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Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 (Page 30)

yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina ko wakai mein kuch huya hai!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappyJo numerology ke naam se chidhti thi woh ek baba ko bula kar yeh sab kar rahi hai!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Guddu ko Naina chudail lagi!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLAnd Raj is agreeing with him and scolding Naina!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue 

Raj kehta Naina ko ke khudko chudail naa kahe aur uska saya 5 saal se ghar mein hai aur ghar ko kuch nahi huya!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLO God this is too funny!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Abhi and Akriti's convo was too funny!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL 

Raj aur Naina ka jhagda!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueOh God!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLIts just too much!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFLDono hi item hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Akriti ne jo kuch bhi kaha sab sach tha!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveNaina ka reaction wakai mein normal nahi hai!!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

Raj ko baccha chahiye Naina ke pairon mein zanjeer dalne ke liye!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Akriti ne sahi kaha uske jaisi koi hoti toh maar maar ke poster bana deti!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Tongue Tongue Tongue Smile Smile Smile

Raj ko akhir ehsaas huya ke Naina ne bahut jhela hai aur usne khud hadh paar ki hai!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Approve

Zindagi nark kardi usne Naina ki!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry AngryPyaar ke do baatein dhang se nahi keh sakta Naina ko!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveIdiot!!!!Angry Angry Angry Angry Angry

Sach kaha Akriti ne in sab ki wagah se Naina ne kya kya nahi saha!!!!!Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry

Abhi aur Akriti ke wajah se hi sab start huya!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueAkriti is right all three of them are to be blamed!!!!!!Approve Approve Approve

Naina ka aise baat karna jayaz hai!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve Smile SmileSmile

I hope dono ka jaldi patch up ho jaye!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

 
 
 
 
 
 


hmm..Raj ko vocal tonic to mila hai...dekhte hain..kyaa hota hai..ab...

Naina is puzzled..kyaa hoga Naina ka??

Patch up..sure..bahut jaldi hoga..Wink

abhi Buajee ki entry baaki hai..Ouch



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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by riyaa_1985

Great update.
But yeh kya...saraa sympathy Naina ke liye and what about Raj???
Anyways tooo good.SmileClapClap
Ab dono mein jaldi se patch up karwa do....plzzzzzzzSmile
Thank u sooo much for a rocking update.
Update soon.Smile




love
Riya.






keep reading..



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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mahak Sinha

Superb update.Clap

Sach kaha aaj Akriti ne ki Naina ne kya kya nahi saha hai in logon ki wajah se.Cry

Shuru se le kar ant tak sab Abhi aur Akriti k jhamele se shuru ho kar Raj k bawaal k saath hi tha.Confused

Raj k paas to akal naam ki cheej nahi hai ghan chakkar hai poora.Angry

Jitna apne ko vo samjhta hai utana hi vo gobar ganesh hai.Angry

Zindagi narak kar di hai us ne Naina ki . Angry

Pyaar k do bol tak to dhang se bole nahi jaate us se.Confused

Idiot kahin ka.Angry

Akriti aur Abhi ki baatein saari sahi thin aur start bhi sab un ki hi wajah se hua.Tongue

Update was really good.Clap

update it soon.



Very true...Naina..bechari NainaCry

aur Abhi aur Akriti abhi bahut samajhdar ban rahe hain..apni love story ki setting toh inse hui nahiAngry

Raj..mahaan admi hai..sach me mahaan haiConfused



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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 6:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nishttha

hai bechara raj... itni lecture to kisi professor ne bhi nehi di hogi... ab patri pe nehi ayega to kab ayega??? bechari naina... pity...
ud soonnnnnn


ROFL


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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 6:47am | IP Logged

Akriti jab Naina k paas gai..tab Naina choop chaap baithi thi..andhere me...

Akriti ne sahi andaza lagaya ..Naina ro hi rahi thi..


Akriti--Naina..

Naina uth kar khadi hui..

Akriti-- I know..bahut kuchh hua hai tere saath..par..tune bhi toh Raj ki integrity par shak kia..


Naina--kyaa?


Akriti--tune yeh kaise soch lia k Raj ka kisi aur se chakkar hai..?


Naina--Raj ne khud bataya..kisi Netra naam ki..

Akriti--akal ghaas charne gai hai teri...Netra aur Naina..kyaa matlab hota hai? ek hi matlab hai in do naamon ka....tujhe itna bhi samajh nahi aya..k Raj teri hi baat kar raha tha?


Naina soch me pad gai...

Akriti--aur tune bhi baat chhupaai..aur yeh kyaa hoolia bana rakha hai tune.. chal sab saaf kar..

Naina--mujhe jana hai..yaar...

Akriti--Jateen se shaadi karegi?

Naina--tera dimaag fir gaya hai kya?Jateen kaha se aa gaya?

Akriti--tu hi toh us din bata rahi thi..

Naina--tu paagal hai kya?aise hi bola tha maine..aur..please..doosri shaadi? no way...ek baar kar k dekh lia..doosri shaadi?kyon?kis lia?


Akriti--toh Raj ko kyon chhodna chaahti hai?



Naina--mujhe bas nahi rehna uske saath...

Akriti--yeh ghalat baat hai..jab tak mujhe pata tha..k uska kisi aur se chakkar hai..tab tak toh tu bahut  upset thi..ab jab tujhe pata chal gaya hai k ..aisi koi baat nahi..ab tu ulta bol rahi hai..what is wrong with you?


Naina--nothing..bas..mujhe nahi rehna uske saath...

Akriti--Naina..shaadi k baad bhi tera Jateen k saath contact tha...

Naina--just contact..aur usine start kia tha..aur Raj ne bhi kaha tha..


Akriti--agreed..but..Jateen k lia tera woh rona dhona...yaad hai na?

Naina--yaad hai...

Akriti--kaafi tha..yeh sab..Raj tujhe talak de sakta tha..infidelity ka charge laga k..tu ..yeh bhi bhool gai..Raj hi tha..jo har waqt tere paas rehta tha..taa k..... pareshaani me tu kuchh ghalat naa kar baithe khud k saath...


Naina--thanks to him..bas ..isse zyada ..kuchh nahi bol sakti main...

Akriti--Naina..ab ..yeh zyaatti kar rahi hai..I know..Raj hai thoda sankhi..

Naina--thoda?

Akriti--OK..bahut bada sankhi ...but....us Jateen k comparison me..Raj bahut achha hai..infact Raj ki jootion k barabar nahi hai Jateen..

Naina--pata hai..

Akriti--toh..sab kuchh jaan kar anjaan ban rahi hai..sab kuchh samajh kar naasamajh ban rahi hai...isse kuchh haasil nahi hoga...

Naina--5 saalon me maine kyaa haasil kar lia?

Akriti--arre..tere itne saare shares pade hain..unka kya..VS Company me tera bhi hak hai..

Naina--main thookti hoon..us hak par..mujhe apni azadi chahie..jo zindagi ..5 saal pahle thi..wahi chahie..I want my life back..kuchh bhi keemat ho sakti hai...but I want my life back..

Akriti--achha..tu bata..tu karegi kyaa?agar Raj tujhe chhod bhi de..tu kyaa karegi?

Naina--bahut kuchh karne ko hai..

Akriti--jaise?

Naina--woh maine abhi socha nahi hai..par..main karungi..jo mujhe karna hoga..

Akriti--iska matlab hai..jo kuchh bigad gaya hai...unko sudhaarne k badle.. aur bigaado..yehi karna chaahti hai na tu?


Naina--tu jo bhi soche..

Akriti--tune pakka irada kar lia hai?


Naina--yaa..

Akriti--aur,Raj ka kyaa hoga?

Naina--woh apni marzi se jeea apni zindagi..mere baap ka kyaa jata hai?

Akriti--tujhe itna samajh me nahi aya..in 5 saalon me..k Raj ki zindagi tere hi aas paas ghoomti hai?


Naina--teri ghalatfaimi hai...

Akriti--tere siva Raj ka aur koi hai bhi toh nahi..woh kaise jeeaga?

Naina--doosri shaadi kar le..

Akriti--jab tu hai..tu kyon woh kisi aur se shaadi karega?woh tujhse pyaar karta hai..Naina..

Naina--kyaa bakwas hai..woh mujhse pyaar nahi karta..

Akriti--tujhe aisa kyon lagta hai ..k woh tujhse pyaar nahi karta?

Naina--nahi karta pyaar..mujhe pata hai..

Akriti--usne kabhi tujhse nahi kaha..k woh tujhse pyaar karta hai?

Naina--ek baar joke mara tha usne..I LOVE YOU bol kar..but ..that was a silly joke..nothing more than that..

Akriti--tu sure hai k usne joke hi mara tha?


Naina--haa..



Akriti--ab main bhi maarnewali hoon..

Naina--kyaa?joke?


Akriti--nahi...thappad..

Naina--kisko?

Akriti--tujhko..tere ilava kisi aur k bare me nahi sochta ..Office se sidhe ghar ata hai..koi buri aadat nahi..haa...Jyotish ko chhod kar..but..itna toh chalta hai..

Naina--tujhe aur koi kaam nahi hai kya?mujhe gyaan mat de..

Akriti--OK..ek sawal ka jawab de..abhi tu ro kyon rahi thi...


Naina--pata nahi...mujhe jana hai..


Akriti--uff...yaar..yeh Raj toh tujhse better hai..maine usko dia dose..raaste par aa gaya..par tu..teri murge ki ek taang..

Naina--leave me alone...

Akriti chali gayi...

Raj aur Abhimanyu baatein kar raha tha..

dekha Akriti niche aa rahi hai...


Raj--kyaa hua?

Akriti--she is really upset...aur ulti sidhi baatein kar rahi hai...


Raj--woh toh doosri shaadi karna chaahti hai..

Akriti aur Abhimanyu chauk gaye..

Abhi--kyaa bakta hai?

Akriti--whatt?


Raj--tum bhi toh jaanti ho..k...usne toh tumko bola tha..

Akriti--ek minute..tumko kaise pata?yeh sab toh usne mujhe phone me kaha tha..

Raj--maine sab kuchh parallel line par sun raha tha...mujhe shuru se pata tha..k Naina pregnant hai..


Akriti--Naina theek kar rahi hai..tumko chhodna chaahti hai..tumne kaise soch lia..arre,gusse me usne kuchh kaha hoga..aur tumne sach maan lia? aur jab tumko shuru se pata tha..Naina k bare me..directly usko bolna tha ...tumko kabhi kisine nahi bataya Raj..?

Raj--kyaa nahi bataya?

Akriti--that..you are a certified Idiot..

Raj--whatt..?Abhi..teri Biwi ko bol..

Abhi--main kyaa bolu?sahi bol rahi hai..saale..sab gadbad tune kia..tujhe.. main kyaa boloon??Akriti..chalo ..inki nipatne do..


Akriti aur Abhimanyu chale aaye waha se...

aadhe raste par jaakar..


Akriti--eeeeeeeeeeeee...main bhool gai..

Abhi--kyaa?

Akriti--arre..Guddu toh wahi par reh gaya..

Abhi--arre haa,Guddu ko toh Raj k ghar par hi chhod aaye hum..isshhh hhhhh..


Akriti--yeh..Raj aur Naina k jhamele me hum dono paagal ho rahe hain..chalo waapas chalo...

Abhi--rahne do..subha jaakar le aaunga..Raj hi pahucha dega..

Akriti--arre..woh dono pareshaan..aur upar se Guddu...tum chalo waapas..

Abhi--nahi jata..


Abhi chala gaya ghar Akriti ko lekar..

Guddu reh gaya..Raj k ghar par..

Raj hall me baitha tha..achanak usne kitchen me kuchh geerne ki awaz suni...

Raj daur kar gaya....


freege khula hua tha,Guddu ne freege se Custard nikaal kar khana shuru kia tha..aur Cold Drink ki bottle khinchne gaya..aur daal ka patila geera..jisme daal rakha hua tha...


Raj--arre..tu ..yeha kyaa kar raha hai?teri aunty ne dekh lia na..kitchen ki yeh haalat..toh..meri khatia khadi kar degi..

Guddu k pure dress me..custard hi laga hua tha...

Raj--Nainaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...jaldi niche aao...


Naina nahi aai........................


Raj--arre..niche aao..dekho kitchen me...

Naina--kyaaaaaaa huaaaaaaaaaa?

Raj--arre..kitchen me ek baagad billa ghoos aya hai...sab kuchh khaa raha hai..

Naina--kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa?

Raj--haa..aao jaldi..nahi zyada jaldi nahi..dheere dheere......

Naina--aati hoon...

Guddu--muje Potty dana hai..


Raj--nahi jana hai..

Guddu--dana hai..valna..yehi pe tar dunga...

Raj--Ooh..mere baap..rook....rook..abhi nahi....

Naina niche aai..haath me danda le kar..
"kidhar hai Billa?"


Raj--meri goad me..

Naina--yeh toh Guddu hai..

Raj--yehi toh freege se nikaal kar khaa raha tha..abhi isko potty jana hai..

Guddu--abhi chalo...valna..

Raj--meri goad me karega..hai na..?



Naina--mujhe do...

Raj--nahi rahne do..yeh kaafi bhaari hai..tum utha nahi paaogi...

Naina--arre..bathroom us taraf hai..

Raj--haa..

Naina--par..Akriti isko yeha kyon chhod gai?

Raj--bhool gaye honge dono..

Naina--isko le jana bhool gaye...shukar hai humara ghar hai..My God..agar sabzi kharidne jaate..toh shaayad bhaajiwali k paas hi isko chhod dete..

Guddu ne pant me hi kar dia tha...

Raj--Naina..ehhhhh..gaya main toh..


Naina--saaf karo..main isko doosre kapde pehnati hoon..

Naina Guddu ko upar le gai..

par Guddu k laayak koi kapda hi nahi tha...

Naina ne Raj k almari me dekha...


ek short pant tha..Raj ka...


Guddu ko wahi pehna dia..Guddu k lia woh trouser se kum nahi tha..aur kamar se khisak raha tha,toh Naina ne apna ek scurf uske kamar me baandh dia..

Raj kamre me aya..woh naha kar hi aya tha..

Naina--tum..naha kar aaye?

Raj--haa..Guddu ka shit saaf kia..nahana toh tha hi...

Raj apna short pant dhoondh raha tha..usko wahi pahenna hai abhi..

Raj--arre..meri purple shorts kidhar gai?


Naina--Guddu ko pahena dia hai..


Raj--achha..whatttttttttttt?

Naina--haa..wahi theek laga..

Raj ne dekha..Guddu ko...


Raj--Naina...tum itni akal lekar raat ko soti kaise ho?I mean..you are brilliant..I will kill you..mera shorts..ishhhhhhhhhhhhh...

Guddu--bhookh lagi hai..

Naina--haa..abhi chalo..khana khilati hoon tumko...

Raj--arre..isne custard pura bhakos lia..aur khana hai tujhko..tera pet hai k kuaan?


Naina--shut up..

Raj--arre..isne jo kiaa..

Naina--Bachche hi shararat karenge...

Raj--achha?


Naina--haaa....









Edited by yakkudimag - 03 September 2008 at 3:41am
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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 7:15am | IP Logged
great
amazing
really funny
maza a gaya
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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 7:26am | IP Logged

Hey g8 fic yaar abhi maine is ko padha.

just awesome dear.
Kaafi funny hai.
Raj aur Naina me kaafi miss understandings hain.
may b jaldi he khatam ho jaayein.
update soon.
prerna1 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 01 September 2008 at 10:46am | IP Logged
that was so funny
but ye Raj aur Naina ki pro kab solve hogi
plz continue soon 

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