had been 2 hours since they were driving and they were almost at their destination. They all had left on a mission, the previous morning after Aalekh had received a call from Capt. Abhimanyu that he, Huda, Yudi, Ali and Pooja were chosen to be a part of a rescue mission, 'Mission Azaadi.' Naturally they all had been confused as to why they were called for a mission a day before Naina was to get engaged. Aalekh had called Abhimanyu after leaving Naina safely in her house.

"Sir, kal toh Naina ki sagai hai, apun kaise…?" Aalekh had asked Abhimanyu.

"Aalekh, is mission se hi Naina ko hum sab is shaadi se bacha sakte hai." Abhimanyu told him.

"Par woh kaise…?" Aalekh had become even more confused now. What connection did this mission have to Naina?

"Kya aap jaante ho ki is mission mein humein kisse bachana hai?" Abhimanyu inquired.

"No sir." Aalekh replied.

It was only after Abhimanyu told Aalekh who had to be rescued did he realize how important this mission was. Aalekh told Abhimanyu that they would successfully complete this mission and meet him with Dr. Shalini and Gunny at the pick-up point the next day at 2:30 pm.

"All the best Lieutenant. Humein poora vishwaas hai ki aap sab milke usse waapis laa sakte ho, aur Naina ko bacha paayenge." Abhimanyu told him.

"Chinta mat karo Sir, apun sab milke Naina ko zaroor bachayenge." With that, Aalekh had disconnected the call and told the others the details of Mission Azaadi.

And now here they were; all 9 of them, Huda, Aalekh, Ali, Yudi, Pooja, Abhimanyu, Gunny, Shalini and the person who had been rescued by them. Aalekh was seated in the passenger seat of the van next to Yudi and Gunny who was driving, Shalini was sitting behind with Pooja taking care of her two patients; for Huda also had been injured while rescuing the prisoner.

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