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Shaadi Ka Ladoo - 5 (Page 50)

SillyAngel Goldie
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
pleeasseee sweeties continue soon Embarrassed

cute14us28amy IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 8:09pm | IP Logged

Small Parttttttt  (Srryyyy......)


~Recap~

Arman match mein bahaout masgool hai so he doesn't notice dat ridhima kaha hai aur usne kuch khaya hai ki nahi?......

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Ridhima goes into a living room after 10 mins.........Saab khana wahi ka wahi pada hai Confused .........
R: Arman tum thodi der Arima ko rakh sakte hoo mujhe nahne jaana hai? Unhappy
Arman didn't hear wht Ridhima said......
A: Kya tum mujhe ek glass paani de sakti hoo? Plzz jaan?
R: ................ (Goes 2 d kitchen wid d baby in her hands)
Ridhima living room mein aati hai.......She gives him a glass of waterrrr....
R: Yeh loo......... Smile
A: (Pura mu T.V ke ander ghusa hua hai LOL) Hannn......Idhar rakh do? Table pe?
Ridhima ko aab bahout gussa aata hai.....Magar Usko Arman ke saath ladke apna aur uska mood nahi kharab karna hai toh she just leaves 4rm thereeeee (Gusse mein Angry).....
She thinks "Mein Arima ko hi pehle nehla deti hoon......."
Arman didn't notice dat Ridhima iz nt there any more........
After 40 mins......Match mein break aata haii.....Arman feels empty & he goes in d kitchennnn.....
A: Ridhima? Kahan hoo tum? Jaaannnnnnn?
Arman dekhta hai ki saab nashta udhar hi pada hai Ouch .....She didn't hv her break fast.......
A: Shocked Yeh mein ne kya kar diya? Ridhima bhooki hai aur usse khane ke zarrorat hai.....Woh baby ko feed karti hai...Toh Ussseeee?? OMG! Shocked Mujhe dhyan hi nahi raha uska?
Arman quickly runs up stairssssss.......

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Hummmmm? Toh aab fight hogi LOL My fav..... LOL Wink

Will cont. in 20 mins

Srry 4 d mistakes

Amy



Edited by cute14us28amy - 18 May 2008 at 11:16pm

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diyachill

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
nice part ...finally armaan knows that ridz didnt eat
aab ayega mazaa LOL
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 8:53pm | IP Logged
OMG NOOO WAYYY AMY UR BAACKKK BABEEE!..THANK U SOOOOOOO MUCHHH MISSED UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
cute14us28amy IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:01pm | IP Logged


~Recap~

Arman quickly runs up stairssssss.......

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Woh dodta hua room mein pahoonch ta hai where he sees Ridhima cumin out of BR....Arima uske haath mein hai......Abhi abhi Ridhima ne Arima ko nehlaya haiiii....Ridhima didn't notice dat Arman iz standin near d door....
R: Nahi mera baccha rote nahi Big smile .......Aap ko thand laag rahi hai? Abhi mama aap ko poch kar naye kapde pehnayegi, Okie? Embarrassed
(Ridhima uske saath baccho jaisa behave karti hai)
R: Mama ki GUDIA bahout pyaaali chhi hai Tongue .....Hai naaa? Toh chalo aab mujhe chup chap yeh cream laga ne do...Yeh aap ke sehaad ke liye accha hai Big smile .....& ya yeh baby oil bhi laga na hai taaki aapke baal bhi mama jaise hoo?....Healthy, silky & long? Chiyye na esse baal? LOL
Arima iz nt crin anymore.....Woh baadi baadi ankhon se Ridhima ko dekh kar smile kar rahi Embarrassed hai & again makes "I luv u Mama" face Tongue LOL
Arman iz watchin all dis......Confused Ouch Cry Now Arman goes inside.......Stern Smile
A: Mein help kardoo? Disapprove
R: .....................................
A: Tum ne nashta kyun nahi kiya? Unhappy
R: ..........
A: Ridhima mujhse baat karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz?
R: ........................(Kisses Arima's fingers & give a smile Smile)
A: Ridhima mein tumhi se baat kar raha hoonnn.......Plzzzzzzzzz 4 God's sake mujhse baat karooooooooooooooooooo?
R: Kyun jaab mein tumse baat karne aayi thi taab tym tha tumhare pass mere liye? Angry Chalo meri baat chodo Apni baachi ke liye toh waqt nikaal sakte the na? Evil Smile
A: (Luks down - His heart iz cryin slowly Broken Heart)
R: (2 Arima) Okiee....Aab hum naye kapde pehne geee? Clapppp Clappppppp Clapppppp? Clap Clap Clap Yayyy! LOL
A: I m SORRY Ridhimaaaaa........ Ermm Confused Ouch Aab essa mat karo mere saath plzzzzzzzz? Plzzzz Ridhima? (Tries 2 make her luk in2 his eyes but she ignores him...)
Ridhima Arima ko cot mein rakhti hai aur phir cupboard mein se kapde nikal ti haiiiiiiii......
R: (Talkin 2 herself) My baby lyks PINK, ryt? Tongue
Ridhima Arima ke pass jaati hai? Arman iz sittin nxt 2 herrrr......
Ridhima baby ko dheere se kapde pehna ne ke try karti hai but Angel starts cryinnn.......
R: Kya hua? Yeh dekho PINK PINK? Chalo aab jaldi se pehlo.......
Ridhima jaise taise usse kapde pehna ti hai & makes 1 tika on her head......
R: Mama's RANI iz ready Big smile Hayyy meri bacchi ko kisi ki nazar na laage? Embarrassed
Arman thinks "Kitna khayal rakhti hai Uska....Mein ne kabhi yeh jan ne ki koshish nahi ki ke meri baachi subah subah kya karti hai?.....Usse kya pasand hai?....Usse kya nahi pasand? Ridhima ko saab kuch maloom hai.....Srry beta! Aap ke papa aap ke saath kabhi waqt nahi beetate issi liye aap shayad mera saath nahi rehna pasand karti" Confused
Arman luks @ Ridhima's innocent face "Saab ka itna khayal rakhti hoo? Kabhi apne baare mein nahi sochti....Itni acchi kyun hoo tum Ridhima?"
Ridhima dusri taraf mud jaati hai & now she iz feeding d baby.........Ridhima iz also vry saddddd Confused
Arman hugs her tightly 4rm d back........
R: Yeh kya kar rahe hoo Arman?
Arman's tears fall down on her hand...........
R: Unhappy Kya hua tumhe?
A: ...............................(Sobbing) Cry
R: Arman usse theek tarah se khane do hum baad mein baat karte hai? Cry
A: Cry Cry Cry
R: Let her hv her food.........
A: Tum ne khaya jo usse khila rahi hoo? Cry Yeh saab meri wajah se hoo raha haiiiii......Arima aur tum dono chup chap seh rahe hoo? Cry
R: It's Ok Arman Smile
A: IT' NOT OK RIDHIMA........IT'S NOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
R: Arman calm down.......Relaxxx......(Wipes his tears) Koi baat nahiiii......saab theek ho jayegaaaa.......
A: Cry
R: Mujhe pata hai tum hamara bahout khayal rakhte hoo......Kya hua agar ek din tum kuch aur kaam kar rahe the? Tum bhi thak jaate hoo.....Mein jaanti hoo jaab Arima ko raat ko neend nahi aati....Puri raat tum usse apni god mein lekar balcony mein walk karte rehte hoo taaki woh chain ke neend so sake.......Toh kya hua agar aaj?
A: Aaj? Sirf ek game ki wajah seeee? Mujhe aapne aap per sharam aa rahi hai Ridhimaaaa........
Ridhima Arima ko feed karwa chuki hoti hai........Now Arima iz sleeping.......
R: Essi baat nahi karte....Chalo rona bandh karo....Sirf Arima ke ansoon hi nahi tumhari ansson bhi mein nahi dekh sakti.....Yeh bahout kimti hai mere liye....Isse esse bahao mattt.....(Again whipes his tears)
Arman stops crying coz usse pata hai woh rota hai toh Ridhima ka Dil bhi rota hai aur woh usse aur udas nahi karna chahta.....
Arman Arima ko apni god mein leta hai.....& he kisses her eyessssss...........
A: Srry my bacchaaaa Confused
R: Bass karo Arman.......Aab jao jaake nashta karo......Mujhe pata hai aaj bahout late hoo gaya hai....Aur tumhe bahout bhook bhi laagi hai.......Chalo mein tumhe khana deti hoon?
A: (Keeps staring @ Ridhima's face & then kisses her eyes 2) Mein saab karoonga aur tum wahan beth ke mere haathon se khao gee, okie?
R: Ok (A tear roll down her cheek)
Arman sees it & kisses it awayyyy
A: Mujhe pata hai I hurt u againnnnnnnn.......Tumhe bahout bura laga tha na? Mein ne phirse tumhare dil ko dukhya Ridhima......Cry Tum yeh saab keh rahi hoo lekin tum under se khoosh nahi hoo, hai na?
R: Arre nahi Arman......Essi koi baat nahi hai.....
A: Jaab tum roti hona toh mera DIL sochta hai ki mein tumhare layak nahi hoon.......Haar baar tumhe takleef pahunchakar phir sorry bol deta hoon
R: Heyyy Aab uske aage ek lawzz bhi bole na toh mein aur roo dongi......So plz stop ittttt....
Arman comes closerrrr & he kisses his jaan's lips tightlyyyyyyy.........Dis goes on for 10 minssssss.........

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How was it? Did u lyk it? Wink
Should I cont. ?

Srry 4 d Mistakesssssssss Ouch




Edited by cute14us28amy - 18 May 2008 at 11:20pm

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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:05pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by gia0005

OMG NOOO WAYYY AMY UR BAACKKK BABEEE!..THANK U SOOOOOOO MUCHHH MISSED UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

I knoww yaar.........I missed u 2Hug......I was gonna PM u but I deleted all old mess 4rm my Inbox toh I couldn't find u anywhere....but chalo aap bhi aa gayi Gia di.........Thank gwd! Embarrassed 

Thank you every 1 for lykin my parts Big smile

cute14us28amy IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:09pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by x-Ridzzie-x

awesome part amy di.....
well typical men....intrested in sports so dey forget bout their loved ones....
lets see wats comin...

btw r u continu now???

I knowww LOL LOL 

hrhr Senior Member
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Posted: 18 May 2008 at 9:12pm | IP Logged
welcome back ammy
good to see ur parts again in the FF
and they were really nice
and now plz don't ever think of
leaving this ff bcoz of somebody..........

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