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Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 (Page 24)

Mahak Sinha IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 21 July 2008 at 3:07am | IP Logged

Poor rj bechare ki kismat hi kharab hai.Awesome update

Us ko jo bhi mila sab k sab maha nautanki.
Aur Abhi un sab me sab se uper hai.
Kya mirch k pakude hain.
update soon.

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Posted: 23 July 2008 at 8:48am | IP Logged
hi anu,
       i have also read this fic........ aur yeh toh ekdum hi dangerous fic hai.... all 4 looks mad to me.... waise tumne unka pagalpan aache se describe kiya hai... well lrl mai bhi naina toh jiddi thi he par raj he is too much different over here....... great fic.... ud soon
bye
kads
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Posted: 23 July 2008 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
The update was as usual greatClap.
So now even Naina wants some reaction from Raj.good!!
Raj wants to put up an advertisementConfused.
Yeh kabhi nahin badlega!!
God!!give him some brainsLOL
EimenEnchanted Goldie
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Posted: 24 July 2008 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
hey. az bohot din ke baad maine ye ff pada. Abhi mujhe samajh nehi araha main hasu ya na hasu. Hasi to mujhe inki harkato pe aarahi hai aur raj ke ideas pe itna ajib lagraha hai ke hasi bhi ruk jati hai..fir aur jyada hasi ati hai... LOL ... Ye log agar animated cartoons hote to behtar hota.. Kya fultoo pagal characters hai!!

Edited by Nishttha - 27 July 2008 at 8:38am
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sorry...



Edited by Nishttha - 27 July 2008 at 8:37am
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 July 2008 at 9:26am | IP Logged
subha jab Naina uthi..tab uske saamne Raj baitha tha...

Naina ankhe ragadne lagi..Raj muskura raha hai...uske haath me cup hai..jisme chai hai...

Naina ne socha uska sapna hai yeh..Raj aur uske lia chai lekar aayega?nahi..kabhi nahi...

Naina baithi rahi..gol gol ankhe bana kar...


Raj--chai peeni hai na?

Naina--main apne lia bana lungi...


Raj--main laya hoon..pee lo na..


Naina ne shak bhari nigahon se Raj ko dekha..itna kyon insist kar raha hai?chai me kuchh milaya toh nahi?

Naina ne chai ka cup haath me lia..aur chai ko check karne lagi...

Raj ne dekha Naina ko....Naina Raj par shak kar rahi hai...Raj ne chai ka cup uske haatho se le lia...


Naina--kyaa hua?

Raj ne ek sip lia chai ka...aur bola,"dekh lo..chai me kuchh nahi milaya hai maine..tum pee sakti ho.."

Naina--maine aisa toh nahi kaha..

Raj--lo peeo...


Naina chai peene lagi....


Raj--main soch raha tha..kai dino se...k hum kahi ghumne chale..

Naina ki ankhe aur gol ho gai...

Raj--main janta hoon..tumhari ankhe bahut khubsurat hai..mujhe bar bar dikhane ki zaroorat nahi hai..ab bolo.. chalna hai k nahi...


Naina--kaha jana hai?

Raj--tum bolo..tumko kaha jana hai..jaha tum jana chaho...

Naina ki ankhe aur badi ho nahi paa rahi hai..par uska shak aur bhi badh gaya...yeh Raj itna badla badla sa kyon lag raha hai??daal me kala hai kuchh..nahi puri ki puri daal hi kaali hai...

ab jo Raj ne kia..woh toh Naina k soch k baahar hi hai...

Raj ne Naina ko kas k gale laga lia..aur usko chumne laga...Naina ka chehra pura Raj k pappion se bhar gaya, Raj chhod hi nahi raha hai...Naina ko...Naina ko bhi achha lag raha hai...Raj ka aisa karna...woh bhi response karne lagi...

Raj ne aur kas k Naina ko hug kia...aur bola..."I am so happy Naina..finally ..I am going to be a father..."

yeh sun kar Naina ko jhatka laga...usne Raj jhatak kar door kar dia..

Naina--yeh tum kyaa bol rahe ho?tum baap bannewale ho?kaise?

Raj(man hi man)--iska main kyaa karoon?ab bhi jhoot bol rahi hai..hey bhagwan...akal jab bat rahi thi..yeh kaha gai thi?

Raj ki ankhe chamak rahi hai..meaningful look de raha hai Naina ko..

par Naina confused ho gai..yeh ho kyaa raha hai..Akriti to batayegi nahi..naa hi Naina ne usko bataya hai..fir Raj baap kaise banne wala hai??

Raj k saath reh kar..Naina bhi sidhi tarha soch nahi sakti....usko yeh shak hua..k zaroor Raj k saath kisi aur ka chakkar chal raha hai...aur wahi ladki Raj ki wajah se pregnant hai....


Naina ne apna gala saaf kia...aur boli.."congrats..tumko hi bachcha chahie tha..I am very happy for you...main toh tumko divorce de hi rahi hoon..jitni jaldi ho sake.. usse shaadi kar lena..baad me koi problem nahi honi chahie..aakhirkar us ladki ki zindagi ka sawal hai.."

Raj jaise saathve aasmaan se geera..yeh Naina kyaa bol rahi hai?

par Raj ne socha...k ..Naina k saath thoda mazak kia jaaye...


Naina--ladki ka naam kyaa hai?

Raj--Netra..Netra Raghuraman...

Naina--tum kab mile?usse?

Raj--6 maheene pahle...

Naina(man hi man)--kameena..yeha mujhse pyaar ki baatein kar raha tha..aur yeh..main maar dalungi us Netra ko..

Raj(man hi man)--arre..isko hua kyaa hai..main isko gale laga raha hoon..aur isko kiss kar raha hoon..aur yeh..hey bhagwan..main kyaa karoon?


Naina--waise..kaha mile tum usse?

Raj--tum mujhe roz kamre se baahar nikaal deti thi..aur main raste me tahelne k lia chala jata tha..aur wahi par mujhe Netra mili..she is a nice girl..


Raj yeh muh se bol raha hai..aur man me soch raha hai..."arre saale break maar..kyaa bol raha hai...jhoot par jhoot bol raha hai..aise toh woh bhaag hi jaayegi..."

Naina(man hi man)--aur nikaal isko room se...main kyaa karoon?are..main toh sochti thi..yeh guest room me soya rehta tha..par yeh toh kisi aur k saath...oohh GOD.... help me....main kitni badi gadhi hoon......

Raj ne shuruat achhi ki thi..par..golmal ho gaya...Naina ne ulta samajh lia..kyaa ulti khopdi ki ladki hai...!!

 Raj khud bahut bada gadha hai,sidhi tarike se Naina ko bata sakta tha..k Naina k pregnancy k bare me woh jaan chuka hai..par nahi..insaan ka nature itni aasaani se change nahi hota..

Naina bathroom gai..aur wahi par baith kar rone lagi...

Raj baitha raha bed par...

dono ab tak ek dusre ko koste rahte the..ab dono khud ko hi kos rahe hain...

aaj jaake dono ne realise kia..k dono hi..afval darje k idiots hain..

par Raj ne raita faila dia..Netra kyon bataya...aur Naina aur Netra..ek meaning hai..par yeh ladki samjhe toh na? zara sa akal ka istemal karne me kyaa jata hai uska??


Naina bathroom se nikli....uske chehre se pata hi nahi chalta..k uske pati ne aisa karnama kia hai..she is too normal..too cool.

Raj--main Office chala..kaam bahut hai..

Naina--ok..main Akriti se milne jaa rahi hoon...aaj...


Raj--chalo..Office jaate waqt ..main tumko chhod deta hoon..

Naina --thik hai....

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Raj aur Abhimanyu Office me baithe hain...

Abhi ne pura case suna..


Abhi--tu usko sidhe sidhe nahi bol sakta...k tu jaan chuka hai?


Raj--arre..usne sawal hi is tarha se puchha...


Abhi--sawal jo bhi puchhe..tune aisa bawal kyon kia? akal ghaas charne gai hai teri?sala..main sun kar khush ho raha tha..k Naina pregnant hai..aur tune sara mamla gadbad kar dia..tum dono normal tarike se kuchh soch nahi sakte..hai na?


Raj--arre..yaar..ho gai ghalati....

Abhi--main baat karoon ?Naina se?

Raj--kyaa faida?woh toh..aur hi aasmaan me udh rahi hai..ultimately usko bahana mil gaya mujhko chhod kar jaane ka...

Abhi--tera kyaa hoga?yaar..ek baat bata..tum dono ne ab tak ek dusre k saath kaise nibha lia?


Raj--pata nahi..


Abhi--tune raita pura faila dia hai...aur woh sab bakwas karne ki kyaa zaroorat thi?

Raj--tu kuchh idea de..

Abhi--main kyaa boloon?

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udhar Akriti k saamne Naina gala faadh k ro rahi hai...


Naina--main toh loot gai Akriti...mera pati..kisi aur k bachche ka baap hai..kameeni saali...


Akriti--arre yeh gaali kisko de rahi hai?

Naina--us Netra ko..

Akriti--tu mili hai usse?

Naina--aaj hi Raj se malum pada hai uska naam...main kyaa karoon?

Akriti--tujhe toh khush hona chahie..Raj se tera pichha chhoot raha hai...finally...

Naina--nahii..main aisa nahi chaahti thi...

Akriti--tu Raj ko kamre se nikaal degi..toh woh bhi insaan hai..


Naina--insaan hai..yaa chhutta saand hai..kahi par bhi singh marta firega..uuuhhhh ..aahhhh...uuuuuuuu..main kyaa karoon?

Akriti--rona bandh kar sab se pahle..

Naina--meri toh kismat hi kharab..


Akriti--tune khud hi bigada hai sab kuchh...achha..Raj ko pata hai ??k..tu.....

Naina--arre ..aaj jab usne mujhe gale lagaya ..aur bola k woh baap bannewala hai..tab mujhe bhi laga k usko pata chal chuka hai..par nahi..woh us kameeni Netra k lia khush ho raha tha..chullu bhar paani laa ..mere lia... mujhe usime doob marna hai..uuuuuuuua aaaaa aaaa aaaa.. aaaah hhh ..eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee..

Akriti--tu toh Raj se pyaar hi nahi karti hai..fir kyon ro rahi hai..

Naina--he is my husband... aaaaaaaaaaaaauuuuuu uuu uuuuuuu uuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeggggg.....

Akriti--husband toh pahle bhi tha..ab jaake tujhe samajh me aya hai?jaisi karni..waisi bharni...

Naina--kuchh idea de...

Akriti--main kyaa bolu?

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shaam ko jab Naina ghar par lauti..tab bedroom me gai..usne dekha..kamre me do bade bade poster lage hai..cute babies k..

Naina(man hi man)--kitna besharam hai..mere pith pichhe raasleela..aur ab yeh...

Raj aya.."arre..tum kab aai..?"


Naina--abhi abhi..main khana khaa k aai hoon..tum khana khaa lena...

Naina TV dekhne chali gai...aur aaj hi Serial me dikha raha hai..Heroine ka Pati Vamp k saath bhaag gaya hai...




Edited by yakkudimag - 28 July 2008 at 9:27am

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Posted: 28 July 2008 at 2:52pm | IP Logged
Chalo!!Good news Naina ko samajh mein a gaya what she wants.Tongue
A very nice update dear.Truly mind blowingClap
Raj to kabhi nahi sudhar sakta.LOL
Thank u so much for this rocking update.
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Posted: 28 July 2008 at 2:58pm | IP Logged

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Raj Naina ke liye subah subah chaye laya!!!!!Approve Approve Approve Approve ApproveHow sweet!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile

Naina bhi naa pehle sochti hai kahi yeh sapna toh nahi aur phir Rj par shaque kar rahi hai ke kahi kuch milaya toh nahi!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL 

Raj usko ghumane le jana chahta hai!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileWaah kya development hai Raj mein!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Approve Approve Approve Approve 

Raj romantic ho gaya!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueNaina ko bhi accha lag raha hai!!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkHaaiiiii!!!!!Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed 

Raj ne finally kaha ke he is happy that he is going to be a father!!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile SmileAur Naina ko jhatka laga!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL 

Naina bhi naa!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked ShockedUlta hi sochegi!!!!!Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove Disapprove DisapproveYeh soch rahi hai ke Raj ko kissi aur se baccha hone wala hai!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWaah!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL 

Ab Raj mazak karne laga!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueKisi Netra ko paida kiya!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkO God!!!!!!Shocked Shocked Shocked LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Ab usse lekar lambi lambi phek raha hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

Naina khud ko kosh rahi hai aur ab bathroom mein jake rone lagi!!!!!Shocked Shocked Smile Smile SmileO God!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueInka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Dono wakai afval darje ke idiots hai!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLNaina Netra ka meaning nahi samjhi!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueThat it is a metaphor for Naina!!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink

Abhi ne sahi kaha!!!!Approve Approve Approve ApproveRaj ne pura raita faila diya!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL

Naina Akriti ke paas aake roh rahi hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueWoh akhir chahti kya hai!!!!!Confused Confused Confused Confused

Usne kaha ke woh aisa nahi chahti!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink WinkAur Netra ko gaali de rahi hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL

Naina ko ab jake realise huya ke Raj uska pati hai!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Smile Smile Smile Smile

Abhi aur Akriti dono hi kehte hai ke main kya bolu!!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueInke khayal aur baatein kitne milte julte hai!!!!Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOLKya jodi hai dono ki!!!!!Wink Wink Wink LOL LOL LOL LOL Clap Clap Clap LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL

Raj ne apne kamre mein cute babies ke poster lagaya hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueHow cute!!!!Smile Smile Smile Smile Smile

Poor Naina!!!!Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy Unhappy UnhappySerial mein bhi wahi ho raha hai!!!!Tongue Tongue Tongue Tongue TongueVamp heroine ke pati ko lekar bhaag gayi!!!!!!LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL

 



Edited by Shaina_b - 28 July 2008 at 3:26pm

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