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Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 (Page 26)

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Posted: 05 August 2008 at 11:30am | IP Logged
when u going  to update?
pleeeeeeeeeeeee update

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dear 5th is over plz update it na asap a long part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzUnhappyCry
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Naina foot foot k ro rahi hai....Raj aise bewafai karega..usko andaza nahi tha..

Netra..THE VAMP...Naina usko nahi chhodegi....

Raj udhar pareshaan ho raha hai..ab agar Naina ko kuchh kahega..yaa toh woh yakeen nahi karegi..yaa toh us par humla karegi..jhoot bolne k jurm me..

Raj ne decide kia..jaisa chal raha hai chalne do..


is bich Raj ne bahut shopping kia..Naina k lia..jo kuchh bhi Naina ko pasand hai..sab kuchh..



jab woh shopping kar k lauta..tab achanak usko phone aya Office se...Raj k paas..itna waqt nahi tha k..woh upar jaa kar bedroom me sara saman rakh de ...woh sab kuchh guest room me hi rakh kar chala gaya....

Naina ne Car ki awaz suni...usne dekha..Raj wapas chala gaya...achanak aya..aur achanak chala gaya..kyon?

Naina niche gai..ek letter lene..usne dekha guest room ka darwaza thik se bandh nahi hai....Raj aksar yehi par sota hai..Naina guest room k andar gai.. aur guest room k bed par dekha ..bahut saare packets hai...Naina dekh kar samajh gai..Raj hi laya hai yeh sab....


Naina(man hi man)--saman laakar upar kyon nahi le gaya?guest room me kyon rakha?ohh..socha main toh guest room me aaungi hi nahi..ohh..us kameeni k lia..shopping....Raj...tum kyaa kar rahe ho?mujhse chhupakar uske lia lakho ki shopping!!!


Raj Office me jaakar..kaam me busy ho gaya..uske dimaag se hi nikal gaya k usne Naina k lia..bahut saari shopping ki hai..

Raj shaam ko jab ghar aya..tab bhi uske dimaag me nahi aya..k Naina ko bolna chahie..

ghar aakar khana khaya..aur chup chaap so gaya..


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Raj so raha hai..gehri neend me hai woh..par Naina jaag rahi hai..uske dimag me kuchh chal raha hai...

usne Raj ko bahut hi ghaur se dekha..usne kuchh alag dekha Raj ne..

Raj k gale se ek locket ghayab hai..aur haathon se 2 anghuthi..sirf shaadi ki anghuthi hai..


Naina(man hi man)--yeh locket kaha rakh dia usne?

Raj ne khud hi locket anghuthi utaar k rakh di hai..raat ko..Naina se gale milta tha..toh Naina ko locket se takleef hoti thi..Naina bahut baar bol chuki hai..par Raj nahi maanta tha.


Naina(man hi man)--mere laakh bolne par bhi..Raj ne locket nahi utara..woh locket toh..uske kisi Buajee ne di thi usko..taa k..uska dimaag kaboo me rahe ..kahi isi locket k utar jaane ki wajah se..hi Raj bahek toh nahi gaya..5 saal ho gaye..par Raj ne aisa kuchh nahi kia..par achanak..aur yeh locket bhi ghayab ..aisa hi hai..haa..

jab aafat aati hai..tab insaan sab kuchh bhool jata hai..Naina bhi bhul gai..k Raj k inhi superstitions ki wajah se..hi woh Raj ko chhodna chaahti thi..

Naina ko darr laga..

subha bahut jald uth gai woh...aur Raj ki telephone ki diary se Buajee ka number dhoondhne lagi...

number mila..aur Naina ne Buajee ko phone kia..Bikaner.


Bua--kaun?

Naina--main...Naina....aapki Bahu..

Bua--haa Bahu..haa bolo..k baat ho gai..

Naina--Buajee..assi loot gaye...eeii Raj ne ki kitta si?

Bua--k bol rahi hai chhori..?

Naina--aapka munda..Raj..chudhail pakdia unhanoo...

Bua--arre..manne kuchh na samajh me aave..baoli..thik se bol..

Naina(man hi man)--main bhi kaha Punjabi bolne lagi..?



Bua--Bahu..tu sun rahi hai?

Naina--jee Buajee..woh Raj..kisi chudhail k changool me fans gaya hai.. aapka dia hua locket..usne utaar dia hai..


Bua--chhore ne gadbad kar di...Gurujee ne apne haatho se Raj k gale dala tha..woh taabiz...kaha rakh dia..

Naina--uuuuhhh..aaaa...Buajee..mera ghar barbad ho gaya..Raj..kisi aur ko ghar par laanewala hai..

Bua--k bak rahi hai?tanne pata bhi hai..k bol rahi hai?


Naina--manne pata hai Buajee..par tanne na koi khabar hai..thara chhora.. gaya..haath se..


Bua--achha..tu ro mat..ek kaam kar...Siddhivinayak jaa..waha par bahut pahuche hue Sadhu baithte hain...unke paas jaa..abhi k lia koi intezaam kar le..main bahut jald aa rahi hoon..tu ro mat..


Naina--Buajee..ek  khabar aur hai..


Bua--k..khabar hai?

Naina--aap ..Dadi banne wali hain?

Bua--k baat kar rahi hai?sach..main jaldi aa rahi hoon..ek maheene k andar hi andar..tu bas apna dhyaan rakhna..aur haa..roz puja karna..tum aaj kal ki chhorian..in sab baaton me vishwas hi naa karo..par akhir me Bua ki yaad aai na?


Naina--jee Buajee..jaldi se aaiye..


Naina nahake..sab se pahle..bhagwan ki murti k saamne gai..dia jalaya..aur bolne lagi..
"Bhagwanjee..bahut bada locha hai..us Netra kameeni se mere bhole bhaale Raj ko bacha lo..please.."

Akashvaani hui..

"kanya..jo kuchh ho raha hai..tumhara hi kia dhara hai..dhyaan se socho..jab tak tumhara pati ..tumhare saamne minnat kar raha tha..tab tum bhaao khaa rahi thi..ab wahi tumko take k bhao nahi puchh raha hai..yeh toh tumhare hi karmo ka phal hai kanya.."

Naina--I know..par ab koi raasta bataiye..please..


"bas..apne pati ka saath mat chhodo..woh jaha bhi jaaye..uska pichha karo.. Naina se Karamchand ban jaao.."

Naina--jee bhagwanjee..


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Naina Siddhivinayak gai...ek Baba ko pakda..aur usko ghar par le aai..

shaam ko Raj jab ghar aya..tab akele nahi aya..Abhimanyu k saath aya.. udhar Akriti bhi pahuchi Guddu ko lekar..Naina se milne..

jab woh log ghar k andar aaye..tab dekha..

koi Baba hain..gamle me aag jal rahi hai..Naina sar pe ghunghat odhe baithi hai..dhuaan dhuaan hai pura ghar..


"yaa devi mama ghriheshu chudhail roopena sangsthita..

namah tasshai..namah tasshai..namah tasshai..namo namah.."


aise mantra padh raha hai...



Abhi--arre ..Raj..teri biwi toh tere se bhi do kadam aage nikli..


Akriti--main samajh nahi paa rahi hoon..yeh wahi Naina hai..jisko astrology aur aisi baaton par..bilkul bharosa nahi tha..yeh ho kyaa raha hai?Naina ko kyaa hua hai?


Raj--yaar..main hoon..thoda sa superstitious..par yeh sab kyaa hai?aur yeh admi kaun hai?


Naina ki ankhe bandh hai..

Akriti--arre usko roko..aisi haalat me..itna dhuaan..roko..

Raj--hello...ho kyaa raha hai?


Naina ne ankhe kholi..

Raj--what is this Naina?ho kyaa raha hai?

Baba uth kar khade hue.."Putra..tumhare ghar me bhoot pret ka saya hai.. usika upai karne hum aaye hain.."

Raj--helloooo..aisa kuchh nahi hai..aap chalte baniye...

Baba Raj k paas aaya..aur ghaur se dekha Raj ko..

Raj--kyaa hai?

Baba--hmm..saya bahut bhayankar hai..par iska upai hai...

Naina--kyaa upai hai Baba?

Baba--Laal mirch..sukha wala..

Naina--abhi laai Baba..

Naina laal mirch le aai..Baba ne havan ki aag me Mirchi roast kia..aur us mirch ko Raj k naak k niche pakda..

Raj--haanchhheeiiiii..haanchhheeiiiii..this is..haanchhheeiiiii..


Baba--pret bahut shaktishaali hai..

Raj--aap bhagie..varna meri shakti ka andaza nahi hai aapko..aisa punch marunga..khatia khadi ho jaayegi..Abhi..bhaga yaar..

Abhi--hello..Babajee..chalie..tamasha khatam..dakshina main deta hoon...Raj tu saare fans on kar...dhuen ki wajah se..jaan jaa rahi hai..



Raj ne Naina ko dekha...Naina k maathe par bahut bada tilak..baal rukhe..sar pe ghunghat..

Naina puri tarha se..lag rahi thi..CHUDHAIL...






Edited by yakkudimag - 07 August 2008 at 12:46am
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Posted: 06 August 2008 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prerna1

dear 5th is over plz update it na asap a long part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzUnhappyCry


I am so sorry..kuchh kaam hi aisa aa gaya tha..sorry.Cry
prerna1 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 06 August 2008 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
that was so funny
Raj aur Naina bhi ek no ke namune hain item hain dono ke dono
plz update soonLOLLOL
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Posted: 06 August 2008 at 1:50pm | IP Logged

LOL

wowww, kya mast update hai....
 
bechari naina, apne hi jaal mein phas gayi and her change of belief abt astrology is hilatious......
LOL
 
awesome
 
Shaina_b IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 06 August 2008 at 3:37pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina roh rahi hai!!!!Confused Confused Confused ConfusedO God!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Raj Naina ki pasand ki cheezon ki shopping kar raha hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueFinally usko akal aa gayi!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveHow sweet!!!Smile Smile Smile Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed

Naina ne yeh sab dekhkar bhi galat samjha aur Raj bhool hi gaya!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveO no!!!! Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove

Naina bhi kya kya sochne lagi hai!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedRaj ne finally Naina ke baare mein sochke locket utar diya aur Naina hai ki aisi superstitious baatein soch rahi hai!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Naina ab Buajee ko phone kar rahi hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueNaina ab unki baat maan kar puja karne lagi!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLYeh toh sab kuch ulta ho raha hai!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Naina ko ab apna pati chahiye!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Approve Approve Approve Approve

Bhagwaanjee ne bhi kya idea diya!!!!Clap Clap Clap ClapNaina se jasoos banne ka!!!!Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFLHey Bhagwaan!!!Confused Confused Confused Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked

Akriti ne sahi kaha!!Smile Smile SmileYeh ho kya raha hai!!!!Confused Confused ConfusedNaina aisi ho gayi!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked O God!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy

O God!!!Tongue Tongue TongueRaj ke naak ke niche laal mirch!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL Bechara Raj!!!!Smile Smile 

Accha huya Raj ne ush Baba ko bhaaga diya!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveThis was too funny!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFLROFL ROFL ROFL

Naina ab chudail lag rahi hai!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL

In dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueDono hi item hai!!!Smile Smile Smile LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

 

Mahak Sinha IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 07 August 2008 at 12:00am | IP Logged

Superb update Anu,Clap

Just too good.Star

Naina ab Raj k liye kya kya kar rahi hai aur pehle khud hi Raj ko apne se door kar rahi thi.Wink
Sach me maan gaye ki dono vakaki me pati patni hain.LOL
isiliye un ki qualities aapas me transfer ho rahi hain.LOLLOLLOL
Naina ko jo accha lagta tha ab Raj vo kar raha hai.WinkWinkWink
Raj ko jo accha lagta hai vo Naina kar rahi hai par doosri tarah se.Wink
dono unqiue piece hain.Tongue
Naina Raj ko seedhe se batyegi nahi ki vo pragnent hai.Angry
Raj bhi sach nahi baytega Naina ko ki Netra Naina hi hai.Angry
Saara saaman khareed k lane k baad Raj ko bhi yaad nahi tha aur Naina to hai hi kamaal.LOL
Ab buva ji se baat ho rahi hai ki batiye kya kare.Confused
My god kya comic pooja tha.LOL
too funny.LOL
update soon.


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 07 August 2008 at 12:07am

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