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Shaadi Ka Ladoo - 5 (Page 96)

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Chiraiyya... Goldie

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Ill update ok just w8 for like 10 minz or less

Chiraiyya... Goldie

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Recap: Ridz is listening to him carefuly wid an innocent face.   
A- ab kyu aise chup chap baithi ho,kuch kehti kyu nahi.
R- wo armaan.... wo
A- wo wo kya ridhima. (now in a sincere tone) kabhi socha hai riddhima agar tumhe kuch ho jaate to mera kya
hota...arima ka kya hota.
R-crying I m sorry armaan ainda aisa kuch nai hoga.
A- chalo ab rona band karo varna mai bhi ro dunga........

Armaan den moves closer to Ridz face and kisses her tears away (how cute Embarrassed). Then to lighten  up the mood he moves down to kiss her.

R:Armaan(blushing) What are you duin. Dis is a hospital anyone can just come in.

Armaan luks behind him to see if any1 was outside the door and said

A: Well ders no one outside so dnt worry.

Ridz blushed (like always)

Armaan then moved down to kiss her and was right near to her lips when the door flung open and it was .......


Anjali had Armia in her hands.

An:Ooopz luks like i came in at the wrong time.I'll come bck

A:Yh. Now can u go. Come in after 5 minz as Riddhima is now unavailable. Thank You

R:ARMAAN. No Di stay here dont mind what Armana said he's gne abit mad today.

A:Not a bit Jaan but alot in ur love

He den luks at her lovingly and Ridz blushes.

An:Ahem ahem. Im still here u guys so u shud do ur lovey dovey talks later.

R:Dii (fake gussa)

An:Ok ok. Now bck to the important thing what happend.

R:Nuffin Di i just hurt myself no big deal.

A:No big deal? Anjali dnt listen to her i will tell you what happend.

He told Anjali what happend but he didnt include the cute and romantic bits Wink .

An:Ridzie u shud of listen to Armaan you know he knows whats best for you.

R:Di not u also. Ive already been shouted at by Armaan no u aswell

Now Ridz is upset. She crosses her arms and makes an upset and angry face.

Im contiuning in 5 minz


Edited by Prachi&Neev - 01 June 2008 at 8:40am

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thanx a lot for continuing gals...was waiting 4 a long time Big smile Big smile Big smile
Chiraiyya... Goldie

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An:Awwwww sorry my lil sis. But u know that I cant ber to see anyfing happen to you.

Anjali gives Arima to Armaan and hugs Ridz.

An:Ok ive got to go bck home now ok.

R:Wait Di shudnt you be working right now.

An:Dr Kirti let us have day off as there are no new cases and we all wanted to have day off as a break from all dis. Anywayz take care of you self.

She goes to Arima and kisses her on the cheek ( Embarrassed Aunty-Niece love) and Arima smiles at her.

An:Bye Ridz Bye Armaan. And Armaan you better take care of my little sister now or else.

A:Anjali no need to worry I have & will always take care of my Jaan.

They all say Bye and Anjali leaves the room.

Arima hadnt seen her Mum as she was too busy playing wiv Anjali and den Armaan.

A:Hmm now that Anjali has gone no-one can disturb us. So where was I.

He moved closer to her face to kiss her but Ridz stopped him.

R:Armaan. Arima is right here. Kuch to sharam karo. And give Arima to me.

Armaan gives Ridz Arima.

When Arima see's Ridz she starts crying because her Mum is hurt.(There is a bandage all the way round on her forhead so by lukin at that Arima starts crying)

R:(Talking babyish to make Arima quiet) Awwww mera bacha. Dont cry luk mumma is all better now see.

And Ridz smiles and kisses Arima's forhead and cheek making Arima stop crying and smile.

R:Now thats like my gud gal.

Armaan was luking at all of dis and admiring Ridz.

Ridz saw Armaan jsut staring at her and started to blush


He didnt move

R:Armaan (waves her hand infront of his face)

He still doesnt move

R:ARMAAN (loud enuff for Armaan to hear)

He jerks bck up and luks away scartching his head)

A: Yes my Jaan.

R:Cna we go now please. I dnt wanna stay here any longer i wanna go bck home

A:Ok lemme talk to Dr Kirti

He gets up to leave when he feels somes hand hold onto his.

Its Ridz

R:Come bck quick

A:Oye Hoye so u can live wivout me even for 1 second.
Ill cme bck quick.

He goes while Ridz is palying wiv Arima

Now lets go to Armaan

A:Hello Dr Kirti

DK:Hello Dr Armaan. Hows Ridhimma. Everything ok

A: Shes much better and everythings Ok. Actually Ridhimma wants to go home so can she go.

DK:Lemme see how she's duin and den i'll be able to see if she can go.

Dr Kirti and Armaan both go to her room and Dr Kirti checks her.

DK:Well Ridhimma your absolutely fine you can go home right now.

She gives armaan the discharge apaers to sign.He gives the papers bck

DK:Thank You. Armaan here are Ridhimma's medicines make sure she takes dem on time and by the day after 2morrow she can stop takin dem.

A:Thank you Dr Kirti.

DK:Your Welcome

She leaves

Ok i wud carry on but ive g2g. Hu eva is writing da nxt part do a romantic scene ok.


Edited by Prachi&Neev - 01 June 2008 at 8:57am

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amazin part sweeety
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Posted: 01 June 2008 at 9:08am | IP Logged

Luvely parts Aneesa!!

Thanx 4 da PM 2 hun! Really appreciate it!

Guys shud i cont. or does ne1 else want 2? I hv npz....was bord so thought of writing if sum1 has sumting better in mind....go ahead! Embarrassed

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mindblowing parts Amy, Ridhi & Aneesa
luved them

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