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Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 (Page 15)

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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
finally, i love u to bola. Varna iss baat pe hi uska muh atak jata hai. LOL LOL
ud soon.

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2002..May..

Naina bahut pareshaan hai..Jateen se baat nahi ho pa rahi hai..

khas kar jis din se Jateen gaya hai Raj ki office se..

aisa nahi Jateen k sath Naina ka koi ghalat rishta hai..par ek hi jhatke me Jateen ko apni zindagi se alag kar dia Naina ne..not as lover..but as a friend.. Naina ko Jateen se milna hai...sare jhamele me Jateen sab se zada dukhi hai..

Naina ko milna hai Jateen se..at any cost..

Raj yeh baat bhaanp gaya hai..k Naina kisi bhi tarha Jateen se milne ki koshish zaroor karegi..

Naina ko zada se zada project ka incharge bana dia usne..infact Raj se zada meetings to Naina ki hoti hai ajkal..

Naina pak chuki hai..tarha tarha k logo se mil k..harek kisam k clients se mil k..

kaam me dhyaan nahi lagta uska..Jateen ka kahyal ata hai...

achanak Akriti usko yeh khabar sunati hai..k Jateen ko ek din dekha tha usne.. hospital k paas..Jateen k hath me plaster tha..

Naina darr gai..

2002,13th May..

office me bahut kaam...Naina bahar jaa hi nahi sakti..

achanak Raj ko phone aayaa..usko abhi stock checking k lia jana hoga...

30 minute k andar Raj lautne wala hai...

Naina mauka dekh kar nikal gai...

sidha chali gai Jateen k ghar pe..

darwaza khula tha..Naina ne dekha..Jateen k haath ka plaster nikaala jaa raha hai..

Doctor tha saath me..

Doctor Vinay Tripathi...Naina janti hai isko..Jateen ka hi dost hai..

Vinay--yaar..usdin tu mujhse milne aayaa...aur hospital me hi ghayal ho gaya..kaise fisal gaya tha tu sidhio se..raat ko zada chada li thi kya?

Jateen--haa..pichhli raat ko party bahut zada ho gai thi..

Naina ko thodi raahat mili..Raj ka kaam nahi hai..varna bahut bada bakheda khada hota..

Vinay--party kis khushi me bhai?Naina se to break up hua hai tera...aur aisa nahi k tune break up kia hai...bal ki Naina ne tujhe chhod dia us raees businessman k lia..

Jateen--jo hua achha hi hua hai shayad..and Naina ne bahut sahi kia hai.. shadi k baad bhi mujhse contact rakh k..varna uska pati..woh idiot Raj.. insecured nahi hota..aur mujhe 20 lacs nahi deta..upar se mujhe achhi si modelling ka assignment bhi dila dia usne...

Vinay--really insecured..

Jateen--haa..woh to malum tha..par ek jhatke me 20 lacs..aur Sydney jane kla bandobast..maine socha nahi tha..yaar..kisi ki biwi uske lia itni important ho sakti hai..I swear..agar Naina se meri shadi hui hoti..aur kisike saath uska rishta saabit hota..yaar..main sharafat se divorce deta..20 lacs offer nahi karta...I swear..pata nahi us Raj ne Naina me kyaa dekha..

Vinay--tu 20 lacs nahi de pata..utne ki aukaat nahi teri...arre Naina..tum?

Jateen ne pichhe dekha...

Jateen--tum kab aai?

Naina--abhi abhi..thank god aa gai...varna kaise pata chalta k meri aukaat kyaa hai tumhari nazar me..you swin...

Jateen--mujhe gaali dene se pahle apne girebaan me jhaanko..tumne kyaa kia?ek jhatke me mujhe bahar fek dia ..apni zindagi se..kyaa lagta hai tumko.. main nahi samajhta k Raj k sath tumne shaadi kyon ki,Akriti ki shaadi,karane k naam par..tumhare haath par ek bumper lottery  lagi hai..jiski tumne kalpana bhi nahi ki...us lottery ka naam main bataaoon?VS Enterprises... Rajveer Singh Shekhawat...

Naina--shut up...

Jateen--bura laga?I am not at all sorry..jo sach hai wahi kaha maine...jo status paane k lia..tumne mujhe  bahar feka apni life se...maine bhi usi Rajveer ka sahara lia..apni zindagi ko aur better banane k lia..

Naina--main jaan se maar dungi...tumko..

centre table k upar designer bottle rakhi hui thi..

Naina usko utha kar Jateen k sar par maar ne gai...

sab kuchh itna achanak hua..Vinay aur Jateen ko samhalne ka mauka nahi mila..


par ahen waqt par Naina ka haath kisine rok lia...Raj ne...

Raj Naina ko khich kar le gaya waha se...

car me bithaya..

Naina ghoom soom baithi hai...

Raj--mujhe kuchh kahna nahi chaahti tum?

Naina--apne paise k dum par..yeh sab kia..tumne

Raj--maine to fir bhi usko paise offer kie..but usne kaise le lia?tum uske lia itni hi ahmiat rakhti thi kya?

Naina--yaa...

Raj--jab office me laut kar suna k tum chali gai ho achanak..main samajh gaya..k ho na ho..tum Jateen k paas hi aaogi...khair jo bhi hua achha hua.. Jateen ka asli roop dekh lia tumne..

Naina--tumne mera pichha kia tha?you..

Raj--main isi lia aayaa tha..k kahi tum koi ghalat kaam na kar baitho..and ..jiska darr tha..wahi hua..tum bottle utha k maarne wali thi usko..main nahi aataa..to murder attempt ka charge lagta..tum par..

Naina--Jateen mujh par case nahi karta...

Raj--kyon?

Naina--aur 20 lacs de dete usko...case nahi karta...sala..suwar....

Raj--tum ko gaali bakna aata hai ?

Naina--gaali bakne k sivaye ..mujhe aur kuchh nahi aataa..sala ullu ka patthha ... kameena..

Raj--break maaro..

Naina achanak rone lagi..

"uuuuuhhhhh..aaaaahhhhhhaaaaa..eeeeeennnnnn...hhhhhuu ummm.. aaaaaaaaaa.."

Raj--ro kyon rahi ho?

Naina--bhangda karne ka occassion to hai nahi..

Naina roye jaa rahi hai...

Raj ne tissue supply kia..

ek k baad ek tissue die jaa raha hai..Naina roye jaa rahi hai..signal me car ruki...aur jam bhi hai..30 minute tak car jam me atki rahi..

aur fir har signal me red light on..lautne me 3 ghante lag gaye..

tissue ka box khali ho gaya..

3 ghante..lagaataar..Raj k kaan k paas..kaaon kaaon..kar k Naina ro rahi thi...bilagh bilagh kar..

Raj--tum me personality  naam ki koi chees  hai k nahi?ek 3rd grade ladke k lia..pichhle 3 ghante se ro rahi ho..aur mera sar khaa rahi ho..

Naina ka rona chalu

ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..eeeehhhh hhh

Raj--for a change ..please..koi aur tone try karo..mere kaan pak gaye hai..


Jateen Sydney chala gaya..

Abhi--aafat door hui...

Raj--haa..woh to hai..now..I am totally relaxed..dhyaan se kaam kar sakta hoon..

Abhi--but Naina..pure 3 ghante roti rahi?

Raj--tujhe waha hona chahie tha..yaar ..main hi jaanta hoon..k maine kaise jhela hai usko..baap re..

Abhi--hmm..shaadi ki hai tune..beta aise side effects hote hai.shaadi k..jab koi tere jaisa karnama karta hai..

Raj--maine kyaa kia?

Abhi--jo kia..woh kum hai kya?...

Raj--par woh Jateen..aaj nahi to kal..Naina ko chhod to deta..infact uska attitude hai aisa..

Abhi--tujhe usse kyaa?infact ..Naina se tera kyaa lena dena?

Raj--chhod in baato ko..

Abhi--chal khana khate hai..

Abhi aur Akriti ne Rajveer aur Naina ko dinner pe bulaya hai...

Abhi gaya Akriti  aur Naina ko bulane..

jo nazara dekha..woh bhi chauk gaya..

Raj--dekha..pichhle ek hafte se isko jhel raha hoon..

Naina yeha aake bhi ro rahi hai..

Akriti usko dilasa de rahi hai..aur tissue bhi....

Naina--Jateen..that son of a bitch...sala..beek gaya..

Akriti--ab isme tera to koi dosh nahi..

Naina--uuhhhhhhhhhhhhh..aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh...mera hi dosh hai...

Akriti--arre..yeh to achha hua k Jateen se teri shaadi nahi hui...Raj ki wajah se itna to pata chala..k Jateen tere layak nahi tha..

Naina--sab kuchh Raj ki karni ka phal hai....uuhhhh..aaahhhhh..

Raj--pichhle 7 din se yehi record main soon raha hoon...meri haalat bahut kharab hai..Abhi..kuchh kar..

Abhi--jo kuchh hua hai..tune hi kia hai..aur aage bhi jo karna hai..tujhko hi karna hai..

Raj--situation dekh kar aisa lagta hai..k isse better to yeh  hota..k Naina Jateen k saath..Extra marital affair karti..atleast din raat uska rona to nahi jhelna padta..

Naina k kaan me yeh extra marital waali baat gai...


Naina fudak kar Raj k samne aai..

Naina--kyaa kaha?Extra Marital?sure..to kyaa hua Jateen nahi hai...dunia me uske ilava aur koi nahi hai kya?

Raj--thank god..you changed your tone...


Naina ne Raj par humla kar dia..

Akriti rokne gai..

Abhi--relax..ladne do...dil ki bhadaas nikal jayegi..sara mamla nipat jayega..

Akriti--are..Naina ne murder attempt kia tha Jateen k upar..vase ya bottle se...

Abhi ne dekha..Naina ne chair utha lia,..Raj k upar..

Abhi--inko rokna chahie....Naina..nahhiiiiiii..Raj rok usko..

Raj--arre main kaise roku..main to maar khaa raha hoon..bar bar..lagaataar..

 

Akriti aur Abhimanyu ne Naina ko control kia..

fir se Naina rone lagi..."uuuuhhhhh..aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.."

Raj--ab kyaa hua?

Naina--kuchh nahi..uuuuuhhh..aaaaaaaaahhh...


Akriti--usko rone dete hai..rona khatam ho jayega..tab thik ho jayegi..

Raj--agar minister log bhaashan ki jagah..itne ansoon bahaya kare..roz..to Pani ka problem solve ho sakta hai..

Abhi--tu fir se maar khane ki taiyari kar raha hai.



Edited by yakkudimag - 06 August 2008 at 12:07pm
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
hahahahahahahahahaha...awesum one...ye Naina badi hi jaanlewa hai...Raj bechara...bhaut hi jyada funny update tha...thanks di for this marvelous
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 3:17pm | IP Logged
hahahaha ROFL

amazing superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
awesome update

naina chair uttayi raj ko maarne ke liye LOL LOL LOL

update soon Wink Wink
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Too good n too funny. LOL LOL LOL
Ye Naina ka tape recorder bhi bund nahi ho raha hai. Cry
Bechara Raj pit bhi raha hai aur pak bhi raha hai.
LOL Update soon.
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Posted: 03 June 2008 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
awesome ud yaar. Clap cont soon......
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Posted: 04 June 2008 at 7:51am | IP Logged
haha ROFL
naina to pure asia ka water prob solve karne ke liye dedicated hai LOL LOL LOL
becha raj...pit ta hua kitna cute lage ga na LOL LOL


ud soon Embarrassed
yakkudimag IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 04 June 2008 at 9:10am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Nishttha

haha    ROFL
naina to pure asia ka water prob solve karne ke liye dedicated hai LOL LOL LOL
becha raj...pit ta hua kitna cute lage ga na LOL LOL


ud soon Embarrassed
very trueROFLROFLROFL

 



Edited by yakkudimag - 04 June 2008 at 9:12am

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