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Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 (Page 5)

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Posted: 16 May 2008 at 7:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nishttha

amazing....abhi tak laughing... ROFL
cont soon plz
thanks a lot

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Guddu so raha hai Akriti k goad me...ro raha tha thodi der pahle..apne papa k lia..Akriti ne bahut mushkil se sulaya hai usko..

achanak uska phone baja..

Akriti--hello..

koi jawab nahi..

Akriti--hellooooooo..kaun hai..?

phone cut ho gaya..

phone Abhimanyu ne kia tha..Abhimanyu abhi Hotel Sun n Sand me baitha hai..

maze se order de raha hai..khaa raha hai..pee raha hai..

par Akriti aur Guddu..dono ko bahut miss kar raha hai..

Abhi aur Akriti pahli baar mile the ek fashion Magazine ki party pe..Akriti was the Cover page Girl.

Abhi ne usko wish kia..congrats..

Akriti--thanks..

baaton ka silsila age badha..aur mulakatein bhi badhi..aur kab pyaar hua pata hi nahi chala..

Abhimanyu ka yuh Akriti se meljol badhana Rajveer ko pasand nahi aya..

1999..December..

ek party ki photos Page 3 me aai..jaha par Abhi aur Akriti k kissing scene ki photo chhapi..

Raj ne iske bare me Abhi ki maa ko bataya..

Abhi ki Maa aag baboola ho gai..

ek model Vij Parivar ki bahu kaise ban sakti hai?


Maa aur Beta dono apni zid me adh gaye..

Abhi ne Akriti se rishta toda apni maa k dabav ki wajah se..par Maa ki pasand ki ladki se shadi karne se bhi inkaar kar dia..

Abhi ki maa ne..Akriti ko bahut bhala bura kaha...aur Akriti Abhi se naraz ho gai..usne bhi Abhi se milna chhod dia.

Abhi isi intezar me raha k kab maa ka man badle aur woh samjhe k Akriti se kitna pyaar karta hai Abhimanyu..

isi lia upar upar usne yeh dikhaya k Akriti se uska koi rishta nahi raha..par andar hi andar Akriti k sare khabar rakhta tha Abhi.

 

year 2000..August me Naina aur Raj ki mulakat hui..Abhi aur Akriti bhi fir se mile..par Akriti ne shadi karne se inkaar kar dia.

aur pata nahi bhagwan ki kyaa marzi thi..September me Abhi ki maa guzar gai..Heart Attack ki wajah se..unhe dil ki bimari thi..


Maa k kria karam k baad..Abhi ne fir ekbar socha k Akriti se baat kare apne rishte k bare me..

par Akriti apni beizzati bhul nahi pai..

Abhi uske pichhe jata aur Akriti usko khari khoti suna deti.

finally shadi hui indono ki..2001 ,March me..

2 saal baad Guddu aya..

par pyaar k ilava in dono me sab kuchh kayam raha..ya fir pyaar dil k itne andar chhupa raha jo dikhta tak nahi tha..

sirf kadvahat..jhagde..shak..aur kabhi kabhi maar pit bhi.

Abhi ko aisa lagta hai k Akriti ke upar kisi dusre admi ki nazar hai...aur Akriti ko yeh lagta hai..k Abhi dusri auraton par nazar daalta hai....

dono apni apni soch me adh gaye..

dooriaan badhi..rishta kumzor hua..

par Guddu hai..uske lia sath rahena padta hai..aisa dono kahte hai..

par dono k dil me ek hi baat hai..k sab k samne ek dusre ko expose karna hai..

ab expose usko kia jata hai..jisne koi ghotala kia ho..

par indono me se kisine koi bhi gadbad nahi ki..

fir bhi shak karte hai..

Akriti se puchho.."Kyon tumko aisa lagta hai k Abhi tumko dhokha de raha hai?"

Akriti--Pata nahi.

same sawal agar Abhi ko koi puchhe..Akriti k bare me..same jawab milega.."Pata nahi."

"Pata nahi" bol dia..bas inki duty khatam..are bhai pata karo..par nahi..pata mat karo..shak karo..lage raho.

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2000,18 August ki us mulakat k baad Raj Naina se kaafi chidh gaya tha..

Abhi ki maa ki maut k baad..Raj..thoda relaxed hua tha..k ab Abhi us Akriti k lia pagal nahi banega..

par ek din usko yeh khabar mili k Abhi aur Akriti milne wale hain Juhoo Centuer Hotel me..

October ka maheena..

Raj gaya Juhoo Centuer me..

aur jo nazara usne dekha..kyaa baat hai..

Naina..thi..swimming suit me..

swimming pool k andar..aur akeli nahi thi..kisi aur sath paani me fudak rahi thi..

are yeh ladka to us din party me tha..Naina k sath hi tha..

haa..is chhokre ka naam kyaa tha..yaad nahi aa raha hai..

achanak..Naina k chillane ki awaz aai..."Jateen..I will kill you..mere kaan me paani chala gaya.."


Raj(man hi man)--haa..Jateen..launde ka naam Jateen hi hai..par sath sath sab k samne naha rahe hai..kaise  besharam hai?

Raj k andar se awaz aai.."Raj tu sathia gaya hai..swimming pool me log aise hi nahate hai..kaise dakia loosi vichar hai tere..?"

Raj jake pool side k table me baith gaya..dekhne laga..Naina k nakhre...are yeh to bahut chipak rahi hai..is Item se..nahi..nahii..dekho aur paas mat jana..

Raj aya tha Abhi aur Akriti ko pakad ne..par baad me security ne Raj ko pakad lia..

wajah hai..

Raj ne Jateen par humla kia tha..


thodi der Raj ne dekha Naina aur Jateen ki Leela..bardast nahi hua..aur pani me utar kar Jateen ko pitne laga..

Naina--paagal hai pura yeh admi..

Jateen--I think so..main chala..

Naina--kaha..

Jateen--2 3 din mujhse nahi milna..iska gussa abhi taza hai..agar dubara sath me dekha humko..mujhe bomb se udha dega...

Naina--that is so mean Jateen.

Jateen--I know sweety..par josh k sath hosh bhi zaroori hai..mujhe zara sochna hai k iske lia kaunsa bandobast karna hai..bye honey..


Raj ko security ne bahar nikaal dia..aur Jateen khud bhaag gaya..

Naina paani me  khadi rahi...all men are same..shit..


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Abhimanyu ne Akriti ko propose kia tha November..2000 me..

Akriti ne baat ko hans kar udha dia..

actually Akriti itni bechain nahi thi shadi k lia..jitna Abhimanyu tha..

Akriti khush thi..apni modelling ko lekar..upar se Abhi ki maa ki maut..usko achha nahi laga ..is tarha mauke ka faida uthana..


12th November..2000..Raj ne dekha Naina aur Jateen Oberoi Hotel me..

Raj wahi par ek business dinner k lia aya tha..

Naina aur Jateen ko dekh kar usne pichha kia..

Raj ne dekha..Naina Jateen k sath Room. No. 2012 me.

Raj laut aya..dinner party me..

"are Mr. Shekhawat aap kuchh khaa kyon nahi rahe hai?"

Raj-nahi..bahut khaa lia hai maine...


"Naina Sareen..usdin to bol rahi thi k tumko Page 3 Culture pasand nahi..but you are living life like a Page 3 Girl..kabhi swimming pool me..kabhi hotel room me.."

Raj k andar se awaz aai.."Raj ..tujhko itni mirchi kyon lag rahi hai..uski life hai..jo jee me aye kare..aise pareshaan ho raha hai jaise teri izzat loot rahi hai.."

Raj chala aya party se..

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agle din office aya ..to dekha Abhi nahi aya..

Abhi ne phone kia..k Akriti hospital me hai..

Raj pareshaan ho gaya..Akriti k sath aisa kyaa hua?

Raj daura  hospital ki aur..

jakar dekha..Naina aur Jateen bhi hai Hospital me..

Raj chidh gaya..

Abhi--kal raat ko achanak indono ka phone aya tha..Oberoi hotel k room number 2012 se..

Raj--kyaa?

Abhi--haa..Akriti waha gai thi ek drug dealer se Marizuana kharidne..

Raj--whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttt?

Naina--haa..mujhe pahle se shak tha k didi aisa kuchh kar rahi hai..aur darr bhi tha..k main akele samhal nahi paungi..Jateen ko sath lia..aur mera shak sahi nikla..didi wahi par thi..drugs kharid rahi thi..woh dealer to bhaag gaya.. didi ko hum hospital laaye..

Raj ko aisa laga k usko constipation se raahat mili..oo to yeh mamla hai..

Naina..you are really cool.

 

 



Edited by yakkudimag - 06 August 2008 at 11:54am
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Clap
bah kya baat hai... Embarrassed

cont soon pls Embarrassed
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 10:32am | IP Logged
superrrrrrrrrrrrr
tooooooooooooooo gud
hatts of u...... Clap
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 11:28am | IP Logged
awsome, mindblowing,really enjoyed it
too good
fatafati
plz update soon
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
yuuuhuuun...kitnat cool update tha...dialogues were soo funny and true...amazing di...thanks for this interesting update... Clap Clap Clap
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Posted: 17 May 2008 at 5:56pm | IP Logged
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ur a brilliant writer
superb fic so different
rn are such astrange couple
enjoyed reading it alot
waiting eagerly for the next update
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 6:58am | IP Logged
intresting story
update soon

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