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Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 (Page 8)

yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by daisy_luvs_ ff

oh my god!!
i know i shd be sad but tum ne jaise likha hai i cant stop laughing........tv ke liye alag room mein rehna.........this is the best explaination one can give...............
mindblowing Clap
majboori..insaan se bahut kuchh karvati hai

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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 8:52am | IP Logged
hey bhagu..bachau koi in dono ko....lekin update ekdum mast tha...supercool...thanks di for this interesting update.... Tongue Clap Clap
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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Cryraj aur naina alag alag kitne bure dikhte hai .........me to rone wali hun undono ka romantik scenes kahan hain ..........hehhehehe but mindbloeing update di.........thankssssssss alodddd for such a butful update
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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
Too good!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Yeh thi honeymoon ki kahani!!!! LOL

Waise I loved that line...."Moon jakar Badal k pichhe chhupa..aur Honey..woh Abhi aur Akriti pura chaat gaye..Raj aur Naina k lia kuchh nahi bacha.." ......... LOL !!!!!

Inka kuch nahi hua!!!!Aur nahi ho sakta hai!!!! LOL

Kya excuse diya Naina ne........hindi movies !!!!! LOL

Aur Raj bhi apne hi jaal mein phas gaya!!!Bechara LOL Abhi ne sahi kaha hai!!!!!

Aur haan isse yehi pata chalta hai ke marriages are not made in heaven LOL !!!!!

Par kya inki marriage bhi aise hi chalti rahegi yaa shudrega Raj??? Smile


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Posted: 20 May 2008 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
superb
bapre,sangatik honeymoon
fatafati likhcho
outstanding Clap
waiting for u'r next update
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Yeh thi honeymoon ki kahani!!!! LOL

Waise I loved that line...."Moon jakar Badal k pichhe chhupa..aur Honey..woh Abhi aur Akriti pura chaat gaye..Raj aur Naina k lia kuchh nahi bacha.." ......... LOL !!!!!

Inka kuch nahi hua!!!!Aur nahi ho sakta hai!!!! LOL

Kya excuse diya Naina ne........hindi movies !!!!! LOL

Aur Raj bhi apne hi jaal mein phas gaya!!!Bechara LOL Abhi ne sahi kaha hai!!!!!

Aur haan isse yehi pata chalta hai ke marriages are not made in heaven LOL !!!!!

Par kya inki marriage bhi aise hi chalti rahegi yaa shudrega Raj??? Smile


kyaa karoon??sab ko comedy chahie..maine likh dia..
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 5:23am | IP Logged

shadi k baad Raj ne Naina ko kaha..k humare company me designer ka kaam kyon nahi karti?

Naina--main?

Raj--yeha par aur koi nahi hai..zaahir hai tumko hi kah raha hoon..

Naina--maine is bare me socha nahi.

Raj--ab soch lo..pura din ghar pe baith kar..kyaa karogi..agar tumko fashion designing ka kaam karna hai..to karo..varna office aya karo..

Naina--main..lekin..

Raj--you are talented..aur main apne faide k lia nahi kah raha hoon..tumhara talent ghar par reh kar sad na jaye isi lia..agar jawab haa me ho..to kal mere sath office chalna..

Naina--ok..main sone jaa rahi hoon..good night..

Naina jake sofa par so gai..

Raj--Naina..

Naina--hmm..

Raj--agar yeh bistar chhota hai..to naya bada sa bistar banva loon..hum dono k lia..tumko sone ki takleef hoti hai..

Naina--agar itni fikar hai..to mere sone ka intezam dusre kamre me kyon nahi karva dete?

Raj--ghar me naukar chakar hai..kyaa sochenge..ochhi baatein karenge..

Naina--I don't care..

Raj--yeh gutts tumhara zindagi bhar rahega..kyaa gurranty hai?

Naina--good night..

Naina so gai..

yeh baat hai..shadi k 8 maheene bad ki..

2001,November..

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Ek maheene k andar kamre me bada sa bed aaya..

Raj ne intezaam kia...

sardi k mausam me Naina itni takleef utha kar soyegi..thik nahi hai..

Naina ne sab dekha..par kuchh nahi boli..

kyonki Raj ki sari adaten uske samne aa rahi thi..

khaskar Raj ka superstition..

yeh colour lucky..woh unlucky..

ek din Raj aur Naina dinner kar rahe the..

achanak Raj ne kaha--kamre me chalo..tumse zaroori baat karni hai.


dinner k baad Naina kamre gai..

Raj cigar pee raha tha..

Naina--bolo..

Raj ne Naina ka haath apne haath me lia..

Naina ne ek Emareld ki ring pahni hui thi..

Raj--yeh kab kharida?

Naina--kal hi..

Raj--yeh stone mere lia unlucky hai..ek baar yeh stone maine kharida..aur mera consignment customs k jhamele fansa..yeh ring utaar do..

Naina--stone k sath customs ka kyaa taalluk?

Raj--bahes mat karo..jo kah raha hoon karo..yeh ring tum nahi pahen sakti..is ring ko ghar se bahar feko..

Naina--are ajeeb paagalpan hai..itni keemti chees..

Raj--main kal tumko diamond ka set lake dunga..par isko chhod do..

Naina--nahi..

Raj--Naina..sidhi tarha se baat maano..

Naina--nahi to?

Raj ne Naina ka haath pakad lia.."utaaro..isko abhi utaaro.."

Raj ne ring chheen li..

Naina rone lagi..

"bhagwan jee..chun k yehi langoor bheja tha aapne mere lia?"

bhagwan ne jawab dia.."kanya..tumhari karni ka phal hai..tumne khud isse vivah kia hai..options to the tumhare paas..tumne dusre ka kalyan kia..aur apne kismat ko ulhasnagar rawana  kia..abhi tumhiko bhugatna hoga..all the best."

Naina so gai rote rote..

bistar k ek kone me..

Raj--Naina..so gai kya?

Naina--nahi cabre kar rahi hoon..dikhta nahi aapko?

Raj--tum kaun se school me padhti thi?

Naina--Delhi Public School

Raj--college kaun sa tha?

Naina--Mithibai College..

Raj--achha..subject kyaa the tumhare?

Naina--main abhi paani ka bottle utha k marungi..bol bol k sar khaa gaye..

Raj--tum..khush ho na mere saath?

Naina--top of the world..

Raj--main janta hoon..Naina..jo hua thik nahi hua..

Naina--aap chup hone ka kyaa lenge?mujhe neend aa rahi hai please..

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udhar Abhi aur Akriti k ghar pe..

Akriti--tum chalo na mere sath New York..

Abhi--are main nahi jaa sakta..bahut kaam hai..Raj mujhe maar dalega..tum jaao..photo shoot karo..aur wapas aa jao..

Akriti--main akele kaise rahungi?

Abhi--arre 1  ya 2 hafte ki baat hai..dekho its a life time opportunity..you must go..

Akriti--tum mujhse bahut pyaar karte ho na?

Abhi---nahi..bas thoda sa hi...

Akriti--Abhimanyu..you are..

Abhi--I know I am a darling..

Akriti--fir bhi akele..agar main kisi musibat me fans gai to?

Abhi--main jaa nahi sakta..tum..Naina ko saath me lo na..uski bhi outing ho jayegi..

Akriti--not a bad idea..


18th November..subha ..Naina abhi tak so rahi hai..

Raj--hello..

Abhi--hey Raj..Abhi here..

Raj--yes..

Abhi--Akriti ko modelling assignment k lia New York jana hai..main jaa nahi sakta..Naina ko bhejna uske saath..

Raj--ok Naina se hi puchh..

"Naina..Naina..tumhara phone hai..utho.."

Akriti--kyaa hua Abhi?

Abhi--are Naina so rahi hai..Raj usko jaga raha hai...mamla fit hai..

Naina--hello

Akriti--are..sun mujhe jana hai New York..Abhi ja nahi sakta..tu chalna..

Naina ne Raj ki taraf dekha..

Raj ne ishara kia.."jaao.."

Naina--ok..main Visa k lia apply karti hoon..kab jana hai..?

Akriti--agle maheene..

Naina--ok..


phone rakh kar..

Abhi--I think its working..

Akriti--what?

Abhi--yehi Raj aur Naina..they finally made it..

Akriti--hope so..

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Naina phone rakh k aai..

Naina--inka naya natak shuru..

Raj--office me kaam hai..Abhi ja nahi sakta..tum chali jaao..

20 December ki raat ko flight hai..

11 December ko Naina ka birthday ..

Abhi aur Akriti aye..


bahut maza aya..

sab chale gaye..

kamre me Naina baithi hai..thak gai hai..

achanak Raj aya..

Naina--kyaa hua?

Raj ne do jwellery k boxes dia.."khol k dekh lo.."

Naina ne khola..usme jhoomke..aur necklace..aur dusre me..kangan..aur ek anguthi thi..

kareeb 50 lacs ka set hoga Diamond ka..

Raj--maine kaha tha na..tumko diamond ka set dunga..

Naina "thank you" kah kar Raj k gaal par kiss kia..

Naina so gai..achanak uske mobile par message aya..

Raj ne dekha.."kyaa baat hai..tumhara birthday aur mujhko hi invite nahi kia tumne?shadi k baad bhool gai mujhe?"

message Jateen ka tha..

 

 



Edited by yakkudimag - 19 August 2008 at 4:37pm
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Posted: 21 May 2008 at 8:15am | IP Logged
LOL LOL raj is superstitious LOL LOL
my god, raj aur naina ka tu tu main main toh never ending hai.........bechare AA soch rahe hai ke sab set hai lekin hakikat toh kuch aur hai!!

ab jateen aa gaya scene mein........ab toh bahut kuch jalega........raj, zara samhalkar......

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