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great update as usualClap.Both Naina and Raj are simply impossible.
update soonTongue.
take care.

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superb updt!!! LOL

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Anu ud kar na.

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Akriti--yaar..tu usko chup rahne ko bol sakti thi.. par usko hanger fek k maarne ki kyaa zaroorat thi?agar uske ankho me lag jaati to?

Naina--achha hota.....man kar raha tha..uska muh see doon..din raat bakwas karta rehta hai..

Akriti--arre aisa nahi kahte.

Naina--tujhe sunni chahie thi uski..bakwas....din raat kabhi stone..kabhi muhurat..kabhi lucky colour ..kabhi unlucky day..

Akriti--arre..har koi ek jaisa nahi hota...alag alag type hota hai..

Naina--par yeh kaisa type hai?21st century me..

Akriti--isi century me Hero Heroine log numerology k hisaab se apna autograph dete hai..tab tujhe problem nahi hoti..sirf is lia k Raj tera pati hai.. tujhe gussa kyon hai?

Naina--listen..woh ek baat hai..tujhko malum hai..k kitne colour k dresses main pahen hi nahi sakti aajkal?

Akriti--what?

Naina--haa..Violet..Purlple,Mehgani..sab ..jaa chuka  hai..mere list se..Raj ki wajah se..

Akriti--this is real trouble..

Naina--aur nahi to kyaa...?yaar..din raat isi jhamele me ..dimaag sad gaya hai...

jab Akriti aur Naina yeh baatein kar rahe

tab Abhimanyu gaya tha..ek party me..

uske kuchh dost le gaye the usko..aur jahapar yeh party ho rahi thi..woh ek Dance Bar tha..

achanak waha par Police ki raid...

aur Abhimanyu gaya lock up me...

Raj k mobile par phone...Abhi hawalat ki hawa khaa raha hai..

Akriti--Oh my God...

Naina dauri..Police Station me..

Inspector Matre--aap kaun?

Naina--main Naina Sareen Shekhawat..

Inspector--par yeh Porga(marathi me Porga ka matlab hota hai ladka) to Abhimanyu Vij hai..aap ho Sareen Shekhawat..chakkar kyaa hai?

Naina--shut up...

Matre--waah....pahle chikna pakda jata hai Dance Bar me...fir usko chhoodane aati hai..ek aisi ladki.. jo uski Biwi nahi..sahi jaa rahe ho Bappu..

Naina--inki Biwi meri bahen hai..jo ki pregnant hai.. itna stress nahi le paati.. isi lia main aai hoon.. main khud bhi  shaadi shuda hoon..mere pati ka naam hai Rajveer Singh Shekhawat..naam to suna hi hoga aapne..

Matre-- ..bhai Naidu....le aa chikne ko...aur uske kapde de usko..

Naina--kyaa matlab?Abhi ne kapde nahi pahene hai?

Matre--nahi Madamjee...jab raid hua tab is chikne ko humne chaddi me arrest kia..

Naina--whattttt?

Naina itni shocked kabhi nahi hui..

Abhi ko laayaa gaya..Abhi tab bhi chaddhi me tha.. aur Hawaldar k haath me.. uski wrist watch aur kapde the...

Abhi sar jhooka k khada tha....

Naina ne kuchh nahi bola...

Abhi ne kapde pahne aur Naina k saath car me baitha...

jab Naina Abhi ko lekar ghar pahuchi..tab tak... Inspector Matre ne Raj ko phone kar k sab bata dia tha...yeh Matre aur Raj ka ankda 36 ka hai...ek baar inka jhamela hua tha signal todne k mamle me..

Matre ne socha k Raj ko zara jali kati sunai jaaye..

Raj ne phone uthaya..

Matre--Namaste Shekhawat Saab...me Matre bol te..Inspector Matre..

Raj--kahiye..kya takleef hai aapko?

Matre--nahi..mujhe kyaa...aapka rishtedar  Abhimanyu.. dance Bar me chaddi me pakda gaya.. aur aap hi ki Biwi usko chhodane aai..mamla kyaa hai??

Raj--shut up...you..

Matre--mujhe gaali dekar kyaa hoga?apni Biwi par lagaam khicho..

Matre ne Phone cut kar dia..

Akriti--kiska phone tha?

Raj--Police Station se Inspector ka..

Akriti--kyaa bataya usne?

Raj--tumhara pati chaddi me pakda gaya hai Dance Bar me..

Akriti--kyaaa?

Raj--haa..kaisi shaadi nibha rahe ho tum dono?tum yeha pregnant ho..aur Abhi waha ..chaddi me.. Dance  Bar me??chheee..

Akriti--aaj uski khabar leti hoon..

Raj--aur..mujhe Inspector Matre ne bahut kuchh suna dia...Naina ko lekar ghatia ishare kar raha tha...

thodi der baad Abhi ko lekar jab Naina ghar pahuchi..tab Raj ka muh gusse se laal tha..

Akriti k haath me danda tha...

Naina bedroom me gai..fresh hone k lia..

Abhimanyu kapda pahene hua hi tha..

Akriti ne dande ko left hand se pakda..zameen par tikaya..aur right hand se Abhimanyu ko Salam karne lagi..

Akriti--Sultan-E-Hind Janaab Chaddi Shaah ka Iqbaal Buland ho..

Raj ghabra gaya..yeh kaunsi Bhasha hai?

Abhi ko sirf Chaddi samajh me aayaa..

aur Akriti uske pichhe danda lekar pad gai...

Abhi--dauro mat..arre..tumhare lia daurna thik nahi... please..main rukta hoon..Akku..suno..

Akriti--saale tharki..main sochti thi..k tune sirf mujh  par hi line mara hai..par abhi tu idhar udhar bhi muh maar raha hai..kameene..

aise me Naina neeche aai..

usne Akriti ko pakad lia.."kyaa kar rahi ho didi?"

Akriti--isko peet rahi hoon..tujhe dikhai nahi deta.. mujhe pregnant bana k chala hai kisi aur k saath aish karne...

Raj--Naina..dono ko ladne do..tum mere paas baitho..baat karni hai...

Akriti aur Abhimanyu abhi jhagad rahe hai..

Raj aur Naina k ghar me...

Naina--bolo..kyaa baat hai?

Raj--Inspector Matre ne koi badtamizee to nahi ki?

Naina--ghatia baatein suna raha tha..k Abhimanyu chaddi me pakda gaya hai..Bar Girls k saath..aur abhi jo uski zamanat karane gai..woh bhi uski Biwi nahi hai..aise hi fizul ki baatein..

Raj--tumne jab Abhi ko dekha..tab..

Naina--Abhi ko jab lock up se nikala gaya..tab woh chaddi me hi tha...aur uske kapde hawaldar k haath me the..

Raj--par..Bar me Abhi ne kapde utaar die?

Naina--as if main Bar me thi..akal ka istemaal karo..

Raj--is Matre se..mera ankda kuchh thik nahi hai.. ek baar maine signal tod dia tha..tabhi mujhe Matre ne hirasat me lia tha..

Abhi chilla raha hai..

Abhi--arre meri baat suno...Akku..pahle baat sun lo...tum chaaho to Deven se baat kar lo..

Akriti--Deven to aur bhi zada tharki hai..woh to tumhare favour me hi bolega...

Abhi--arre..mujhko unlogone kaha k..dinner saath me karna hai...maine tumko phone bhi kia tha..k Naina k saath khana khaa lena..kia tha k nahi?

Akriti--haa..lekin Dance Bar me?

Abhi--arre..mujh se kaha gaya..k ab Bar hai..Dance nahi hota waha par..main gaya dinner karne...aur andar jaakar dekhta hoon..k sab Item log thoomke laga rahi hai..

Akriti--what a nasty language..chheee..

Abhi--main waha se nikal kar aana chaahta tha.. par..sab ne rok lia..fir hum khana khane baithe... fir thoda bahut ..you know..drink bhi kia...udhar Deven Dancers par paise fekne laga...aur main..

Akriti--Dancers k saath thoomka lagane lage..right?

Abhi--arre...waha k khane me kuchh gadbad tha... mujhe Number 2 ..zor se lagi...main gaya..

Akriti--whatt??

Abhi--haa..zor ki lagi thi..emergency..main gaya waha k toilet me...

Raj--aur tune kapde utaar die??bina kapde utaar k nahi kar sakta tha??

Abhi--Akriti se pucchle...mujhe in sab me kitni safai pasand hai...kapde pahen k Number 2 karna.. I can't even think about it..isi lia..kapde utaar k maine taang die hook par..kaam ho bhi gaya tha.. haath pair dhoke..jab main shirt pahenne hi wala tha..Hawaldar ne dhakka dekar darwaza tod dia.. tab main sirf chaddi me tha..aur mujhe kapde pahenne ka mauka tak nahi dia... chaddi me hi arrest kia..yakeen na ho to Deven se puchh..yaa fir..us Hawaldar ko puchh sakta hai..jisne mujhe pakda tha..

Akriti--Raj..yeh sahi bol raha hai..iske aise nakhre jhel jhel k main pareshaan ho gai hoon..ek din hum baahar gaye..waha ka toilet use kia..aur isne liquid soap ka bottle wahi chhod dia...paper soap dhundha  par mila nahi.. isi lia liquid soap ka ek bottle kharida par yeh janaab itne bade bottle ko andar hi chhod aaye..

Raj--kyon??

Akriti--inka yeh logic tha..k baahar toilet k andar se koi bhi chees wapas nahi laayega woh..bahut saare Germs honge usme...

Raj--isi lia itna bada liquid soap ka bottle..

Akriti--haa..

Naina abhi tak chup thi...ab usne muh khola...

Naina--to Akriti..tujhko to ..Abhi ko bhi bathroom me fek ana tha..kyonki toilet k andar woh bhi to gaye the..baahar ka toilet..

Naina ne bahut serious tone me yeh baat kahi..par Raj hansne laga..zor zor se..hanste hanste Raj sofa se geera...

aur "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu"

Raj chillaya..usko fir se chot lag gai thi...

Naina usko uthane gai..aur puchha,"achha Matre ne tum ko remand me lia..tumne signal toda...par tumne signal kyon toda..30 minute baad pahuchne se kyaa fark padta?

Raj--uske baad Rahoo Kaalaam tha..isi lia..

Naina--haa..aur shubh muhoorat me tum gaye hawalat..waah...

Naina ne Raj ko wahi patak dia..

Raj ne fir se chillaya, "haaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii..Abhi bacha..."

Abhi ne uthaya Raj ko....

 

 



Edited by yakkudimag - 29 October 2008 at 4:47pm

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ROFL
too funny yaar Clap Clap Clap fantastic ud Clap Clap

yakkudimag

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 9:49am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Nishttha

ROFL
too funny yaar Clap Clap Clap fantastic ud Clap Clap

 

thanks a lot..

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 10:40am | IP Logged
LOL arre yaar ye naina ki bacchi kab mere raj ko maarna chode gi?????????????????????bechaaara kab se adhmara hua paraa hai.... Cry par tumhe nhin lagta ki iss fic mein romantic scenes ki kami hoti jaa rahi hai??? Wink

riyaa_1985

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Posted: 23 June 2008 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
the updateis simply superbThumbs UpThumbs Upand mind blowingClapClapClap.Oh my God!!has,has ke main pagal ho jaungi ROFL.
ExcellentClap
God bless u.
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