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Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 (Page 2)

Shaina_b IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
Ha ha ha ha!!!!Very funny LOL LOL !!!!

Loved this!!!!Akriti kya ladki hai!!!!

Naina ne usse tips lene ka nahi socha???

And that dialogue reminded me of Khichdi serial in which it was "Khana la rahi ho ya bahar se mangwaloo?"

Waise Naina bhi kuch kam nahi hai!!!!

Par ek baat naak pe sindoor ka matlab toh yeh hota hai na ke pati bahut pyaar karta hai Confused !!!

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Posted: 12 May 2008 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
wowwwwww yaar
superb
too funny LOL
loved the update
u rocked
Clap
waiting for u'r next update
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 3:15am | IP Logged

Raj office ja raha hai...Abhi to kisi hotel me jake chhup gaya hai..

Raj office pahucha..

koi khaas appointment bhi nahi hai..

Raj apne cabin me baitha hai..


kuchh purani baatein yaad aa rahi hai..

2000..August 18..

Hayyat me fashion show..Abhimanyu aur Rajveer k paas bhi invitation aya tha..

show k bad party...ek nai designer k kaam ki kaafi taarif hui hai

Naina Sareen...Supermodel Akriti Mehra ki dost ..dost se zada bahen..

Abhimanyu to Akriti k lia hi aya tha..

Raj ko Abhi ki maa ne bheja tha..ta k Abhi us Akriti se zada chipak na sake... Akriti ko zara bhi pasand nahi karti hai Abhi ki maa..

Raj gaya..Raj..pahle bhi itna hi khadoos..

adhe adhe kapdo me models ko dekh kar usko zara bhi khushi nahi hui..

Abhi--Hey Raj..bata..kaun si ladki pasand hai tujhe inme se..

Raj--koi bhi nahi..chal yeha se..

Abhi--hey Raj abhi to aye hai..

Raj--thik hai..main khuchh peene k lia lata hoon..aur tu jaa..us Akriti k pichhe..

Raj counter me aya.."taquila.."

"one Gin please.."

Raj ne dekha..yeh to wahi designer hai..jiska collection ramp me dikhaya gaya..kyaa naam hai iska? Haa..Naina Sareen...

Raj--hello..

Naina--hiii..

Raj--your designs..cool..

Naina--thanks..

aise me ek Page 3 ki reporter aai..aur dono ko saath me capture kia..camera me..

Reporter--Mr. Shekhawat..kya Vs Enterprises bhi soch raha hai fashion ki dunia me entry lene k bare me?

Raj--well..garments to hum banate hi hai..aur abhi tak aisa kuchh socha nahi hai..aur main apne dost k sath aya hoon party me..

Reporter--Ms. Sareen..aapka pahla show itna kamyab raha..age kyaa karne ka irada hai?

Naina--dekhiye..main koi professional to hoon nahi..yuh hi ek din sketches bana rahi thi..aur Akriti ne bola k inko ramp par utaaro..maine utaar dia..bas.. age kuchh socha nahi..

Reporter--so amature designer?

Naina--yaa..almost..

Reporter--aap dono sath me..kya hum soch le k Shekhawat and Vij k agle venture aap bhi sath hongi?

Naina--main inko janti tak nahi..aapse hi inka naam pata chala..aur aap to teer chhodne lagi..

Raj ko hichki lagi..yeh ladki usko nahi jaanti!!

Raj ko jhatka laga..aur jhatke ne uski drink geera di..Naina k dress k upar..

Naina--You are disgusting..

Naina chali gai...

ek to Page 3 reporter k samne itni beizzati..upar se Naina se kharikhoti..Raj ki sulagh gai..

Abhi aya...

Raj--Akriti se mila..

Abhi--nahi..Maa ne itna kuchh bol dia hai usko..mujhse baat hi nahi karna chaahti..

Raj--achhi baat hai..

Abhi--abe tu dost hai yaa rakshas...tujhe khushi hoti hai..

Raj--chhod de na uska pichha..

Abhi--mujhe lecture de raha hai..aur us ladki se kyaa khusur phusur kar raha tha?


Raj--kaun..woh ladki..koi nahi..bas aise hi..

Abhi--beta main sab samajhta hoon..tu hai tharki..par sab k samne show off aise karta hai k Bhishma ki tarha tune bhi kasam li hai..shadi na karne ki..yaa kisi par line na marne ki..


Raj--tharki??main tharki??

Abhi--haa..pahle darje ka tharki..chal chalte hai yeha se..Akriti ja chuki hai..

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"Sir,Sir..woh Mr. Mehta aye hain.."

Raj--ooohh..haa..unko bhejo andar..


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udhar Akriti k ghar...

Naina--tum log yeh karte rahte ho??iska koi matlab nikalta hai kya?

Akriti--are Abhi isi layak hai..

Naina--aisa hai to usse shadi kyon ki?

Akriti--us waqt sahi laga..

Naina--aur is chakkar me meri shadi Raj se ho gai...meri to zindagi barbad ho gai...tum dono ki shadi ho isi lia maine Raj se shadi ki thi..aur ab tum dono hi..shit....

Akriti--tu talak de de Raj ko...aur Jateen k paas chali jaa..Sydney..

Naina--jaise woh mere lia baitha hai..abhi tak..shadi ho gai uski shayad..

Akriti--are ek bar usko phone to kar..

Naina--yeh koi solution hai kya?

Akriti--mera aur Abhi ka rishta jude isi lia tune Raj se shadi ki..ab jab humara rishta nahi hai..tab tu bhi..

Guddu paas hi me khel raha tha..

Naina--achha hain..humara koi bachcha nahi hua..

Akriti--agar hota ..to tum log itna jhagadte nahi..on the second thought...itna jhagda hota hai ..isi lia tum logo ka koi bachcha nahi hua..


Naina--humare bare me charcha baad me karna..abhi yeh socho k Abhi bhaiya ko kaise wapas laya jaye..

Akriti--jaha hai wahi rahe..main maafi nahi mangne wali usse..

Naina--good..that is the spirit..


phone baja..Naina ne kaha,"agar Raj phone kare to mat bolna k main yeha hoon."

Raj ne hi phone kia tha..

Akriti--haa..kaun..Raj??haa..nahi..Naina to yeha nahi aai hai..anewali thi..nahi yeha nahi aai..


phone cut ho gaya..


Naina ka mobile baja..

Naina--hello..

Raj--kaha ho tum?

Naina--Akriti k ghar pe..main aaj raat ghar nahi lautungi..ok..bye..

Akriti--tujhe Raj ko istarha satane me maza ata hai kya?

Naina--haa..

Raj sochne laga..sari raat kaha rahegi?Akriti k ghar to nahi gai..to kya.. nahiiiiiiiiiiiii...Raj teri izzat loot jayegi..are jiski biwi raat bhar kisi gair k saath rahe..uski to thoo thoo ho jati hai..mar gaye..



Edited by yakkudimag - 06 August 2008 at 11:50am

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sania_58 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 3:23am | IP Logged
awsome update di
too good Clap
fantastic
waiting for u'r next update
Shaina_b IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 9:23am | IP Logged

Too good!!!!

Naina Raj ko aise satati hai!!! LOL LOL

Raj aur Naina aise milethe!!!Woh mile thhe..... Uun mile thhe..... bas aur ab aage ka mat poochna ke kyun mile thhe LOL !!!!!

Akriti and Naina were too good!!!!

Par haan agar Raj aur Naina ka ek baccha hota toh shayad halat aise na hote!!!!!




 



Edited by Shaina_b - 13 May 2008 at 9:39am
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 9:30am | IP Logged
wow..tumko pasand aya..gr8
Originally posted by Shaina_b

Too good!!!!

Naina Raj ko aise satati hai!!! LOL LOL

Raj aur Naina aise milethe!!!Woh mile thhe..... Uun mile thhe..... bas aur ab aage ka mat poochna ke kyun mile thhe LOL !!!!!

Akriti and Naina were too good!!!!


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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 10:09am | IP Logged
both the parts were just terrific.... Tongue Clap kya likha hai aapne.....its mindblowing ff.... Clap suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb....dialogues were outstanding...thanku soo much di for these hilarious and interesting updates....
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 May 2008 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
roz update nahi hoga..har alternate day me ek fic ka update hoga..mere vital exams hai May aur June me.
Originally posted by quietrajpri1623

both the parts were just terrific.... Tongue Clap kya likha hai aapne.....its mindblowing ff.... Clap suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb....dialogues were outstanding...thanku soo much di for these hilarious and interesting updates....

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